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In a word: Incline

When you first think of this word, it is with a slippery slope in mind.

I’ve been on a few of those in my time.

And while we’re on the subject, those inclines measured in degrees are very important if you want a train to get up and down the side of a mountain.

For the train, that’s an incline plane, the point where traction alone won’t get the iron horse up the hill.

Did I say ‘Iron Horse’?  Sorry, regressed there, back to the mid-1800s in the American West for a moment.

It’s not that important when it comes to trucks and cars, and less so if you like four-wheel driving; getting up near-vertical mountainsides often present a welcome challenge to the true enthusiast

But for the rest of us, not so much if you find yourself sliding in reverse uncontrollably into the bay.  I’m sure it’s happened more than once.

Then…

Are you inclined to go?

A very different sort of incline, ie to be disposed towards an attitude or desire.

An inclination, maybe, not to go four-wheel driving?

There is another, probably more obscure use of the word incline, and that relates to an elevated geological formation.  Not the sort of reference that crops up in everyday conversation at the coffee shop.

But, you never know.  Try it next time you have coffee and see what happens.

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Writing about writing a book – Day 2

Hang about.  Didn’t I read somewhere you need to plan your novel, create an outline setting the plot points, and flesh out the characters?

I’m sure it didn’t say, sit down and start writing!

Time to find a writing pad, and put my thinking cap on.

I make a list, what’s the story going to be about? Who’s going to be in it, at least at the start?

Like a newspaper story, I need a who, what, when, where, and how.

Right now.

 

I pick up the pen.

 

Character number one:

Computer nerd, ok, that’s a little close to the bone, a computer manager who is trying to be everything at once, and failing.  Still me, but with a twist.  Now, add a little mystery to him, and give him a secret, one that will only be revealed after a specific set of circumstance.  Yes, I like that.

We’ll call him Bill, ex-regular army, a badly injured and repatriated soldier who was sent to fight a war in Vietnam, the result of which had made him, at times, unfit to live with.

He had a wife, which brings us to,

Character number two:

Ellen, Bill’s ex-wife, an army brat and a General’s daughter, and the result of one of those romances that met disapproval for so many reasons.  It worked until Bill came back from the war, and from there it slowly disintegrated.  There are two daughters, both by the time the novel begins, old enough to understand the ramifications of a divorce.

Character number three:

The man who is Bill’s immediate superior, the Services Department manager, a rather officious man who blindly follows orders, a man who takes pleasure in making others feel small and insignificant, and worst of all, takes the credit where none is due.

Oops, too much, that is my old boss.  He’ll know immediately I’m parodying him.  Tone it down, just a little, but more or less that’s him.  Last name Benton.  He will play a small role in the story.

Character number four:

Jennifer, the IT Department’s assistant manager, a woman who arrives in a shroud of mystery, and then, in time, to provide Bill with a shoulder to cry on when he and Ellen finally split, and perhaps something else later on.

More on her later as the story unfolds.

So far so good.

What’s the plot?

Huge corporation plotting to take over the world using computers?  No, that’s been done to death.

Huge corporation, OK, let’s stop blaming the corporate world for everything wrong in the world.  Corporations are not bad people, people are the bad people.  That’s a rip off cliché, from guns don’t kill people, people kill people!  There will be guns, and there will be dead people.

There will be people hiding behind a huge corporation, using a part of their computer network to move billions of illegally gained money around.  That’s better.

Now, having got that, our ‘hero’ has to ‘discover’ this network, and the people behind it.

All we need now is to set the ball rolling, a single event that ‘throws a cat among the pigeons’.

Yes, Bill is on holidays, a welcome relief from the problems of work.  He dreams of what he’s going to do for the next two weeks.  The phone rings.  Benton calling, the world is coming to an end, the network is down.  He’s needed.  A few terse words, but he relents.

Pen in hand I begin to write.

 

© Charles Heath 2016-2019

The 2am Rant: All I wanted was a cup of coffee

How can something so simple become so complicated and complex?

In New York, it seemed impossible to get exactly what you would like.  The coffee there is driven by what the machine interprets you want, aside from the language constraints due to the fact that English (or American) comes in a zillion different flavours.

So, what do I like (you notice I don’t say ‘want’)

A double shot Latte with two sugars and half a shot of vanilla.  That’s in a large cup.

As we all know coffee can come in a regular, large, or extra-large cup, but, hang on, these cup sizes sometimes have names, and you need to know what these names are.

My efforts of pointing to the cup size in New York often had horrendous consequences, when the cup piles were close together.  Sometimes it was a double shot in a regular, and a single shot in an extra-large cup.

One even had the name benti, or bento, or something like that.

Being old and decrepit, my memory for cup sizes isn’t all that great, so using a name in one shop that doesn’t have that size, well, you get it.

It seems not only coffee makers in New York have a problem producing consistent coffee.

Perhaps, then that’s half the charm of drinking it, the fact that no cup is ever the same.

And, when an outlet gets it right, finally, they go and change the coffee bean supplier, and all of a sudden, it’s bitter, or it’s lighter, as coffee shops try to reduce their costs and maximise profits.

Six dollars is a lot of money for a cup of coffee unless of course, you have to feed that addiction in which case, you’ll have a cup at whatever the cost.

I need coffee right now, so its off te the cupboard to see what’s available.

Maccona instant, which is not bad

A Nespresso long black – ok, don’t get me started with Nespresso because they have numbers from 1 to 12, possibly more, recognising strengths, and I usually have a double shot using a 10 and a 12.

And, yes, they fool around with the type of beans they use because there seem to be inconsistencies in potency from time to time.

Then there’s coffee bags, much the same as tea bags, which produces and interestingly flavoured brew which I’m still trying to figure out.  It tastes like coffee, but there’s something else there, like … paper?

I opt for an instant.

Yes, I needed a coffee after writing this.

What I learned about writing – Where does time go?

When has time gone?  I mean, just yesterday it felt like the start of a new year, and all those projects I had lined up are still on paper, somewhere.

Does anyone else over sixty-five get the feeling time is speeding up rather than slowing down?  It sounds weird, doesn’t it, that as you slow down as old age approaches, time goes faster, and those things you wanted to get done seem further away.  I’m 72 this year, and it feels like I only turned 65 a year ago!

When you’re young, it always seems like you will have all the time in the world, and that seems to play out over the first forty or fifty years, while you’re putting this off, putting that off, while all the little details of life take more and more of your time.

And there’s that one huge thing that hangs over your head, the fact that you might never get to that time when you said you would have time for it.  People are dying younger again, of stress, bad habits and overexercising.

I’ll never be guilty of the last once.  It’ll probably be bad habits, something we are all guilty of.

That’s also a reason why I don’t have New Year’s resolutions, and I try not to make plans for anything too far ahead.

It’s also the reason why we decided to travel and do all those things people say they’re going to do when they retire, only to discover they can’t for one reason or another, or they just simply died.

Stopping work after being so wrapped up in it can kill you, and it’s not beyond the realms of possibility that you can quite literally die of boredom.

It’s why I write.  Keeps the mind active, gives me something to do, and believe me, when I’m writing, I’m never bored, and it’s a perfect fit between bouts of being a grandfather, a taxi service, and doing everything else that needs a not-so-handy handyman.

Time literally flying by is the same reason why my granddaughters have grown so much, because it seems like it was only yesterday, they were babies, and now the eldest is 22.  When did she get so grown-up?

