What I Learned About Writing – From First Draft to Focused Masterpiece

From First Draft to Focused Masterpiece

Crossing the finish line of your first draft is a triumph. The blank page is no more, and your ideas are finally spilling out. Yet, beneath that satisfaction often lingers an unspoken truth: the work isn’t done. Now comes the equally critical (and often underrated) task: narrowing the target. This phase transforms an amorphous draft into a sharp, impactful piece that resonates deeply with its audience. Think of it as sculpting the raw marble of your thoughts into a statue with purpose. Let’s explore how to do this with intention and clarity.

The Power of the First Draft

Before diving into refinement, it’s important to honour the messy beauty of your first draft. It’s a “get it out” stage—where creativity flows unfiltered, and every idea, no matter how half-baked, is welcomed. But here’s the thing: first drafts are not meant to be final products. They’re blueprints, prototypes, or even “vessels of possibility.” The magic happens next, when you take a step back and ask, “What is this really trying to say?”

Step 1: Identify Your Core Message

The first step in narrowing your target is distilling your work down to its essence. Ask yourself:

What is the single most important takeaway?
What changes do I want the reader to experience?

Write this down in a single sentence. If your draft aims to persuade, what’s the one action you want your reader to take? If it’s a story, what’s the central theme or emotion you want to evoke? This core message becomes your compass during the editing phase.

Example:

Vague: “Climate change is a problem that affects us all, and we need to do something about it.”
Narrowed: “Rising ocean temperatures are accelerating coastal erosion—here’s how you can advocate for immediate policy change in your community.”

The narrowed version focuses on a specific cause (ocean temperatures), effect (coastal erosion), and a clear call to action (advocacy and policy).

Step 2: Cut What Doesn’t Serve the Core

Once you have clarity on your message, ruthlessly edit out anything that doesn’t amplify it. This includes:

Tangential anecdotes: A personal story might have been fun to write, but if it doesn’t tie back to your point, it’s a detour.
Jargon or fluff: Replace vague phrases like “a lot of people” with specific data or terms.
Redundant sections: Are two paragraphs exploring the same idea? Consolidate.

Pro Tip: Use the “kill your darlings” mantra, but with a twist. If a line makes you cringe but still feels essential, it might belong. The goal isn’t to erase creativity—it’s to eliminate clutter.

Step 3: Refine Your Audience Focus

Know your reader’s face. The more specific you are about your audience’s needs, the sharper your focus. Ask:

Who is most likely to engage with this?
What do they need to know, feel, or do?

If your draft is for a niche audience (e.g., organic farmers, tech startups, grieving parents), tailor your language, examples, and structure to speak directly to them. Narrowing your audience isn’t about exclusion—it’s about connection.

Example:
A post about healthy eating for adolescent athletes versus busy working parents will require fundamentally different angles, even if the topic is the same.

Step 4: Use Feedback to Sharpen the Edge

Once you’ve narrowed your draft, seek feedback. Ask your beta readers or editors:

“Is the main point clear?”
“Did anything feel off-topic or confusing?”
“Where did I lose you?”

Their honest responses will highlight where your focus is strong and areas that need tightening.

Conclusion: From Broad to Bold

Narrowing your target isn’t about stifling creativity—it’s about amplifying it. By focusing on one core message, one audience, and one action, you create writing that’s not just heard but felt. So, after your first draft, give yourself permission to dig deeper. Prune, polish, and focus until your work becomes a beacon of clarity.

Your Turn: Grab a pen and write your core message in one sentence. If you can’t sum up your draft in a tweet, keep refining.

Final Thought: A narrow target may seem limiting, but it’s the very thing that turns a sea of words into a sea change.

365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 204

Day 204 – The truth about imagination

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The Paradox of Creativity: Why Truth is the Ultimate Source of Imagination

We’ve all heard the compliment—or perhaps received it ourselves: “Your imagination is incredible. How do you come up with this stuff?”

It’s usually said with a sense of awe, as if you’ve just pulled a rabbit out of an empty hat, or channelled a world entirely detached from reality. But as a writer, creator, or storyteller, that praise often lands with a strange, paradoxical weight.

Why? Because you know the secret: you didn’t make most of it up.

Every fantastical world, every eccentric character arc, and every gripping plot twist was tethered to something real. You didn’t invent the emotion; you observed it. You didn’t conjure the setting from thin air; you cobbled it together from the texture of a memory, a snippet of overheard dialogue on the subway, or a raw truth you lived through five years ago.

So, how can it be that you are praised for your imagination, when every line you write is based on a truth?

Let’s explore the beautiful, messy alchemy of writing, where reality transforms into myth, and why telling the truth is the secret superpower behind all great fiction.

1. The Misunderstanding of “Imagination”

To understand the paradox, we first have to redefine imagination. Culturally, we tend to view imagination as a purely generative force—the ability to conjure something ex nihilo (out of nothing). We think of it as pure fantasy, magic, or delusion.

However, the true root of imaginative writing isn’t invention; it’s synthesis.

As the acclaimed fantasy author Neil Gaiman once noted, writers take two things that have never been put together before and glue them together. But those “two things” are almost always harvested from lived experience.

You didn’t invent grief; you simply mapped it onto a dragon rider losing their companion.
You didn’t invent awkward first-date anxiety; you just gave that nervous tic to an interstellar diplomat.

When readers praise your “imagination,” they aren’t applauding your ability to hallucinate a universe from a vacuum. They are applauding your ability to perceive the world deeply enough to rearrange its pieces into a new mosaic.

2. Emotional Truth Beats Factual Accuracy

In creative writing, there is a massive difference between fact and truth.

Facts are rigid. They are the exact coordinates, dates, and objective sequences of events.
Truths are fluid, resonant, and universally felt.

You can write a story about a spaceship navigating a black hole (pure science fiction/imagination), but if the protagonist is paralysed by the fear of being unloved, every reader in the audience suddenly relates. The spaceship is made up; the terror of rejection is a biological and emotional truth.

Readers praise your imagination because the outer shell of your story is fantastical. But they stay, and they feel moved, because the engine running underneath is fueled by undeniable human truth. You used a lie (a made-up world) to tell the truth (how it feels to be human).

3. The Filter of Subjectivity: Why It Still Belongs to You

If every line is based on a truth, why doesn’t everyone write the same story? Why is your book unique while mine is different?

