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In a word: Incline

When you first think of this word, it is with a slippery slope in mind.

I’ve been on a few of those in my time.

And while we’re on the subject, those inclines measured in degrees are very important if you want a train to get up and down the side of a mountain.

For the train, that’s an incline plane, the point where traction alone won’t get the iron horse up the hill.

Did I say ‘Iron Horse’?  Sorry, regressed there, back to the mid-1800s in the American West for a moment.

It’s not that important when it comes to trucks and cars, and less so if you like four-wheel driving; getting up near-vertical mountainsides often present a welcome challenge to the true enthusiast

But for the rest of us, not so much if you find yourself sliding in reverse uncontrollably into the bay.  I’m sure it’s happened more than once.

Then…

Are you inclined to go?

A very different sort of incline, ie to be disposed towards an attitude or desire.

An inclination, maybe, not to go four-wheel driving?

There is another, probably more obscure use of the word incline, and that relates to an elevated geological formation.  Not the sort of reference that crops up in everyday conversation at the coffee shop.

But, you never know.  Try it next time you have coffee and see what happens.

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Writing about writing a book – Day 2

Hang about.  Didn’t I read somewhere you need to plan your novel, create an outline setting the plot points, and flesh out the characters?

I’m sure it didn’t say, sit down and start writing!

Time to find a writing pad, and put my thinking cap on.

I make a list, what’s the story going to be about? Who’s going to be in it, at least at the start?

Like a newspaper story, I need a who, what, when, where, and how.

Right now.

 

I pick up the pen.

 

Character number one:

Computer nerd, ok, that’s a little close to the bone, a computer manager who is trying to be everything at once, and failing.  Still me, but with a twist.  Now, add a little mystery to him, and give him a secret, one that will only be revealed after a specific set of circumstance.  Yes, I like that.

We’ll call him Bill, ex-regular army, a badly injured and repatriated soldier who was sent to fight a war in Vietnam, the result of which had made him, at times, unfit to live with.

He had a wife, which brings us to,

Character number two:

Ellen, Bill’s ex-wife, an army brat and a General’s daughter, and the result of one of those romances that met disapproval for so many reasons.  It worked until Bill came back from the war, and from there it slowly disintegrated.  There are two daughters, both by the time the novel begins, old enough to understand the ramifications of a divorce.

Character number three:

The man who is Bill’s immediate superior, the Services Department manager, a rather officious man who blindly follows orders, a man who takes pleasure in making others feel small and insignificant, and worst of all, takes the credit where none is due.

Oops, too much, that is my old boss.  He’ll know immediately I’m parodying him.  Tone it down, just a little, but more or less that’s him.  Last name Benton.  He will play a small role in the story.

Character number four:

Jennifer, the IT Department’s assistant manager, a woman who arrives in a shroud of mystery, and then, in time, to provide Bill with a shoulder to cry on when he and Ellen finally split, and perhaps something else later on.

More on her later as the story unfolds.

So far so good.

What’s the plot?

Huge corporation plotting to take over the world using computers?  No, that’s been done to death.

Huge corporation, OK, let’s stop blaming the corporate world for everything wrong in the world.  Corporations are not bad people, people are the bad people.  That’s a rip off cliché, from guns don’t kill people, people kill people!  There will be guns, and there will be dead people.

There will be people hiding behind a huge corporation, using a part of their computer network to move billions of illegally gained money around.  That’s better.

Now, having got that, our ‘hero’ has to ‘discover’ this network, and the people behind it.

All we need now is to set the ball rolling, a single event that ‘throws a cat among the pigeons’.

Yes, Bill is on holidays, a welcome relief from the problems of work.  He dreams of what he’s going to do for the next two weeks.  The phone rings.  Benton calling, the world is coming to an end, the network is down.  He’s needed.  A few terse words, but he relents.

Pen in hand I begin to write.

 

© Charles Heath 2016-2019

A photograph from the inspirational bin – 39

This is what we saw driving along the Coquihalla Highway in Canada, a rather infamous stretch of road featured on the Discovery Channel, and yes, we saw a number of cars and trucks off the side of the road, and not in a good way

The road was iced over in place, and driving was difficult, but on the plus side the scenery was spectacular, and it was hard not to be distracted when driving.

But, inspiration for a story? It might go something like this:

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Arty was adamant that he knew the best where man in the business.

That might gave been true if he was in the middle of the city where there were endless tests and turns that could be used to lost chasing police vehicles.

But that didn’t apply to the open road, and one that was think with ice and snow, even if it had recently been cleared.

But that wasn’t as bad as the fact that we had got free of the city, lost the pursuing cars, changed vehicles, and got away free.

All he had to fo was follow the road.

Except Arty had a temper, and getting stuck behind an old van going ever so slowly on the road, caused him to first blast them with horn, then start doing dangerous accelations up behind them, and then attempt to overtake on a bend in the road.

That might not have been so bad if there had not been an oncoming car, but there was.

Even that might not have been so bad if the car had not been a police vehicle.

But the real kicker: Arty lost control of the car and we went sailing off the edge of the road into a ravine, landing on soft ice which after a minute started cracking and then gave way.

The last place I wanted to be was to be sinking into a freezing cold river, but there we were, all frantically trying to get out.

Fortunately, I did, but not before I was soaking wet, and almost frozen. The rest didn’t make it.

What I learned about writing – You will be burning the midnight oil

It’s an interesting phrase, one that means someone is working overtime at the office till late at night, or early next morning.

You know, “Been burning the midnight oil again, Frank?”

It prompted me to look up its real meaning.  It goes back to the days before electricity where a worker toiled into the night using only an oil lamp or candles.

In my office, I now have LED lights that are reasonably bright, not like the neon lights I used to have that made me feel like I was in a television studio.  Either way, it’s not quite the atmosphere needed when looking for inspiration.

That inspiration might be better attained in a more subdued atmosphere, perhaps even using candles.  In one of the other rooms, we have a wood fire and that projects a very soothing glow, as well as providing warmth, and there I sit sometimes, Galaxy Tab in hand, writing.

But all of that aside, those hours leading up to and after midnight are the best time for me to write.

At times the silence is deafening, another rather quaint but relatively true expression.