Oh, well, back to childminding duties.  It’s the school holidays and tomorrow we’re off to travel down ‘the coast’, which is most ubiquitously called the Gold Coast or otherwise known as Surfer’s Paradise.  It’s glitzy, has a dark side, and always looks shiny until the sun goes down.  We go there during the day.  Tomorrow will be the first time in over a year.

If we can get the kids off their computers and smartphones.

365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 244

Day 244 – Writing exercise

Life is a paradox.

You think that everything is great, that after all the drama, mishaps and disasters that were sent to try you were defeated, one by one, that the universe had finally decided you deserved a life together.

God knows we had been on the verge of going our separate ways more times than I could count.

But we were there.

Amelia had planned a dinner for two in the swankiest restaurant in the city, and I had just got changed at work and about to catch a cab.

Amelia was driving in from the suburbs, and we would be staying in an equally swank hotel for the weekend.

It was a plan we had made the day before our wedding, to do exactly one year after, on our first anniversary.

Today marked our fifth.

Just as I told the cabbie the address, my cell phone rang.

‘Private Number’

I was going to ignore it, but a strange sensation ran through me, the like of which I’d never felt before.

“Hello?”

“Is that Allen Jamieson?”

“Yes.”  Tentative.  A spear of pain ran through my heart, and I braced myself.

“I’m afraid I have some bad news.”

That was the ‘Oh God’ moment, and I could feel my world slipping out from under me.

“Your wife, Amelia, has been in a serious car accident.  She has been taken to hospital.  I suggest you get there as soon as possible.”

At the word ‘accident,’ I think I stopped thinking.

He gave the address, I thanked him, and that was it.  Seconds later he tested the address, knowing that I wouldn’t remember a word he said, except that one word, ‘accident’.

I arrived in a daze, sick with worry, thinking that I was too late, that the light of my life had been extinguished.

After everything else …

I made myself known at the front desk, and within a minute a nurse came to take me to her. 

She was in the emergency room; just arrived, and yes, still alive but barely.  The nurse didn’t say she was hanging by a thread, but I read between the lines.

We burst into chaos.  Apparently she was not the only victim of what had been a minor earth tremor that had brought down an overpass. 

From the front counter to the ER, I got the disjointed details:  a hundred cars and five buses, most crushed, and Amelia was one of five who survived.  I did not hear how many didn’t.

I wasn’t prepared for what I was about to see, and when the nurse pulled back the curtain, I simply fainted.

When I recovered, smelling salts were horrible, and I awoke confused.  I was outside her cubicle, but it was now empty. 

Another nurse was saying that she had been taken to the OR for emergency surgery, and in my mind I could see the bloodied and broken piece of what was, as early as that morning, a beautiful and graceful woman who had survived everything that could be thrown at her.

Now?

If she died, I had not taken the chance to tell her everything I wanted to.  In that moment, I had not been strong – the man she needed to be by her side when it mattered the most.

Now, all I could do was wait.

Twelve hours.

Twelve hours during which I could not sleep, could not rest, got up, walked around, sat down, conversed with other family members of other victims who were equally as stultified as I was at the horrendudness of what had happened.

The news coverage was on the whole time, covering the disaster, the death toll in the hundreds, the rescue attempts, the survivors.  I saw the car Amelia had been in, and how she survived was a miracle.

Then the news turned dark: a panel of experts dissecting the disaster, and the revelation that the contractors who built the flyover had scrimped on materials and, had it been built properly, it might not have happened.

Not helping.

Searching for someone to blame would never help the victims or the loved ones who lost them.

One by one, the family members left.  Most of their loved ones died on the operating table.  Three had not.  Relief could be measured, and it could be felt.

Twelve hours.

It was my turn.

The doctor, or one of them, came out, a white coat over bloodied scrubs.  Straight from the fires of hell.

“She is a survivor,” was the first thing he said, with just a touch of admiration in his tone.  “We repaired the body; it will heal in time with few aftereffects.  Her mind, that’s a different matter.  We repaired the damage, but we cannot be sure what functions may or may not return.  She will be herself, the woman you know.  She just may not remember who you are, or who she is.  It is usually only temporary, but…”

It was enough.  God had found a new way to tear us apart.  It was just another hurdle, one that may take a little time to get over.

And, for Amelia, I had all the time in the world

Five months.

Nearly half a year, and every day I sat in her room, a bright sunny aspect looking over the gardens which, even for late autumn, still looked delightful.

The external and internal injuries had recovered. Her arms healed, her legs healed, and all we could do was wait to see if her head healed.  Looking at her, except for a few scars, she looked the same Amelia as she had before the accident.

I came in, sat down, said my piece about everything going on around us, and then read from the classics.  Sometimes in English, sometimes in Greek or Italian or Latin.

I told her all about Latin and the fact it was not a dead language.   She would have agreed with me.  If we wanted to say something and not have people around us understand, we’d speak in Latin.

It was about three in the afternoon. 

Birds were tweeting outside.  The sky had filled with dark, ominous clouds, and there were streaks of lightning in the distance.

A storm was coming.

Fifteen minutes later it was on us.  A bolt of lightning lit up the room, and then the crack of thunder, directly overhead.

I was holding her hand.

Just after the crack of thunder, she squeezed my hand and opened her eyes.

I could see fear in her eyes, but I had not known her to be scared of thunder.

She spoke, but nothing came out.  She coughed and winced.  Not completely healed.

Then, “Where am I?” 

She realised I was holding her hand and slipped it out of my grip.  Not a good sign.

“A convalescent hospital “

“Why?

“You were in an accident.”

“When?”

“Five months ago.  You have been in a coma.”

“And you are?”

There it was.  What I had been dreading for the past five months, the cruellest of outcomes.  She would not remember who I was.

“Your husband Allen.”

“You could be anybody.”

“I could, but I have proof.”  Sitting beside the bed was a photograph album.  Started at our wedding, the one none of her relatives came to.

The people who had spent two years trying to stop her from marrying me.  Her family had different plans for her, but she had not wanted that life.

Cinderella’s life was normal compared to what her family had put her through, including kidnapping, mind control, torture by any other name, and a life-and-death rescue.

No one believed the story, but every word of it was true.  I still carried the scars and the bullet they had hoped would kill me.  It probably would in time.

She dragged herself up into a sitting position, and I gave her the album.  She leafed through the pages, taking the time to look at the photos and then at me.

At the end, she closed the album and let it rest on her knees.

“I don’t remember anything.  Not yours, not my life, nothing.”  Tears flowed.

The doctor came in; I had seen him outside waiting, perhaps to see if I had any effect on what he still maintained would be temporary amnesia.

He looked at me, and I nodded.  If I thought the last five months had been hard, the next were going to be harder.

It took another two months to get her back to a semblance of her former self. Intensive therapy to get all her limbs working, eating, coping with all those normal things we take for granted.

She had lost weight, and the clothes I brought, her favourites, were too large, and according to her, ‘what person in their right mind would wear these?’

She wanted jeans and T-shirts, and sports shoes.  What some might call the grungy teenager look.  The thing is, she looked great in them.

What else had changed? Her attitude.  Not towards me; she seemed to have settled the debate that I was someone of interest, but that element of smoothness she’d acquired from her parents was gone, replaced by a girl who wasn’t afraid to say ‘fuck you’ if you annoyed her.

She was feisty before; now she was fiestier, which would have come in handy a long time ago.

A final week of tests and instructions to ease her way back into life outside the hospital, virtually the only place she could remember. 

Then I took her home.