The answer lies in the prism of subjectivity.

No two people experience the same truth in the exact same way. Memory is notoriously unreliable; it is colored by our traumas, our biases, our joys, and our desires. When you take a real-life argument, a genuine heartbreak, or a flash of beauty you witnessed at a park, it passes through the unique lens of who you are.

By the time that truth makes it from your nervous system, through your subconscious, and onto the page, it has been refracted into something entirely new. You didn’t invent the clay, but you are the only sculptor who could have shaped it quite like that. The praise for your “imagination” is actually praise for your perspective.

4. Observation: The Writer’s Real Job

Great writers are rarely geniuses locked in ivory towers; they are professional eavesdroppers and relentless watchers.

To base every line on a truth requires you to pay attention to the mundane world. It means noticing:

The specific way a grieving person’s hands shake when they try to hold a coffee cup.
The defensive cadence in someone’s voice when they are lying.
The sudden, heavy silence that falls over a room when a secret is revealed.

When you translate these minute, authentic observations into your writing, readers are startled by how “accurate” your creations feel. They say, “How did you imagine characters so complex?” But the truth is, you didn’t imagine them—you simply paid closer attention to real people than most are willing to do.

Embracing the Paradox

So, the next time someone marvels at your boundless imagination, don’t rush to correct them and explain that your protagonist’s emotional breakdown was ripped straight from your Tuesday afternoon panic attack.

Accept the compliment.

Understand that what they are really saying is: “Thank you for taking the messy, confusing, often painful truths of our shared existence, wrapping them in wonder, and handing them back to me in a way I could finally understand.”

Imagination isn’t the opposite of truth; it is truth’s translator. And as a writer, your job is simply to keep your eyes open, tell the truth, and let the magic take care of itself.

What truth are you turning into a story today? Let us know in the comments below!

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365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 204

Day 204 – The truth about imagination

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The Paradox of Creativity: Why Truth is the Ultimate Source of Imagination

We’ve all heard the compliment—or perhaps received it ourselves: “Your imagination is incredible. How do you come up with this stuff?”

Why? Because you know the secret: you didn’t make most of it up.

So, how can it be that you are praised for your imagination, when every line you write is based on a truth?

Let’s explore the beautiful, messy alchemy of writing, where reality transforms into myth, and why telling the truth is the secret superpower behind all great fiction.

1. The Misunderstanding of “Imagination”

However, the true root of imaginative writing isn’t invention; it’s synthesis.

You didn’t invent grief; you simply mapped it onto a dragon rider losing their companion.
You didn’t invent awkward first-date anxiety; you just gave that nervous tic to an interstellar diplomat.

2. Emotional Truth Beats Factual Accuracy

In creative writing, there is a massive difference between fact and truth.

Facts are rigid. They are the exact coordinates, dates, and objective sequences of events.
Truths are fluid, resonant, and universally felt.

3. The Filter of Subjectivity: Why It Still Belongs to You

If every line is based on a truth, why doesn’t everyone write the same story? Why is your book unique while mine is different?

The answer lies in the prism of subjectivity.

4. Observation: The Writer’s Real Job

Great writers are rarely geniuses locked in ivory towers; they are professional eavesdroppers and relentless watchers.

To base every line on a truth requires you to pay attention to the mundane world. It means noticing:

The specific way a grieving person’s hands shake when they try to hold a coffee cup.
The defensive cadence in someone’s voice when they are lying.
The sudden, heavy silence that falls over a room when a secret is revealed.

Embracing the Paradox

Accept the compliment.

Imagination isn’t the opposite of truth; it is truth’s translator. And as a writer, your job is simply to keep your eyes open, tell the truth, and let the magic take care of itself.

What truth are you turning into a story today? Let us know in the comments below!

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What I learned about writing – With Only Six Minutes to Live – What Would Your Story Look Like?

With Only Six Minutes to Live – What Would Your Story Look Like?

“If you could see the end of your life, would you want to?”
A question that feels like a scene ripped straight from a thriller, yet it lives in the quiet corners of our minds every time we glance at a ticking clock. Imagine the timer on your life’s narrative dropping to six minutes. No more coffee breaks, no “later, I’ll finish that project,” and no chance to scroll through one more meme. What would your story look like in that final, frantic, beautiful sprint?

1. The Flash‑Forward: A Rapid‑Fire Montage

When we think of dying, movies often give us a slow‐motion, tear‑stained goodbye. In six minutes, there’s no room for a soundtrack that swells over a long farewell. Instead, your brain would likely fast‑forward through the most vivid moments — a rapid montage that feels both cinematic and intimate.

Minute	What Pops Up	Why It Matters
0–1	The first time you felt truly alive – maybe standing on a mountaintop, your first kiss, or that “aha!” moment at work.	A reminder that life is made of peaks, not just the plateau.
1–2	The faces of people who shaped you – a parent’s smile, a mentor’s steady hand, a friend’s reckless laugh.	They’re the anchors that kept you tethered to humanity.
2–3	The mistakes you regretted – a broken promise, a missed chance, a harsh word.	In the end, we’re rarely defined by perfection; we’re defined by how we learned from the cracks.
3–4	Small joys you rarely mentioned – the smell of rain, a favorite song, the feel of a dog’s head on your lap.	These are the sensory stitches that quilt our daily comfort.
4–5	Your “why” – the purpose that pulled you through the mundane: a child’s hopeful eyes, a cause you championed, a dream you pursued.	Purpose gives the story its spine, the reason we keep turning pages.
5–6	A single, final image: a blank page waiting for the next writer, or perhaps a sunrise you’ll never see.	The ending is both a conclusion and a promise that stories never truly stop.

2. The Tone of a Six‑Minute Story

If a novel can be a slow burn, a six‑minute story is a sprint. The tone shifts from reflective to urgent, from lingering nostalgia to a fierce gratitude. Think of it as a haiku rather than an epic: every word must count, every image must hit.

“In six breaths, I’m whole.” – a line you might whisper to yourself as the seconds slip away.

This rapid cadence forces us to strip away fluff and get to the marrow. It’s less about the how and more about the what that matters most.

3. What We Usually Forget in the Rush

When the clock is ticking, we often overlook the small, uncelebrated moments that actually define a life.

The Quiet Acts: Holding a door, sharing a joke, listening without judgment.
The Unfinished Projects: Not the grand visions, but the half‑drawn doodles, the recipes you never perfected.
The “Almost” Stories: The road not taken, the love that could’ve been.

