Jack finally gets to spend those moments with Rosalie that were so tantalisingly close before he left.
The question is, would he had got the courage to do so if it had not been for the events that had just occurred. There always seems to be an element of danger that spurs people on to do things they might not necessarily do if life had not taken a particular turn.
But, it was everything he expected, and more.
Of course, as advised yesterday, there are problems, not of their making but of the intrepid Maryanne, who reveals herself now as an agent working for an organisation that is equally after the package that Jack’s mother had left in Rosalie’s safe keeping.
And ironically it is Rosalie who captures Maryanne in the act of trying to steal it.
So, if an effort to keep it from everyone Rosalie agrees to leave with the package and tell no one where she is. Not until Jack decided what he’s going to do with it. One possibility is to use it to get his mother back, but like all ransom exchanges, it never turns out the way it’s supposed to.
So, Maryanne is going to have to come up with a convincing plan to get Jack onside, but the lies and deception are not a very good start in forming trust.
It’s an interesting premise, and beyond the raw writing, I fear it will need some more work to get it where I want it to be.
Today’s effort amounts to 3,111 words, for a total, so far, of 46,870.