A to Z – April – 2026 – E

E is for Empire State Building

Making a plan, having certain expectations, taking that leap of faith that all of us are destined to do at least once, I found myself standing at the top of the Empire State Building, on the last day of the twelfth month, exactly five years after making a promise in exactly the same place, I would be there.

There was a 3 pm in there, but that was flexible, because I always liked to be early.

It had been after high school graduation, after the prom, every bit the magical moment it was meant to be, with the girl of my dreams, Margaret Cates.  We had spent those last years of high school together, studying hard, each helping the other achieve the grades needed to enter the best University.

There was no talk of romance, of a life together, or anything other than of being brought together, almost inseparable.  We were voted the most likely to be married and living contentedly in a house with a picket fence and three children.

Expectations were what parents had, and both of our parents were best friends, who simply chose to believe the inevitable would happen.  Graduation, a combined family trip to New York to see the sights, culminating in New Year’s Eve at the top of the Empire State Building.

That was where we made the promise, no matter what, we would reconvene, that was Margaret’s word, at the same time.  It was also the first time we kissed, and I think it took a week before my heart rate went back to normal.

Soon after that, Margaret left.  She had been accepted into her university of choice.  Her parents were surprised, and my parents were in shock. 

I was not.  It was the plan.  Margaret had a plan for everything. There was no plan with me in it.  Not in those first five years.  I was sad but not devastated.

I said to my parents, if we were meant to be, she would come back.  I had to set her free.

My plan was there was no plan.  I got the grades, and I got accepted into my University of choice.

At the end of the second year, I was in a what could only be described as a car crash, and was badly injured, to the extent that I had to put my life on hold.

I would recover, not one hundred per cent but enough to continue whatever path I’d chosen, but with some limitations.  The doctor was upbeat, and my parents were upbeat.

I went home, not quite in the manner I’d intended.  I was assured that life was like that, and I had to accept, accident or no accident, life was full of unexpected challenges.

Summer Atkins was probably the most irritating, aggravating, and ingratiating person on the planet.

She lived next door, one of five girls, the eldest, and coincidentally in my grade at high school.  In fact, she was in all the grades from Elementary.

She was gawky, awkward, loud and clumsy.  It was not her fault.  She had a kind heart, always the first to volunteer for the worst jobs, and suffered a lot at the hands of the boys and the girls, too.

I was not pleased to say when I looked back at my time that I was one of them, and probably the only one who apologised after the prom for what had been, at times, unforgivable.  The prank for the prom was probably her lowest point.

It took a week before she would come out of her room, and I came over every day to join the few who actually cared about her.  After Margaret left and before I followed, we spent time together, where she asked me what she needed to do to just get to talk to a guy like me.

I thought it strange.  She was talking to me, I was talking to her, we had coffee and cake at the diner and hung out.  She had no aspirations to go to college, just to help her parents look after her siblings and work in the diner.  I had suggested she might want to do something for herself, and she looked at me strangely.  I did not, she said, understand her.

We parted awkwardly, with this thing I had done, but what it was, I had no idea.  It ended when she told me that if I was waiting for Margaret, I would be waiting a long time.  How did she know anything about what my expectations were?

I came back home under the radar.  I didn’t want anyone to know because I had set myself a high bar, and I was never going to reach it.

I felt that I had become a disappointment to my parents, and while they put on a brave face, and my siblings were polite, it was clear that they were happy for me to hide away, and my siblings were happy to see the high flyer crash and burn.  Kid would be kids, I expected no less.

So when Summer unexpectedly knocked on the door, a certain element of panic went through the house.  Upstairs, I heard that voice drift up the stairs with mixed emotions.  I wanted to see her, but I didn’t want to see her.

Not like this.  It was an odd feeling, and I couldn’t understand what fuelled it.  It was Summer, she wouldn’t care, more likely revel in the fact.  How the mighty had fallen.

My mother answered the door.

“Mrs Abercrombie, you look tired?”  The grating tone had gone, her voice had softened, and there was genuine concern in it.

“It’s…”

She caught herself before mentioning my name.  It had been a secret for about a month.  I was surprised Summer had not called earlier.

My mother shifted the topic.  She was good at that.  “How is your father?  That latest bout of chemotherapy cannot be helping the diner.”

“He’s responding to the treatment, and we’re managing.  How are you faring without Allen?  I’m sorry I should have come over more often.”

“It’s fine.  We’re all coping with life as best we can.”

“How is Allen, if I may ask?”

That was Summer.  Gets the bit between her teeth and doesn’t let go.

My mother was not one to lie.  Obfuscate but not lie.  Not outright.  But confronted…

“Something’s wrong,” she said in a hushed voice, so low I couldn’t barely hear her.  I could virtually see my mother’s face.  It had always been expressive.  It’s why she could never play poker.

It went quiet for a minute or two, and I knew it was time to brace myself.  Summer was the last person I wanted to see, perhaps the only one other than Margaret, not that I expected her to drop everything.

Again, I couldn’t explain why, other than showing vulnerability. 

A few minutes passed while I was hoping my mother would explain that I didn’t want to see anyone, that I wanted to be better before facing the outside world.  Whether Summer would accede to a request if leaving me alone was moot.

If she knew I was there, she would not hesitate to come up and remind me of the Allen of old, with the shoe now firmly on the other foot.

I tried hiding under the covers, but she had X-ray eyes.  I knew she was in the room; I could feel her presence.  And the scent she used was a hint of primrose.  Once it was far stronger, but I suspect she had mastered the art of cosmetic use.

“You will suffocate long before I leave, Allen.  I’m not the same girl you left behind.  I don’t hate you.  I did for a while, but then I realised you cared when all the rest didn’t.  I’m sorry we parted angry.”

She sounded reasonable, far more reasonable than I expected.  She should have still been angry, if not with me, but with the others.

“OK.  If you don’t come out, I’ll get in there with you.  You know me well enough to know I will.”

Did I know her well enough?  I never took the opportunity.  No one wanted to because she didn’t fit the other girls’ profile.  It wasn’t like that at University, there it was simply a competition.  There was dating, but it was more convenient than romance.  There were not many hours left in a day for extracurricular activities.

When I peeled back the covers, it was like seeing an angel, the sun shining in the window, throwing a glow over her.  Summer had changed from the awkward, ugly duckling into a graceful Swan.

A look of concern crossed her face.  Just lifting the covers was a difficult task, like most normal movements we all took for granted.  It was getting easier and less painful, but it would take time.

“What happened to you?”

“A car and I had a disagreement.  It won.”

“And you didn’t think to tell me.  How long have you been here?  What do you need? Tell me, and I’ll make it happen.”

Summer basically glued me back together.  It was, she said, one of her projects, others minding the children of silly sisters, nursing her farther past cancer, keeping up her waitress job at the diner, and just being Summer, the girl who always pitched in.

Such was the value of her help that my mother said I should marry her before someone else snapped her up.  Just before I was to go back to University, I did just that, but she rejected me.

There was someone else, and he was going to propose any day.

I could respect that.  Whatever I thought she might think of me, I would forever be one of those boys who made her life hell.  I didn’t deserve someone like her.  I just got on the train and left.

But the truth was, I was never the same again.

How could I?

I had tried to tell Margaret, but the terms of the pact were clear.  5 years, do your thing, meet and discuss.  If feelings were the same, who knew what might happen?

I was disappointed I hadn’t been able to find her, but I had a story to tell.

A year after returning, I gave it up.  I didn’t have the same enthusiasm, and feeling like a failure, I didn’t go home.  I simply pretended everything was fine and moved to New York and found work in a rather offbeat bookshop in Queens.

It fuelled my love of literature, and after reading anything and everything, I started writing my version of the Great American Novel.  Small-town boy makes it big in the big city.  A bit like my life, really.

Which brings us back to the Empire State Building.

3pm.

And Margaret.

I saw her and thought she was coming to the spot.  She looked different, older, smarter, and with a touch of elegance and sophistication.

