Writing a book in 365 days – 221/222

Days 221 and 222

Starting the story,

At the foot of the mountain, she discovered…

It was never her intention to leave the cottage that morning, go for a walk, and suddenly discover that she didn’t know precisely where she was.

Her aunt had said the previous evening that it was time she stopped moping about the place and did something constructive, like go exploring. The lake was to the west, the mountains to the east, one village, Moreton, was north, and another village, Billson, was south.

Perhaps a walk to the start of the mountains in the east would provide the most interest, because there were ruins of a previous civilisation there, hidden behind the regrowth of the forest, and fossicking for artifacts might give her some purpose.

MaryAnne hadn’t chosen to come to her Aunt’s. She was sent under threat of a fate worse than death if she did, pr at least that was how she saw it in her mind. Her Aunt was ‘batty’, he father had said, having agreed that her mother’s punishment was a little severe, but he could only shrug.

He didn’t dare argue the merits of what was good or bad for their daughter because he had ceded control over her to her mother. Girls were not his bailiwick. Besides, he had three boys, and they were a handful enough.

So, fate decided, he took her to the overnight coach and put her aboard with the lament that it was only going to be three months.

To her, it was just so unfair.

But, that following morning, she got up, strangely feeling totally different, like during the night a fairy or elf had come and cast a magic spell on her, completely changing her attitude. She just didn’t feel like being the sad, sour, resentful granddaughter she had been for the first week.

After breakfast, her grandmother had given her a hand-drawn map with the four destinations drawn simplistically, with directions on how to get to each. Directions she had followed. But the hike had taken a toll, and when she reached the first of the ruins, she had some of the food her grandmother had packed for her, and then decided to rest before exploring.

Perhaps she should not have fallen asleep.

When she woke, it was as if she were in a different place, except that couldn’t be right because she remembered the ruins nearby. It was only when she looked back on the way she thought she had come, it looked different.

There was still time for her to explore and then worry about getting back to the cottage. It couldn’t be that difficult; all she had to do was retrace her steps.

The thing was, at first sight, the ruins did not look much different to the basics of the structures in her grandmother’s village. It meant that this place was just an older version that had been abandoned for some reason, but the people who had moved on.

Resources, perhaps? Available water, land to grow crops and graze animals? Perhaps the seasons were unkind because of their proximity to the mountains, or was there something in the mountains that caused them to move on?

As she got closer to the foot of the hills, the ruins became more distinct, and there were streets, leading to a central point which, she could now see, was a fountain. Beyond that was a facade, perhaps once the entrance to a large building or temple, now hidden away.

The fountain, curiously, had water in it, and when she dipped her hand in it, the fountain came to life, a small jet of water spraying up, then out to fill the bowls beneath. As each filled from the top, the water cascaded into the lower bowls and then the pond at the bottom.

Did she just activate it?

“I see you have the curiosity of a cat.” The words were spoken by a woman, about the same age as her mother, dressed like one of the temple princesses, and who had simply appeared.

She looked real.

“Who are you?” she asked.

“The guardian of the sacred ruins. We ensure that visitors who come here do not come with evil intent. You do not look like you are evil.”

“I am not. What place is this?”

“Brookmeadow. It was once a thriving town, but the evil mountain people came. Back then, we were people who trusted everyone had good intentions, because we did not believe in evil ways. We lived in harmony with the other people, the flora and the fauna. We pleased the Gods with seasonal sacrifices, and life was peaceful, and food and water were bountiful. Then evil came, and this is what remains. It will thrive again, one day.”

“I’m sorry to hear that. Maybe one day I will return.”

“Perhaps you will. Perhaps you were sent here for a reason. May your paths be clear, and intentions honourable, young Eliza.”

Then, as mysteriously as she had appeared, the princess disappeared.

Eliza shrugged and decided it was time to go back home. The way back seemed familiar again, and she set out along the path.

The princess joined three others who had been hiding in the shadows of the old temple, watching the young girl retreat.

“Is it she?” One asked.

“I believe it is. The next time she returns, we will begin the preparations.”

©  Charles Heath  2025

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