Her eyes lit up when she saw the house, and I had hoped she would remember, but she didn’t.  For some reason, she said it was like the house she always wanted to live in, but couldn’t say why.

I wanted to tell her she designed it, but I promised myself I wasn’t going to shove true facts down her throat so she’d remember.  Her memory, if it returned, would be when she wanted it to.

She cleaned out her old life.  We went shopping to accommodate her new look.  We changed furniture, repainted walls, drank red wine, which before she never would, and ate Chinese.

This was someone I didn’t know.

We slept in different rooms.  I could appreciate her reluctance and probably would have worried if she jumped into bed with what was, to her, a complete stranger.  I think it had worried her from the outset that I might enforce conjugal rights, but that was the last thing on my mind.

Sex had never been her top priority, and not very often.  She hated being naked in the light, and rarely exposed much of her body except when home.  And then, she had a very conservative one-piece swimsuit.

I had thought it odd that she was hiding scars or worse, but it was just a thing with her.  It had not changed in the new Amelia.

But we coexisted; she had no interest in going anywhere or seeing anyone.  She wouldn’t remember them anyway.

She didn’t remember her family, the heinous brother who had caused her so much pain, the younger sister who was spoilt and treated her badly, and the father whom I suspected had been the cruellest of the three.

Her mother had killed herself to get away from them.  She had tried to leave, but had been dragged back.  Amelia had never forgiven them for that.

Amelia herself had tried to escape, and was also dragged back, and ‘taught a lesson’ by her brother.  She had never told me what happened, but I assumed it was bad.

Their cruelty increased exponentially when she wanted to marry me; her family fought it, and the sister tried to kill me the first time at the wedding rehearsal.

We escaped; Amelia had her story splattered across the pages of a mass-circulation newspaper, which led to the arrests of her father and brother, charges laid, followed by what could only be described as a mock trial, where the judge allowed a restraining order against them, a committee service for the rest.

No justice had been served that day, except that, at last, they kept their distance, even though they kept up the harassment in other ways. They had not managed to get access after the accident, even when they tried to get a court order to have her returned to their home.

I knew they would be waiting in the wings somewhere, to take the opportunity to snatch her back.  If they did, then it would be at our property, which, unbeknownst to them, was a veritable fortress.

It was a subject for discussion a few days after our arrival, and it was settled.

“I know I have brought up the subject before, but you do have a family.  The thing is, they hurt you in several ways, and you had to get a restraining order to keep them away.”

“That bad.”

“Worse.  You never told me what they did to you, not that I wanted to know, but they’re out there, and given your current circumstances, they might come after you.  They never approved of me as your husband.”

“What did you do?”

An odd question, but logical considering her condition.

“To them, I was a lower-class slob, beneath your station in life.  You didn’t think so, which set them all off.  They fought the relationship, tried to stop the wedding, your sister tried to kill me.  The list is endless.”

“Then thank God I don’t remember them.”

Thank God indeed.

Until…

Later that day, my cell phone rang, an unlisted number.

I answered it.

It was her brother.

“How did you get this number?”  It was meant to be a burner phone.

“That’s irrelevant.  We would like to see my sister.”

“You have a restraining order.”

I was waiting to hear his laughter and tell me the error of my interpretation of such matters.  Restraining orders did not apply to the Magallans.

“You can invite us to visit.  Brief, supervised.  What harm could it do if she doesn’t remember us?  Or are you afraid she might want to come with us?”

There was an element of truth to that supposition.  If she couldn’t remember them, and they were nice to her, throwing money around like paper confetti, she might.

Seeing them again might jog her memory too. Though a shock as severe as that might have adverse effects on her recovery.

“I suggest you give up this obsession you have.  She didn’t like you before, and I doubt that’s changed.”

“Except she had no memory of us, unless that’s just a lie.  We’ll see you tomorrow morning.”  He disconnected the call before I could reply.

When I told her later, she simply said, “Let them come.  I will deal with them.”

“You remember them?”

“No.  If they are as bad as you say they are, it’s no wonder my memory doesn’t want to return.   The doctor said that a possible reason for this amnesia is because my mind is shutting out the pain it knows will return if I get my memory back.”

“It might be because of me too.”

“I don’t feel that you hurt me, only protected me.  I have this strange feeling of contentment when I am with you.  It’s the reason I’m here now.  I would not have come with you otherwise.”

“And I will continue to protect you.  I told them not to come.  You have a restraining order against them.  I could call the police.”

“No.  I want to see them, see what they have to say for themselves.”

I shrugged.  There was a gun in the case for just such emergencies. I hope I wouldn’t have to use it.

We lived on what used to be cattle grazing land, a hundred acres stretching from the coastline to the main road.  Our house was back nearer the ocean, where it couldn’t be seen from the main road.

There were cameras and a high fence, so visitors had to identify themselves before entering.  There were surveillance cameras everywhere, so they couldn’t arrive unannounced.

There were only two ways to get to the house.  By the lane off the main road and through the front gate, and from the ocean.  If you liked scaling cliffs.

They came via the front gate.

We were both in the kichen when the when the button was pressed.  They had to ask us to open the gate.

There were four people in the car.  A chauffeur, the borrower in the front seat, and the father and sister in the back.  None of them looked comfortable.

The chauffeur, not suspecting we could see them, asked for permission to enter.

I gave Amelia one last chance to say no.  She did not

I opened the gate.

We watched the car come along the track, the house being about a mile back from the main road, and completely secluded on all four sides.

We watched the car slowly drive along, getting closer and closer until it stopped next to my old battered Land Rover.

I was glancing at Amelia as she closely looked at each of them as the chauffeur opened the doors and each one got out, smoothing down the invisible wrinkles and waiting for the next.

A clear view of the chauffeur.  A man who looked more like a battle-hardened mercenary than a driver.  A red flag. Amelia’s expression didn’t change.

Once standing together, the son pulled out a cigarette, but before he could light it, his father yanked out of his mouth and threw it away, adding a few choice words that made lip reading easy.

No love lost between the two of them.  The sister shook her head and started walking towards the door.  The other two caught up.

“Don’t like them,” she said.  “I don’t see how any of them could be my family, except by looks.”

“They once told me they weren’t in the business of being liked.”  First time, and nearly the last time I met them.

“I’ll wait in here, give myself time to screw my courage to the sticking point.”

It was a phrase she had used a lot, when she was herself.  Had seeing them jog a memory fragment?

A minute later there was pounding on the door.  They’d completely overlooked using the button to ring the bell.  Were they making a statement, or being the usual bullies?

I sucked several deep breaths, then answered the door.

Richard barked, “Where is the bitch.  She’s faking it, you know.”

I stood back a foot after the verbal onslaught.

“It is usual to say hello before ranting, Richard, but then no one taught you any manners.”

“Just get out of the way.”

I thought about hitting him, but then there were two more waves of shock troops to fend off.  I stood to the side, and he pushed his way past, almost knocking me over, while saying, “Where is she?”

Maybe not such a good idea to invite them.

The father and Elizabeth passed more sedately, but with scowls on their faces.  It was clear they were not here with love in their hearts.

“I hope you left the kitchen knife set back home,” I muttered as she went past.

She simply smiled briefly, with an evil glint in her eyes, and kept going.

As I shut the door, I heard the father say, “What the hell…”

When I entered the room, I did not know what to expect.  It wasn’t Richard squirming on the floor making strange noises.

Amelia was leaning against the dividing bench between the kitchen and the dining lounge, watching him and the others.

Just watching.