Halfway, I saw her smile and then wrap her arms around this bear of a man whom I instantly recognised.  I mean, you would have to live under a rock not to know him.

Her parents were there, and a bunch of media people.  The oohs and ahhs told me it was the moment he went down on one knee; it was going to be a News At 6 moment.

I was but a distant memory, forgotten in her moment of agreeing to be Mrs Albert Johnstone Gerythorn III.

I guess the employee of an eclectic bookshop was hardly a match for a multi-billionaire, or one who was soon to be.

“Sucks to be you.”

It did.  That voice, the one that had grated on my nerves nearly all of my school years, came from behind me.

I knew who it was.  I didn’t turn around.

“I knew it was a mistake to tell you my innermost secrets.”

“Oh, I would not have missed this for the world.”

I felt her hand slip into mine and her body move closer. 

“Five years is a long time.  People change.”

“People like us change, Allen.  People like her do not.”

“I thought you were getting married?”

“So did I.  I guess we were both wrong.  Found that cute little bookshop of yours.  If I didn’t know you better, I’d be guessing you’ve started that great American novel.  Am I right or am I right?”

“You know me too well.  You want to stay, or shall we find another circus, something a little more our style?”

“Do we have one?”

“Of course.  Everyone has style.”

Then I noticed Margaret was coming towards us, a rather serious expression on her face.  Had she finally recognised me?

“Excuse me, but the photographers would like to get some photos of my fiancée and me by this corner.  It would be most appreciated.”

No.  No sign of recognition.

Summer instead smiled sweetly, ” Of course, Margery Mugmouth, the pleasure would be all ours.”

It was Margaret’s nickname among those girls she trashed, and she instantly recognised Summer, and then me.

“Five years, to the day.  You came.  Have a happy life, Margaret.”

With that, we left.

A reporter, or just someone with a notepad, was scribbling frantically and then tried to head us off at the elevator.  Just too late.  The doors closed.

“The nerve,” Summer said.  “That was our corner.  Or I hope it will be.”

“So did I.  Would you like to marry me?” I asked.

The elevator went silent, except for the whishing sound of it going down.

“She made a face, quite amusing, and then said, “Yes.”

People outside the elevator when it arrived thought something bad had happened, given the roar and applause which followed us out into the foyer after it arrived.

Five years, on the last day of the last month at 3 pm, something did happen.  I proposed to the girl of my dreams.  I just hadn’t realised it until then.

©  Charles Heath  2026

365 Days of writing, 2026 – 79

Day 79 – Irrelevant trivialities

Why the Small Stuff Beats the Big Stuff: What Really Hooks Readers (And Why Over‑The‑Top Heroes Can Turn Them Off)


  • Readers remember the everyday, not the epic. A scene about a coffee‑spilled meeting can out‑shine a chapter on a geopolitical summit.
  • Tiny, relatable details act as emotional anchors that keep the audience glued to the page.
  • “Chest‑pounding, wildly gesticulating heroes” feel like propaganda, not people. Readers want flawed, grounded protagonists, not cartoon‑ish mascots.
  • Writing tip: Sprinkle specific, sensory “trivialities” throughout your narrative and let your characters react authentically.

1. The Myth of the “Grand Event”

When you think of a story set against the backdrop of political turbulence—a coup, a trade war, climate‑policy battles—you might assume the macro events are the magnetic core. After all, they’re the headlines.

But ask yourself:

  • Do readers remember the exact date a treaty was signed?
  • Do they recite the exact number of votes in a parliament?

Rarely. What stays is the human fallout of those events: the cramped office where a junior analyst slips a secret note under a coffee mug, the nervous laugh of a teenager watching a televised protest, the sound of a door that refuses to close properly in a tense diplomatic hallway.

These are the “irrelevant trivialities” that feel relevant because they are personal.

The Science

Cognitive psychologists call this the “concreteness effect.” Concrete, sensory details are easier for the brain to encode and retrieve than abstract concepts. A story about “economic sanctions” can be dull, but a story about “the metallic clink of a coin dropping from a nervous hand as a sanction is announced” sticks.


2. Trivialities as Story‑Fuel: A Few Proven Examples

Trivial DetailWhat It RevealsWhy It Hooks
A broken pen on a diplomat’s deskThe diplomat’s hurried preparation, underlying anxietyReaders picture the scene; the pen becomes a symbol of vulnerability
The way a protester’s shoes squeak on wet pavementThe protester’s perseverance despite discomfortAuditory detail pulls readers into the moment
A toddler’s “why?” after hearing the newsThe generational ripple of political eventsHighlights stakes in a fresh, innocent voice
The smell of burnt toast in a kitchen where a secret meeting is plannedThe domestic normalcy juxtaposed with clandestine actionSmell is a powerful memory trigger; it grounds the plot
A half‑written text message left unsentThe character’s indecision, fear of consequencesCreates suspense without a single explosive headline

Takeaway: The tiny can carry the weight of the massive. Use them as micro‑hooks that pull the reader deeper into the macro plot.


3. When “Heroic Gestures” Turn Into Annoyance

Imagine a scene where the protagonist, after a tense negotiation, slams his fist on the table, chest out, voice echoing:

“We will not be bowed down! Our destiny is ours!”

It might feel satisfying on paper, but to a modern reader it can feel over‑the‑top for three reasons:

  1. It’s Show‑rather‑than‑Tell on Steroids
    The gesture tells us “this character is brave” without letting us experience the courage through choices, doubts, and consequences.
  2. It Undermines Relatability
    Real people don’t deliver speeches in Hollywood slow‑motion. They fidget, they bite their lip, they stumble over words. When a character behaves like a marble statue, readers can’t see themselves in them.
  3. It Drowns Out the Real Stakes
    The drama of the political storm is drowned in a melodramatic performance. The audience’s attention shifts from what’s happening to how loudly the hero is shouting.

The Better Way: Flawed, Measured, Human

Instead of a grandiose chest‑pound, try:

  • A quiet, nervous laugh after a risky decision.
  • A hand trembling as they sign a treaty, betraying fear.
  • A solitary walk through a rain‑slicked corridor, reflecting on the consequences of the day’s events.

These moments show bravery, fear, doubt, and resolve through action—they let the reader feel the hero rather than being told they’re a hero.


4. Practical Strategies for Writers

Below are actionable steps to let trivialities do the heavy lifting and keep heroic gestures in check.

A. Build a “Triviality Checklist” for Every Scene

Scene ElementTrivial Detail to AddSensory Cue
Political rallyA protester’s cracked phone screenVisual (shattered glass)
Diplomatic briefingThe faint hum of an air‑conditioning unitAuditory (steady whirr)
War‑room decisionA coffee mug with a chipped rimTactile (cold ceramic)
After‑effects of a treatyThe lingering scent of fresh‑cut grass from a nearby parkOlfactory (green, hopeful)
Personal falloutA child’s drawing pinned to a refrigeratorVisual (crayon lines)

Why? It forces you to pause and ask, “What little thing is happening here that could reveal something deeper?”

B. Replace One “Heroic Gesture” with a Micro‑Choice

  • Instead of: “He raised his sword and shouted.”
  • Write: “He slipped the sword back into its sheath, his hand shaking just enough to catch the edge of the blade.”

The choice is more telling than the gesture.

C. Use “Object‑Perspective” to Anchor Trivialities

Pick an object in the scene—say, a paperclip—and describe its interaction with characters. The paperclip might bend as a diplomat’s hand trembles, or get lost in a chaotic desk drawer, symbolising the fragile nature of negotiations.

D. Test for “Heroic Overkill”

After drafting, ask yourself:

  1. Does the scene convey the character’s inner state through subtle actions?
  2. Would the same emotional punch work if the hero were an ordinary person?
  3. Am I relying on a single, flamboyant gesture to summarise the moment?

If you answer yes to any, tone it down.


