“The Things we do for Love”, the story behind the story

This story has been ongoing since I was seventeen, and just to let you know, I’m 72 this year.

Yes, it’s taken a long time to get it done.

Why, you might ask.

Well, I never gave it much interest because I started writing it after a small incident when I was 17, and working as a book packer for a book distributor in Melbourne

At the end of my first year, at Christmas, the employer had a Christmas party, and that year, it was at a venue in St Kilda.

I wasn’t going to go because at that age, I was an ordinary boy who was very introverted and basically scared of his own shadow and terrified by girls.

Back then, I would cross the street to avoid them

Also, other members of the staff in the shipping department were rough and ready types who were not backwards in telling me what happened, and being naive, perhaps they knew I’d be either shocked or intrigued.

I was both adamant I wasn’t coming and then got roped in on a dare.

Damn!

So, back then, in the early 70s, people looked the other way when it came to drinking, and of course, Dutch courage always takes away the concerns, especially when normally you wouldn’t do half the stuff you wouldn’t in a million years

I made it to the end, not as drunk and stupid as I thought I might be, and St Kilda being a salacious place if you knew where to look, my new friends decided to give me a surprise.

It didn’t take long to realise these men were ‘men about town’ as they kept saying, and we went on an odyssey.  Yes, those backstreet brothels where one could, I was told, have anything they could imagine.

Let me tell you, large quantities of alcohol and imagination were a very bad mix.

So, the odyssey in ‘The things we do’ was based on that, and then the encounter with Diana. Well, let’s just say I learned a great deal about girls that night.

Firstly, not all girls are nasty and spiteful, which seemed to be the case whenever I met one. There was a way to approach, greet, talk to, and behave.

It was also true that I could have had anything I wanted, but I decided what was in my imagination could stay there.  She was amused that all I wanted was to talk, but it was my money, and I could spend it how I liked.

And like any 17-year-old naive fool, I fell in love with her and had all these foolish notions.  Months later, I went back, but she had moved on, to where no one was saying or knew.

Needless to say, I was heartbroken and had to get over that first loss, which, like any 17-year-old, was like the end of the world.

But it was the best hour I’d ever spent in my life and would remain so until I met the woman I have been married to for the last 48 years.

As Henry, he was in part based on a rebel, the son of rich parents who despised them and their wealth, and he used to regale anyone who would listen about how they had messed up his life

If only I’d come from such a background!

And yes, I was only a run away from climbing up the stairs to get on board a ship, acting as a purser.

I worked for a shipping company and they gave their junior staff members an opportunity to spend a year at sea working as a purser on a cargo ship that sailed between Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart in Australia.

One of the other junior staff members’ turn came, and I would visit him on board when he would tell me stories about life on board, the officers, the crew, and other events. These stories, which sounded incredible to someone so impressionable, were a delight to hear.

Alas, by that time, I had tired of office work and moved on to be a tradesman at the place where my father worked.

It proved to be the right move, as that is where I met my wife.  Diana had been right; love would find me when I least expected it.

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Writing a book in 365 days – 352

Day 352

Great Fiction Writers Don’t Just Tell Stories—They Leave You Changed

There’s a quiet magic in the best fiction—a kind that doesn’t announce itself with flashy prose or intricate plots, but lingers long after the last page is turned. You close the book, set it down, and somehow feel… heavier. Not weighed down, but fulfilled—as though you’ve absorbed something essential, something that wasn’t there when you began.

Great fiction writers don’t write for themselves. They write for you—the reader. And the greatest among them give you more than entertainment or escape. They give you something.

What Is That “Something”?

It’s not always easy to name. It might be a sudden clarity about human nature—why your father acted the way he did, or why forgiveness is harder than anger. It could be an aching empathy for someone unlike yourself, conjured through a character so vividly drawn that their pain feels like memory. It might be the unsettling truth that you’re not as alone in your fears or dreams as you thought.

That something is the residue of real art: emotional weight, intellectual insight, or a quiet shift in perspective. It’s the feeling you get after reading Toni Morrison’s Beloved, or finishing a Chekhov story, or stepping out of the world of George Eliot’s Middlemarch. You’re changed. You carry the story with you, not as memorised lines, but as lived experience.

And that’s the hallmark of a true artist: they offer their work not as a monument to their own genius, but as a gift to the reader’s soul.

The Writer’s True Purpose: Not Self-Expression, But Soul-Transmission

So many aspiring writers believe their job is to express themselves—to pour out their thoughts, traumas, or clever wordplay onto the page. And while honesty and authenticity matter, the goal cannot stop there. Great fiction isn’t exhibition; it’s invitation.

When you write to express yourself, the work orbits inward. But when you write for the reader, it expands outward—reaching, resonating, transforming. The best writers understand this intuitively. They labor not to impress, but to impact. They revise not for elegance alone, but for emotional precision—because they know a single well-placed sentence can alter someone’s understanding of love, loss, or what it means to be human.

Think of Harper Lee handing Scout Finch to the world—not as a self-indulgent character study, but as a lens through which generations would confront race, justice, and moral courage. Or consider Kazuo Ishiguro, whose restrained narratives coil around memory and dignity, leaving readers quietly devastated—and wiser.

These writers didn’t write to soothe their own egos. They wrote to give you something to carry.

Your Work Is Not About You—And That’s the Point

If you’re writing fiction to be seen, praised, or validated, you’re writing in the wrong direction. Real art doesn’t seek applause. It seeks resonance.

When you shift your focus from What do I want to say? to What does the reader need to feel, see, or understand?, your writing transforms. Your characters deepen. Your themes gain weight. You begin to sculpt stories that don’t just entertain, but endure.

Every choice—of voice, of silence, of detail—becomes an offering. The description of a worn kitchen table isn’t just set dressing; it’s a vessel for memory. A character’s hesitation isn’t just pacing—it’s a reflection of universal doubt.

This reorientation is humbling. It asks you to let go of the need to be clever, shocking, or profound on the surface. Instead, it calls you to serve the story—and, through it, the reader.

Walk Into the Light, Leave With Weight

The finest novels, the unforgettable stories, don’t leave you lighter. They leave you fuller. You walk into them seeking diversion, and you walk out carrying a new emotional memory, a truth you didn’t have before.