These are the hidden threads that, when pulled quickly, reveal the texture of who we really are.

4. A Mini‑Exercise: Write Your Six‑Minute Story

Grab a pen, your phone, or whatever medium feels natural. Set a timer for six minutes. Then answer these three prompts as fast as you can:

Who made you feel seen?
What moment made you feel truly alive?
What simple pleasure would you share with the world right now?

Don’t edit. Don’t overthink. Let the words flow like a sprint through a hallway you’ve run down a thousand times.

Example (under 60 seconds):
“My mother’s laugh, the smell of pine after a winter storm, and the way my cat curls around my ankle when I’m reading.”

You’ll notice that, even in a frantic rush, the core of your narrative shines through.

5. Why This Thought Experiment Matters

a. It Re-Prioritises

By confronting the imminent end, we’re forced to reorder our priorities. The next time you’re stuck in a meeting that could be an email, ask yourself: “Will this be part of my six‑minute montage?”

b. It Sparks Empathy

If we all imagined our own six‑minute finale, we might speak softer, listen harder, and love deeper. Empathy becomes the default setting, not an afterthought.

c. It Fuels Action

A vivid, finite timeline can be a catalyst. You might finally call that friend you’ve been meaning to, start that side project, or simply put your phone down and look at the sky.

6. The Gift of a Blank Page

Six minutes may sound like a cruel limit, but it’s also a gift: the chance to see your story stripped down to its essential narrative arc. It asks you to:

Celebrate the peaks.
Own the valleys.
Embrace the in‑betweens.

And when the timer finally hits zero, the story doesn’t end; it passes – like a baton handed to the next generation, a memory whispered to a child, or an idea that sparks a future conversation.

Closing Thought: The Six‑Minute Challenge

I challenge you: live each day as if you only had six minutes left. Not in a morbid, anxiety‑inducing way, but as a reminder that time is precious, finite, and spectacularly yours.

When you next scroll past a notification, pause. When you hear a stranger’s laugh, linger. When you feel the weight of a deadline, ask: “Will this matter in my six‑minute story?”

Because in the end, the measure of a life isn’t the number of seconds it occupies, but the quality of moments we choose to fill them with.

What would your six‑minute story look like? Share in the comments – I’m eager to read the flash‑forwards that make us all feel a little more alive.

If you had only six minutes left, your story would be a rapid montage of peaks, people, regrets, tiny joys, purpose, and a final image of continuation. This thought experiment helps us re-prioritise, build empathy, and act with intention. Try the six‑minute writing exercise and see what truly matters to you.

365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 203

Day 203 – Writer’s challenges

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The Writer’s Tightrope: Navigating the Unique Challenges of Humour, Sci-Fi, Thrillers, and Mystery

Every genre of fiction comes with its own unwritten social contract between the author and the reader. When you pick up a sci-fi novel, you agree to board the spaceship. When you open a cozy mystery, you accept that a body is about to drop in a quiet English village.

However, honouring that contract is easier said than done. Writers constantly walk a tightrope, balancing on the edge of reader expectations. How far can you push the envelope before a reader rolls their eyes and puts the book down? How do you manipulate a reader’s reaction without telegraphing your punches? And, most importantly, when do you ask the reader to suspend their disbelief, versus when do you have to assume their reaction?

Let’s dive into the distinct challenges of writing humour, science fiction, thrillers, mysteries, and detective novels, and explore the psychological dance between author and audience.

1. Science Fiction: Building Bridges Over the Abyss of Disbelief

Science fiction is the ultimate test of the reader’s willingness to suspend disbelief. By definition, sci-fi asks the audience to accept things that do not exist—faster-than-light travel, sentient AI, alien biology, or dystopian societal collapses.

The Challenge: The “Threshold of Credibility”

If a writer changes too many laws of physics or logic all at once, the reader experiences cognitive overload and checks out.

Suspension of Disbelief: Sci-fi writers rely heavily on Samuel Taylor Coleridge’s concept of the “willing suspension of disbelief for the moment, which constitutes poetic faith.” To achieve this, authors use the “Doorstop Rule” or internal consistency. You can invent magical technology (like a warp drive), but once you establish the rules of that technology, you cannot break them just to get your characters out of a tight spot.
Assuming the Reaction: A sci-fi writer must assume the reader’s reaction to the mundane will mirror their own. If humanity has been living on Mars for three centuries, how do they curse? What do they eat? If the author assumes the reader can extrapolate these details from familiar human experiences, the futuristic world instantly feels grounded.

2. Humour: The Most Fragile Genre in Print

Humour is arguably the hardest genre to write because comedy is entirely subjective. What has one reader howling with laughter might leave another stone cold.

The Challenge: Timing on the Printed Page

Unlike stand-up comedians who can use pauses, facial expressions, and tone of voice, a humour writer only has black ink on white paper.

Suspending Belief in Comedy: Absurdist or satirical humour often requires the reader to suspend disbelief regarding logic. Think of Douglas Adams’ The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, where the improbability drive turns attackers into a bowl of petunias and a sperm whale. The reader must accept the sheer madness of the universe.
Assuming the Reaction: Humour writers must accurately predict reader reactions. Comedy relies on subverting expectations (the “rule of three” or the comedic pivot). If the writer assumes the reader will zig, but the reader zags too early, the punchline falls flat. The challenge is meticulously controlling the rhythm of the sentence so the reader’s internal monologue delivers the punchline with the exact right cadence.

3. Thrillers: The Art of Manufactured Anxiety

Thrillers are adrenaline-fueled rollercoasters. Whether it’s a political conspiracy, a ticking-time-bomb scenario, or a psychological cat-and-mouse game, the goal is to keep the heart rate elevated.

The Challenge: Pacing and Plausibility Fatigue

In a thriller, the protagonist is often subjected to an escalating series of impossible obstacles. If the stakes are too low, the reader gets bored. If the danger escalates too wildly without respite, the reader experiences “plausibility fatigue.”

Suspending Disbelief: Readers of thrillers are generally forgiving of high-octane action sequences (think of the Jack Reacher or Jason Bourne series), provided the pacing is fast enough that they don’t have time to stop and think, Wait, how did he survive that explosion? The momentum of the plot does the heavy lifting for the suspension of disbelief.
Assuming the Reaction: Thriller writers constantly anticipate the reader’s psychological reaction—specifically, dread, curiosity, and relief. The author sets up a trap, assumes the reader will feel a sense of impending doom, and then delivers a twist. If the writer misjudges the reader’s reaction, a supposed “shocking twist” becomes predictable, draining all the thrill out of the novel.