5. Real‑World Case Studies

5.1. The Night Manager (TV Adaptation)

The series revolves around an international arms deal—high stakes, global politics. Yet the most gripping moments are tiny: a bartender polishing glasses while listening to a covert conversation, the rustle of a ticket stub that reveals an undercover operative’s identity. The “hero” is never a chest‑pounding soldier but a weary coffee‑shop clerk whose nervous glance does the storytelling.

5.2. The White Tiger (Aravind Adiga)

While the novel touches on India’s class struggle and economic upheaval, the reader’s hook is Balram’s observation of a cracked tile in his master’s bathroom. That mundane detail becomes a metaphor for the fissures in the social order. No grand speeches—just the felt reality of a cracked surface.

5.3. The Secret History (Donna Tartt)

A murder in an elite college becomes the focal point. The “heroic” act is a quiet, trembling hand placing a book back on a shelf; the trivial act of adjusting a cufflink reveals guilt. The story’s power lies in the micro-behaviours, not the headline‑making crime.


6. Frequently Asked Questions

QuestionShort Answer
Can I still have a “heroic” moment?Yes—just make it earned and subtle. A quiet decision that reflects growth is more powerful than a shouted declaration.
What if my story is a thriller?Even thrillers need texture. A sniper’s routine of sharpening a blade, the sound of a ticking clock, the taste of stale coffee—these ground the adrenaline.
Is there a risk of “over‑trivializing” the plot?Balance is key. Trivial details should serve the larger narrative, not distract. Use them as sprinkles, not the entire cake.
How many trivial details per chapter?No hard rule. One or two well‑chosen details per scene can be enough. If you find yourself listing six unrelated facts, trim.
Do readers notice these tiny details consciously?Often they don’t notice consciously, but the brain registers them, making the world feel real and immersive.

7. The Bottom Line

The next time you sit down to write a chapter set against the roar of political upheaval, pause. Look around the room where your characters live, work, and argue. What’s the coffee stain on the ledger, the leak from the ceiling, the whisper of a child’s lullaby? Write those. Let the storm be felt through the drip.

And when you feel the urge to have your protagonist chest‑pound and deliver a cinematic monologue, ask yourself: Will my readers remember the speech or the trembling hand that penned the treaty? If the answer leans toward the former, scale it back.

Great stories are built on the foundation of the ordinary; it’s the extraordinary that rises from it.


Quick Recap Checklist

  • ✅ Identify one trivial detail for each major scene.
  • ✅ Show character emotion through small actions, not grand gestures.
  • ✅ Replace at least one “heroic” moment with a subtle, authentic choice.
  • ✅ Read aloud to catch overly dramatic language.
  • ✅ Solicit feedback: Ask beta readers what they felt rather than what they heard.

Implement these, and you’ll find your readers hooked not by the headlines of world affairs, but by the heartbeat of the everyday lives that swirl around them.


Happy writing!

If you found this post useful, subscribe for more storytelling strategies, or drop a comment below about the most memorable trivial detail you’ve ever written.


References & Further Reading:

  • Daniel Kahneman, Thinking, Fast and Slow – Concreteness Effect.
  • Ellen G. White, The Art of Narrative – The Power of Small Details.
  • John Truby, The Anatomy of Story – Character as the Engine.

A to Z – April – 2026 – E

E is for Empire State Building

Making a plan, having certain expectations, taking that leap of faith that all of us are destined to do at least once, I found myself standing at the top of the Empire State Building, on the last day of the twelfth month, exactly five years after making a promise in exactly the same place, I would be there.

There was a 3 pm in there, but that was flexible, because I always liked to be early.

It had been after high school graduation, after the prom, every bit the magical moment it was meant to be, with the girl of my dreams, Margaret Cates.  We had spent those last years of high school together, studying hard, each helping the other achieve the grades needed to enter the best University.

There was no talk of romance, of a life together, or anything other than of being brought together, almost inseparable.  We were voted the most likely to be married and living contentedly in a house with a picket fence and three children.

Expectations were what parents had, and both of our parents were best friends, who simply chose to believe the inevitable would happen.  Graduation, a combined family trip to New York to see the sights, culminating in New Year’s Eve at the top of the Empire State Building.

That was where we made the promise, no matter what, we would reconvene, that was Margaret’s word, at the same time.  It was also the first time we kissed, and I think it took a week before my heart rate went back to normal.

Soon after that, Margaret left.  She had been accepted into her university of choice.  Her parents were surprised, and my parents were in shock. 

I was not.  It was the plan.  Margaret had a plan for everything. There was no plan with me in it.  Not in those first five years.  I was sad but not devastated.

I said to my parents, if we were meant to be, she would come back.  I had to set her free.

My plan was there was no plan.  I got the grades, and I got accepted into my University of choice.

At the end of the second year, I was in a what could only be described as a car crash, and was badly injured, to the extent that I had to put my life on hold.

I would recover, not one hundred per cent but enough to continue whatever path I’d chosen, but with some limitations.  The doctor was upbeat, and my parents were upbeat.

I went home, not quite in the manner I’d intended.  I was assured that life was like that, and I had to accept, accident or no accident, life was full of unexpected challenges.

Summer Atkins was probably the most irritating, aggravating, and ingratiating person on the planet.

She lived next door, one of five girls, the eldest, and coincidentally in my grade at high school.  In fact, she was in all the grades from Elementary.

She was gawky, awkward, loud and clumsy.  It was not her fault.  She had a kind heart, always the first to volunteer for the worst jobs, and suffered a lot at the hands of the boys and the girls, too.

I was not pleased to say when I looked back at my time that I was one of them, and probably the only one who apologised after the prom for what had been, at times, unforgivable.  The prank for the prom was probably her lowest point.

It took a week before she would come out of her room, and I came over every day to join the few who actually cared about her.  After Margaret left and before I followed, we spent time together, where she asked me what she needed to do to just get to talk to a guy like me.

I thought it strange.  She was talking to me, I was talking to her, we had coffee and cake at the diner and hung out.  She had no aspirations to go to college, just to help her parents look after her siblings and work in the diner.  I had suggested she might want to do something for herself, and she looked at me strangely.  I did not, she said, understand her.

We parted awkwardly, with this thing I had done, but what it was, I had no idea.  It ended when she told me that if I was waiting for Margaret, I would be waiting a long time.  How did she know anything about what my expectations were?

I came back home under the radar.  I didn’t want anyone to know because I had set myself a high bar, and I was never going to reach it.

I felt that I had become a disappointment to my parents, and while they put on a brave face, and my siblings were polite, it was clear that they were happy for me to hide away, and my siblings were happy to see the high flyer crash and burn.  Kid would be kids, I expected no less.

So when Summer unexpectedly knocked on the door, a certain element of panic went through the house.  Upstairs, I heard that voice drift up the stairs with mixed emotions.  I wanted to see her, but I didn’t want to see her.

Not like this.  It was an odd feeling, and I couldn’t understand what fuelled it.  It was Summer, she wouldn’t care, more likely revel in the fact.  How the mighty had fallen.

My mother answered the door.

“Mrs Abercrombie, you look tired?”  The grating tone had gone, her voice had softened, and there was genuine concern in it.

“It’s…”

She caught herself before mentioning my name.  It had been a secret for about a month.  I was surprised Summer had not called earlier.

My mother shifted the topic.  She was good at that.  “How is your father?  That latest bout of chemotherapy cannot be helping the diner.”

“He’s responding to the treatment, and we’re managing.  How are you faring without Allen?  I’m sorry I should have come over more often.”

“It’s fine.  We’re all coping with life as best we can.”

“How is Allen, if I may ask?”

That was Summer.  Gets the bit between her teeth and doesn’t let go.

My mother was not one to lie.  Obfuscate but not lie.  Not outright.  But confronted…

“Something’s wrong,” she said in a hushed voice, so low I couldn’t barely hear her.  I could virtually see my mother’s face.  It had always been expressive.  It’s why she could never play poker.