So if you’re serious about writing fiction that matters, remember this: your work is not yours. It never was. It belongs to the reader—the one who will read your words late at night, who will underline a passage, who will feel less alone because of something you wrote.

Let that be your compass. Write not for your name on a cover, but for the weight you leave in someone’s chest. Because great fiction doesn’t just live on the page. It lives in the reader—long after the book is closed.

And that’s how art becomes legacy.

Writing a book in 365 days – 352

Day 352

Great Fiction Writers Don’t Just Tell Stories—They Leave You Changed

There’s a quiet magic in the best fiction—a kind that doesn’t announce itself with flashy prose or intricate plots, but lingers long after the last page is turned. You close the book, set it down, and somehow feel… heavier. Not weighed down, but fulfilled—as though you’ve absorbed something essential, something that wasn’t there when you began.

Great fiction writers don’t write for themselves. They write for you—the reader. And the greatest among them give you more than entertainment or escape. They give you something.

What Is That “Something”?

It’s not always easy to name. It might be a sudden clarity about human nature—why your father acted the way he did, or why forgiveness is harder than anger. It could be an aching empathy for someone unlike yourself, conjured through a character so vividly drawn that their pain feels like memory. It might be the unsettling truth that you’re not as alone in your fears or dreams as you thought.

That something is the residue of real art: emotional weight, intellectual insight, or a quiet shift in perspective. It’s the feeling you get after reading Toni Morrison’s Beloved, or finishing a Chekhov story, or stepping out of the world of George Eliot’s Middlemarch. You’re changed. You carry the story with you, not as memorised lines, but as lived experience.

And that’s the hallmark of a true artist: they offer their work not as a monument to their own genius, but as a gift to the reader’s soul.

The Writer’s True Purpose: Not Self-Expression, But Soul-Transmission

So many aspiring writers believe their job is to express themselves—to pour out their thoughts, traumas, or clever wordplay onto the page. And while honesty and authenticity matter, the goal cannot stop there. Great fiction isn’t exhibition; it’s invitation.

When you write to express yourself, the work orbits inward. But when you write for the reader, it expands outward—reaching, resonating, transforming. The best writers understand this intuitively. They labor not to impress, but to impact. They revise not for elegance alone, but for emotional precision—because they know a single well-placed sentence can alter someone’s understanding of love, loss, or what it means to be human.

Think of Harper Lee handing Scout Finch to the world—not as a self-indulgent character study, but as a lens through which generations would confront race, justice, and moral courage. Or consider Kazuo Ishiguro, whose restrained narratives coil around memory and dignity, leaving readers quietly devastated—and wiser.

These writers didn’t write to soothe their own egos. They wrote to give you something to carry.

Your Work Is Not About You—And That’s the Point

If you’re writing fiction to be seen, praised, or validated, you’re writing in the wrong direction. Real art doesn’t seek applause. It seeks resonance.

When you shift your focus from What do I want to say? to What does the reader need to feel, see, or understand?, your writing transforms. Your characters deepen. Your themes gain weight. You begin to sculpt stories that don’t just entertain, but endure.

Every choice—of voice, of silence, of detail—becomes an offering. The description of a worn kitchen table isn’t just set dressing; it’s a vessel for memory. A character’s hesitation isn’t just pacing—it’s a reflection of universal doubt.

This reorientation is humbling. It asks you to let go of the need to be clever, shocking, or profound on the surface. Instead, it calls you to serve the story—and, through it, the reader.

Walk Into the Light, Leave With Weight

The finest novels, the unforgettable stories, don’t leave you lighter. They leave you fuller. You walk into them seeking diversion, and you walk out carrying a new emotional memory, a truth you didn’t have before.

So if you’re serious about writing fiction that matters, remember this: your work is not yours. It never was. It belongs to the reader—the one who will read your words late at night, who will underline a passage, who will feel less alone because of something you wrote.

Let that be your compass. Write not for your name on a cover, but for the weight you leave in someone’s chest. Because great fiction doesn’t just live on the page. It lives in the reader—long after the book is closed.

And that’s how art becomes legacy.

Writing a book in 365 days – 351

Day 351

“Why a Budding Author Should Dive into Joan Didion’s Masterful Body of Work”

For aspiring writers, the journey to finding one’s voice is as much about discovery as it is about study. Joan Didion, a literary icon whose career spans decades, offers a treasure trove of insights for those seeking to refine their craft. From her sharp-eyed novels to her incisive essays, Didion’s work is a masterclass in clarity, emotional resonance, and the art of observation. Let’s explore how delving into her oeuvre—comprising five seminal novels, screenplays, and countless articles and essays—can illuminate the path for emerging authors.


1. Novels: The Power of Precision and Dissecting the Human Condition

Didion’s novels—Run, RiverPlay It as It LaysA Book of Common PrayerThe Last Thing He Wanted, and Marry Me—are defined by their sparse, crystalline prose and unflinching exploration of identity, disillusionment, and collapse. For a budding author, studying her work reveals a critical lesson: less is not just more—it’s everything. Didion strips language of excess, using plain, punchy sentences to evoke profound unease or beauty. “We tell ourselves stories in order to live,” she famously writes in The White Album—a philosophy that permeates her fiction, where characters are often unravelling personal myths in a disintegrating world.
Aspiring writers can learn to mirror this by focusing on what isn’t said and how silence, space, and subtext amplify meaning. Her characters also serve as case studies in emotional complexity; they’re flawed, often detached, yet achingly human. How does Didion achieve this? By grounding them in precise details—a crumbling California landscape, a flicker of a smile—that anchor the surreal in the real.


2. Screenplays: Visual Storytelling and the Art of Compression

Didion’s screenplays (notably A Point of No Return and Up at the Villas) offer a different but equally valuable lesson. Adapting her own stories and others’, she demonstrates how to transform prose into visceral, visual narratives. Screenwriting demands concision; dialogue must carry weight, and scenes must be sculpted to evoke emotion without over-explaining. For an author interested in crossing genres, Didion’s screenplays are a masterclass in pacing and economy.
Take Up at the Villas, adapted from her 1982 novel of the same name. The screenplay retains the novel’s cold, observational tone but distils its themes into sharp, symbolic images—a storm, a locked door—to convey what words alone might not. For writers, this is a reminder that showing, not telling, is a skill honed through ruthless editing. Studying her scripts can teach how to craft tension through structure and dialogue, even in literary works.