At others, there are what I call the sounds of silence, which for some reason are much easier to hear than during the daylight hours.

The bark of a dog.

The rustle of leaves in the trees.

The soft pattering of rain on the roof.

The sound of a train horn from a long way away.

The sound of a truck using its brakes on the highway, also a long way away.

The sound of people talking in the street.

I’ve never really thought about it until now, but it will be something I can use in one of my stories.

Perhaps it will be the theme of another.

Damn, sidetracked again!

365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 303

Day 303 – Follow that weird idea

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Follow That Weird Idea: How E.L. Doctorow’s “Desperate‑to‑Write” Trick Can Supercharge Your Creativity

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Introduction – When the Muse Has Abandoned You

Ever stare at a blank screen, feel the pressure of a deadline, and wonder how you’ll ever produce the next paragraph? You’re not alone. Even literary giants hit the wall.

One of the most celebrated American novelists—E.L. Doctorow—admitted he once felt “desperate to write something.” In that moment he turned to a delightfully odd, almost reckless, technique: grab a random sentence from any book, rewrite it in his own voice, and let the fragment grow into a story.

It sounds bizarre, but the method works like a creative vaccine, inoculating you against writer’s block and stagnation. Below we’ll unpack Doctor’s “weird idea”, explore why it’s effective, and give you a ready‑to‑use, SEO‑friendly action plan to incorporate it into your own workflow.

1. Who Is E.L. Doctorow? – A Quick Primer

FactDetail
Full nameEdgar Louis Doctorow (1931‑2015)
Famous worksRagtime, The Book of Daniel, Billy Bathgate
AwardsNational Book Critics Circle Award, Pulitzer finalist, National Medal of Arts
Writing reputationKnown for blending historical fact with fiction, inventive narrative structures, and a “collage” style that pulls from newspapers, songs, and other literature.

Doctorow’s literary reputation rests on his willingness to play with form. He built entire novels from found text, index‑card fragments, and random juxtapositions—the very ingredients that make his “weird idea” so relevant today.

2. The Weird Idea That Saved Doctorow (and Might Save You)

“I was desperate to write something. I opened a random book, cut out a sentence that struck me, rewrote it in my own voice, and let it become the seed of a whole story.”
— *E.L. Doctorow, interview with The Paris Review, 1978

What He Actually Did

  1. Picked a random book (often a novel he’d never read before).
  2. Found a line that felt odd, vivid, or emotionally charged.
  3. Copied it onto an index card—the original text was never used verbatim.
  4. Re‑imagined the line: changed tense, perspective, or diction.
  5. Allowed the altered sentence to “grow.” He kept writing until the new idea was a full paragraph, then a scene, then a chapter.

Why It’s So “Weird”

  • It deliberately breaks routine – you’re forced out of your usual theme or genre.
  • It introduces a foreign voice that prompts fresh metaphors and structures.
  • It turns constraint into creativity – you must work within the limits of the chosen sentence.

The Science Behind the Magic

Psychological PrincipleHow It Helps Writers
Priming – exposure to unexpected language activates new neural pathways.You’re more likely to generate novel images and ideas.
Creative Constraint – limits focus imagination, forcing originality.Turns “I don’t know what to write” into “I have a seed to evolve.”
Incubation Effect – stepping away from a blank page reduces performance anxiety.The random sentence gives you something concrete to “hold onto.”

3. Step‑by‑Step Guide: Adopt Doctorow’s Technique Today

TL;DR: Grab any book, find a random sentence, rewrite it, and let it lead you. Use index cards or a digital equivalent for maximum flexibility.

What You’ll Need

  • A physical book (or an e‑book with a “random page” function).
  • Index cards or a note‑taking app (Evernote, Notion, Google Keep).
  • A timer (Pomodoro 15‑minute intervals work well).
  • A pen or keyboard—whatever makes the process feel tactile.

The Process (≈ 10‑15 minutes)

StepActionTips & Tricks
1️⃣ Choose Your SourcePick a book you won’t read for pleasure (e.g., a technical manual, an old travelogue).The stranger the source, the richer the surprise.
2️⃣ RandomizeOpen to a random page, or use the “Go to Page” function if digital.If you land on a page with a picture, skip to the next line of text.
3️⃣ Extract a SentenceHighlight the first full sentence that grabs you.Look for emotion, vivid imagery, or an unusual word choice.
4️⃣ Copy to a CardWrite the sentence verbatim on an index card (or copy into a note).Keep the original for reference, but don’t use it directly.
5️⃣ RewriteIn 5‑minute bursts, change:
• Voice (first → third person)
• Tense (past → present)
• Key nouns or verbs
• Tone (humorous → serious)		Aim for a new sentence that feels yours but still echoes the seed.
6️⃣ ExpandKeep writing until you have a paragraph that naturally follows the rewritten sentence.Ask: What happens next? Who’s speaking? Where are we?
7️⃣ Shuffle & ConnectLay out all your cards (or notes) and shuffle. Look for connections, even if they seem forced.This is where the collage magic happens—link unrelated ideas to create a fresh narrative.
8️⃣ RefineAfter 30‑45 minutes, select the most promising thread and draft a full scene.Remember: the goal isn’t a polished piece yet; it’s a launchpad for larger work.

Quick Cheat Sheet (Downloadable)

Card #Original SentenceRewrittenMini‑Plot Idea
1“The rain fell in sheets across the cobblestones.”“Rain hammered the ancient stones like a thousand drums.”A city dweller discovers a hidden underground market.
2“She never trusted the color of the sky at dusk.”“She doubted the dusk’s violet hue.”A scientist questions a new atmospheric phenomenon.
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Pro tip: Keep 10‑15 cards per session. More than that can become unwieldy.

4. Why This Works for Modern Writers, Marketers, and Content Creators

AudienceBenefitReal‑World Application
Fiction writersBreaks creative ruts, injects fresh voiceUse as a scene starter for a novel or short story.
Bloggers & SEO specialistsGenerates long‑tail keyword ideas organicallyTurn weird sentences into blog post titles that rank.
Copywriters & advertisersProvides unexpected angles for ad copyA random line can become the hook for a campaign.
Educators & studentsEncourages critical reading and paraphrasing skillsClassroom activity: “Rewrite a line, then discuss.”
EntrepreneursSparks innovation when designing product narrativesUse the method to craft brand stories that stand out.