It went quiet for a minute or two, and I knew it was time to brace myself.  Summer was the last person I wanted to see, perhaps the only one other than Margaret, not that I expected her to drop everything.

Again, I couldn’t explain why, other than showing vulnerability. 

A few minutes passed while I was hoping my mother would explain that I didn’t want to see anyone, that I wanted to be better before facing the outside world.  Whether Summer would accede to a request if leaving me alone was moot.

If she knew I was there, she would not hesitate to come up and remind me of the Allen of old, with the shoe now firmly on the other foot.

I tried hiding under the covers, but she had X-ray eyes.  I knew she was in the room; I could feel her presence.  And the scent she used was a hint of primrose.  Once it was far stronger, but I suspect she had mastered the art of cosmetic use.

“You will suffocate long before I leave, Allen.  I’m not the same girl you left behind.  I don’t hate you.  I did for a while, but then I realised you cared when all the rest didn’t.  I’m sorry we parted angry.”

She sounded reasonable, far more reasonable than I expected.  She should have still been angry, if not with me, but with the others.

“OK.  If you don’t come out, I’ll get in there with you.  You know me well enough to know I will.”

Did I know her well enough?  I never took the opportunity.  No one wanted to because she didn’t fit the other girls’ profile.  It wasn’t like that at University, there it was simply a competition.  There was dating, but it was more convenient than romance.  There were not many hours left in a day for extracurricular activities.

When I peeled back the covers, it was like seeing an angel, the sun shining in the window, throwing a glow over her.  Summer had changed from the awkward, ugly duckling into a graceful Swan.

A look of concern crossed her face.  Just lifting the covers was a difficult task, like most normal movements we all took for granted.  It was getting easier and less painful, but it would take time.

“What happened to you?”

“A car and I had a disagreement.  It won.”

“And you didn’t think to tell me.  How long have you been here?  What do you need? Tell me, and I’ll make it happen.”

Summer basically glued me back together.  It was, she said, one of her projects, others minding the children of silly sisters, nursing her farther past cancer, keeping up her waitress job at the diner, and just being Summer, the girl who always pitched in.

Such was the value of her help that my mother said I should marry her before someone else snapped her up.  Just before I was to go back to University, I did just that, but she rejected me.

There was someone else, and he was going to propose any day.

I could respect that.  Whatever I thought she might think of me, I would forever be one of those boys who made her life hell.  I didn’t deserve someone like her.  I just got on the train and left.

But the truth was, I was never the same again.

How could I?

I had tried to tell Margaret, but the terms of the pact were clear.  5 years, do your thing, meet and discuss.  If feelings were the same, who knew what might happen?

I was disappointed I hadn’t been able to find her, but I had a story to tell.

A year after returning, I gave it up.  I didn’t have the same enthusiasm, and feeling like a failure, I didn’t go home.  I simply pretended everything was fine and moved to New York and found work in a rather offbeat bookshop in Queens.

It fuelled my love of literature, and after reading anything and everything, I started writing my version of the Great American Novel.  Small-town boy makes it big in the big city.  A bit like my life, really.

Which brings us back to the Empire State Building.

3pm.

And Margaret.

I saw her and thought she was coming to the spot.  She looked different, older, smarter, and with a touch of elegance and sophistication.

Halfway, I saw her smile and then wrap her arms around this bear of a man whom I instantly recognised.  I mean, you would have to live under a rock not to know him.

Her parents were there, and a bunch of media people.  The oohs and ahhs told me it was the moment he went down on one knee; it was going to be a News At 6 moment.

I was but a distant memory, forgotten in her moment of agreeing to be Mrs Albert Johnstone Gerythorn III.

I guess the employee of an eclectic bookshop was hardly a match for a multi-billionaire, or one who was soon to be.

“Sucks to be you.”

It did.  That voice, the one that had grated on my nerves nearly all of my school years, came from behind me.

I knew who it was.  I didn’t turn around.

“I knew it was a mistake to tell you my innermost secrets.”

“Oh, I would not have missed this for the world.”

I felt her hand slip into mine and her body move closer. 

“Five years is a long time.  People change.”

“People like us change, Allen.  People like her do not.”

“I thought you were getting married?”

“So did I.  I guess we were both wrong.  Found that cute little bookshop of yours.  If I didn’t know you better, I’d be guessing you’ve started that great American novel.  Am I right or am I right?”

“You know me too well.  You want to stay, or shall we find another circus, something a little more our style?”

“Do we have one?”

“Of course.  Everyone has style.”

Then I noticed Margaret was coming towards us, a rather serious expression on her face.  Had she finally recognised me?

“Excuse me, but the photographers would like to get some photos of my fiancée and me by this corner.  It would be most appreciated.”

No.  No sign of recognition.

Summer instead smiled sweetly, ” Of course, Margery Mugmouth, the pleasure would be all ours.”

It was Margaret’s nickname among those girls she trashed, and she instantly recognised Summer, and then me.

“Five years, to the day.  You came.  Have a happy life, Margaret.”

With that, we left.

A reporter, or just someone with a notepad, was scribbling frantically and then tried to head us off at the elevator.  Just too late.  The doors closed.

“The nerve,” Summer said.  “That was our corner.  Or I hope it will be.”

“So did I.  Would you like to marry me?” I asked.

The elevator went silent, except for the whishing sound of it going down.

“She made a face, quite amusing, and then said, “Yes.”

People outside the elevator when it arrived thought something bad had happened, given the roar and applause which followed us out into the foyer after it arrived.

Five years, on the last day of the last month at 3 pm, something did happen.  I proposed to the girl of my dreams.  I just hadn’t realised it until then.

©  Charles Heath  2026

365 Days of writing, 2026 – 79

Day 79 – Irrelevant trivialities

Why the Small Stuff Beats the Big Stuff: What Really Hooks Readers (And Why Over‑The‑Top Heroes Can Turn Them Off)


  • Readers remember the everyday, not the epic. A scene about a coffee‑spilled meeting can out‑shine a chapter on a geopolitical summit.
  • Tiny, relatable details act as emotional anchors that keep the audience glued to the page.
  • “Chest‑pounding, wildly gesticulating heroes” feel like propaganda, not people. Readers want flawed, grounded protagonists, not cartoon‑ish mascots.
  • Writing tip: Sprinkle specific, sensory “trivialities” throughout your narrative and let your characters react authentically.

1. The Myth of the “Grand Event”

When you think of a story set against the backdrop of political turbulence—a coup, a trade war, climate‑policy battles—you might assume the macro events are the magnetic core. After all, they’re the headlines.

But ask yourself:

  • Do readers remember the exact date a treaty was signed?
  • Do they recite the exact number of votes in a parliament?

Rarely. What stays is the human fallout of those events: the cramped office where a junior analyst slips a secret note under a coffee mug, the nervous laugh of a teenager watching a televised protest, the sound of a door that refuses to close properly in a tense diplomatic hallway.

These are the “irrelevant trivialities” that feel relevant because they are personal.

The Science

Cognitive psychologists call this the “concreteness effect.” Concrete, sensory details are easier for the brain to encode and retrieve than abstract concepts. A story about “economic sanctions” can be dull, but a story about “the metallic clink of a coin dropping from a nervous hand as a sanction is announced” sticks.


2. Trivialities as Story‑Fuel: A Few Proven Examples

Trivial DetailWhat It RevealsWhy It Hooks
A broken pen on a diplomat’s deskThe diplomat’s hurried preparation, underlying anxietyReaders picture the scene; the pen becomes a symbol of vulnerability
The way a protester’s shoes squeak on wet pavementThe protester’s perseverance despite discomfortAuditory detail pulls readers into the moment
A toddler’s “why?” after hearing the newsThe generational ripple of political eventsHighlights stakes in a fresh, innocent voice
The smell of burnt toast in a kitchen where a secret meeting is plannedThe domestic normalcy juxtaposed with clandestine actionSmell is a powerful memory trigger; it grounds the plot
A half‑written text message left unsentThe character’s indecision, fear of consequencesCreates suspense without a single explosive headline

Takeaway: The tiny can carry the weight of the massive. Use them as micro‑hooks that pull the reader deeper into the macro plot.