3. Essays and Journalism: The Alchemy of Observation and Truth-Telling

Joan Didion’s nonfiction—collected in volumes like The White AlbumSlouching Toward Bethlehem, and Where I Was From—is where her genius as a writer truly shines. Her essays are micro-surgeries of culture, politics, and personal history, blending reportage with poetic reflection. How can a budding author benefit from this?

  • The art of the unsparingly honest narrative: Didion doesn’t flinch from ambiguity. She asks, What do we do when we can’t believe the story we’ve told ourselves? This intellectual honesty teaches writers to dig deeper, to question their own assumptions.
  • The marriage of personal and political: In pieces like “Los Angeles Notebook” or “On Self Respect”, Didion ties intimate self-doubt to societal decay. Aspiring authors can learn to weave the private and the public, creating work that resonates beyond the individual.
  • Research as storytelling: Her essays are meticulously researched yet read like lyrical journeys. Writers can study how she transforms facts into narrative threads without losing a reader’s interest.

4. Beyond Technique: Embracing Didion’s Curiosity and Courage

Perhaps the most profound lesson from Didion’s work is her relentless curiosity and willingness to confront the uncomfortable. Her writing force-feeds the idea that truth is not a destination but a process. For emerging authors, this mindset—questioning, observing, and daring to write what feels fragile or controversial—can be transformative. Didion’s essays on the Vietnam War, the Manson Family, or her own grief in The Year of Magical Thinking demand that we look at the world with both empathy and rigour.


Conclusion: Let the Questions Be the Point

Reading Joan Didion is not just about learning how to write—it’s about learning how to see. Her work challenges authors to strip away the superfluous, to wield language like a scalpel, and to embrace the messiness of human experience. For a budding writer, this is an unparalleled education. Start with her essays; they are accessible and brimming with insight. Then, move to her novels and screenplays to understand how themes translate across genres. Finally, ask yourself: What story have I been avoiding, and how can I tell it with Didion’s clarity?

In a world of noise, Didion’s voice cuts through with surgical precision. For any writer seeking to carve their own path, her work is not just a blueprint—it’s an invitation to observe, to question, and to distil the chaos of life into something that might resonate for generations.

So pick up a Joan Didion. Let her words unsettle you. Then, let me know how far you’ve come.

Writing a book in 365 days – 351

Day 351

“Why a Budding Author Should Dive into Joan Didion’s Masterful Body of Work”

For aspiring writers, the journey to finding one’s voice is as much about discovery as it is about study. Joan Didion, a literary icon whose career spans decades, offers a treasure trove of insights for those seeking to refine their craft. From her sharp-eyed novels to her incisive essays, Didion’s work is a masterclass in clarity, emotional resonance, and the art of observation. Let’s explore how delving into her oeuvre—comprising five seminal novels, screenplays, and countless articles and essays—can illuminate the path for emerging authors.


1. Novels: The Power of Precision and Dissecting the Human Condition

Didion’s novels—Run, RiverPlay It as It LaysA Book of Common PrayerThe Last Thing He Wanted, and Marry Me—are defined by their sparse, crystalline prose and unflinching exploration of identity, disillusionment, and collapse. For a budding author, studying her work reveals a critical lesson: less is not just more—it’s everything. Didion strips language of excess, using plain, punchy sentences to evoke profound unease or beauty. “We tell ourselves stories in order to live,” she famously writes in The White Album—a philosophy that permeates her fiction, where characters are often unravelling personal myths in a disintegrating world.
Aspiring writers can learn to mirror this by focusing on what isn’t said and how silence, space, and subtext amplify meaning. Her characters also serve as case studies in emotional complexity; they’re flawed, often detached, yet achingly human. How does Didion achieve this? By grounding them in precise details—a crumbling California landscape, a flicker of a smile—that anchor the surreal in the real.


2. Screenplays: Visual Storytelling and the Art of Compression

Didion’s screenplays (notably A Point of No Return and Up at the Villas) offer a different but equally valuable lesson. Adapting her own stories and others’, she demonstrates how to transform prose into visceral, visual narratives. Screenwriting demands concision; dialogue must carry weight, and scenes must be sculpted to evoke emotion without over-explaining. For an author interested in crossing genres, Didion’s screenplays are a masterclass in pacing and economy.
Take Up at the Villas, adapted from her 1982 novel of the same name. The screenplay retains the novel’s cold, observational tone but distils its themes into sharp, symbolic images—a storm, a locked door—to convey what words alone might not. For writers, this is a reminder that showing, not telling, is a skill honed through ruthless editing. Studying her scripts can teach how to craft tension through structure and dialogue, even in literary works.


3. Essays and Journalism: The Alchemy of Observation and Truth-Telling

Joan Didion’s nonfiction—collected in volumes like The White AlbumSlouching Toward Bethlehem, and Where I Was From—is where her genius as a writer truly shines. Her essays are micro-surgeries of culture, politics, and personal history, blending reportage with poetic reflection. How can a budding author benefit from this?

  • The art of the unsparingly honest narrative: Didion doesn’t flinch from ambiguity. She asks, What do we do when we can’t believe the story we’ve told ourselves? This intellectual honesty teaches writers to dig deeper, to question their own assumptions.
  • The marriage of personal and political: In pieces like “Los Angeles Notebook” or “On Self Respect”, Didion ties intimate self-doubt to societal decay. Aspiring authors can learn to weave the private and the public, creating work that resonates beyond the individual.
  • Research as storytelling: Her essays are meticulously researched yet read like lyrical journeys. Writers can study how she transforms facts into narrative threads without losing a reader’s interest.