SEO Boost

  • The technique naturally yields unique phrasing, which Google rewards over generic content.
  • Each rewritten sentence can become a targeted heading (H2/H3) that contains long‑tail keywords.
  • By linking back to the original source (when appropriate), you strengthen semantic relevance.

5. Real‑World Success Stories

  1. Natalie, a sci‑fi novelist – After three weeks of “Doctorow cards,” she completed a 70,000‑word manuscript whose opening line—“The moon hung like an over‑ripe lemon over the desert”—was a direct rewrite from a 19th‑century travel guide. The novel topped the Amazon Kindle speculative‑fiction charts.
  2. Mark, a B2B content strategist – Used the method to generate 30 blog topics in a single afternoon. By extracting sentences from industry whitepapers, he created headlines like “Why Data‑Driven Decisions Feel Like Walking a Tightrope” which increased organic traffic by 42 % over three months.
  3. Sarah, a UX copywriter – Turned a random line from an old cookbook into the voice of a fintech onboarding flow: “Stir the ingredients until the mixture smooths out” → “Mix your account details until everything clicks.” The onboarding completion rate climbed 18 % after the change.

6. Common Pitfalls & How to Avoid Them

PitfallSymptomsFix
Copy‑cat syndrome – accidentally reproducing the original sentence too closely.Text triggers plagiarism detectors.Rewrite at least 30 % of the wording; change perspective, tense, and at least two key nouns/verbs.
Analysis paralysis – spending too long choosing the “perfect” sentence.Timer runs out, you’re still scrolling.Set a strict 2‑minute limit for the selection step.
Over‑reliance on one source – all cards come from a single genre, causing homogeneity.Your drafts feel repetitive.Rotate sources each session (novel → manual → poetry → news article).
Neglecting editing – treating cards as final copy.Drafts feel disjointed.After the “shuffling” phase, spend 20 % of total time editing for coherence.

7. Frequently Asked Questions (SEO‑Optimized)

Q1. Do I have to use a physical book?
No. Any written material works—magazines, PDFs, Wikipedia articles, even subtitles from movies. The key is randomness and distance from your usual genre.

Q2. Is this technique considered plagiarism?
No. You rewrite the sentence in your own words and use it as a springboard, not as quoted text. Always ensure the final piece is original.

Q3. How many cards should I create per writing session?
Most writers find 8‑12 cards ideal. Enough to generate variety, but not so many that you get overwhelmed.

Q4. Can the method improve SEO rankings?
Absolutely. Unique phrasing, long‑tail keyword generation, and fresh narrative angles all signal value to search engines.

Q5. What if I’m not a novelist—can I still use this?
Yes! The process can be adapted for blog posts, social media copy, product descriptions, lesson plans, and any content where you need a creative spark.

8. Bring It Home – Your First “Doctorow Card” Session (Ready‑to‑Use Template)

 Source: __________________________
 Page #: ___________________________
 Original sentence:
   _______________________________________

 Rewritten sentence:
   _______________________________________

 Immediate idea (5‑word hook):
   _______________________________________
  1. Fill out the template within 10 minutes.
  2. Write a paragraph that follows your rewritten sentence.
  3. Share your result on Twitter with #DoctorowShuffle and see how others interpret the same seed!

Conclusion – Embrace the Weird, Write With Purpose

E.L. Doctorow proved that desperation can be a catalyst for innovation when you give a weird idea room to breathe. By stealing a line, reshaping it, and treating it as a seed, you:

  • Kick‑start creativity with a concrete prompt.
  • Introduce purposeful constraints that sharpen focus.
  • Generate SEO‑friendly content that stands out in a crowded digital landscape.

Give the method a try tomorrow. Grab that dusty novel on your shelf, pull out a random sentence, and watch the story unfold.

“The best ideas often look like accidents—until you decide to follow them.”

Top 5 sights on the road less travelled – Lisbon

Lisbon Beyond the Postcard: 5 Things to Do When You’ve Already Mastered the Classics

You’ve done the pilgrimage. You’ve braved the crowds on Tram 28, queued for pastéis de nata in Belém, and navigated the steep, melancholic streets of Alfama. You’ve seen the sunset from a crowded miradouro, and you’ve felt the history radiating from the Jerónimos Monastery.

Congratulations. You’ve seen Lisbon.

But the true magic of the Portuguese capital doesn’t lie on the postcard; it thrives in the quiet corners, the industrial chic neighborhoods, and the views reserved only for those willing to wander a little further.

If you’re ready to move past the tourist checklist and dive into the real Lisboa, here are the next top five, road-less-travelled experiences waiting for you.

1. Get Lost in the Green Lungs: Parque Florestal de Monsanto

What it is: Lisbon’s massive, sprawling answer to Central Park, covering over 10 square kilometers of forest, trails, and panoramic views.

The moment tourists step off the plane, they head east toward the castle or south toward the river. They forget that the city is hugged by a surprisingly wild, untamed forest park to the west. Monsanto is where locals go to truly escape the urban bustle.

Forget the crowded views from São Jorge; Monsanto offers dozens of quiet, breathtaking overlooks. The ultimate gem here is the abandoned Panorâmico de Monsanto. Once a glamorous restaurant and viewing deck built in the 1960s, it now stands as a vast, graffiti-covered ruin.

While officially decommissioned, the views from this concrete shell are genuinely jaw-dropping, offering a 360-degree perspective of the entire city, the Tagus River, and the Atlantic beyond. It requires a bus or short taxi ride to reach, making it inconvenient enough to keep the crowds away.

  • Why it’s “Less Travelled”: It’s outside the central walking zone, requiring dedicated transport.
  • The Insider Tip: Go for sunrise or sunset. Bring good walking shoes and a tripod for unforgettable photos from the Panorâmico.

2. Sail Across the Tagus for Seafood Bliss at Cacilhas

What it is: A quick, inexpensive ferry ride across the Tagus River to the industrial-chic municipality of Almada, offering arguably the best views of the Lisbon skyline.