3. When “Heroic Gestures” Turn Into Annoyance

Imagine a scene where the protagonist, after a tense negotiation, slams his fist on the table, chest out, voice echoing:

“We will not be bowed down! Our destiny is ours!”

It might feel satisfying on paper, but to a modern reader it can feel over‑the‑top for three reasons:

  1. It’s Show‑rather‑than‑Tell on Steroids
    The gesture tells us “this character is brave” without letting us experience the courage through choices, doubts, and consequences.
  2. It Undermines Relatability
    Real people don’t deliver speeches in Hollywood slow‑motion. They fidget, they bite their lip, they stumble over words. When a character behaves like a marble statue, readers can’t see themselves in them.
  3. It Drowns Out the Real Stakes
    The drama of the political storm is drowned in a melodramatic performance. The audience’s attention shifts from what’s happening to how loudly the hero is shouting.

The Better Way: Flawed, Measured, Human

Instead of a grandiose chest‑pound, try:

  • A quiet, nervous laugh after a risky decision.
  • A hand trembling as they sign a treaty, betraying fear.
  • A solitary walk through a rain‑slicked corridor, reflecting on the consequences of the day’s events.

These moments show bravery, fear, doubt, and resolve through action—they let the reader feel the hero rather than being told they’re a hero.


4. Practical Strategies for Writers

Below are actionable steps to let trivialities do the heavy lifting and keep heroic gestures in check.

A. Build a “Triviality Checklist” for Every Scene

Scene ElementTrivial Detail to AddSensory Cue
Political rallyA protester’s cracked phone screenVisual (shattered glass)
Diplomatic briefingThe faint hum of an air‑conditioning unitAuditory (steady whirr)
War‑room decisionA coffee mug with a chipped rimTactile (cold ceramic)
After‑effects of a treatyThe lingering scent of fresh‑cut grass from a nearby parkOlfactory (green, hopeful)
Personal falloutA child’s drawing pinned to a refrigeratorVisual (crayon lines)

Why? It forces you to pause and ask, “What little thing is happening here that could reveal something deeper?”

B. Replace One “Heroic Gesture” with a Micro‑Choice

  • Instead of: “He raised his sword and shouted.”
  • Write: “He slipped the sword back into its sheath, his hand shaking just enough to catch the edge of the blade.”

The choice is more telling than the gesture.

C. Use “Object‑Perspective” to Anchor Trivialities

Pick an object in the scene—say, a paperclip—and describe its interaction with characters. The paperclip might bend as a diplomat’s hand trembles, or get lost in a chaotic desk drawer, symbolising the fragile nature of negotiations.

D. Test for “Heroic Overkill”

After drafting, ask yourself:

  1. Does the scene convey the character’s inner state through subtle actions?
  2. Would the same emotional punch work if the hero were an ordinary person?
  3. Am I relying on a single, flamboyant gesture to summarise the moment?

If you answer yes to any, tone it down.


5. Real‑World Case Studies

5.1. The Night Manager (TV Adaptation)

The series revolves around an international arms deal—high stakes, global politics. Yet the most gripping moments are tiny: a bartender polishing glasses while listening to a covert conversation, the rustle of a ticket stub that reveals an undercover operative’s identity. The “hero” is never a chest‑pounding soldier but a weary coffee‑shop clerk whose nervous glance does the storytelling.

5.2. The White Tiger (Aravind Adiga)

While the novel touches on India’s class struggle and economic upheaval, the reader’s hook is Balram’s observation of a cracked tile in his master’s bathroom. That mundane detail becomes a metaphor for the fissures in the social order. No grand speeches—just the felt reality of a cracked surface.

5.3. The Secret History (Donna Tartt)

A murder in an elite college becomes the focal point. The “heroic” act is a quiet, trembling hand placing a book back on a shelf; the trivial act of adjusting a cufflink reveals guilt. The story’s power lies in the micro-behaviours, not the headline‑making crime.


6. Frequently Asked Questions

QuestionShort Answer
Can I still have a “heroic” moment?Yes—just make it earned and subtle. A quiet decision that reflects growth is more powerful than a shouted declaration.
What if my story is a thriller?Even thrillers need texture. A sniper’s routine of sharpening a blade, the sound of a ticking clock, the taste of stale coffee—these ground the adrenaline.
Is there a risk of “over‑trivializing” the plot?Balance is key. Trivial details should serve the larger narrative, not distract. Use them as sprinkles, not the entire cake.
How many trivial details per chapter?No hard rule. One or two well‑chosen details per scene can be enough. If you find yourself listing six unrelated facts, trim.
Do readers notice these tiny details consciously?Often they don’t notice consciously, but the brain registers them, making the world feel real and immersive.

7. The Bottom Line

The next time you sit down to write a chapter set against the roar of political upheaval, pause. Look around the room where your characters live, work, and argue. What’s the coffee stain on the ledger, the leak from the ceiling, the whisper of a child’s lullaby? Write those. Let the storm be felt through the drip.

And when you feel the urge to have your protagonist chest‑pound and deliver a cinematic monologue, ask yourself: Will my readers remember the speech or the trembling hand that penned the treaty? If the answer leans toward the former, scale it back.

Great stories are built on the foundation of the ordinary; it’s the extraordinary that rises from it.


Quick Recap Checklist

  • ✅ Identify one trivial detail for each major scene.
  • ✅ Show character emotion through small actions, not grand gestures.
  • ✅ Replace at least one “heroic” moment with a subtle, authentic choice.
  • ✅ Read aloud to catch overly dramatic language.
  • ✅ Solicit feedback: Ask beta readers what they felt rather than what they heard.

Implement these, and you’ll find your readers hooked not by the headlines of world affairs, but by the heartbeat of the everyday lives that swirl around them.


Happy writing!

If you found this post useful, subscribe for more storytelling strategies, or drop a comment below about the most memorable trivial detail you’ve ever written.


References & Further Reading:

  • Daniel Kahneman, Thinking, Fast and Slow – Concreteness Effect.
  • Ellen G. White, The Art of Narrative – The Power of Small Details.
  • John Truby, The Anatomy of Story – Character as the Engine.

NaNoWriMo – April – 2026 – Day 6

The Maple Leafs are playing, and so I thought I would juggle watching them play and work on my NaNoWriMo project at the same time.

It seemed like a good way to get in 3 hours of work and a little entertainment on the side.

But…

First period down, and the Maple Leafs are 2 goals down.

What I first thought was going to be easy is now becoming mission impossible.

After the second Philadelphia goal, Chester, my stalwart anti-everything cat, comes down to see what the commotion is.  By that I mean, almost yelling at the TV screen.

A lot of good that’s going to do when they’re 12,000 miles away on the other side of the world.

And by the look on Chester’s face, I think he thinks it’s a waste of time too.  Or maybe that’s his usual, I don’t give a $%^^%$ expression he has most of the time.

We have the Philadelphia feed, so we’re getting the joy from the intermission analysts at their team’s lead, but it does take me back to Philadelphia when we were there a few years back, when America was worth visiting, when they cut to shots of the city.

And, of course, instead of having my eyes on the story, I’m now thinking of a subplot, yes, you guessed it, in Philadelphia, which is not very far from New York, where the main action takes place.

Then…

We score.  It’s now a more respectable scoreline, but Anderson has his work cut out for him, and I’m thinking of turning off the sound because I don’t want to hear any more praise for their young stars.

The story proceeds, taking out the outline pages and looking to see where it can fit in.  Yes, I see a gap where I can fit in an interlude and scribble a few notes.

End of the second period.  Still 2 goals to 1 down.

Start of the third period.  Chester decided to jump up on the table and, seeing the pencil sitting there, started to push it around with his paw. I snatch it away, and he gives me a chastising swipe.