4. Beyond Technique: Embracing Didion’s Curiosity and Courage

Perhaps the most profound lesson from Didion’s work is her relentless curiosity and willingness to confront the uncomfortable. Her writing force-feeds the idea that truth is not a destination but a process. For emerging authors, this mindset—questioning, observing, and daring to write what feels fragile or controversial—can be transformative. Didion’s essays on the Vietnam War, the Manson Family, or her own grief in The Year of Magical Thinking demand that we look at the world with both empathy and rigour.


Conclusion: Let the Questions Be the Point

Reading Joan Didion is not just about learning how to write—it’s about learning how to see. Her work challenges authors to strip away the superfluous, to wield language like a scalpel, and to embrace the messiness of human experience. For a budding writer, this is an unparalleled education. Start with her essays; they are accessible and brimming with insight. Then, move to her novels and screenplays to understand how themes translate across genres. Finally, ask yourself: What story have I been avoiding, and how can I tell it with Didion’s clarity?

In a world of noise, Didion’s voice cuts through with surgical precision. For any writer seeking to carve their own path, her work is not just a blueprint—it’s an invitation to observe, to question, and to distil the chaos of life into something that might resonate for generations.

So pick up a Joan Didion. Let her words unsettle you. Then, let me know how far you’ve come.

Writing a book in 365 days – 350

Day 350 – Writing exercise

He had never liked the desert, or anywhere hot, if he was telling the truth.

It started out as a joke and ended up as the reason for defunding my project, but irrespective of the reason given, it was not unexpected because of the lack of progress and cost overruns.

And the fact that I had suffered a minor breakdown, having laboured day and night, in very hot, dusty, trying conditions for longer than I expected.

Of course, the fact that I had assured the Management team that I would be available 24/7, and was forced to go on indefinite sick leave, was probably the final nail in the coffin.

That, and the fact that I had participated in an interview where I had confessed, in a moment of reflection, that I preferred to live in the cooler climate of the mountains than in the middle of the desert, the place where I had been running a major investigation into underground rivers.

Or, as my hard-working and cynical assistant project manager had put it, they didn’t want a woman taking my place, and worse, they didn’t want anyone to know they had run out of funding.

In the end, none of it mattered.  They shut down the site.

Melanie, Acting Project Manager, resident cynic, and all-around conspiracy theorist, had dropped in on her way home, or as she put it, a welcome deviation before returning to a ‘rat hole’ at her sister’s residence while in transit between jobs.

I had just left the hospital, and arrived at my ‘Shangrila’ the day before.  She had just wrapped up the operation in Mexico.  She looked as exhausted as I still felt.

When Melanie watched the replay of the post-project interview, curious to see what had been said, she realised one very important point.  “You were led. The interviewer had a definite plan to lead you down a particular path and then took a run with it.”

“I was tired and wanted to get it over with.”

“You didn’t ask for the slate of questions ahead of time?”

“I did and was given a folder.  There was nothing about climate preferences, or the possibility of exhaustion, in them.”

“There you are.  It was nothing less than a set-up, clearly designed to derail your project.”

Melanie always suspected the organisation that funded the projects to be exactly the sort of people they portrayed to the outside world, and she had been very vocal at the first meeting, and several since, citing the world needed water, not geothermal energy.

In the beginning, it had been a hard sell.  Until suddenly they changed their minds from a hard no to a three-year deal.

That was until the two board members who agreed with her had retired in the last six months.

“If they hadn’t retired, we wouldn’t be here.”

Actually, we would.  We had not found irrefutable evidence that there was water under the impenetrable rock.  It was somewhere near there, I just wasn’t sure exactly where, and drilling bores wasn’t cheap.

I had been assured they’d come back to it later.

Meanwhile…

I was on administrative leave.  Melanie was supposed to go to Peru or Chile.  Instead ,she stayed with me.

Melanie had also suspected the Project Management organisation of having ulterior motives.  I had also heard the rumours that somewhere of the projects had two purposes.

The most recent, an archaeological dig turned into a search for oil, in a place where the local government had been prevented from prospecting.

Our project had the security team ‘enhanced’ because of ‘perceived’ threats to our safety, which, in the end, didn’t materialise.

Just before the funding dried up.

It was not as if they didn’t have a reason.  Suddenly, we found it difficult to bore through the hard rock to get down to the suspected cavern where an underground river ran from the Arctic to the north to the equator.

We had found what was believed to be the entrance in northern Scandinavia, but not the outlet, other than ancient evidence of water feeding a flourishing Aztec city, not just dry dusty ruins.   It had been paradise.

And as much as I would like to also give my archaeological skills a run, that hadn’t been our focus.  We just had to work around the archaeological aspects of the site.

Even so, I had a feeling someone was poking around the ruins, with people going missing, and strange noises at night.

Melanie was adamant that the ghosts of the city’s once-inhabitants were rising up to protect their final resting place from us invaders.

It became the subject of a conversation one morning, after about a week, the amount of time it took for Melanie doing nothing to start getting bored.

She had just latched onto the archaeological aspects of the site, just arriving at a conclusion I had considered a possibility, but unlikely given the local government’s stand on exploration of the ruins.

“It’s an unjustified cost to bore through impassable rock, especially when we cannot prove an outcome.”

“What if it wasn’t and they’re just telling you that?”

I looked at her over the conference table with surprise.  Melanie was my guru for superstitions and conspiracy theories and was often closer to the bone than most.

She had said once after a few too many margaritas that the site we were working at had been an old Aztec temple and place of worship and sacrifice, and more than one ghost had been seen at night.

I thought I had seen one myself, but I didn’t believe in such things.  But I did suspect that there might be an element of truth in another myth she had uncovered, that somewhere within the boundaries of the site was a reputed entrance to a network of caverns and tunnels, where artifacts had been hidden from the Spanish conquerors, and which several items had been found nearby.

It would make more sense to think we had been shut down so that another clandestine expedition was being funded to locate the entrance or determine whether there was any truth to the supposition that gold and or artifacts were hidden there.  That would make more money than finding underground watercourses.

“Then what are you telling me?”

“Those extra security staff sent to save us from the revolting masses would know one end of a gun from the other.  Did they look like mercenaries?”

After a few more margaritas, she confessed her ideal man was that Hollywood stereotype mercenary. This stereotype was not supported by the members of the security team or the additional people sent.