4. Mysteries and Detective Novels: Playing Chess with the Reader

While thrillers focus on action and survival, mysteries and detective novels focus on intellect and truth. These genres operate like a complex puzzle box.

The Challenge: Fair Play vs. Absolute Deception

The golden rule of the classic detective novel (popularised by Agatha Christie and the Detection Club) is “fair play.” The reader must have access to the exact same clues as the detective.

Suspending Belief in Detectives: Modern readers often have to suspend a bit of disbelief regarding the sheer volume of murders that seem to follow amateur sleuths around (looking at you, Jessica Fletcher from Murder, She Wrote). Furthermore, classic hard-boiled detective novels require us to accept a deeply cynical, hyper-competent private eye who can take a severe beating in Chapter 3 and be fully functional by Chapter 4.
Assuming the Reaction: This is where the detective writer’s job becomes a psychological chess match. The writer must deeply understand human psychology and reader bias. They rely on the reader making assumptions (such as confirmation bias or misdirected suspicion) to hide the identity of the killer in plain sight. If the writer assumes the reader will suspect the butler, they might deliberately frame the butler to create a red herring, playing directly into the reader’s preconceived notions of genre tropes.

Suspension of Disbelief vs. Reader Assumption: Two Sides of the Same Coin

When examining these diverse genres, we see that writing is fundamentally an act of empathy. The writer is constantly asking:

“What do I need them to believe?” (Suspension of disbelief—accepting dragons, warp drives, or impossibly brilliant detectives).
“How do I expect them to react?” (Reader assumption—laughing at a joke, holding their breath during a chase scene, or gasping at a plot twist).

If you ask too much suspension of disbelief without grounding the emotional reality of the characters, the story feels fake. If you fail to accurately assume the reader’s emotional and intellectual reaction, the story falls flat—either becoming predictable (in mysteries/thrillers), confusing (in sci-fi), or unfunny (in humour).

Conclusion

Ultimately, mastering these genres requires a delicate touch. A great writer doesn’t just throw impossible scenarios at a page or hope a joke lands; they carefully calibrate the reader’s psychology. By respecting the unspoken contract of the genre while skillfully managing what the reader believes—and how they will react—authors can craft unforgettable stories that resonate long after the final page is turned.

Are you working on a manuscript right now? Which genre do you find the hardest to balance—keeping the reader believing, or predicting their emotional reaction? Let us know in the comments below!

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365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 203

Day 203 – Writer’s challenges

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The Writer’s Tightrope: Navigating the Unique Challenges of Humour, Sci-Fi, Thrillers, and Mystery

Let’s dive into the distinct challenges of writing humour, science fiction, thrillers, mysteries, and detective novels, and explore the psychological dance between author and audience.

1. Science Fiction: Building Bridges Over the Abyss of Disbelief

The Challenge: The “Threshold of Credibility”

If a writer changes too many laws of physics or logic all at once, the reader experiences cognitive overload and checks out.

Suspension of Disbelief: Sci-fi writers rely heavily on Samuel Taylor Coleridge’s concept of the “willing suspension of disbelief for the moment, which constitutes poetic faith.” To achieve this, authors use the “Doorstop Rule” or internal consistency. You can invent magical technology (like a warp drive), but once you establish the rules of that technology, you cannot break them just to get your characters out of a tight spot.
Assuming the Reaction: A sci-fi writer must assume the reader’s reaction to the mundane will mirror their own. If humanity has been living on Mars for three centuries, how do they curse? What do they eat? If the author assumes the reader can extrapolate these details from familiar human experiences, the futuristic world instantly feels grounded.

2. Humour: The Most Fragile Genre in Print

Humour is arguably the hardest genre to write because comedy is entirely subjective. What has one reader howling with laughter might leave another stone cold.

The Challenge: Timing on the Printed Page

Unlike stand-up comedians who can use pauses, facial expressions, and tone of voice, a humour writer only has black ink on white paper.

Suspending Belief in Comedy: Absurdist or satirical humour often requires the reader to suspend disbelief regarding logic. Think of Douglas Adams’ The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, where the improbability drive turns attackers into a bowl of petunias and a sperm whale. The reader must accept the sheer madness of the universe.
Assuming the Reaction: Humour writers must accurately predict reader reactions. Comedy relies on subverting expectations (the “rule of three” or the comedic pivot). If the writer assumes the reader will zig, but the reader zags too early, the punchline falls flat. The challenge is meticulously controlling the rhythm of the sentence so the reader’s internal monologue delivers the punchline with the exact right cadence.

3. Thrillers: The Art of Manufactured Anxiety

The Challenge: Pacing and Plausibility Fatigue

Suspending Disbelief: Readers of thrillers are generally forgiving of high-octane action sequences (think of the Jack Reacher or Jason Bourne series), provided the pacing is fast enough that they don’t have time to stop and think, Wait, how did he survive that explosion? The momentum of the plot does the heavy lifting for the suspension of disbelief.
Assuming the Reaction: Thriller writers constantly anticipate the reader’s psychological reaction—specifically, dread, curiosity, and relief. The author sets up a trap, assumes the reader will feel a sense of impending doom, and then delivers a twist. If the writer misjudges the reader’s reaction, a supposed “shocking twist” becomes predictable, draining all the thrill out of the novel.

4. Mysteries and Detective Novels: Playing Chess with the Reader

While thrillers focus on action and survival, mysteries and detective novels focus on intellect and truth. These genres operate like a complex puzzle box.

The Challenge: Fair Play vs. Absolute Deception

The golden rule of the classic detective novel (popularised by Agatha Christie and the Detection Club) is “fair play.” The reader must have access to the exact same clues as the detective.

Suspending Belief in Detectives: Modern readers often have to suspend a bit of disbelief regarding the sheer volume of murders that seem to follow amateur sleuths around (looking at you, Jessica Fletcher from Murder, She Wrote). Furthermore, classic hard-boiled detective novels require us to accept a deeply cynical, hyper-competent private eye who can take a severe beating in Chapter 3 and be fully functional by Chapter 4.
Assuming the Reaction: This is where the detective writer’s job becomes a psychological chess match. The writer must deeply understand human psychology and reader bias. They rely on the reader making assumptions (such as confirmation bias or misdirected suspicion) to hide the identity of the killer in plain sight. If the writer assumes the reader will suspect the butler, they might deliberately frame the butler to create a red herring, playing directly into the reader’s preconceived notions of genre tropes.