Blast him, while my attention was diverted, we score again, and I missed it.  Thank heavens for the replay.  Over and over.

I finish the notes for the interlude, and the game ends in a draw.  We now move to overtime.

I get the first few lines of the chapter I began working on at the start of the game, and just as the words are flowing, overtime ends with no score, and we go into a shootout.  And before you know it, the game’s over, and we’ve lost.

I swear, Chester is smirking, so I pick him up and put him on the floor with a very stern admonishment.

No, I’m not taking the loss badly, but there are a few bad guys about to die horribly.

NaNoWriMo – April – 2026 – Day 5

Although the main reason for its existence is to follow Friday, in some cases, it is the first day of the weekend.

Once upon a time, Saturday used to be a working day, you know, those days when we worked a 48-hour week.  Then it became a 44-hour week, and we only worked in the morning.

As time progressed, we started working 40 hour weeks and had both Saturday and Sunday off.  Sunday, of course, was always a non-starter.  The church made sure you were able to go to church on Sunday.

As time progressed, weekends started to begin on a Friday, with the day in question being granted by employers as a Rostered Day Off, provided you made up the time during the preceding two-week period.

Now it seems the standing joke is we should work weekends and have the week off.  Odd, it hasn’t quite caught on yet.

But, as usual, I digress…

After a week that got out of control, Saturday was supposed to pull it back into some sort of shape.  In a sense, it happened.  I looked at that list of things I had to do, picked one and got on with it.

PI Walthenson is now about to get a second case, as intimated at the end of his first, involving not only the search for his missing father, but also the search for those who kidnapped him.

That done, I moved onto the helicopter story, otherwise titled ‘What happens after writing an action-packed start’, and I have been researching and making notes for the third section of this story, starting at episode 31, and it looks like we’re going back to Africa, and the remoter part of the Democratic Republic of Congo to rescue the two agents he failed to the first time.

And it is NaNoWriMo time, and I have to keep the writing project going, a story that has now been tentatively renamed to Betrayal. Very spy-ish, isn’t it?

With that, there is the upkeep of the blog.  I never thought maintaining material for a blog would be so hard.

But…

Now I can say last week wasn’t a total disaster.

And, tomorrow the Maple Leafs are playing.  Can’t wait.

365 Days of writing, 2026 – 78

Day 78 – Writers are outlaws

“I Became a Writer Because Writers Were Outlaws.”

Why the Rebel‑Heart Still Drives Literature – and Why It Matters Today

“I became a writer because writers were outlaws.” – Paul Theroux

When Paul Theroux drops this line in an interview, it feels like a secret handshake among anyone who has ever felt more at home in the margins than in the mainstream. It’s a declaration of allegiance to a lineage of “outlaw” writers—people who have deliberately stepped outside the accepted rules of language, politics, and morality to expose hidden truths, provoke discomfort, and, above all, keep the imagination untamed.

In this post, we’ll unpack what Theroux meant, trace the outlaw tradition from ancient epics to the digital age, and ask: Why does the rebel spirit of the writer still matter in a world that seems both more censored and more free than ever before?


1. The Outlaw Archetype: From Homer to the Underground Press

Era“Outlaw” WriterWhat Made Them a Rebel
Ancient GreeceHomer (if we accept the legendary status)Oral poets who travelled, challenging the city‑state’s rigid mythic canon.
RenaissanceGiordano Brunelleschi’s “Il Principe” (although a political treatise, it was a seditious “how‑to” for power)Directly confronted the Church’s monopoly on moral authority.
19th c.Charles Dickens (early serials)Exposed the underbelly of industrial London while keeping a popular voice.
Early 20th c.James Joyce – UlyssesBanned in the U.S. for “obscenity,” he turned narrative form itself into a crime.
Mid‑20c.Jack Kerouac – On the RoadCelebrated a nomadic, drug‑tinged lifestyle that “damaged” the post‑war American ideal.
Late‑c.Mikhail Bulgakov – The Master & MargaritaWrote magical realism under Stalin’s watchful eye; the manuscript survived only because he hid it.
1990s‑2000sWilliam S. Burroughs – Naked LunchBanned, confiscated, and deemed “pornographic”; he embraced the “read‑it‑if‑you‑dare” culture.
Digital AgeAnonymous/Online Activist Writers (e.g., WikiLeaks, whistle‑blowers)Disseminate classified information, turning the act of publishing into a legal risk.

The pattern is clear: outlaw writers are those who refuse to let the powers that be dictate what stories can be told, how they can be told, or who is allowed to hear them. They often operate at the intersection of art and activism, using narrative as a weapon.


2. Why Did Theroux Call Writers Outlaws?

Theroux’s own career is a perfect case study:

  1. Travel as Subversion – He turned the travel memoir into a critique of colonialism, capitalism, and tourism. The Great Railway Bazaar (1975) does not simply catalogue stations; it reveals the hidden economies of displacement and the veneer of “exotic” hospitality.
  2. Political Confrontation – In The Old Patagonian Express and later works, Theroux went into places under authoritarian regimes (Chile under Pinochet, Soviet‑occupied Afghanistan) and wrote about what the local press dared not say.
  3. Narrative Style – He stripped away the sentimental travelogue, opting for a dry, observational prose that makes the reader feel the unease of being a foreigner. That “detached” voice is a form of rebellion against the romanticised wanderer myth.

When Theroux says, “I became a writer because writers were outlaws,” he’s acknowledging that the act of choosing the writer’s path is itself an act of rebellion—a deliberate sidestepping of conventional careers, societal expectations, and, often, personal safety.


3. The Mechanics of Literary Outlawry

What actually makes a writer an outlaw? It isn’t merely the content, but the method and the consequence.

ElementHow It Turns a Writer Into an Outlaw
Form‑BreakingExperimental structures (stream‑of‑consciousness, non‑linear narratives) that disregard “commercial” readability.
Forbidden TopicsSex, drug use, political dissent, religion—subjects censored by governments or cultural gatekeepers.
Subversive LanguageSlang, profanity, or invented dialects that erode the hegemony of “standard” language.
Risk of ReprisalArrest, exile, bans, or even death. The stakes give the work a visceral urgency.
Community BuildingUnderground presses, samizdat, zines, and now encrypted digital platforms that bypass mainstream distribution.

These mechanisms overlap. James Joyce’s Ulysses combined form‑breaking (the famous “stream of consciousness”) with taboo topics (sexuality, bodily functions). The novel’s ban in the United States turned it into a literal criminal case (the 1933 United States v. One Book Called Ulysses trial). The legal battle itself amplified the book’s status as a cultural outlaw.


4. Outlaw Writers in the Digital Era: New Frontiers, Same Spirit

You might think the internet has democratized publishing, erasing the “outlaw” label. Yet digital platforms have spawned a fresh breed of literary rebels:

  • Encrypted Journals – Writers in authoritarian states now post on Tor sites, using code words and self‑censorship to dodge surveillance.
  • Crowd‑Funded Zines – Platforms like Kickstarter let dissident poets launch limited‑run anthologies without a publisher’s gatekeeping.
  • AI‑Generated Satire – Projects that manipulate deep‑fake text to satirise political figures—legal grey areas that test the limits of free speech.
  • Social‑Media Manifestos – Threads that blur the line between short‑form poetry and protest; a 280‑character haiku can trigger a wave of real‑world action.

The outlaw’s toolbox has simply been upgraded. The risk—whether state censorship, doxxing, or platform bans—remains the same, but the reach is now global. A single tweet can ignite a movement in three continents the same way a pamphlet did in 1917.


5. Why We Still Need Literary Outlaws

  1. Guardians of the Uncomfortable Truth
    History remembers the outlaw for exposing what the majority prefers to ignore. From The Gulag Archipelago (Solzhenitsyn) to the modern whistle‑blower blogs, these works force societies to confront systemic violence.
  2. Catalysts for Language Evolution
    When writers defy linguistic norms, they expand the expressive capacity of language itself. Think of how Ulysses introduced new verb forms that later entered everyday English.
  3. Counter‑Power to Market Homogenization
    The publishing industry, driven by profit, often pushes formulaic best‑sellers. Outlaw writers serve as antidotes, reminding us that art can be messy, ambiguous, and even unprofitable.
  4. Inspiration for Civic Engagement
    A reader who discovers that a novelist risked imprisonment for a paragraph about police brutality is more likely to question authority and perhaps join a protest.