“Not really, but do we really know that security people have a ‘type’?”

“Girls who look like they just came from a fashion show in Milan.  You remember Joanne and Louisa?”

I don’t think anyone could forget them.  She had a point, but by that time, I was almost overcome by exhaustion.

“You think they were archaeology students?”

“Isn’t that how digs work?  One or two experts and a dozen students are working towards their degrees.  You went through that process.”

I had, though, not been so lucky to find a dig so rich in history.  “We were strictly forbidden from any archaeological exploration.”

“And Management knew you’d assure them that nothing like that was going on.  They relied on your reputation, one of the main reasons the local government allowed the project.  That you’d run it and you’d find water.  Especially if you found water.  When I stopped by the mayor’s office to give him the keys, half a dozen of the newbies, including the girls, were still there.  They were supposed to be on a plane a week ago.”

“They don’t have permission to conduct archaeological exploration of the ruins.”

“Who needs permission to do anything, other than us good guys.  We’ve been running a distraction.  I think they’ve discovered the tunnels and caverns.  And they, more than anything else, might lead us to the water.  We were looking in the wrong place.  I think the city was built on top of the water outlet, and the Aztecs destroyed it themselves to spite the Spanish”

“But we were not in the business of treasure hunting.”

Or were we?

“Why don’t we go and find out?”

©  Charles Heath  2025

Writing a book in 365 days – 350

Day 350 – Writing exercise

He had never liked the desert, or anywhere hot, if he was telling the truth.

It started out as a joke and ended up as the reason for defunding my project, but irrespective of the reason given, it was not unexpected because of the lack of progress and cost overruns.

And the fact that I had suffered a minor breakdown, having laboured day and night, in very hot, dusty, trying conditions for longer than I expected.

Of course, the fact that I had assured the Management team that I would be available 24/7, and was forced to go on indefinite sick leave, was probably the final nail in the coffin.

That, and the fact that I had participated in an interview where I had confessed, in a moment of reflection, that I preferred to live in the cooler climate of the mountains than in the middle of the desert, the place where I had been running a major investigation into underground rivers.

Or, as my hard-working and cynical assistant project manager had put it, they didn’t want a woman taking my place, and worse, they didn’t want anyone to know they had run out of funding.

In the end, none of it mattered.  They shut down the site.

Melanie, Acting Project Manager, resident cynic, and all-around conspiracy theorist, had dropped in on her way home, or as she put it, a welcome deviation before returning to a ‘rat hole’ at her sister’s residence while in transit between jobs.

I had just left the hospital, and arrived at my ‘Shangrila’ the day before.  She had just wrapped up the operation in Mexico.  She looked as exhausted as I still felt.

When Melanie watched the replay of the post-project interview, curious to see what had been said, she realised one very important point.  “You were led. The interviewer had a definite plan to lead you down a particular path and then took a run with it.”

“I was tired and wanted to get it over with.”

“You didn’t ask for the slate of questions ahead of time?”

“I did and was given a folder.  There was nothing about climate preferences, or the possibility of exhaustion, in them.”

“There you are.  It was nothing less than a set-up, clearly designed to derail your project.”

Melanie always suspected the organisation that funded the projects to be exactly the sort of people they portrayed to the outside world, and she had been very vocal at the first meeting, and several since, citing the world needed water, not geothermal energy.

In the beginning, it had been a hard sell.  Until suddenly they changed their minds from a hard no to a three-year deal.

That was until the two board members who agreed with her had retired in the last six months.

“If they hadn’t retired, we wouldn’t be here.”

Actually, we would.  We had not found irrefutable evidence that there was water under the impenetrable rock.  It was somewhere near there, I just wasn’t sure exactly where, and drilling bores wasn’t cheap.

I had been assured they’d come back to it later.

Meanwhile…

I was on administrative leave.  Melanie was supposed to go to Peru or Chile.  Instead ,she stayed with me.

Melanie had also suspected the Project Management organisation of having ulterior motives.  I had also heard the rumours that somewhere of the projects had two purposes.

The most recent, an archaeological dig turned into a search for oil, in a place where the local government had been prevented from prospecting.

Our project had the security team ‘enhanced’ because of ‘perceived’ threats to our safety, which, in the end, didn’t materialise.

Just before the funding dried up.

It was not as if they didn’t have a reason.  Suddenly, we found it difficult to bore through the hard rock to get down to the suspected cavern where an underground river ran from the Arctic to the north to the equator.

We had found what was believed to be the entrance in northern Scandinavia, but not the outlet, other than ancient evidence of water feeding a flourishing Aztec city, not just dry dusty ruins.   It had been paradise.

And as much as I would like to also give my archaeological skills a run, that hadn’t been our focus.  We just had to work around the archaeological aspects of the site.

Even so, I had a feeling someone was poking around the ruins, with people going missing, and strange noises at night.

Melanie was adamant that the ghosts of the city’s once-inhabitants were rising up to protect their final resting place from us invaders.

It became the subject of a conversation one morning, after about a week, the amount of time it took for Melanie doing nothing to start getting bored.

She had just latched onto the archaeological aspects of the site, just arriving at a conclusion I had considered a possibility, but unlikely given the local government’s stand on exploration of the ruins.

“It’s an unjustified cost to bore through impassable rock, especially when we cannot prove an outcome.”

“What if it wasn’t and they’re just telling you that?”

I looked at her over the conference table with surprise.  Melanie was my guru for superstitions and conspiracy theories and was often closer to the bone than most.

She had said once after a few too many margaritas that the site we were working at had been an old Aztec temple and place of worship and sacrifice, and more than one ghost had been seen at night.

I thought I had seen one myself, but I didn’t believe in such things.  But I did suspect that there might be an element of truth in another myth she had uncovered, that somewhere within the boundaries of the site was a reputed entrance to a network of caverns and tunnels, where artifacts had been hidden from the Spanish conquerors, and which several items had been found nearby.

It would make more sense to think we had been shut down so that another clandestine expedition was being funded to locate the entrance or determine whether there was any truth to the supposition that gold and or artifacts were hidden there.  That would make more money than finding underground watercourses.

“Then what are you telling me?”