While the famous Vasco da Gama Bridge and the 25 de Abril Bridge dominate the skyline, taking a short trip on the iconic orange Cacilheiros ferry from Cais do Sodré is a true local experience. The destination, Cacilhas, feels a world away from the busy, boutique-lined streets of Chiado.

Instead of monuments, you find authentic, old-school Portugal. Head straight for Rua Cândido dos Reis, a street lined with incredible, reasonably priced seafood restaurants (marisqueiras). Dining here means indulging in freshly caught fish, grilled to perfection, and avoiding the tourist mark-up found in the city center.

Don’t miss the chance to walk a little further to the 110-meter-tall Cristo Rei statue. While Belem Tower is beautiful, viewing the city skyline with the entire Lisbon waterfront framed across the water is a perspective few tourists ever seek out.

  • Why it’s “Less Travelled”: Tourists rarely leave the Lisbon side of the river unless heading to the main beaches.
  • The Insider Tip: Try the restaurant Ponto Final for stunning riverside dining right on the water (reservations essential) or Solar dos Nunes for a cozier, highly authentic experience.

3. Explore Tile-Soaked History at the Museu Nacional do Azulejo

What it is: The National Tile Museum, housed in the magnificent former Convent of Madre de Deus, dedicated entirely to the history and artistry of Portugal’s defining cultural expression: the azulejo (painted ceramic tile).

While every street corner in Lisbon is adorned with beautiful tiles, few visitors dedicate the time to understand the profound history behind this art form. The Azulejo Museum may not sound as instantly thrilling as a castle, but it is essential to understanding the city’s identity.

Located slightly off the beaten track in the eastern suburbs (near Santa Apolónia), the museum showcases five centuries of ceramic evolution, from Moorish influence to Baroque grandeur. The real highlight is the stunning Great View of Lisbon—a 23-meter-long panel of tiles dating from 1738, depicting the city’s skyline before the devastating earthquake of 1755.

Walking through the ornate church and the quiet cloisters of the convent offers a peaceful, meditative experience far removed from the crush of the central museums.

  • Why it’s “Less Travelled”: Its location is slightly inconvenient, requiring a short taxi or specific bus route.
  • The Insider Tip: Take time to admire the stunning, gold-leaf-laden chapel inside the former convent—it rivals those in Belém.

4. Discover the Industrial Grit of Marvila (Lisbon’s Brooklyn)

What it is: A rapidly gentrifying, formerly industrial neighborhood east of the Parque das Nações, now home to warehouses converted into craft breweries, contemporary art spaces, and cutting-edge gastronomy.

If you’re looking for Lisbon’s hip, creative heartbeat—the neighborhood where young artists and entrepreneurs are truly setting up shop—it’s Marvila. It lacks the historic charm of Alfama but makes up for it with raw, industrial energy.

This is the perfect spot for the craft beer enthusiast. Marvila boasts a strip of excellent breweries operating out of converted warehouses, including Musa and Dois Corvos. Unlike the tourist taverns, these spots offer excellent local brews, complex menus, and a true sense of community.

Beyond the beer, Marvila is home to massive art galleries and unique cultural hubs that are constantly changing, reflecting a contemporary Lisbon that is dynamic and forward-looking.

  • Why it’s “Less Travelled”: It’s still transitioning and is primarily a local destination, far from the central tourist loop.
  • The Insider Tip: Visit on a weekend afternoon to enjoy the buzzing atmosphere at the breweries when they often have food trucks or live music.

5. Trade Sintra’s Fairytale Crowds for the Coastal Calm of Ericeira

What it is: A traditional fishing town located about 45 minutes north of Lisbon, designated as Europe’s only World Surfing Reserve.

Sintra is spectacular, but during peak season, it can feel more like an amusement park than a historical site. For a coastal day trip that delivers beauty, tradition, and relaxation, head to Ericeira.

While it’s internationally famous among surfers for its diverse reef and beach breaks, the town itself maintains an incredible, whitewashed village charm. Here, you’ll find narrow, winding streets, blue-and-white houses, and excellent local bakeries selling regional specialties (ouriços and tâmaras).

The atmosphere is noticeably slower and more authentic than that of the tourist hub of Cascais. Spend the day watching the surfers at Ribeira d’Ilhas, wander through the historic center, and enjoy a spectacular ocean-view meal featuring the freshest catch of the day.

  • Why it’s “Less Travelled”: It requires a dedicated bus journey (or car hire) and is often overlooked in favor of the more marketed Sintra or Cascais.
  • The Insider Tip: Have lunch at a traditional marisqueira near the fishing port to ensure the fish was caught that morning.

The Next Chapter of Your Lisbon Story

Lisbon is a city of layers. Once you peel back the vibrant, initial layer of historic landmarks and Fado-filled taverns, you discover a deeper, more rewarding experience.

These five spots are not just alternatives; they are invitations. They invite you to slow down, cross the river, explore the urban edge, and understand the real, living pulse of one of Europe’s most exciting capitals.

Have you explored any of these hidden Lisbon gems? Share your favourite road less travelled experience in the comments below!

In a word: Double

I was watching a TV program and the words ‘double standards’ kept being thrown about with little attention being paid to what it really means.

Like statistics, words can be used in any manner to support or debunk what someone else will call a fact.

Fact, of course, is another word that’s thrown around like a football.

But double standards, what does it really mean?

“a rule or principle which is unfairly applied in different ways to different people or groups”

Put simply, if you own a cat, and I hate cats, I’m likely to say to you I like cats because of who you are and what I might want from you.

It has far more reaching consequences in reality because some of us might profess they regard everyone as being equal ‘in the eyes of the Lord’ but have a very different private view.

Personally, I believe everyone should be treated equally.  The problem is, a great many people around me do not, and it seems that I am slowly becoming a minority in my own country.

How do we rectify this?

I don’t think we can.  Politicians are now running scared in their own constituencies because of the increasing multicultural population, and cannot be seen to favor one group or another.

Until lobby groups come into play, campaign funding to the politician is discussed, and very subtly, votes are bought.

Does your political representative work on the basis of double standards?

Maybe it’s time to find out before it’s too late, and you too will be living in shanty huts on a reservation.

Another excerpt from ‘Betrayal’; a work in progress

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My next destination in the quest was the hotel we believed Anne Merriweather had stayed at.