Suspension of Disbelief vs. Reader Assumption: Two Sides of the Same Coin

When examining these diverse genres, we see that writing is fundamentally an act of empathy. The writer is constantly asking:

“What do I need them to believe?” (Suspension of disbelief—accepting dragons, warp drives, or impossibly brilliant detectives).
“How do I expect them to react?” (Reader assumption—laughing at a joke, holding their breath during a chase scene, or gasping at a plot twist).

Conclusion

Are you working on a manuscript right now? Which genre do you find the hardest to balance—keeping the reader believing, or predicting their emotional reaction? Let us know in the comments below!

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What I Learned About Writing – Crafting Believable, Powerful Female Protagonists Without Alienating Your Readers

In recent years, the demand for strong, dynamic female protagonists has surged. Audiences are rejecting outdated, passive female characters and instead championing stories where women take the lead. But as writers, how do we create compelling, powerful female heroes without veering into caricature or alienating readers who crave authenticity and relatability? A powerful protagonist isn’t about being the “strongest,” “toughest,” or “most fearless” at all costs. It’s about building a character who feels real—flawed, complex, and driven by something deeper than a checklist of “strong traits.” Here’s how to strike that balance.

1. Power ≠ Perfection: Give Her Flaws

One of the biggest pitfalls in creating “strong” female characters is making them infallible. Perfection is unrelatable. A woman who never doubts herself, never stumbles, and never shows vulnerability is not powerful—she’s a robot.

Take Daenerys Targaryen (Game of Thrones) as an example. Her early portrayal as the “Mother of Dragons,” a noble, idealistic leader, made her relatable. Her later arc, while controversial, was memorable because it humanised her: her rage, her mistakes, and the consequences of her ambition made her a complex character, not just a “warrior queen.”

The lesson: Strength is not the absence of weakness. A powerful female protagonist should struggle with fears, insecurities, or ethical dilemmas. Let her fail. Let her grow. Imperfection makes her human.

2. Motivate Her Power: What Does She Want?

Why is she powerful? What drives her? A compelling protagonist doesn’t exist in a vacuum; her strengths and flaws should serve her goals and the story’s stakes.

Consider Hermione Granger (Harry Potter). Her intelligence is not just a trait—it’s the engine of her character. She’s driven by a love of learning, a desire to prove herself, and a fierce loyalty to her friends. Her “strength” is in how she uses her knowledge, not just in being “smarter than everyone else.”

The lesson: Give her a clear, grounded motivation. Whether it’s protecting her family, righting a wrong, or proving her worth, her power should be deeply tied to her emotional core.

3. Balance Strength With Relatability

A powerful protagonist doesn’t have to be a one-woman army. Her strength can be emotional, intellectual, or moral. It just needs to resonate with her world and the challenges she faces.

For instance, Eleanor Shellstrop (The Good Place) is powerful in her wit, resilience, and ability to connect with others—even when she’s flawed, selfish, or insecure. Her journey from self-centeredness to heroism is far more engaging than if she’d been written as a “perfect” woman from the start.

The lesson: Let her power reflect the story’s context. In a thriller, it might be resourcefulness under pressure. In a romance, it might be emotional honesty. In a fantasy, it might be leadership or magical skill.

4. Avoid the “Manhater” Trap

A powerful female character doesn’t need to prove her strength by rejecting or defying men. In fact, this trope often backfires, reducing her to a caricature of feminism. A character who is simply “angry at men” without deeper motivation is not empowering—she’s unappealing.

Take Pepper Potts (Iron Man) as a contrast. She’s a smart, capable leader who runs a global tech empire, but her relationship with Tony Stark isn’t a subplot about “dominating men” or “rejecting them.” She’s focused on her own growth and doing the right thing, which is far more compelling.

The lesson: Her relationships with other characters (including men) should serve the story, not act as a crutch for “her being strong.” Let her have autonomy and agency separate from gender dynamics.

5. Give Her a Unique Voice and Perspective

Powerful protagonists often have strong wills, but their personalities need to be distinctive and nuanced. A “strong” character isn’t just loud or bold—they might be quiet, observant, or introspective. Their voice should reflect who they are.

Consider Rey (Star Wars: The Force Awakens). Her strength isn’t just in wielding a lightsaber—it’s in her selflessness, perseverance, and quiet determination to do good in a galaxy full of chaos. Her journey resonates because it’s not about brute force, but about heart.

The lesson: Let her personality shine. Is she a strategic thinker, a passionate advocate, or a pragmatic problem-solver? Her voice should reflect this, making her memorable without being performative.

6. Context Matters: Tailor Her Power to the Setting

A powerful female protagonist should be shaped by her world. In a medieval fantasy, her strength might be in diplomacy or magic. In a modern workplace drama, it might be in negotiation or resilience under pressure.

Take Katsa (Graceling), whose physical strength is both a gift and a curse in a rigid, hierarchical society. Her power is tied to her culture’s values and prejudices, making her struggle universal.

The lesson: Research and build her power around her environment. How does her strength interact with the world’s rules, norms, and conflicts?

The Key to Universal Appeal: Depth Over Stereotype

A powerful female protagonist isn’t defined by how many obstacles she “overcomes” or how many people she outmaneuvers. It’s about how deeply readers connect with her humanity. Avoid reducing her to a symbol of “strength”; instead, make her a real person with relatable struggles, unique goals, and a voice that lingers long after the story ends.

By grounding her in authenticity, you’ll create a character who isn’t just “strong”—they’re unforgettable.

What makes a female protagonist memorable to you? Share your favourites in the comments!

365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 202

Day 202 – Writing Exercise

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Myra was a law unto herself.

She was the sort of girl that everyone had an opinion of, and not one of them was right.

The thing is, she never corrected them.

And something else: she didn’t care what anyone else thought of her. She simply didn’t speak to her detractors; she ignored the taunts and derogatory remarks from people who should have known better.

Even her female contemporaries had little nice to say about her, and I don’t think any of them willingly associated with her.