“Those extra security staff sent to save us from the revolting masses would know one end of a gun from the other.  Did they look like mercenaries?”

After a few more margaritas, she confessed her ideal man was that Hollywood stereotype mercenary. This stereotype was not supported by the members of the security team or the additional people sent.

“Not really, but do we really know that security people have a ‘type’?”

“Girls who look like they just came from a fashion show in Milan.  You remember Joanne and Louisa?”

I don’t think anyone could forget them.  She had a point, but by that time, I was almost overcome by exhaustion.

“You think they were archaeology students?”

“Isn’t that how digs work?  One or two experts and a dozen students are working towards their degrees.  You went through that process.”

I had, though, not been so lucky to find a dig so rich in history.  “We were strictly forbidden from any archaeological exploration.”

“And Management knew you’d assure them that nothing like that was going on.  They relied on your reputation, one of the main reasons the local government allowed the project.  That you’d run it and you’d find water.  Especially if you found water.  When I stopped by the mayor’s office to give him the keys, half a dozen of the newbies, including the girls, were still there.  They were supposed to be on a plane a week ago.”

“They don’t have permission to conduct archaeological exploration of the ruins.”

“Who needs permission to do anything, other than us good guys.  We’ve been running a distraction.  I think they’ve discovered the tunnels and caverns.  And they, more than anything else, might lead us to the water.  We were looking in the wrong place.  I think the city was built on top of the water outlet, and the Aztecs destroyed it themselves to spite the Spanish”

“But we were not in the business of treasure hunting.”

Or were we?

“Why don’t we go and find out?”

©  Charles Heath  2025

Writing a book in 365 days – 349

Day 349

The Gift of Creating Life with Words: Innate Talent, Learned Skill, or a Bit of Both?

“Words are, in my not-so-humble opinion, the most powerful tool we have ever created.” – J.K. Rowling

When a story sweeps us off our feet, a poem makes our hearts ache, or a speech moves a crowd to tears, we instinctively label the author a “gifted” or “talented” writer. It feels as if they possess a mysterious, almost magical ability to conjure whole worlds from thin air.

But is the art of breathing life into language something you’re born with, or can anyone learn to wield it with equal flair? In this post we’ll explore the science and the folklore behind writing excellence, dissect the myths of the “born writer,” and lay out practical pathways for anyone who wants to transform words into living, breathing experiences.


1. The Allure of the “Natural Talent” Narrative

1.1. Why We Romanticise the Gifted Writer

  • Heroic storytelling – Just as societies celebrate prodigies in music, sport, and mathematics, literature loves its “genius” figures (Shakespeare, Hemingway, Toni Morrison).
  • Cognitive bias – The availability heuristic makes us recall the few celebrated authors, overlooking the countless writers who arrived at greatness through deliberate practice.
  • Cultural mythos – The Romantic era glorified the solitary muse, cementing the idea that true art springs from a mystical well within.

1.2. What Research Really Says

Neuroscientists have mapped the brain activity of skilled writers, and the findings are enlightening:

Brain RegionRole in WritingWhat the Data Shows
Broca’s areaSyntax, grammarHighly active in both novice and expert writers, suggesting that basic language processing is universal.
Prefrontal cortexPlanning, organizationShows increased connectivity in seasoned writers, indicating that strategic thinking can be honed.
Default mode network (DMN)Imagination, mind‑wanderingStronger activation correlates with creative ideation, but DMN activity can be cultivated through practices like free‑writing.

The takeaway? There are no “magic” brain circuits that only a few possess. The same neural hardware is available to everyone; the difference lies in how it’s trained, wired, and used over time.


2. The Science of Skill Acquisition

2.1. Deliberate Practice—The Engine of Mastery

Psychologist K. Anders Ericsson introduced the concept of deliberate practice: intentional, feedback‑rich, and just beyond your current ability. In writing, this translates to:

  • Targeted exercises (e.g., “write a scene using only dialogue” or “describe a setting in 100 words”).
  • Immediate feedback from peers, mentors, or software tools.
  • Iterative revision—the willingness to rewrite, re‑structure, and re‑think.

2.2. The 10,000‑Hour Rule—A Misinterpretation

Gladwell popularised the idea that 10,000 hours leads to mastery. While practice matters, the quality of those hours matters far more. A novice who writes 10,000 bland sentences won’t rival a diligent writer who spends 2,000 hours on focused storytelling drills.

2.3. Neuroplasticity—Your Brain Can Rewire

Every time you craft a sentence, you’re forging new synaptic pathways. Studies in adult neuroplasticity demonstrate that consistent writing practice enlarges language‑related brain regions and improves narrative comprehension. In short: You can literally rewire yourself to be a better writer.


3. The Role of Reading: The Unsung Curriculum

“If you want to write, write, and if you want to read, read.” – C. S. Lewis

Reading is the foundational apprenticeship for any writer. Here’s why:

AspectHow Reading HelpsPractical Tip
VocabularyExposure to varied diction builds lexical richness.Keep a “word‑bank” notebook; add a new, striking word each week.
StructureMimic a paragraph in the style of your favourite author, then rewrite it in your voice.After each book, outline its structure in 5–7 bullet points.
VoiceUnderstanding expectations lets you subvert or honour them intelligently.Analysing plot arcs, pacing, and chapter organisation reveals the scaffolding behind stories.
Genre ConventionsUnderstanding expectations lets you subvert or honor them intelligently.Read at least three classic works in any genre you plan to write.

In other words—reading is the silent teacher that precedes formal instruction.


4. Teaching the Craft: What Formal Education (and Informal Mentorship) Offers

4.1. What Writing Courses Actually Teach

  1. Fundamentals of Storytelling – Hero’s journey, three‑act structure, conflict types.
  2. Tools of the Trade – Dialogue tags, sensory description, active vs. passive voice.
  3. Revision Strategies – Macro‑editing (plot, pacing) vs. micro‑editing (sentence flow, grammar).
  4. Critique Techniques – Giving and receiving constructive feedback without ego.

4.2. Mentorship vs. Classroom

  • Mentorship—Personalised, often informal. One‑on‑one feedback accelerates growth because it’s tailored to your specific blind spots.
  • Workshops—Group environments foster diverse perspectives, exposing you to styles you’d never encounter alone.