The father yelled, “What happened?”  He was glaring furiously at his other daughter, Amelia.

“This person, whoever he is, came straight at me, and, of course, I had to defend myself.”  She looked straight at her father, or perhaps through him.  “Who is he, because I don’t have any animal friends that I know at that isn’t a man, its some rabid, out of control creature who should be put down.”

It was delivered almost as a conversational piece, far more frightening than if she screamed it at him like a banshee.  It virtually stopped him in his tracks

“He is your older brother.”

“No.  He isn’t.  If I had a brother, he’d be more like me.  Pleasant, docile, amenable.  That creature,” she pointed at him, still writhing, “needs to be put down.”

Her sister sighed.  “We are your family, Amelia, and we’ve come to take you home, where you belong.”

Amelia turned her eyes to her sister.  The look on her face, I noticed, was hard, the sort people would say, if looks could kill.

“Who are you again?”

“Your younger sister, Patricia.”

Amelia smiled, humourless as she evaluated the woman before her.

“Impossible.  Oversized ears, beady eyes, thin cruel lips, too much blusher, too bright red lipstick.  You look like a cadaver from a Frankenstein movie.  You’re nothing like me, so I don’t know who you are, and quite frankly, I don’t want to.”

“Don’t talk to your sister like that.”  Her father finally found his voice and had dragged the hapless son off the floor. 

I had no idea what Amelia had done to him, but it was clear he couldn’t stand up straight.

“Are you the sire of these creatures?  Then you cannot be any better than they are.  I have no idea why my husband thought I should meet you; in fact, if I remember rightly, just before you turned up at the front gate, he told me he didn’t, and the creature invited himself.  The creature also said that I was faking my amnesia.  About what you’d expect from a brainless creature.  Now…”

She leaned back over the counter, picked something, and a few seconds later had a gun in her hand.  The gun we kept in case of emergencies.

Something told me some part of her memory had returned.

“What are you doing?”  Patricia looked terrified.  Perhaps she too thought her sister’s memory had returned.

“You’re leaving my house.  Dead or alive, it’s your choice.  You have until I count to ten.  Be very grateful it’s not three.  One.”

“Let’s go,” Patricia said.  “She’s clearly off her rocker.”

“This is ridiculous,” Richard muttered.  “She’s not going to shoot anyone.”  He took a step towards her, and she shot him; the force of the bullet pushed him back into her father and sent them both sprawling.  She had aimed for the soft part of the shoulder.

This was not the Amelia I knew.

Richard screamed; realising it was not fatal, just agonising, he separated himself from his father, who scrambled to his feet, and backed away.

“This was a mistake.  A big mistake.  She has no idea who she is.”  He looked at me.  “You’ll be next; she’s clearly lost the plot.

She took a step forward and aimed the gun at his head.  “Get up and get out.  The next shot will end that pathetic life of yours, and these two as well.  It’s a three-for-one deal.”

He didn’t need to be asked twice, awkwardly himself to his feet, groaning, then clutching at the wound.  Blood stained a very expensive suit.

A last glare at Amelia, he went to say something, perhaps a threat, perhaps a curse, but thought the better of it.

They left.

Amelia followed them to the door.

“This is your one and only warning.  I ever see any of you again, I will kill you. Very slowly and very painfully.  Payback will be a bitch.”

That’s when they stopped in their tracks.  Richard turned, then the other two.

“You remember?”

“The moment you walked into the room.  What you did to me, I’ll never forget.  Neither will you, because today is the first you, all of you, better start looking over your shoulder.  You’re getting a day’s grace, then I’m coming after you, and I won’t stop until you’re dead.  Now get off my property.”

Richard lingered.  A bad mistake.  She shot at Richard, scrambling for cover until there were no more bullets.  Then, when he thought it was safe, she held up a new clip and rammed it home.

“You want to play games, Richie?”

I think he finally realised she was not joking.

They got in the car and left.

We waited until the car disappeared out of sight.

She sighed.  “Jesus’s, that felt good.”

“Not remembering what he did to you.”

“All of them.  No.  But I wanted to kill him.  I had to really restrain myself, but it was too easy.  He’s going to die slowly and painfully.”

“Don’t you think you’ve made your point?”  I’m as much for revenge as the next guy, but there had to be a better way.

“I did the lawyer thing, and they made a mockery out of it.  We give them a week, and then we’ll go after them.”

“A week?”

“They’ll get their security team together, send a couple of scouts, and then decide what to do.  The driver was one of their mercenaries; he was scoping the place for weaknesses.  They’ll come by the cliffs.  A week.  A half dozen of their best mercenaries found dead; they’ll get the message.”

She turned around and smiled.  “You were the only one I could trust.  Through thick and thin.”

“I believed you’d lost your memory “

“I had.  Richard tipped it all on its head.  The voice, then the presence.  What he did to me.  It all came back.  He came at me; I put him down.  Self-defence, and gun club.  Training.  I was always going to get them.  Are you in?”

“Do I get the shoot your sister?”

“After what she did to you, who am I to stop you?  Come.  Your training starts now.”

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If I only had one day to stop over in – Budapest – what would I do?

One Day in Budapest: The One Place You Must Visit to Make It Unforgettable

Budapest, the radiant capital of Hungary, straddles the mighty Danube River with regal grace. If you’re passing through with just a 24-hour stopover, time is precious—and every minute counts. You could scramble to tick off museums, thermal baths, and ruin bars, but to make your brief encounter with this city truly memorable, there’s one place that captures the soul, history, and breathtaking beauty of Budapest in a single panoramic view:

The Fisherman’s Bastion (Halászbástya).

Perched atop Castle Hill in the historic Buda district, the Fisherman’s Bastion isn’t just a viewpoint—it’s a fairytale come to life. Built between 1895 and 1902 in a neo-Gothic and neo-Romanesque style, this ornate terrace was originally constructed as part of Budapest’s millennium celebrations. Legend says it was named after the medieval guild of fishermen who once defended this stretch of the city walls.

But why prioritise this over Budapest’s many other wonders?

1. The View That Defines Budapest

From the seven turrets and arcaded terraces of Fisherman’s Bastion, you get the postcard panorama of the city. To the east, across the shimmering Danube, lies the grand Hungarian Parliament Building—its domed silhouette glowing in the morning light or illuminated like a crown at night. The Chain Bridge stretches beneath, connecting Buda and Pest in elegant symmetry. At sunrise or sunset, the city feels like a living painting.

This view alone makes the climb worth it. It’s not just scenery—it’s a moment of awe that crystallises your entire Budapest experience.

2. A Fairytale Atmosphere

With its whitewashed stone turrets, intricate balconies, and stairways that seem lifted from a storybook, the Bastion feels like something out of a dream. It’s especially enchanting in the early morning, when the crowds are thinner, and the golden light spills over the rooftops of the old town.

Don’t miss the underground section—originally a fish market—now housing exhibitions and offering unique angles of the Danube and Parliament.

3. Next-Door to the Magic

The Fisherman’s Bastion sits right beside Matthias Church, a stunning 13th-century Gothic church with a kaleidoscopic tiled roof and an interior glittering with gold and stained glass. Spend 15 quiet minutes inside, and you’ll feel like you’ve stepped back centuries.

Together, these two landmarks form the heart of Budapest’s medieval heritage—compact, walkable, and utterly Instagram-worthy.

4. The Perfect Starting (or Ending) Point

Whether you begin your day here at sunrise or end it with the city lights flickering to life, Fisherman’s Bastion sets the tone. After soaking in the view, you can easily descend into the charming Vörösmarty Square, explore Váci Street for coffee and souvenirs, or hop on a Danube cruise to see the city from the water—all within your tight schedule.