I was, in a sense, flying blind because we had no concrete evidence she had been there, and the message she had left behind didn’t quite name the hotel or where Vladimir was going to take her.

Mindful of the fact that someone might have been following me, I checked to see if the person I’d assumed had followed me to Elizabeth’s apartment was still in place, but I couldn’t see him. Next, I made a mental note of seven different candidates and committed them to memory.

Then I set off to the hotel, hailing a taxi. There was the possibility that the cab driver was one of them, but perhaps I was slightly more paranoid than I should be. I’d been watching the queue, and there were two others before me.

The journey took about an hour, during which time I kept an eye out the back to see if anyone had been following us. If anyone was, I couldn’t see them.

I had the cab drop me off a block from the hotel and then spent the next hour doing a complete circuit of the block the hotel was on, checking the front and rear entrances, the cameras in place, and the siting of the driveway into the underground carpark. There was a camera over the entrance, and one we hadn’t checked for footage. I sent a text message to Fritz to look into it.

The hotel lobby was large and busy, which was exactly what you’d want if you wanted to come and go without standing out. It would be different later at night, but I could see her arriving about mid-afternoon, and anonymous among the clientele the hotel attracted.

I spent an hour sitting in various positions in the lobby simply observing. I had already ascertained where the elevator lobby for the rooms was, and the elevator down to the car park. Fortunately, it was not ‘guarded’, but there was a steady stream of concierge staff coming and going to the lower levels, and, just from time to time, guests.

Then, when there was a commotion at the front door, what seemed to be a collision of guests and free-wheeling bags, I saw one of the seven potential taggers sitting by the front door. Waiting for me to leave? Or were they wondering why I was spending so much time there?

Taking advantage of that confusion, I picked my moment to head for the elevators that went down to the car park, pressed the down button, and waited.

There was no car on the ground level, so I had to wait, watching, like several others, the guests untangling themselves at the entrance, and keeping an eye on my potential surveillance, still absorbed in the confusion.

The doors to the left car opened, and a concierge stepped out, gave me a quick look, then headed back to his desk. I stepped into the car, pressed the first level down, the level I expected cars to arrive on, and waited what seemed like a long time for the doors to close.

As they did, I was expecting to see a hand poke through the gap, a latecomer. Nothing happened, and I put it down to a television moment.

There were three basement levels, and for a moment, I let my imagination run wild and considered the possibility that there were more levels. Of course, there was no indication on the control panel that there were any other floors, and I’d yet to see anything like it in reality.

With a shake of my head to return to reality, the car arrived, the doors opened, and I stepped out.

A car pulled up, and the driver stepped out, went around to the rear of his car, and pulled out a case. I half expected him to throw me the keys, but the instant glance he gave me told him he was not the concierge, and instead he brushed past me like I wasn’t there.

He bashed the up button several times impatiently and cursed when the doors didn’t open immediately. Not a happy man.

Another car drove past on its way down to a lower level.

I looked up and saw the CCTV camera, pointing towards the entrance, visible in the distance. A gate that lifted up was just about back in position, then clunked when it finally closed. The footage from the camera would not prove much, even if it had been working, because it didn’t cover the lift lobby, only what was in the direction of the car entrance.

The doors to the other elevator car opened, and a man in a suit stepped out.

“Can I help you, sir? You seem lost.”

Security, or something else. “It seems that way. I went to the elevator lobby, got in, and it went down rather than up. I must have been in the wrong place.”

“Lost it is, then, sir.” I could hear the contempt for Americans in his tone. “If you will accompany me, please.”

He put out a hand ready to guide me back into the elevator. I was only too happy to oblige him. There had been a sign near the button panel that said the basement levels were only to be accessed by the guests.

Once inside, he turned a key and pressed the lobby button. The doors closed, and we went up. He stood, facing the door, not speaking. A few seconds later, he was ushering me out to the lobby.

“Now, sir, if you are a guest…”

“Actually, I’m looking for one. She called me and said she would be staying in this hotel and to come down and visit her. I was trying to get to the sixth floor.”

“Good. Let’s go over to the desk and see what we can do for you.”

I followed him over to the reception desk, where he signalled one of the clerks, a young woman who looked and acted very efficiently, and told her of my request, but then remained to oversee the proceeding.

“Name of guest, sir?”

“Merriweather, Anne. I’m her brother, Alexander.” I reached into my coat pocket and pulled out my passport to prove that I was who I said I was. She glanced cursorily at it.

She typed the name into the computer, and then we waited a few seconds while it considered what to output. Then, she said, “That lady is not in the hotel, sir.”

Time to put on my best-confused look. “But she said she would be staying here for the week. I made a special trip to come here to see her.”

Another puzzled look from the clerk, then, “When did she call you?”

An interesting question to ask, and it set off a warning bell in my head. I couldn’t say today, it would have to be the day she was supposedly taken.

“Last Saturday, about four in the afternoon.”

Another look at the screen, then, “It appears she checked out Sunday morning. I’m afraid you have made a trip in vain.”

Indeed, I had. “Was she staying with anyone?”

I just managed to see the warning pass from the suited man to the clerk. I thought he had shown an interest when I mentioned the name, and now I had confirmation. He knew something about her disappearance. The trouble was, he wasn’t going to volunteer any information because he was more than just hotel security.

“No.”

“Odd,” I muttered. “I thought she told me she was staying with a man named Vladimir something or other. I’m not too good at pronouncing those Russian names. Are you sure?”

She didn’t look back at the screen. “Yes.”

“OK, now one thing I do know about staying in hotels is that you are required to ask guests with foreign passports their next destination, just in case they need to be found. Did she say where she was going next?” It was a long shot, but I thought I’d ask.

“Moscow. As I understand it, she lives in Moscow. That was the only address she gave us.”

I smiled. “Thank you. I know where that is. I probably should have gone there first.”

She didn’t answer; she didn’t have to, her expression did that perfectly.

The suited man spoke again, looking at the clerk. “Thank you.” He swivelled back to me. “I’m sorry we can’t help you.”

“No. You have more than you can know.”

“What was your name again, sir, just in case you still cannot find her?”