4.3. Digital Resources: The New‑Age Writing Academy

  • Online courses (MasterClass, Coursera, edX) – Structured curricula from bestselling authors.
  • Writing communities (r/WritingPrompts, Scribophile, Critique Circle) – Peer review loops.
  • AI‑assisted tools (Grammarly, ProWritingAid, ChatGPT) – Real‑time suggestions for grammar, style, and even plot brainstorming.

5. Practical Steps to Turn “Potential” into “Prose”

Below is a 12‑week sprint that anyone can follow, regardless of background. Think of it as a bootcamp for the “gift of creating life with words.”

WeekFocusAction ItemTime Commitment
1ObservationKeep a daily 5‑minute “sensory log” of what you see, hear, smell.5 min/day
2Micro‑StorytellingWrite 100‑word flash fiction using only one sense.15 min/day
3Dialogue DrillTranscribe a real conversation, then rewrite it to reveal subtext.30 min total
4Structural MappingOutline the plot of your favorite novel in three acts.1 hour
5Voice ExplorationImitate a paragraph from three different authors; then rewrite it in your own voice.45 min
6Feedback LoopShare a 1,000‑word piece with a peer group; receive and integrate feedback.2 hours
7Revision MasteryTake a piece you wrote in Week 2 and perform a macro‑edit (plot, pacing).1 hour
8Genre Deep DiveRead a classic in a new genre; write a 500‑word piece that follows its conventions.2 hours reading + 1 hour writing
9Narrative TensionWrite a scene where the stakes are revealed only through action, not exposition.1 hour
10Mentor SessionArrange a 30‑minute call with a more experienced writer (could be via a forum).30 min
11Polish & PublishEdit a short story for submission to a literary journal or online platform.2 hours
12ReflectionWrite a 500‑word essay on how your writing has changed over the program.30 min

Consistency beats intensity. Even 15 minutes a day, if focused, yields measurable improvement.


6. Common Myths Debunked

MythReality
“You’re either born a writer or you’re not.”Writing is a skill that can be systematically improved, much like learning a musical instrument.
“Good writers don’t need to edit.”Even the most celebrated authors (e.g., Stephen King) claim they spend 90 % of their time editing.
“Inspiration is magical and uncontrollable.”While moments of inspiration happen, they are often the byproduct of sustained preparation.
“Only formal education matters.”Self‑directed learning, reading, and community critique often produce equally adept writers.

7. The Bottom Line: Talent Meets Training

The truth lies somewhere in the middle:

  • Innate predispositions—such as a keen sense of observation, empathy, or an early love for language—can give a head start.
  • Deliberate practice—the daily grind of writing, reading, revising, and seeking feedback—turns that potential into proficiency.
  • Guided instruction—whether through a university course, an online tutorial, or a mentorship—provides the scaffolding that accelerates growth.

So, the “gift of creating life with words” isn’t a static, hereditary trait; it’s a dynamic, learnable craft that flourishes when curiosity meets discipline.


8. Takeaway Action: Your First Step Right Now

  1. Grab a notebook (or open a note‑app).
  2. Set a timer for five minutes and write whatever you see out the window, without judging.
  3. Repeat tomorrow, adding one new sensory detail.

In just a week, you’ll have a mini-catalogue of lived experience to draw upon—one of the most valuable reservoirs any writer can own.

Harry Walthenson, Private Detective – the second case – A case of finding the “Flying Dutchman”

What starts as a search for a missing husband soon develops into an unbelievable story of treachery, lies, and incredible riches.

It was meant to remain buried long enough for the dust to settle on what was once an unpalatable truth, when enough time had passed, and those who had been willing to wait could reap the rewards.

The problem was, no one knew where that treasure was hidden or the location of the logbook that held the secret.

At stake, billions of dollars’ worth of stolen Nazi loot brought to the United States in an anonymous tramp steamer and hidden in a specially constructed vault under a specifically owned plot of land on the once docklands of New York.

It may have remained hidden and unknown to only a few, if it had not been for a mere obscure detail being overheard …

… by our intrepid, newly minted private detective, Harry Walthenson …

… and it would have remained buried.

Now, through a series of unrelated events, or are they, that well-kept secret is out there, and Harry will not stop until the whole truth is uncovered.

Even if it almost costs him his life.  Again.

Writing a book in 365 days – 349

Day 349

The Gift of Creating Life with Words: Innate Talent, Learned Skill, or a Bit of Both?

“Words are, in my not-so-humble opinion, the most powerful tool we have ever created.” – J.K. Rowling

When a story sweeps us off our feet, a poem makes our hearts ache, or a speech moves a crowd to tears, we instinctively label the author a “gifted” or “talented” writer. It feels as if they possess a mysterious, almost magical ability to conjure whole worlds from thin air.

But is the art of breathing life into language something you’re born with, or can anyone learn to wield it with equal flair? In this post we’ll explore the science and the folklore behind writing excellence, dissect the myths of the “born writer,” and lay out practical pathways for anyone who wants to transform words into living, breathing experiences.


1. The Allure of the “Natural Talent” Narrative

1.1. Why We Romanticise the Gifted Writer

  • Heroic storytelling – Just as societies celebrate prodigies in music, sport, and mathematics, literature loves its “genius” figures (Shakespeare, Hemingway, Toni Morrison).
  • Cognitive bias – The availability heuristic makes us recall the few celebrated authors, overlooking the countless writers who arrived at greatness through deliberate practice.
  • Cultural mythos – The Romantic era glorified the solitary muse, cementing the idea that true art springs from a mystical well within.

1.2. What Research Really Says

Neuroscientists have mapped the brain activity of skilled writers, and the findings are enlightening:

Brain RegionRole in WritingWhat the Data Shows
Broca’s areaSyntax, grammarHighly active in both novice and expert writers, suggesting that basic language processing is universal.
Prefrontal cortexPlanning, organizationShows increased connectivity in seasoned writers, indicating that strategic thinking can be honed.
Default mode network (DMN)Imagination, mind‑wanderingStronger activation correlates with creative ideation, but DMN activity can be cultivated through practices like free‑writing.