6. The Moral Ambiguity of “Outlaw” Status

Being an outlaw is not automatically virtuous. Some writers have used the rebel label to glorify violence, propagate hate, or romanticise criminality (e.g., extremist propaganda disguised as “literature”). The modern reader must therefore ask:

Who decides which outlaw narrative serves the public good?

The answer, paradoxically, often comes from collective critical discourse—reviews, academic analysis, and, increasingly, community moderation on digital platforms. The outlaw’s power lies not just in the act of publishing, but in the dialogue that follows.


7. How to Channel Your Inner Literary Outlaw

If Theroux’s quote resonates, you might be wondering how to embrace the outlaw spirit without getting locked up (unless you’re a spy novelist—then, go ahead). Here are practical steps:

  1. Read Widely, Then Dig Deeper – Study classic outlaw writers. Note the techniques they used to circumvent censorship.
  2. Experiment with Form – Try a story told entirely through footnotes, or a poem that uses only emojis.
  3. Choose a Taboo Topic – Write about something you suspect your family or workplace avoids discussing.
  4. Publish Outside the Box – Submit to literary journals that focus on experimental or political work, or use a self‑publishing platform with a Creative Commons license.
  5. Build a Community – Join or start a writing circle that values risk‑taking. Online forums like r/experimentalwriting can be a good incubator.
  6. Accept Consequences – Be prepared for criticism, rejection, or even legal pushback. The outlaw’s path is rarely comfortable.

8. Closing Thoughts: The Outlaw as a Mirror

Paul Theroux’s simple confession—“I became a writer because writers were outlaws”—does more than romanticise rebellion. It positions the writer as a mirror that reflects society’s cracks, a torch that lights hidden corridors, and a weapon that can dismantle oppressive narratives.

In a time when algorithms decide what we read, when governments label “fake news” as a crime, and when the very act of questioning can trigger deplatforming, the outlaw writer becomes even more essential. Not every writer will go to jail, but every writer can choose a moment to step outside the comfortable script, to ask the question that “outlaws” have always asked:

“What if we told a different story?”

If that question makes you a little uneasy, you might just be on the right track. And that, dear reader, is the true legacy of the literary outlaw.

If you enjoyed this exploration, let me know in the comments which outlaw writer has most inspired you, and feel free to share your own “outlaw” experiment. The rebellion, after all, thrives on conversation.

365 Days of writing, 2026 – 78

Day 78 – Writers are outlaws

“I Became a Writer Because Writers Were Outlaws.”

Why the Rebel‑Heart Still Drives Literature – and Why It Matters Today

“I became a writer because writers were outlaws.” – Paul Theroux

When Paul Theroux drops this line in an interview, it feels like a secret handshake among anyone who has ever felt more at home in the margins than in the mainstream. It’s a declaration of allegiance to a lineage of “outlaw” writers—people who have deliberately stepped outside the accepted rules of language, politics, and morality to expose hidden truths, provoke discomfort, and, above all, keep the imagination untamed.

In this post, we’ll unpack what Theroux meant, trace the outlaw tradition from ancient epics to the digital age, and ask: Why does the rebel spirit of the writer still matter in a world that seems both more censored and more free than ever before?


1. The Outlaw Archetype: From Homer to the Underground Press

Era“Outlaw” WriterWhat Made Them a Rebel
Ancient GreeceHomer (if we accept the legendary status)Oral poets who travelled, challenging the city‑state’s rigid mythic canon.
RenaissanceGiordano Brunelleschi’s “Il Principe” (although a political treatise, it was a seditious “how‑to” for power)Directly confronted the Church’s monopoly on moral authority.
19th c.Charles Dickens (early serials)Exposed the underbelly of industrial London while keeping a popular voice.
Early 20th c.James Joyce – UlyssesBanned in the U.S. for “obscenity,” he turned narrative form itself into a crime.
Mid‑20c.Jack Kerouac – On the RoadCelebrated a nomadic, drug‑tinged lifestyle that “damaged” the post‑war American ideal.
Late‑c.Mikhail Bulgakov – The Master & MargaritaWrote magical realism under Stalin’s watchful eye; the manuscript survived only because he hid it.
1990s‑2000sWilliam S. Burroughs – Naked LunchBanned, confiscated, and deemed “pornographic”; he embraced the “read‑it‑if‑you‑dare” culture.
Digital AgeAnonymous/Online Activist Writers (e.g., WikiLeaks, whistle‑blowers)Disseminate classified information, turning the act of publishing into a legal risk.

The pattern is clear: outlaw writers are those who refuse to let the powers that be dictate what stories can be told, how they can be told, or who is allowed to hear them. They often operate at the intersection of art and activism, using narrative as a weapon.


2. Why Did Theroux Call Writers Outlaws?

Theroux’s own career is a perfect case study:

  1. Travel as Subversion – He turned the travel memoir into a critique of colonialism, capitalism, and tourism. The Great Railway Bazaar (1975) does not simply catalogue stations; it reveals the hidden economies of displacement and the veneer of “exotic” hospitality.
  2. Political Confrontation – In The Old Patagonian Express and later works, Theroux went into places under authoritarian regimes (Chile under Pinochet, Soviet‑occupied Afghanistan) and wrote about what the local press dared not say.
  3. Narrative Style – He stripped away the sentimental travelogue, opting for a dry, observational prose that makes the reader feel the unease of being a foreigner. That “detached” voice is a form of rebellion against the romanticised wanderer myth.

When Theroux says, “I became a writer because writers were outlaws,” he’s acknowledging that the act of choosing the writer’s path is itself an act of rebellion—a deliberate sidestepping of conventional careers, societal expectations, and, often, personal safety.


3. The Mechanics of Literary Outlawry

What actually makes a writer an outlaw? It isn’t merely the content, but the method and the consequence.

ElementHow It Turns a Writer Into an Outlaw
Form‑BreakingExperimental structures (stream‑of‑consciousness, non‑linear narratives) that disregard “commercial” readability.
Forbidden TopicsSex, drug use, political dissent, religion—subjects censored by governments or cultural gatekeepers.
Subversive LanguageSlang, profanity, or invented dialects that erode the hegemony of “standard” language.
Risk of ReprisalArrest, exile, bans, or even death. The stakes give the work a visceral urgency.
Community BuildingUnderground presses, samizdat, zines, and now encrypted digital platforms that bypass mainstream distribution.

These mechanisms overlap. James Joyce’s Ulysses combined form‑breaking (the famous “stream of consciousness”) with taboo topics (sexuality, bodily functions). The novel’s ban in the United States turned it into a literal criminal case (the 1933 United States v. One Book Called Ulysses trial). The legal battle itself amplified the book’s status as a cultural outlaw.


4. Outlaw Writers in the Digital Era: New Frontiers, Same Spirit

You might think the internet has democratized publishing, erasing the “outlaw” label. Yet digital platforms have spawned a fresh breed of literary rebels:

  • Encrypted Journals – Writers in authoritarian states now post on Tor sites, using code words and self‑censorship to dodge surveillance.
  • Crowd‑Funded Zines – Platforms like Kickstarter let dissident poets launch limited‑run anthologies without a publisher’s gatekeeping.
  • AI‑Generated Satire – Projects that manipulate deep‑fake text to satirise political figures—legal grey areas that test the limits of free speech.
  • Social‑Media Manifestos – Threads that blur the line between short‑form poetry and protest; a 280‑character haiku can trigger a wave of real‑world action.