Not that she cared.

It became a pastime to sit nearby and watch people who should have more sense give her a hard time. Some said that it was part of the rites of passage in high school.

Others said it was character building.

I thought differently, but to my dishonour, I did nothing about it.

That is, not for a long time.

And then, when I did, I was not sure why.

…

Reggie was a class A deadhead.

Good at football, so-called God’s gift to the girls, and had parents who were, by their own admission, movers and shakers.

By that I guess it meant they were large donors to the school football team, which ensured Reggie had a place to focus his talents

I’d seen him play football, and it was not talent I saw.

Eleanor was equally as dense as Reggie, which in turn made them ideally suited. She was the head cheerleader, and the resident graduating class queen bee.

Girls would literally kill to get her approval.

I didn’t see the sense in it. Cheerleaders were regarded by the football team, and others, as something quite different to what the girls thought of themselves.

Needless to say, Myra could never make the cheer squad. Which seemed wrong to me because she looked just as attractive as all the rest, if you took away the exterior cladding, put her in a school uniform and also got rid of the excessive make-up and the different coloured hair each week

This week it was hot pink.

Nor did she wear the school uniform and had racked up an inestimable number of demerit points that got her into almost permanent detention.

That’s where I first met her.

I’d seen her around, and watched from afar the effects of her attitude towards her fellow students. Her friends, if they could be called that, were the misfits, and by the middle of graduation year that’s where I finished up.

In detention with the other misfits.

I doubt she noticed me. No one did, which in a way suited me because I was studying hard so I could go to college. I know my parents would be glad to see me go, because I didn’t quite fit their idea of a proper child.

Whatever that meant.

They could hardly put up my older brother as a shining example I should follow. I was not interested in sport.

So, there we were. In detention.

…

Mr Forsythe, probably about a hundred years old and on the cusp of retirement, was the teacher in charge of detention.

No one else wanted to do it, and the few extra dollars he got in overtime went towards his retirement, wandering the ruins of ancient Rome.

His subject was history, and Ancient Rome, a subject he could go on about, and did. Most students treated his class as a joke, but he just ignored them and kept on going, and probably would through a prison riot.

I thought he was a good teacher and his class was one of the few I liked. There were six students in detention. Myra and I sat on opposite sides of the room down the back. The other four sat up the front and were badly behaved.

Not dramatically so, or they would never get out of going to detention. Neither Myra nor I joined them. Detention was just another hiding place.

Until it wasn’t.

For a month, the others left us alone. No point stirring up someone who wouldn’t rise to the occasion.

Eleanor was different, because of her parents’ influence, the fact she was Prom Queen this year, and on the student council. She ended up on the detention list for giving another cheer wannabe the treatment, otherwise known as the initiation rite.

I’d heard she had been cited, but I never thought that the head would enforce it. It remained to be seen whether she would stay.

She made a dramatic entrance.

She didn’t bother to knock on the door, marched straight up to Mr Forsythe’s desk and slammed the sheet of paper on his desk so loudly we all jumped.

Up till then we were in our own world, shutting out the rest of the room.

Forsythe didn’t look up. Didn’t look interested either.

“Hey, old man. This is rubbish. I don’t do detention.”

He took a few seconds, then looked up at her. “My name is Mr Forsythe, young lady, not ‘hey, you ‘.”
He took the piece of paper and read it, then looked at her again. “I presume you can read?”

“Of course, you old fool.”

He chose to ignore the insults, but I knew somewhere in this conversation he was going to put her in her place. “Read it.”

“It’s rubbish. I won’t do detention.”

“So, now it’s going from don’t do to won’t do, which is something else entirely. What you will do is sit down and be quiet. Detainees do not make noise.”

With that, he went back to his book.

“This is stupid. I’m leaving.”

He sighed, then looked at her. “Then you will fail history and therefore will not be able to graduate with the rest of your class. And no graduation, no prom. Now sit down and contemplate why you are here, and why you are not going to darken my door for much longer. Am I understood?”

He metaphorically kicked her where it hurt. Graduation and the prom. Being the Prom Queen, being the Queen Bee.

I thought Forsythe was brave taking on her family. He would not be the first teacher her family had tried to ruin.

“This is wrong.”

“No. What is wrong is that you thought you could do whatever you pleased without consequences. That might happen at home but not in here. Sit and be silent.”

She glared at him, but it had no effect.

She was not going to be able to leave, so she scanned the room and saw us, Myra and me. I could guess what was going to happen next

She came down the back of the room and sat at the desk in the middle of the back row. She smiled at me and scowled at Myra.

Eleanor was never able to get under Myra’s skin, not in the way Myra could do to her. It was easy. She had nothing Eleanor could use against her, unlike every other girl.

She smiled at me because I was once foolish enough to be tricked by her, but once bitten was enough. I made a point of avoiding her. Not so easy in detention. But I had nothing to lose. I didn’t care if I never got out of detention.

She made a great effort to make sure Mr Foresyth knew where she landed. He wouldn’t care; in fact, he was glad Myra and I sat down in the back. We had earned the titles of troublemakers not because we started it; it was because trouble came to us.

“So, Blinky, what are you in for?”

Blinky was the name her boyfriend gave me because one day he saw me squinting because my eyes were watering. It stuck because they thought it was insultingly funny.

It was better than some of the names they handed out

“Rest and recreation.” Which in a sense was true. Trying to avoid the football team’s idea of being boisterous was a tiring exercise.

“You must have done something bad to get put in here with the circus ringmaster.”

She was going to push Mr Foresyth as far as she could, perhaps thinking if she insulted him enough he would kick her out.

“No. But as a columnist for the high school magazine, this is where I get to work on the juicy stories.”

“No one reads it.”

“You don’t read it, Eleanor, which is to your detriment. But the Staff and the crazy students do. Where else can they read about what’s going on?. I’ve been waiting to do a story on you, and here you are, my prayers answered.”

I remembered the last student reporter the magazine editor sent to interview the head cheerleader, and what had happened.

His problem was he had a crush on her, and she played him like a finely tuned fiddle. Her expression changed when I said my prayers were answered. She had heard what she wanted to hear. No surprises there.

Myra, in the meantime, tried hard to not look like she was listening in. Eleanor would tire of me soon, and turn on her.

I asked, “Have they made Reggie the prom king yet. I’m betting you wouldn’t want anyone else as your king, and I reckon he’d be very dark if someone else got the gig.”