Pro Tips for Your One-Day Stopover:

  • Arrive early. Beat the tour groups by getting there right at opening time (typically 9:00 AM).
  • Visit at dusk. The city lights reflect off the river, and Parliament glows in golden illumination—a sight you’ll remember forever.
  • Combine it with Castle Hill. Take 30 minutes to wander the cobbled streets of the Buda Castle district—quaint cafés, artisan shops, and hidden courtyards await.
  • Use public transport. Take Tram 19 or 47 to Széll Kálmán tér, then the funicular up to the Castle—fast, scenic, and efficient.

Final Thoughts

In just one day, you can’t see everything Budapest offers—but you can feel its spirit. And at Fisherman’s Bastion, with the wind in your hair and the Danube gleaming below, you’ll feel it deeply. It’s more than a sightseeing stop; it’s the soul of the city in a single, breathtaking moment.

So when your plane touches down for that brief layover, let Fisherman’s Bastion be your destination. Because sometimes, one perfect place is all it takes to fall in love with an entire city.

One day. One view. A lifetime of memories.

In a word: Bar

There’s more than one way … er, perhaps it’s better to say, there are many ways to use the word bar, which is not bad for a three-letter word.

Bar, the one you associate with drinks, in hotels, restaurants and we’ll, just bars.

Probably the best type of bar you might find me in is a Sports Bar, where you can snack on buffalo wings a tall glass of beer and watch with ice hockey in winter or baseball in summer.

It’s one I use from time to time when asked, what will we do, and the reply is often let’s go to a bar.  The best bars are underground, dark and dingy, full of eclectic people, with a band playing almost passable music or better still jazz

Bar, as in the legal variety

There are so many legal references to using bar, that the one that I am most familiar with is being admitted to the bar which means that you can now practice law.

Raising the bar, if that’s possible, where the bar is that imaginary level which offers sinks very low.  When someone says they’re going to try and raise the bar, you may be assured there will be a long battle ahead, simply because people generally find it hard to change.

Bar, as in we are not going to let you in here.  Yes, this is the irksome one where you find yourself, often for reasons unknown, barred from somewhere or something.  This may also be referred to by saying everyone may enter bar you.  

Bar, as in an iron bar, the sort that is sometimes used as a blunt force object by villains to remind the victim they owe any one of a loan shark, bookie or the mafia.  God help you if it is all three.

There are also iron bars of a different sort, those that are set in concrete outside a window most likely in a prison where the objective is to prevent escape.

It gives rise to an old expression, that person should be behind bars.

Then there is just a bar, such as a bar of gold, which I’m sure we’d all like to have stashed away, but not necessarily in the mattress, or the more common variety, a chocolate bar, which I have one now.  What’s your favorite?

And just to add to the list of meanings you can always refer to sashes or stripes as bars.

Confused?  Well, there’s still music, and the bane of yachtsmen, sand bars but I think we’ll leave it there.

Welcome to the English language

“Sunday in New York”, a romantic adventure that’s not a walk in the park!

“Sunday in New York” is ultimately a story about trust, and what happens when a marriage is stretched to its limits.

When Harry Steele attends a lunch with his manager, Barclay, to discuss a promotion that any junior executive would accept in a heartbeat, it is the fact that his wife, Alison, who previously professed her reservations about Barclay, also agreed to attend that casts a small element of doubt in his mind.

From that moment, his life, in the company, in deciding what to do, his marriage, his very life, spirals out of control.

There is no one big factor that can prove Harry’s worst fears, that his marriage is over, just several small, interconnecting events, when piled on top of each other, point to a cataclysmic end to everything he had believed in.

Trust is lost firstly in his best friend and mentor, Andy, who only hints at impending disaster, Sasha, a woman whom he saved, and who appears to have motives of her own, and then in his wife, Alison, as he discovers piece by piece, damning evidence that she is about to leave him for another man.

Can we trust what we see with our eyes or trust what we hear?

Haven’t we all jumped to conclusions at least once in our lives?

Can Alison, a woman whose self-belief and confidence are about to be put to the ultimate test, find a way of proving their relationship is as strong as it has ever been?

As they say in the classics, read on!

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If I only had one day to stop over in – Vienna – what would I do?

One Day in Vienna: A Symphony of Splendour at Schönbrunn Palace

Vienna is a city of emperors, composers, and unparalleled grandeur—a place where history, art, and music intertwine. But if you’re stuck with a one-day stopover, how do you choose just one place to visit? Amid the city’s iconic attractions, Schönbrunn Palace rises as the perfect answer. This UNESCO World Heritage Site is more than a palace; it’s a portal to the opulence of the Habsburg Empire and a living testament to Vienna’s legacy. Here’s how to make the most of your day in this majestic setting.


Why Schönbrunn? A Journey Through Time and Taste

Nestled in the heart of Vienna’s 11th district, Schönbrunn Palace served as the summer residence of the Habsburg dynasty for centuries. Its name, which means Beautiful Spring, nods to the natural spring discovered by a shepherd in the 11th century. By the 17th century, it had transformed into a Baroque masterpiece under the direction of Emperor Leopold I. The palace’s grandeur is matched only by its history: it witnessed imperial triumphs, the horrors of WWI, and the resilience of Austrian culture.

Walking through its gates, you’re instantly transported into a world of gilded halls, stately gardens, and stories whispered in marble corridors. Whether you’re a history buff, an art lover, or a seeker of beauty, Schönbrunn offers layers of experience that resonate with every visitor.


The Highlights: A Gilded Itinerary

1. The Grand Tour of the Palace
Start with the Imperial Apartments, where the Habsburgs lived and ruled. The opulent rooms—like the Mirrors Hall and the Kleiner Prunksaal—showcase the dynasty’s wealth and taste. Don’t miss the intricate frescoes, Venetian chandeliers, and the Schönbrunn Silver Museum, home to over 6000 pieces of exquisite tableware.

2. The Gloriette: A Garden’s Jewel
No visit is complete without ascending to the Gloriette, the garden’s crowning glory. This neoclassical pavilion, framed by 500 sculpted cypress trees, offers panoramic views of the city. The surrounding Parc de la Thomayer is a tranquil spot to take a break, its geometric pathways and fountains a nod to Versailles.

3. The Baroque Gardens
Spanning 180,000 square meters, the gardens are a masterclass in design. Walk through the Esterházy Gate into “Maria Therese’s Garden,” where flowerbeds bloom in vibrant symmetry. Stop by the Orangery, once vital for protecting tropical plants in winter, or the Children’s Zoo, where a mirror maze adds whimsy to the imperial ambience.


Practical Tips for a Perfect Day

  • Skip the Line: Book tickets in advance to avoid long waits, especially on weekends.
  • Timing is Everything: Arrive early to maximise your time. A full visit to the palace and gardens can take 3–4 hours; allow extra if you stroll the gardens thoroughly.
  • Guided Tours or Self-Guided? Opt for a guided Palatine Tour (45 minutes) for context, then explore on your own.
  • Grab a Coffee Break: The Palace Café serves classic Austrian pastries and coffee. For a more hidden gem, stop by Café Gloriette in the gardens for light bites with a view.

Why Schönbrunn Makes the Day Memorable

Schönbrunn is the essence of Vienna in one location. It’s where history breathes in frescoed walls and where nature dances in meticulously designed gardens. As the sun sets, casting golden light on the palace’s façade, you’ll understand why this place remains the heartbeat of Austria’s imperial past.