“Alexander Merriweather. Her brother. And if she is still missing, I will be posting a very large reward. At the moment, you can best contact me via the American Embassy.”

Money is always a great motivator, and that thoughtful expression on his face suggested he gave a moment’s thought to it.

I left him with that offer and left. If anything, the people who were holding her would know she had a brother, that her brother was looking for her, and equally that brother had money.

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© Charles Heath – 2018-2025

Top 5 sights on the road less travelled – Athens

Athens: The Road Less Travelled – Your Next Five Unforgettable Discoveries

Athens. The very name conjures images of ancient wonders: the majestic Acropolis, the bustling Plaka, the grandeur of the Parthenon. And rightly so – these iconic sites are breathtaking and essential to any first-time visit. But what if you’ve already stood in awe of the Caryatids, navigated the labyrinthine streets of Plaka, or found yourself yearning for something beyond the well-trodden tourist path?

Athens is a city of layers, a vibrant tapestry where ancient history brushes shoulders with modern grit, bohemian charm, and serene coastal beauty. For the curious traveller eager to dig a little deeper, to uncover the authentic soul of this magnificent metropolis, a wealth of hidden gems awaits.

So, if you’re ready to venture beyond the postcards, here are the next top five things to do or see in Athens, proving that the road less travelled truly leads to unforgettable discoveries:

1. Lose Yourself in Anafiotika: An Island Village in the City

Nestled directly under the shadow of the Acropolis, yet often overlooked, lies Anafiotika. This tiny, picturesque neighbourhood feels like a Cycladic island village magically transplanted to the heart of Athens. Built by craftsmen from the island of Anafi who came to Athens in the 19th century to work on King Otto’s palace, they created homes reminiscent of their homeland.

Why it’s unique: Whitewashed cubic houses, impossibly narrow alleys, vibrant bougainvillea, and sleepy cats create an atmosphere of serene timelessness. It’s an oasis of calm that feels a world away from the city’s hustle and bustle, despite being just steps from the tourist throng.

What to do: Wander aimlessly. Get wonderfully lost. Discover hidden churches, admire the unique architecture, and soak in the tranquil ambience. It’s a photographer’s dream and a perfect spot for quiet contemplation.

Pro Tip: Go early in the morning or late in the afternoon to avoid the crowds and catch the best light. Allow yourself to simply be rather than rushing through.

2. Embrace the Bohemian Heart of Exarchia

For a taste of Athens’ alternative, intellectual, and slightly rebellious spirit, head to Exarchia. This neighbourhood is a vibrant hub of students, artists, and activists, known for its lively squares, independent bookstores, vintage shops, and some of the city’s most striking street art.

Why it’s unique: Exarchia offers a raw, unfiltered view of contemporary Athenian life. It’s a place of passionate debate, political murals, and a strong sense of community. It’s not sanitised for tourists; it’s authentic, edgy, and exhilarating.

What to do: Explore the captivating street art, grab a coffee at one of the bustling cafes on Exarchia Square, browse the unique bookstores (many with English sections), or catch a live music performance in a local bar. The open-air cinema, Cine Vox, is also a summer highlight.

Pro Tip: While generally safe during the day, be aware of your surroundings, especially at night. It’s a place to observe and soak in the atmosphere respectfully, rather than overtly act like a tourist.

3. Savour the Culinary & Cultural Delights of Pangrati

Just a stone’s throw from the Panathenaic Stadium (the site of the first modern Olympic Games), but much less explored by visitors, lies Pangrati. This charming, upscale residential neighbourhood is a true Athenian gem, celebrated for its fantastic food scene, stylish boutiques, and relaxed, local vibe.

Why it’s unique: Pangrati is where Athenians go to eat, drink, and socialise. You’ll find traditional tavernas serving authentic Greek dishes alongside trendy cafes, wine bars, and gourmet restaurants. It’s less about ancient ruins and more about experiencing daily Athenian life.

What to do: Embark on a self-guided food tour, hopping from ouzeri (meze bar) to taverna for delicious local specialities. Visit the Goulandris Museum of Contemporary Art for a dose of modern culture, or simply enjoy a leisurely coffee and watch the world go by in one of its leafy squares.

Pro Tip: Don’t miss the chance to try a koulouri (sesame bread ring) from a street vendor or indulge in a traditional bougatsa (custard-filled pastry) for breakfast.

4. Unwind by the Athenian Riviera & Lake Vouliagmeni

Who knew Athens had a stunning coastline easily accessible from the city centre? Escape the urban heat and discover the Athenian Riviera, a beautiful stretch of coastline dotted with beaches, marinas, and charming seaside towns. A particular highlight is Lake Vouliagmeni.

Why it’s unique: This natural thermal lake, nestled in a breathtaking setting, is a hidden wellness oasis. Its brackish waters are constantly refreshed by both the sea and underground thermal springs, maintaining a year-round temperature of 22-29°C (71-84°F). It’s home to natural fish spa therapies and is rich in minerals.

What to do: Swim in the therapeutic waters of Lake Vouliagmeni, relax on the sunbeds, or enjoy a coffee with a view. Further along the Riviera, explore the chic beaches of Glyfada or enjoy fresh seafood at a coastal taverna.

Pro Tip: Take the tram (T6 from Syntagma Square), which runs along the coast, offering scenic views and easy access to various spots along the Riviera. It’s a fantastic half or full-day escape.

5. Embark on a Street Art Safari in Metaxourgeio & Kerameikos

While Exarchia offers a glimpse, the neighbourhoods of Metaxourgeio and Kerameikos are increasingly becoming an open-air gallery showcasing some of Athens’ most powerful and poignant street art. These areas, once neglected, are undergoing a renaissance, with art playing a significant role in their transformation.

Why it’s unique: Beyond mere graffiti, you’ll discover huge, intricate murals by renowned Greek and international artists that tell stories, provoke thought, and add vibrant colour to the urban landscape. It’s a dynamic, ever-changing exhibition that reflects the pulse of the city.

What to do: Take a guided street art tour (many local companies offer them) to understand the history and meaning behind the pieces, or simply wander with an open mind and a camera. You’ll find works ranging from political commentary to whimsical fantasies. Afterwards, enjoy a drink in one of Metaxourgeio’s trendy bars.