“Why should it matter to me? I have nothing to do with it.”

“You have everything to do with it. I heard you screaming at the head master that if Reggie didn’t get it, there’d be no more handouts. What did you mean by that?”

“Nothing. I was just making noise.” She tried to pretend none of it mattered to her, but it did. It was going to be her way or the highway.

I shrugged. “I heard you were trying to take over the grad dance. Please do. At the moment it’s going to be very boring. Oh. And what was that strongly opinionated discussion with Mr Masters? You might want to be slightly more tactful with everyone, or it will come back and bite you.”

Masters was the teacher in charge of the school paper, and one of the teachers organising the Prom. He didn’t like half of the class he taught because none of them had any respect for the press. It was, he said, an alarming trend that started at the top. Added to the fact that most of his students couldn’t string two words together.

“I thought articles were meant to be flattering. He said any article written about me would be faithfully portray me as the model for the new students as we move towards the next century.”

I was there. He was being expansive and trying to get her on-side. He needed coverage on the big issues leading up to the Prom and graduation. That meant getting Eleanor and Reggie to cooperate.

That was going to be my job, in the end.

Along with commentary for the yearbook.

“Try being your naturally charming self, Eleanor, and the story will write itself.”

There was not much point telling her the story was done, and it was not too flattering. That could change.

“Then let me know when you’re free.”

She turned away, and interaction was done. Hopefully I wouldn’t have to talk to her until detention was over.

Or I could just move.

…

Myra kept a wary eye on her main detractor. It wasn’t as if she had to; it was just that small problem of Eleanor sneaking up on you when you least expected her. She did it to everyone, her secret weapon. I know the other girls in her squad were fed up and couldn’t wait for the football season to end, and for her to graduate.

I kept a wary eye on Eleanor. For her it was too good an opportunity to land a few insults. Not that Myra would want me to interfere. She could handle Eleanor, but some days she could be particularly trying.

“There’s a spot about to become vacant in the squad. I think you would make an excellent member.”

Myra simply ignored her. It might work for a while, but it was not a long-term strategy. The idea that Myra would be remotely interested in being a cheerleader was almost funny.

Myra took her time to swing around and give her a long, hard stare. “That was a joke, wasn’t it?”

It was. Eleanor was up to something. And the fact she had approached her, not the other way around, told me there was a storm front on the horizon.

“No. I’m serious. The coach said I needed to relax my stamp on the team and allow for some new talent to facilitate and breathe life into a quintessential and least recognised support group. He recommended I take a hint from the Dallas Cowboys cheer squad.”

The coach had been joking, but something had ignited in her after watching one episode of a TV series, which one of the football team had mentioned, for reasons other than cheerleading pointers.

Then came the rumour she was thinking of trying out for the team, next time they were recruiting. It was not the first time she got one of these ideas.

Myra had no interest in honing her dance skills into a weird sexualised mating performance, which she maintained was just another part of the male culture of putting women in their place engendered by the school and society in general.

She was part of a very small group of girls who firmly believed that men and boys had no right to dictate what they could do, or limit their aspirations. Eleanor believed a girl’s aspirations were to work until married, then become a wife and mother. She led by example, working at the diner, and on track to marry Reggie.

Myra had said more than once she couldn’t think of anything worse. College and career beckoned. She had no interest in boys, weddings, or wanting to be ‘looked after’ by any man.

“I doubt whether my ballet classes when I was six would be classes as the necessary dancing skills required for the job, Eleanor. Thank you for the opportunity, but I respectfully decline.”

Being polite was one thing, but refusing an offer from Eleanor, Queen Bee, leader of the pack, daughter of self confessed movers and shakers was something else entirely.

Eleanor’s expression changed. The last time I’d seen something like it was when the weather changed, and not for the good.

“So, Eleanor,” I said, thinking now would be a good time to run distraction, “if the cheer team is recruiting, does that mean you are dissatisfied with the current team members? I mean, notwithstanding the minor errors in the routine at the last game, does that mean you’re admitting there are problems? Coach Wiley says…”

She swung around and glared at me. Everyone knew the mistake was hers, simply because she had been mysteriously injured the week before. There were rumours for that too; Reggie had a violent streak, but no one was talking about it.

“Coach Wylie has too many opinions about stuff that’s above his pay grade. Perhaps if he tried to elevate the football team’s performance and not comment on the intakes of our routine, we might reach the finals.”

There was no mistaking the venom in her tone or the words from her mother’s mouth. She was the cheerleader and prom queen of her day, and much rested on the shoulders of her daughter.

“That’s your mother’s disappointment, isn’t it?” I said.

“You have no idea.”

I didn’t. My parents had no expectation of me. That all got poured into Jeremy, one of the Reggie acolytes, and through him I heard the true feelings Reggie had for Eleanor, or any of the cheerleaders.

“What happened to you a few weeks back? You haven’t been yourself?”

The expression softened, which for Eleanor was a marked change from the tough facade she tried hard to maintain. It may have surprised her that anyone could sound concerned. I know her mother pushed her way beyond her limits and ability simply because her mother was living her aspirations through her daughter.

It was, I’d finally realised, an impossible dream. When would Eleanor?

Then the facade snapped back. “Nothing. And if anything had it would be none of your business.” She was turning back to Myra.

“Actually, it is. News is news, good or bad, and the public have a right to know.” I was quoting Walters.

She was going to regret sitting down in the back.

She turned back, and the look she gave me was unfathomable. Despair, hatred, misery- it was like she had just discovered everything she had thought her life was about just got turned on its head.

“I did nothing wrong.”

“Nothing wrong according to the values your mother puts on your actions, which I’m guessing were handed down. It may have served 20 years ago but not now. The same as you can create your own style. Just saying.”

Perhaps I’d overstepped the mark, but I got the impression she was in a no-win situation on all fronts. The school, the cheer squad, Reggie, her mother, and her contemporaries.

She didn’t say anything; perhaps there was no searing retort she could throw at me right then.

But Myra decided to add her two cents’ worth, “I’m guessing that cheer squad vacancy just evaporated.”

Eleanor turned to her, “Why can’t you just be an ordinary girl, wear a school uniform like the rest of us, and what’s with the hair? I mean seriously?”

It wasn’t said in a mean way, but it could have had less of an edge.