In just a day, Schönbrunn offers a narrative of power, artistry, and human ambition. It’s a place where even fleeting moments feel eternal, and where you’ll leave with not just photos, but a sense of wonder. For a one-day stopover, there’s no better choice to make Vienna unforgettable.


Schönbrunn Palace is open daily from 9:00 AM to 6:30 PM (season-dependent). For more details, visit www.schoenbrunn.at.

What would you do with a day in Vienna? Let us know in the comments!


📸 Pro Tip: Bring a camera—every corner of Schönbrunn is a postcard waiting to be snapped.

“Echoes From The Past”, the past doesn’t necessarily stay there


What happens when your past finally catches up with you?

Christmas is just around the corner, a time to be with family. For Will Mason, an orphan since he was fourteen, it is a time for reflection on what his life could have been, and what it could be.

Until a chance encounter brings back to life the reasons for his twenty years of self-imposed exile from a life only normal people could have. From that moment, Will’s life slowly starts to unravel, and it’s obvious to him that it’s time to move on.

This time, however, there is more at stake.

Will has broken his number one rule: don’t get involved.

With his nemesis, Eddie Jamieson, suddenly within reach, and a blossoming relationship with an office colleague, Maria, about to change everything, Will has to make a choice. Quietly leave, or finally, make a stand.

But as Will soon discovers, when other people are involved, there are going to be terrible consequences no matter what choice he makes.

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365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 244

Day 244 – Writing exercise

Life is a paradox.

You think that everything is great, that after all the drama, mishaps and disasters that were sent to try you were defeated, one by one, that the universe had finally decided you deserved a life together.

God knows we had been on the verge of going our separate ways more times than I could count.

But we were there.

Amelia had planned a dinner for two in the swankiest restaurant in the city, and I had just got changed at work and about to catch a cab.

Amelia was driving in from the suburbs, and we would be staying in an equally swank hotel for the weekend.

It was a plan we had made the day before our wedding, to do exactly one year after, on our first anniversary.

Today marked our fifth.

Just as I told the cabbie the address, my cell phone rang.

‘Private Number’

I was going to ignore it, but a strange sensation ran through me, the like of which I’d never felt before.

“Hello?”

“Is that Allen Jamieson?”

“Yes.”  Tentative.  A spear of pain ran through my heart, and I braced myself.

“I’m afraid I have some bad news.”

That was the ‘Oh God’ moment, and I could feel my world slipping out from under me.

“Your wife, Amelia, has been in a serious car accident.  She has been taken to hospital.  I suggest you get there as soon as possible.”

At the word ‘accident,’ I think I stopped thinking.

He gave the address, I thanked him, and that was it.  Seconds later he tested the address, knowing that I wouldn’t remember a word he said, except that one word, ‘accident’.

I arrived in a daze, sick with worry, thinking that I was too late, that the light of my life had been extinguished.

After everything else …

I made myself known at the front desk, and within a minute a nurse came to take me to her. 

She was in the emergency room; just arrived, and yes, still alive but barely.  The nurse didn’t say she was hanging by a thread, but I read between the lines.

We burst into chaos.  Apparently she was not the only victim of what had been a minor earth tremor that had brought down an overpass. 

From the front counter to the ER, I got the disjointed details:  a hundred cars and five buses, most crushed, and Amelia was one of five who survived.  I did not hear how many didn’t.

I wasn’t prepared for what I was about to see, and when the nurse pulled back the curtain, I simply fainted.

When I recovered, smelling salts were horrible, and I awoke confused.  I was outside her cubicle, but it was now empty. 

Another nurse was saying that she had been taken to the OR for emergency surgery, and in my mind I could see the bloodied and broken piece of what was, as early as that morning, a beautiful and graceful woman who had survived everything that could be thrown at her.

Now?

If she died, I had not taken the chance to tell her everything I wanted to.  In that moment, I had not been strong – the man she needed to be by her side when it mattered the most.

Now, all I could do was wait.

Twelve hours.

Twelve hours during which I could not sleep, could not rest, got up, walked around, sat down, conversed with other family members of other victims who were equally as stultified as I was at the horrendudness of what had happened.

The news coverage was on the whole time, covering the disaster, the death toll in the hundreds, the rescue attempts, the survivors.  I saw the car Amelia had been in, and how she survived was a miracle.

Then the news turned dark: a panel of experts dissecting the disaster, and the revelation that the contractors who built the flyover had scrimped on materials and, had it been built properly, it might not have happened.

Not helping.

Searching for someone to blame would never help the victims or the loved ones who lost them.

One by one, the family members left.  Most of their loved ones died on the operating table.  Three had not.  Relief could be measured, and it could be felt.

Twelve hours.

It was my turn.

The doctor, or one of them, came out, a white coat over bloodied scrubs.  Straight from the fires of hell.

“She is a survivor,” was the first thing he said, with just a touch of admiration in his tone.  “We repaired the body; it will heal in time with few aftereffects.  Her mind, that’s a different matter.  We repaired the damage, but we cannot be sure what functions may or may not return.  She will be herself, the woman you know.  She just may not remember who you are, or who she is.  It is usually only temporary, but…”

It was enough.  God had found a new way to tear us apart.  It was just another hurdle, one that may take a little time to get over.

And, for Amelia, I had all the time in the world

Five months.

Nearly half a year, and every day I sat in her room, a bright sunny aspect looking over the gardens which, even for late autumn, still looked delightful.

The external and internal injuries had recovered. Her arms healed, her legs healed, and all we could do was wait to see if her head healed.  Looking at her, except for a few scars, she looked the same Amelia as she had before the accident.

I came in, sat down, said my piece about everything going on around us, and then read from the classics.  Sometimes in English, sometimes in Greek or Italian or Latin.

I told her all about Latin and the fact it was not a dead language.   She would have agreed with me.  If we wanted to say something and not have people around us understand, we’d speak in Latin.

It was about three in the afternoon. 

Birds were tweeting outside.  The sky had filled with dark, ominous clouds, and there were streaks of lightning in the distance.

A storm was coming.

Fifteen minutes later it was on us.  A bolt of lightning lit up the room, and then the crack of thunder, directly overhead.

I was holding her hand.

Just after the crack of thunder, she squeezed my hand and opened her eyes.

I could see fear in her eyes, but I had not known her to be scared of thunder.

She spoke, but nothing came out.  She coughed and winced.  Not completely healed.

Then, “Where am I?” 

She realised I was holding her hand and slipped it out of my grip.  Not a good sign.

“A convalescent hospital “

“Why?

“You were in an accident.”

“When?”

“Five months ago.  You have been in a coma.”

“And you are?”

There it was.  What I had been dreading for the past five months, the cruellest of outcomes.  She would not remember who I was.

“Your husband Allen.”

“You could be anybody.”

“I could, but I have proof.”  Sitting beside the bed was a photograph album.  Started at our wedding, the one none of her relatives came to.

The people who had spent two years trying to stop her from marrying me.  Her family had different plans for her, but she had not wanted that life.

Cinderella’s life was normal compared to what her family had put her through, including kidnapping, mind control, torture by any other name, and a life-and-death rescue.

No one believed the story, but every word of it was true.  I still carried the scars and the bullet they had hoped would kill me.  It probably would in time.

She dragged herself up into a sitting position, and I gave her the album.  She leafed through the pages, taking the time to look at the photos and then at me.