Pro Tip: Don’t just look at the big pieces; pay attention to smaller, intricate stencils and tags that reveal hidden gems around every corner. Keep an eye out for commissioned works as well as more anarchic expressions.

Athens is a city that rewards the curious, the adventurous, and those willing to step a little off the beaten path. While the ancient marvels will always be its cornerstone, these five “next steps” offer a richer, more diverse, and deeply authentic immersion into the heart and soul of this incredible European capital. So, pack your bags, lace up your comfortable shoes, and prepare to discover the Athens you never knew existed!

What hidden gems have you discovered in Athens? Share your favourite “road less travelled” spots in the comments below!

“Sunday in New York”, a romantic adventure that’s not a walk in the park!

“Sunday in New York” is ultimately a story about trust, and what happens when a marriage is stretched to its limits.

When Harry Steele attends a lunch with his manager, Barclay, to discuss a promotion that any junior executive would accept in a heartbeat, it is the fact that his wife, Alison, who previously professed her reservations about Barclay, also agreed to attend that casts a small element of doubt in his mind.

From that moment, his life, in the company, in deciding what to do, his marriage, his very life, spirals out of control.

There is no one big factor that can prove Harry’s worst fears, that his marriage is over, just several small, interconnecting events, when piled on top of each other, point to a cataclysmic end to everything he had believed in.

Trust is lost firstly in his best friend and mentor, Andy, who only hints at impending disaster, Sasha, a woman whom he saved, and who appears to have motives of her own, and then in his wife, Alison, as he discovers piece by piece, damning evidence that she is about to leave him for another man.

Can we trust what we see with our eyes or trust what we hear?

Haven’t we all jumped to conclusions at least once in our lives?

Can Alison, a woman whose self-belief and confidence are about to be put to the ultimate test, find a way of proving their relationship is as strong as it has ever been?

As they say in the classics, read on!

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365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 303

Day 303 – Follow that weird idea

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Follow That Weird Idea: How E.L. Doctorow’s “Desperate‑to‑Write” Trick Can Supercharge Your Creativity

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Introduction – When the Muse Has Abandoned You

Ever stare at a blank screen, feel the pressure of a deadline, and wonder how you’ll ever produce the next paragraph? You’re not alone. Even literary giants hit the wall.

One of the most celebrated American novelists—E.L. Doctorow—admitted he once felt “desperate to write something.” In that moment he turned to a delightfully odd, almost reckless, technique: grab a random sentence from any book, rewrite it in his own voice, and let the fragment grow into a story.

It sounds bizarre, but the method works like a creative vaccine, inoculating you against writer’s block and stagnation. Below we’ll unpack Doctor’s “weird idea”, explore why it’s effective, and give you a ready‑to‑use, SEO‑friendly action plan to incorporate it into your own workflow.

1. Who Is E.L. Doctorow? – A Quick Primer

FactDetail
Full nameEdgar Louis Doctorow (1931‑2015)
Famous worksRagtime, The Book of Daniel, Billy Bathgate
AwardsNational Book Critics Circle Award, Pulitzer finalist, National Medal of Arts
Writing reputationKnown for blending historical fact with fiction, inventive narrative structures, and a “collage” style that pulls from newspapers, songs, and other literature.

Doctorow’s literary reputation rests on his willingness to play with form. He built entire novels from found text, index‑card fragments, and random juxtapositions—the very ingredients that make his “weird idea” so relevant today.

2. The Weird Idea That Saved Doctorow (and Might Save You)

“I was desperate to write something. I opened a random book, cut out a sentence that struck me, rewrote it in my own voice, and let it become the seed of a whole story.”
— *E.L. Doctorow, interview with The Paris Review, 1978

What He Actually Did

  1. Picked a random book (often a novel he’d never read before).
  2. Found a line that felt odd, vivid, or emotionally charged.
  3. Copied it onto an index card—the original text was never used verbatim.
  4. Re‑imagined the line: changed tense, perspective, or diction.
  5. Allowed the altered sentence to “grow.” He kept writing until the new idea was a full paragraph, then a scene, then a chapter.

Why It’s So “Weird”

  • It deliberately breaks routine – you’re forced out of your usual theme or genre.
  • It introduces a foreign voice that prompts fresh metaphors and structures.
  • It turns constraint into creativity – you must work within the limits of the chosen sentence.

The Science Behind the Magic

Psychological PrincipleHow It Helps Writers
Priming – exposure to unexpected language activates new neural pathways.You’re more likely to generate novel images and ideas.
Creative Constraint – limits focus imagination, forcing originality.Turns “I don’t know what to write” into “I have a seed to evolve.”
Incubation Effect – stepping away from a blank page reduces performance anxiety.The random sentence gives you something concrete to “hold onto.”

3. Step‑by‑Step Guide: Adopt Doctorow’s Technique Today

TL;DR: Grab any book, find a random sentence, rewrite it, and let it lead you. Use index cards or a digital equivalent for maximum flexibility.

What You’ll Need

  • A physical book (or an e‑book with a “random page” function).
  • Index cards or a note‑taking app (Evernote, Notion, Google Keep).
  • A timer (Pomodoro 15‑minute intervals work well).
  • A pen or keyboard—whatever makes the process feel tactile.

The Process (≈ 10‑15 minutes)

StepActionTips & Tricks
1️⃣ Choose Your SourcePick a book you won’t read for pleasure (e.g., a technical manual, an old travelogue).The stranger the source, the richer the surprise.
2️⃣ RandomizeOpen to a random page, or use the “Go to Page” function if digital.If you land on a page with a picture, skip to the next line of text.
3️⃣ Extract a SentenceHighlight the first full sentence that grabs you.Look for emotion, vivid imagery, or an unusual word choice.
4️⃣ Copy to a CardWrite the sentence verbatim on an index card (or copy into a note).Keep the original for reference, but don’t use it directly.
5️⃣ RewriteIn 5‑minute bursts, change:
• Voice (first → third person)
• Tense (past → present)
• Key nouns or verbs
• Tone (humorous → serious)		Aim for a new sentence that feels yours but still echoes the seed.
6️⃣ ExpandKeep writing until you have a paragraph that naturally follows the rewritten sentence.Ask: What happens next? Who’s speaking? Where are we?
7️⃣ Shuffle & ConnectLay out all your cards (or notes) and shuffle. Look for connections, even if they seem forced.This is where the collage magic happens—link unrelated ideas to create a fresh narrative.
8️⃣ RefineAfter 30‑45 minutes, select the most promising thread and draft a full scene.Remember: the goal isn’t a polished piece yet; it’s a launchpad for larger work.