The takeaway? There are no “magic” brain circuits that only a few possess. The same neural hardware is available to everyone; the difference lies in how it’s trained, wired, and used over time.


2. The Science of Skill Acquisition

2.1. Deliberate Practice—The Engine of Mastery

Psychologist K. Anders Ericsson introduced the concept of deliberate practice: intentional, feedback‑rich, and just beyond your current ability. In writing, this translates to:

  • Targeted exercises (e.g., “write a scene using only dialogue” or “describe a setting in 100 words”).
  • Immediate feedback from peers, mentors, or software tools.
  • Iterative revision—the willingness to rewrite, re‑structure, and re‑think.

2.2. The 10,000‑Hour Rule—A Misinterpretation

Gladwell popularised the idea that 10,000 hours leads to mastery. While practice matters, the quality of those hours matters far more. A novice who writes 10,000 bland sentences won’t rival a diligent writer who spends 2,000 hours on focused storytelling drills.

2.3. Neuroplasticity—Your Brain Can Rewire

Every time you craft a sentence, you’re forging new synaptic pathways. Studies in adult neuroplasticity demonstrate that consistent writing practice enlarges language‑related brain regions and improves narrative comprehension. In short: You can literally rewire yourself to be a better writer.


3. The Role of Reading: The Unsung Curriculum

“If you want to write, write, and if you want to read, read.” – C. S. Lewis

Reading is the foundational apprenticeship for any writer. Here’s why:

AspectHow Reading HelpsPractical Tip
VocabularyExposure to varied diction builds lexical richness.Keep a “word‑bank” notebook; add a new, striking word each week.
StructureMimic a paragraph in the style of your favourite author, then rewrite it in your voice.After each book, outline its structure in 5–7 bullet points.
VoiceUnderstanding expectations lets you subvert or honour them intelligently.Analysing plot arcs, pacing, and chapter organisation reveals the scaffolding behind stories.
Genre ConventionsUnderstanding expectations lets you subvert or honor them intelligently.Read at least three classic works in any genre you plan to write.

In other words—reading is the silent teacher that precedes formal instruction.


4. Teaching the Craft: What Formal Education (and Informal Mentorship) Offers

4.1. What Writing Courses Actually Teach

  1. Fundamentals of Storytelling – Hero’s journey, three‑act structure, conflict types.
  2. Tools of the Trade – Dialogue tags, sensory description, active vs. passive voice.
  3. Revision Strategies – Macro‑editing (plot, pacing) vs. micro‑editing (sentence flow, grammar).
  4. Critique Techniques – Giving and receiving constructive feedback without ego.

4.2. Mentorship vs. Classroom

  • Mentorship—Personalised, often informal. One‑on‑one feedback accelerates growth because it’s tailored to your specific blind spots.
  • Workshops—Group environments foster diverse perspectives, exposing you to styles you’d never encounter alone.

4.3. Digital Resources: The New‑Age Writing Academy

  • Online courses (MasterClass, Coursera, edX) – Structured curricula from bestselling authors.
  • Writing communities (r/WritingPrompts, Scribophile, Critique Circle) – Peer review loops.
  • AI‑assisted tools (Grammarly, ProWritingAid, ChatGPT) – Real‑time suggestions for grammar, style, and even plot brainstorming.

5. Practical Steps to Turn “Potential” into “Prose”

Below is a 12‑week sprint that anyone can follow, regardless of background. Think of it as a bootcamp for the “gift of creating life with words.”

WeekFocusAction ItemTime Commitment
1ObservationKeep a daily 5‑minute “sensory log” of what you see, hear, smell.5 min/day
2Micro‑StorytellingWrite 100‑word flash fiction using only one sense.15 min/day
3Dialogue DrillTranscribe a real conversation, then rewrite it to reveal subtext.30 min total
4Structural MappingOutline the plot of your favorite novel in three acts.1 hour
5Voice ExplorationImitate a paragraph from three different authors; then rewrite it in your own voice.45 min
6Feedback LoopShare a 1,000‑word piece with a peer group; receive and integrate feedback.2 hours
7Revision MasteryTake a piece you wrote in Week 2 and perform a macro‑edit (plot, pacing).1 hour
8Genre Deep DiveRead a classic in a new genre; write a 500‑word piece that follows its conventions.2 hours reading + 1 hour writing
9Narrative TensionWrite a scene where the stakes are revealed only through action, not exposition.1 hour
10Mentor SessionArrange a 30‑minute call with a more experienced writer (could be via a forum).30 min
11Polish & PublishEdit a short story for submission to a literary journal or online platform.2 hours
12ReflectionWrite a 500‑word essay on how your writing has changed over the program.30 min

Consistency beats intensity. Even 15 minutes a day, if focused, yields measurable improvement.


6. Common Myths Debunked

MythReality
“You’re either born a writer or you’re not.”Writing is a skill that can be systematically improved, much like learning a musical instrument.
“Good writers don’t need to edit.”Even the most celebrated authors (e.g., Stephen King) claim they spend 90 % of their time editing.
“Inspiration is magical and uncontrollable.”While moments of inspiration happen, they are often the byproduct of sustained preparation.
“Only formal education matters.”Self‑directed learning, reading, and community critique often produce equally adept writers.

7. The Bottom Line: Talent Meets Training

The truth lies somewhere in the middle:

  • Innate predispositions—such as a keen sense of observation, empathy, or an early love for language—can give a head start.
  • Deliberate practice—the daily grind of writing, reading, revising, and seeking feedback—turns that potential into proficiency.
  • Guided instruction—whether through a university course, an online tutorial, or a mentorship—provides the scaffolding that accelerates growth.

So, the “gift of creating life with words” isn’t a static, hereditary trait; it’s a dynamic, learnable craft that flourishes when curiosity meets discipline.


8. Takeaway Action: Your First Step Right Now

  1. Grab a notebook (or open a note‑app).
  2. Set a timer for five minutes and write whatever you see out the window, without judging.
  3. Repeat tomorrow, adding one new sensory detail.

In just a week, you’ll have a mini-catalogue of lived experience to draw upon—one of the most valuable reservoirs any writer can own.