At the end, she closed the album and let it rest on her knees.

“I don’t remember anything.  Not yours, not my life, nothing.”  Tears flowed.

The doctor came in; I had seen him outside waiting, perhaps to see if I had any effect on what he still maintained would be temporary amnesia.

He looked at me, and I nodded.  If I thought the last five months had been hard, the next were going to be harder.

It took another two months to get her back to a semblance of her former self. Intensive therapy to get all her limbs working, eating, coping with all those normal things we take for granted.

She had lost weight, and the clothes I brought, her favourites, were too large, and according to her, ‘what person in their right mind would wear these?’

She wanted jeans and T-shirts, and sports shoes.  What some might call the grungy teenager look.  The thing is, she looked great in them.

What else had changed? Her attitude.  Not towards me; she seemed to have settled the debate that I was someone of interest, but that element of smoothness she’d acquired from her parents was gone, replaced by a girl who wasn’t afraid to say ‘fuck you’ if you annoyed her.

She was feisty before; now she was fiestier, which would have come in handy a long time ago.

A final week of tests and instructions to ease her way back into life outside the hospital, virtually the only place she could remember. 

Then I took her home.

Her eyes lit up when she saw the house, and I had hoped she would remember, but she didn’t.  For some reason, she said it was like the house she always wanted to live in, but couldn’t say why.

I wanted to tell her she designed it, but I promised myself I wasn’t going to shove true facts down her throat so she’d remember.  Her memory, if it returned, would be when she wanted it to.

She cleaned out her old life.  We went shopping to accommodate her new look.  We changed furniture, repainted walls, drank red wine, which before she never would, and ate Chinese.

This was someone I didn’t know.

We slept in different rooms.  I could appreciate her reluctance and probably would have worried if she jumped into bed with what was, to her, a complete stranger.  I think it had worried her from the outset that I might enforce conjugal rights, but that was the last thing on my mind.

Sex had never been her top priority, and not very often.  She hated being naked in the light, and rarely exposed much of her body except when home.  And then, she had a very conservative one-piece swimsuit.

I had thought it odd that she was hiding scars or worse, but it was just a thing with her.  It had not changed in the new Amelia.

But we coexisted; she had no interest in going anywhere or seeing anyone.  She wouldn’t remember them anyway.

She didn’t remember her family, the heinous brother who had caused her so much pain, the younger sister who was spoilt and treated her badly, and the father whom I suspected had been the cruellest of the three.

Her mother had killed herself to get away from them.  She had tried to leave, but had been dragged back.  Amelia had never forgiven them for that.

Amelia herself had tried to escape, and was also dragged back, and ‘taught a lesson’ by her brother.  She had never told me what happened, but I assumed it was bad.

Their cruelty increased exponentially when she wanted to marry me; her family fought it, and the sister tried to kill me the first time at the wedding rehearsal.

We escaped; Amelia had her story splattered across the pages of a mass-circulation newspaper, which led to the arrests of her father and brother, charges laid, followed by what could only be described as a mock trial, where the judge allowed a restraining order against them, a committee service for the rest.

No justice had been served that day, except that, at last, they kept their distance, even though they kept up the harassment in other ways. They had not managed to get access after the accident, even when they tried to get a court order to have her returned to their home.

I knew they would be waiting in the wings somewhere, to take the opportunity to snatch her back.  If they did, then it would be at our property, which, unbeknownst to them, was a veritable fortress.

It was a subject for discussion a few days after our arrival, and it was settled.

“I know I have brought up the subject before, but you do have a family.  The thing is, they hurt you in several ways, and you had to get a restraining order to keep them away.”

“That bad.”

“Worse.  You never told me what they did to you, not that I wanted to know, but they’re out there, and given your current circumstances, they might come after you.  They never approved of me as your husband.”

“What did you do?”

An odd question, but logical considering her condition.

“To them, I was a lower-class slob, beneath your station in life.  You didn’t think so, which set them all off.  They fought the relationship, tried to stop the wedding, your sister tried to kill me.  The list is endless.”

“Then thank God I don’t remember them.”

Thank God indeed.

Until…

Later that day, my cell phone rang, an unlisted number.

I answered it.

It was her brother.

“How did you get this number?”  It was meant to be a burner phone.

“That’s irrelevant.  We would like to see my sister.”

“You have a restraining order.”

I was waiting to hear his laughter and tell me the error of my interpretation of such matters.  Restraining orders did not apply to the Magallans.

“You can invite us to visit.  Brief, supervised.  What harm could it do if she doesn’t remember us?  Or are you afraid she might want to come with us?”

There was an element of truth to that supposition.  If she couldn’t remember them, and they were nice to her, throwing money around like paper confetti, she might.

Seeing them again might jog her memory too. Though a shock as severe as that might have adverse effects on her recovery.

“I suggest you give up this obsession you have.  She didn’t like you before, and I doubt that’s changed.”

“Except she had no memory of us, unless that’s just a lie.  We’ll see you tomorrow morning.”  He disconnected the call before I could reply.

When I told her later, she simply said, “Let them come.  I will deal with them.”

“You remember them?”

“No.  If they are as bad as you say they are, it’s no wonder my memory doesn’t want to return.   The doctor said that a possible reason for this amnesia is because my mind is shutting out the pain it knows will return if I get my memory back.”

“It might be because of me too.”

“I don’t feel that you hurt me, only protected me.  I have this strange feeling of contentment when I am with you.  It’s the reason I’m here now.  I would not have come with you otherwise.”

“And I will continue to protect you.  I told them not to come.  You have a restraining order against them.  I could call the police.”

“No.  I want to see them, see what they have to say for themselves.”

I shrugged.  There was a gun in the case for just such emergencies. I hope I wouldn’t have to use it.

We lived on what used to be cattle grazing land, a hundred acres stretching from the coastline to the main road.  Our house was back nearer the ocean, where it couldn’t be seen from the main road.

There were cameras and a high fence, so visitors had to identify themselves before entering.  There were surveillance cameras everywhere, so they couldn’t arrive unannounced.

There were only two ways to get to the house.  By the lane off the main road and through the front gate, and from the ocean.  If you liked scaling cliffs.

They came via the front gate.

We were both in the kichen when the when the button was pressed.  They had to ask us to open the gate.

There were four people in the car.  A chauffeur, the borrower in the front seat, and the father and sister in the back.  None of them looked comfortable.

The chauffeur, not suspecting we could see them, asked for permission to enter.

I gave Amelia one last chance to say no.  She did not

I opened the gate.

We watched the car come along the track, the house being about a mile back from the main road, and completely secluded on all four sides.

We watched the car slowly drive along, getting closer and closer until it stopped next to my old battered Land Rover.

I was glancing at Amelia as she closely looked at each of them as the chauffeur opened the doors and each one got out, smoothing down the invisible wrinkles and waiting for the next.

A clear view of the chauffeur.  A man who looked more like a battle-hardened mercenary than a driver.  A red flag. Amelia’s expression didn’t change.

Once standing together, the son pulled out a cigarette, but before he could light it, his father yanked out of his mouth and threw it away, adding a few choice words that made lip reading easy.

No love lost between the two of them.  The sister shook her head and started walking towards the door.  The other two caught up.

“Don’t like them,” she said.  “I don’t see how any of them could be my family, except by looks.”

“They once told me they weren’t in the business of being liked.”  First time, and nearly the last time I met them.

“I’ll wait in here, give myself time to screw my courage to the sticking point.”

It was a phrase she had used a lot, when she was herself.  Had seeing them jog a memory fragment?