“You never heard of individualism? I hate the idea of conformity and living out someone’s expectations. I am my own person.”

“And your mother lets you?”

“She doesn’t like it, but within reason I have a reasonable amount of freedom.”

“You’re lucky then.”

I added my two cents’ worth too, “My parents don’t care. Maybe if I was on the football team, or in the track and field team, but I’m not. To them I don’t exist. To the other boys in teams, I’m just a punching bag. It’s why I’m here.”

“So you’re telling me I’m not the only one with problems “

“I get told often I am the problem,” Myra said.

“That’s what Reggie tells me. Once I learn my place, he says, things will be better.”

An admission perhaps she might not have told us in different circumstances, but it explained a great deal. Reggie was not a very nice person, and even as she was right now, she was still a better person than he ever would be.

“It doesn’t have to be like that, Eleanor. You could do a lot better than him.” Myra, I could see, was now concerned for her.

But she wasn’t going to let her guard down. Eleanor might be sounding reasonable, but she had been like this before, just before the explosion

“I don’t know. Until I walked into this room, everything was in a state that I could control, or at least I thought I could. Talking to you two can be depressing, all the negative stuff going on. To be honest, I wish I hadn’t talked to you two. Now my head is filled with even more nonsense. I can’t explain how I ended up in detention to anyone. And you two can’t talk about this to anyone. I need to think. God, even thinking about thinking it is giving me a headache.”

With that, she pulled out a book that looked to me like a romance novel, similar to ones my mother read, and noth Myra and I went back to our solitude. But things were different now, in a way I couldn’t explain.

…

When detention was over, she left without saying goodbye. Myra speculated that she would leave before the end of the year and simply run away.

Myra normally just packed her bag and left. Today she lingered as I got my stuff together. She wanted to say something, and I could see her thinking about how she was going to handle things now.

We left together, not saying anything. There was a coffee shop I’d seen her in nearby, and we headed there.

Coffee and cake delivered, and about a dozen words later, she had decided what she was going to say. I’d never seen her deliberate before.

“You didn’t have to run interference.”

“I know. It was just a protective instinct I have for people I care about.”

“You don’t have to. I can handle Eleanor.”

“Most people can’t. And she’s like a shark smelling blood in the water, especially from those who didn’t know they’re bleeding.”

“True. She is a piece of work.”

“Actually, her mother is, and she tries hard to live up to her expectations.”

“Do you care about her too?”

It was asked in a manner I construed would be the same as asking if I was harbouring a secret bunch of feelings towards her. I wasn’t; she was not in my league, and I was fine with it.

“In a brotherly way maybe. My brother hangs out with Reggie, and I hear stuff. She needs to dump him sooner rather than later.”

“He’s hurting her?”

“I’m not sure, but he had a temper, and I hear he’s a mean drunk.”

Her expression and watery eyes told me that she knew something about domestic bullies. If that was the case, it explained away a few assumptions.

“She won’t listen, even if you told her.”

“Not while her mother has her claws in her.” I shrugged. “I just hope it’s an accident not waiting to happen.”

That topic ended, and perhaps her desire to converse any more. She drained the cup and finished the pie. I thought she would just get up and walk off.

She hesitated.

“You going to college next year?”

“I’d like to.”

“It’s the only way I’m going to get out of the house and from under the oppressors. I’m looking for someone to share an apartment.”

“You’d trust me?”

“You care about me. That’s good enough for me.”

“Well, it solves a problem. Why not?”

“Why not indeed.” She slipped out of the seat and threw her bag over her shoulder. The pink hair stood out under the harsh lights. “Until tomorrow. You might try sitting closer. I promise I won’t bite.”

Famous last words.

I watched her leave, stopping just outside the windows to give me a small wave, and I had to wonder where this might lead.

Or that I should not think too much about it and see what might happen in what was always going to be an uncertain future.

…

PI Walthenson’s second case – A case of finding the ‘Flying Dutchman’.

Known only to a few, there is a legend that a ship named the ‘Flying Dutchman’ left Nazi Germany in the last weeks of the war and set sail for America, escorted by U-boats, under a different name. Aboard was a trove of treasure and gold worth a ‘king’s ransom’.

It was said that it had been sent to a group of American Nazis to create the Fourth Reich at an appropriate time. Over the years, many expeditions off the coast had searched, but found no trace of the vessel or the treasure.

In other words, it was just a legend created to boost tourism.

…

Fast forward to 2024. Our intrepid private detective, Harry Walthenson, overhears a conversation at Grand Central Station. It was the oddness of the message that caught his attention. An investigation turned up nothing out of the ordinary, and he thinks no more about it.

Then Harry is kidnapped, interrogated, and asked questions over and over about a date and a place, why he went there, and when he could not give satisfactory answers, he was beaten half to death and left for dead on a rubbish heap. He was lucky that it was a living space for homeless men; otherwise, he would have died.

In the aftermath, he once again gives it no more thought.

…

After resolving his first case successfully, there’s no rest. Harry’s angry mother comes to his office and demands that he find out where his father has gone. She believes he has run off with a mistress, not for the first time.

Perhaps it was not the wisest decision she has made, because Harry promises to investigate, and adds that she might not like what he finds.

He soon discovered he does not like what he finds, that his father’s friends, a cabal formed at University, have two who are his mother’s current lovers, and another, a criminal blackmailing his father.

Felicity, now his partner, working on a different case, and trying to get answers, uncovers a crime family involved in guarding a disused warehouse on the docks, where she believes Harry had been taken for interrogation, and subsequently dumped nearby to die.

Why are they up to? What is so important that the empty warehouse needs guarding? Who is employing them?

Harry, following up on the death of the blackmailer, traces his death back to an enforcer employed by his grandfather. His mother’s grandfather was a pre-war industrialist who made his fortune in war munitions and shipbuilding.

He was also a member of the American Nazi party.

When Harry also discovers a logbook belonging to a so-called wartime Liberty ship the “Paul Revere” in brackets ‘Freiheitskämpfer’, hidden by his father, and written in a code that is not readily identifiable.

It is no longer a matter of a father who has run off with his mistress; it is a very frightened man in fear of his life, running from a group who will stop at nothing to get the logbook back. And when Harry discovers a family connection to the group, it becomes a race against time to decode the log and find his father before his grandfather does.

…

Coming soon: Harry Walthenson’s new adventure – A case of finding the ‘Flying Dutchman’