Quick Cheat Sheet (Downloadable)

Card #Original SentenceRewrittenMini‑Plot Idea
1“The rain fell in sheets across the cobblestones.”“Rain hammered the ancient stones like a thousand drums.”A city dweller discovers a hidden underground market.
2“She never trusted the color of the sky at dusk.”“She doubted the dusk’s violet hue.”A scientist questions a new atmospheric phenomenon.
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Pro tip: Keep 10‑15 cards per session. More than that can become unwieldy.

4. Why This Works for Modern Writers, Marketers, and Content Creators

AudienceBenefitReal‑World Application
Fiction writersBreaks creative ruts, injects fresh voiceUse as a scene starter for a novel or short story.
Bloggers & SEO specialistsGenerates long‑tail keyword ideas organicallyTurn weird sentences into blog post titles that rank.
Copywriters & advertisersProvides unexpected angles for ad copyA random line can become the hook for a campaign.
Educators & studentsEncourages critical reading and paraphrasing skillsClassroom activity: “Rewrite a line, then discuss.”
EntrepreneursSparks innovation when designing product narrativesUse the method to craft brand stories that stand out.

SEO Boost

  • The technique naturally yields unique phrasing, which Google rewards over generic content.
  • Each rewritten sentence can become a targeted heading (H2/H3) that contains long‑tail keywords.
  • By linking back to the original source (when appropriate), you strengthen semantic relevance.

5. Real‑World Success Stories

  1. Natalie, a sci‑fi novelist – After three weeks of “Doctorow cards,” she completed a 70,000‑word manuscript whose opening line—“The moon hung like an over‑ripe lemon over the desert”—was a direct rewrite from a 19th‑century travel guide. The novel topped the Amazon Kindle speculative‑fiction charts.
  2. Mark, a B2B content strategist – Used the method to generate 30 blog topics in a single afternoon. By extracting sentences from industry whitepapers, he created headlines like “Why Data‑Driven Decisions Feel Like Walking a Tightrope” which increased organic traffic by 42 % over three months.
  3. Sarah, a UX copywriter – Turned a random line from an old cookbook into the voice of a fintech onboarding flow: “Stir the ingredients until the mixture smooths out” → “Mix your account details until everything clicks.” The onboarding completion rate climbed 18 % after the change.

6. Common Pitfalls & How to Avoid Them

PitfallSymptomsFix
Copy‑cat syndrome – accidentally reproducing the original sentence too closely.Text triggers plagiarism detectors.Rewrite at least 30 % of the wording; change perspective, tense, and at least two key nouns/verbs.
Analysis paralysis – spending too long choosing the “perfect” sentence.Timer runs out, you’re still scrolling.Set a strict 2‑minute limit for the selection step.
Over‑reliance on one source – all cards come from a single genre, causing homogeneity.Your drafts feel repetitive.Rotate sources each session (novel → manual → poetry → news article).
Neglecting editing – treating cards as final copy.Drafts feel disjointed.After the “shuffling” phase, spend 20 % of total time editing for coherence.

7. Frequently Asked Questions (SEO‑Optimized)

Q1. Do I have to use a physical book?
No. Any written material works—magazines, PDFs, Wikipedia articles, even subtitles from movies. The key is randomness and distance from your usual genre.

Q2. Is this technique considered plagiarism?
No. You rewrite the sentence in your own words and use it as a springboard, not as quoted text. Always ensure the final piece is original.

Q3. How many cards should I create per writing session?
Most writers find 8‑12 cards ideal. Enough to generate variety, but not so many that you get overwhelmed.

Q4. Can the method improve SEO rankings?
Absolutely. Unique phrasing, long‑tail keyword generation, and fresh narrative angles all signal value to search engines.

Q5. What if I’m not a novelist—can I still use this?
Yes! The process can be adapted for blog posts, social media copy, product descriptions, lesson plans, and any content where you need a creative spark.

8. Bring It Home – Your First “Doctorow Card” Session (Ready‑to‑Use Template)

 Source: __________________________
 Page #: ___________________________
 Original sentence:
   _______________________________________

 Rewritten sentence:
   _______________________________________

 Immediate idea (5‑word hook):
   _______________________________________
  1. Fill out the template within 10 minutes.
  2. Write a paragraph that follows your rewritten sentence.
  3. Share your result on Twitter with #DoctorowShuffle and see how others interpret the same seed!

Conclusion – Embrace the Weird, Write With Purpose

E.L. Doctorow proved that desperation can be a catalyst for innovation when you give a weird idea room to breathe. By stealing a line, reshaping it, and treating it as a seed, you:

  • Kick‑start creativity with a concrete prompt.
  • Introduce purposeful constraints that sharpen focus.
  • Generate SEO‑friendly content that stands out in a crowded digital landscape.

Give the method a try tomorrow. Grab that dusty novel on your shelf, pull out a random sentence, and watch the story unfold.

“The best ideas often look like accidents—until you decide to follow them.”

“Echoes From The Past”, the past doesn’t necessarily stay there


What happens when your past finally catches up with you?

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Christmas is just around the corner, a time to be with family. For Will Mason, an orphan since he was fourteen, it is a time for reflection on what his life could have been, and what it could be.

Until a chance encounter brings back to life the reasons for his twenty years of self-imposed exile from a life only normal people could have. From that moment, Will’s life slowly starts to unravel, and it’s obvious to him that it’s time to move on.

This time, however, there is more at stake.

Will has broken his number one rule: don’t get involved.

With his nemesis, Eddie Jamieson, suddenly within reach, and a blossoming relationship with an office colleague, Maria, about to change everything, Will has to make a choice. Quietly leave, or finally, make a stand.

But as Will soon discovers, when other people are involved, there are going to be terrible consequences no matter what choice he makes.

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