A minute later there was pounding on the door.  They’d completely overlooked using the button to ring the bell.  Were they making a statement, or being the usual bullies?

I sucked several deep breaths, then answered the door.

Richard barked, “Where is the bitch.  She’s faking it, you know.”

I stood back a foot after the verbal onslaught.

“It is usual to say hello before ranting, Richard, but then no one taught you any manners.”

“Just get out of the way.”

I thought about hitting him, but then there were two more waves of shock troops to fend off.  I stood to the side, and he pushed his way past, almost knocking me over, while saying, “Where is she?”

Maybe not such a good idea to invite them.

The father and Elizabeth passed more sedately, but with scowls on their faces.  It was clear they were not here with love in their hearts.

“I hope you left the kitchen knife set back home,” I muttered as she went past.

She simply smiled briefly, with an evil glint in her eyes, and kept going.

As I shut the door, I heard the father say, “What the hell…”

When I entered the room, I did not know what to expect.  It wasn’t Richard squirming on the floor making strange noises.

Amelia was leaning against the dividing bench between the kitchen and the dining lounge, watching him and the others.

Just watching.

The father yelled, “What happened?”  He was glaring furiously at his other daughter, Amelia.

“This person, whoever he is, came straight at me, and, of course, I had to defend myself.”  She looked straight at her father, or perhaps through him.  “Who is he, because I don’t have any animal friends that I know at that isn’t a man, its some rabid, out of control creature who should be put down.”

It was delivered almost as a conversational piece, far more frightening than if she screamed it at him like a banshee.  It virtually stopped him in his tracks

“He is your older brother.”

“No.  He isn’t.  If I had a brother, he’d be more like me.  Pleasant, docile, amenable.  That creature,” she pointed at him, still writhing, “needs to be put down.”

Her sister sighed.  “We are your family, Amelia, and we’ve come to take you home, where you belong.”

Amelia turned her eyes to her sister.  The look on her face, I noticed, was hard, the sort people would say, if looks could kill.

“Who are you again?”

“Your younger sister, Patricia.”

Amelia smiled, humourless as she evaluated the woman before her.

“Impossible.  Oversized ears, beady eyes, thin cruel lips, too much blusher, too bright red lipstick.  You look like a cadaver from a Frankenstein movie.  You’re nothing like me, so I don’t know who you are, and quite frankly, I don’t want to.”

“Don’t talk to your sister like that.”  Her father finally found his voice and had dragged the hapless son off the floor. 

I had no idea what Amelia had done to him, but it was clear he couldn’t stand up straight.

“Are you the sire of these creatures?  Then you cannot be any better than they are.  I have no idea why my husband thought I should meet you; in fact, if I remember rightly, just before you turned up at the front gate, he told me he didn’t, and the creature invited himself.  The creature also said that I was faking my amnesia.  About what you’d expect from a brainless creature.  Now…”

She leaned back over the counter, picked something, and a few seconds later had a gun in her hand.  The gun we kept in case of emergencies.

Something told me some part of her memory had returned.

“What are you doing?”  Patricia looked terrified.  Perhaps she too thought her sister’s memory had returned.

“You’re leaving my house.  Dead or alive, it’s your choice.  You have until I count to ten.  Be very grateful it’s not three.  One.”

“Let’s go,” Patricia said.  “She’s clearly off her rocker.”

“This is ridiculous,” Richard muttered.  “She’s not going to shoot anyone.”  He took a step towards her, and she shot him; the force of the bullet pushed him back into her father and sent them both sprawling.  She had aimed for the soft part of the shoulder.

This was not the Amelia I knew.

Richard screamed; realising it was not fatal, just agonising, he separated himself from his father, who scrambled to his feet, and backed away.

“This was a mistake.  A big mistake.  She has no idea who she is.”  He looked at me.  “You’ll be next; she’s clearly lost the plot.

She took a step forward and aimed the gun at his head.  “Get up and get out.  The next shot will end that pathetic life of yours, and these two as well.  It’s a three-for-one deal.”

He didn’t need to be asked twice, awkwardly himself to his feet, groaning, then clutching at the wound.  Blood stained a very expensive suit.

A last glare at Amelia, he went to say something, perhaps a threat, perhaps a curse, but thought the better of it.

They left.

Amelia followed them to the door.

“This is your one and only warning.  I ever see any of you again, I will kill you. Very slowly and very painfully.  Payback will be a bitch.”

That’s when they stopped in their tracks.  Richard turned, then the other two.

“You remember?”

“The moment you walked into the room.  What you did to me, I’ll never forget.  Neither will you, because today is the first you, all of you, better start looking over your shoulder.  You’re getting a day’s grace, then I’m coming after you, and I won’t stop until you’re dead.  Now get off my property.”

Richard lingered.  A bad mistake.  She shot at Richard, scrambling for cover until there were no more bullets.  Then, when he thought it was safe, she held up a new clip and rammed it home.

“You want to play games, Richie?”

I think he finally realised she was not joking.

They got in the car and left.

We waited until the car disappeared out of sight.

She sighed.  “Jesus’s, that felt good.”

“Not remembering what he did to you.”

“All of them.  No.  But I wanted to kill him.  I had to really restrain myself, but it was too easy.  He’s going to die slowly and painfully.”

“Don’t you think you’ve made your point?”  I’m as much for revenge as the next guy, but there had to be a better way.

“I did the lawyer thing, and they made a mockery out of it.  We give them a week, and then we’ll go after them.”

“A week?”

“They’ll get their security team together, send a couple of scouts, and then decide what to do.  The driver was one of their mercenaries; he was scoping the place for weaknesses.  They’ll come by the cliffs.  A week.  A half dozen of their best mercenaries found dead; they’ll get the message.”

She turned around and smiled.  “You were the only one I could trust.  Through thick and thin.”

“I believed you’d lost your memory “

“I had.  Richard tipped it all on its head.  The voice, then the presence.  What he did to me.  It all came back.  He came at me; I put him down.  Self-defence, and gun club.  Training.  I was always going to get them.  Are you in?”

“Do I get the shoot your sister?”

“After what she did to you, who am I to stop you?  Come.  Your training starts now.”

©  Charles Heath  2026

‘What Sets Us Apart’ – A beta reader’s view

There’s something to be said for a story that starts like a James Bond movie, throwing you straight in the deep end, a perfect way of getting to know the main character, David, or is that Alistair?

A retired spy, well, not so much a spy as a retired errand boy, David’s rather wry description of his talents, and a woman that most men would give their left arm for, not exactly the ideal couple, but there is a spark in a meeting that may or may not have been a setup.

But as the story progressed, the question I kept asking myself was why he’d bother.

And, page after unrelenting page, you find out.

Susan is exactly the sort of woman to pique his interest.  Then, inexplicably, she disappears.  That might have been the end of it, but Prendergast, that shadowy enigma, David’s ex-boss who loves playing games with real people, gives him an ultimatum: find her or come back to work.

Nothing like an offer that’s a double-edged sword!

A dragon for a mother, a sister he didn’t know about, Susan’s BFF who is not what she seems or a friend indeed, and Susan’s father, who, up till David meets her, couldn’t be less interested, his nemesis proves to be the impossible dream, and he’s always just that one step behind.

When the rollercoaster finally came to a halt, and I could start breathing again, it was an ending that was completely unexpected.

I’ve been told there’s a sequel in the works.

Bring it on!

The book can be purchased here:  http://amzn.to/2Eryfth