The outlaw’s toolbox has simply been upgraded. The risk—whether state censorship, doxxing, or platform bans—remains the same, but the reach is now global. A single tweet can ignite a movement in three continents the same way a pamphlet did in 1917.


5. Why We Still Need Literary Outlaws

  1. Guardians of the Uncomfortable Truth
    History remembers the outlaw for exposing what the majority prefers to ignore. From The Gulag Archipelago (Solzhenitsyn) to the modern whistle‑blower blogs, these works force societies to confront systemic violence.
  2. Catalysts for Language Evolution
    When writers defy linguistic norms, they expand the expressive capacity of language itself. Think of how Ulysses introduced new verb forms that later entered everyday English.
  3. Counter‑Power to Market Homogenization
    The publishing industry, driven by profit, often pushes formulaic best‑sellers. Outlaw writers serve as antidotes, reminding us that art can be messy, ambiguous, and even unprofitable.
  4. Inspiration for Civic Engagement
    A reader who discovers that a novelist risked imprisonment for a paragraph about police brutality is more likely to question authority and perhaps join a protest.

6. The Moral Ambiguity of “Outlaw” Status

Being an outlaw is not automatically virtuous. Some writers have used the rebel label to glorify violence, propagate hate, or romanticise criminality (e.g., extremist propaganda disguised as “literature”). The modern reader must therefore ask:

Who decides which outlaw narrative serves the public good?

The answer, paradoxically, often comes from collective critical discourse—reviews, academic analysis, and, increasingly, community moderation on digital platforms. The outlaw’s power lies not just in the act of publishing, but in the dialogue that follows.


7. How to Channel Your Inner Literary Outlaw

If Theroux’s quote resonates, you might be wondering how to embrace the outlaw spirit without getting locked up (unless you’re a spy novelist—then, go ahead). Here are practical steps:

  1. Read Widely, Then Dig Deeper – Study classic outlaw writers. Note the techniques they used to circumvent censorship.
  2. Experiment with Form – Try a story told entirely through footnotes, or a poem that uses only emojis.
  3. Choose a Taboo Topic – Write about something you suspect your family or workplace avoids discussing.
  4. Publish Outside the Box – Submit to literary journals that focus on experimental or political work, or use a self‑publishing platform with a Creative Commons license.
  5. Build a Community – Join or start a writing circle that values risk‑taking. Online forums like r/experimentalwriting can be a good incubator.
  6. Accept Consequences – Be prepared for criticism, rejection, or even legal pushback. The outlaw’s path is rarely comfortable.

8. Closing Thoughts: The Outlaw as a Mirror

Paul Theroux’s simple confession—“I became a writer because writers were outlaws”—does more than romanticise rebellion. It positions the writer as a mirror that reflects society’s cracks, a torch that lights hidden corridors, and a weapon that can dismantle oppressive narratives.

In a time when algorithms decide what we read, when governments label “fake news” as a crime, and when the very act of questioning can trigger deplatforming, the outlaw writer becomes even more essential. Not every writer will go to jail, but every writer can choose a moment to step outside the comfortable script, to ask the question that “outlaws” have always asked:

“What if we told a different story?”

If that question makes you a little uneasy, you might just be on the right track. And that, dear reader, is the true legacy of the literary outlaw.

If you enjoyed this exploration, let me know in the comments which outlaw writer has most inspired you, and feel free to share your own “outlaw” experiment. The rebellion, after all, thrives on conversation.

NaNoWriMo – April – 2026 – Day 5

Although the main reason for its existence is to follow Friday, in some cases, it is the first day of the weekend.

Once upon a time, Saturday used to be a working day, you know, those days when we worked a 48-hour week.  Then it became a 44-hour week, and we only worked in the morning.

As time progressed, we started working 40 hour weeks and had both Saturday and Sunday off.  Sunday, of course, was always a non-starter.  The church made sure you were able to go to church on Sunday.

As time progressed, weekends started to begin on a Friday, with the day in question being granted by employers as a Rostered Day Off, provided you made up the time during the preceding two-week period.

Now it seems the standing joke is we should work weekends and have the week off.  Odd, it hasn’t quite caught on yet.

But, as usual, I digress…

After a week that got out of control, Saturday was supposed to pull it back into some sort of shape.  In a sense, it happened.  I looked at that list of things I had to do, picked one and got on with it.

PI Walthenson is now about to get a second case, as intimated at the end of his first, involving not only the search for his missing father, but also the search for those who kidnapped him.

That done, I moved onto the helicopter story, otherwise titled ‘What happens after writing an action-packed start’, and I have been researching and making notes for the third section of this story, starting at episode 31, and it looks like we’re going back to Africa, and the remoter part of the Democratic Republic of Congo to rescue the two agents he failed to the first time.

And it is NaNoWriMo time, and I have to keep the writing project going, a story that has now been tentatively renamed to Betrayal. Very spy-ish, isn’t it?

With that, there is the upkeep of the blog.  I never thought maintaining material for a blog would be so hard.

But…

Now I can say last week wasn’t a total disaster.

And, tomorrow the Maple Leafs are playing.  Can’t wait.

“The Things we do for Love”, the story behind the story

This story has been ongoing since I was seventeen, and just to let you know, I’m 72 this year.

Yes, it’s taken a long time to get it done.

Why, you might ask.

Well, I never gave it much interest because I started writing it after a small incident when I was 17, and working as a book packer for a book distributor in Melbourne

At the end of my first year, at Christmas, the employer had a Christmas party, and that year, it was at a venue in St Kilda.

I wasn’t going to go because at that age, I was an ordinary boy who was very introverted and basically scared of his own shadow and terrified by girls.

Back then, I would cross the street to avoid them

Also, other members of the staff in the shipping department were rough and ready types who were not backwards in telling me what happened, and being naive, perhaps they knew I’d be either shocked or intrigued.

I was both adamant I wasn’t coming and then got roped in on a dare.

Damn!

So, back then, in the early 70s, people looked the other way when it came to drinking, and of course, Dutch courage always takes away the concerns, especially when normally you wouldn’t do half the stuff you wouldn’t in a million years

I made it to the end, not as drunk and stupid as I thought I might be, and St Kilda being a salacious place if you knew where to look, my new friends decided to give me a surprise.

It didn’t take long to realise these men were ‘men about town’ as they kept saying, and we went on an odyssey.  Yes, those backstreet brothels where one could, I was told, have anything they could imagine.

Let me tell you, large quantities of alcohol and imagination were a very bad mix.

So, the odyssey in ‘The things we do’ was based on that, and then the encounter with Diana. Well, let’s just say I learned a great deal about girls that night.

Firstly, not all girls are nasty and spiteful, which seemed to be the case whenever I met one. There was a way to approach, greet, talk to, and behave.

It was also true that I could have had anything I wanted, but I decided what was in my imagination could stay there.  She was amused that all I wanted was to talk, but it was my money, and I could spend it how I liked.

And like any 17-year-old naive fool, I fell in love with her and had all these foolish notions.  Months later, I went back, but she had moved on, to where no one was saying or knew.

Needless to say, I was heartbroken and had to get over that first loss, which, like any 17-year-old, was like the end of the world.

But it was the best hour I’d ever spent in my life and would remain so until I met the woman I have been married to for the last 48 years.

As Henry, he was in part based on a rebel, the son of rich parents who despised them and their wealth, and he used to regale anyone who would listen about how they had messed up his life

If only I’d come from such a background!

And yes, I was only a run away from climbing up the stairs to get on board a ship, acting as a purser.

I worked for a shipping company and they gave their junior staff members an opportunity to spend a year at sea working as a purser on a cargo ship that sailed between Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart in Australia.

One of the other junior staff members’ turn came, and I would visit him on board when he would tell me stories about life on board, the officers, the crew, and other events. These stories, which sounded incredible to someone so impressionable, were a delight to hear.

Alas, by that time, I had tired of office work and moved on to be a tradesman at the place where my father worked.

It proved to be the right move, as that is where I met my wife.  Diana had been right; love would find me when I least expected it.

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