A photograph from the inspirational bin – 58

What story does it inspire?

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As we all know from folklore, there’s a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.

But…

Here’s the thing – you cannot get to the end of the rainbow.

I know, I’ve tried. A few years back in New Zealand, we were coming down the mountain road and at the turn, that’s where the rainbow ended. It was quite clear, there, before us, but by the time we reached it, a few seconds later, it was gone.

So, what do rainbows represent?

The technical reality is that it is just light refracting on raindrops. Boring, huh?

How about something more positive, that it is a symbol of hope.

In Greek and Roman mythology, Iris the goddess of the rainbow was one of the messengers of the gods.

In other mythology, a leprechaun buries a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.

However…

If we are going to consider the possibilities of using a rainbow in a story, whether it is the catalyst for an event, either good or bad, since I prefer the glass-half-full version, let’s just say our protagonist, at a very low point after some devastating news, just happens t look out and see a rainbow.

What happens after that is up to your imagination…

NANOWRIMO – 2024 – Day 4

Behind the Green Door

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So you think you know robots

To be honest, my idea of robots, at least from a TV and movie aspect, comes down to Data in Star Trek – the next generation, Johnny five is alive, and I Robot.

Then I started reading about robots and found there are a host of mechanical devices that do everything we can, including building cars.

And, hang on, I saw Blade Runner, and then things started to get a little more interesting. What were they, Nexus 6 or something, sent off-world to fight battles or do other demeaning jobs.

Yes, let’s create robot soldiers, read indestructible.

Of course, let’s take a device that could be used for good and turn it into a weapon. It says a lot about mankind, doesn’t it.

Then we’re back in reality and going to Japan, where they now have a host of lifelike robots running a hotel. Only they look lifelike, but we can tell they’re robots.

So…

There’s one last reference, Terminator

And, this is where Artificial Intelligence comes along and tries to kill us all. Of course, humans are superfluous to requirements, and like the Daleks, they’re screaming, “Exterminate” repeatedly.

This is what we are most scared of, if we make them too lifelike, it will come back and bite us.

Well, it’s too late.

In this story, the robots are lifelike, so much so that ordinary people can not tell the difference.

This one is called Miranda, and she is very special.

Ans she happens to be Michael’s guidance counsellor for his last week. This is not a coincidence.

Why?

You’ll have to read the story to find out.

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Word written today 1,190, making a total of 6,311 words

NANOWRIMO – 2024 – Day 4

Behind the Green Door

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So you think you know robots

To be honest, my idea of robots, at least from a TV and movie aspect, comes down to Data in Star Trek – the next generation, Johnny five is alive, and I Robot.

Then I started reading about robots and found there are a host of mechanical devices that do everything we can, including building cars.

And, hang on, I saw Blade Runner, and then things started to get a little more interesting. What were they, Nexus 6 or something, sent off-world to fight battles or do other demeaning jobs.

Yes, let’s create robot soldiers, read indestructible.

Of course, let’s take a device that could be used for good and turn it into a weapon. It says a lot about mankind, doesn’t it.

Then we’re back in reality and going to Japan, where they now have a host of lifelike robots running a hotel. Only they look lifelike, but we can tell they’re robots.

So…

There’s one last reference, Terminator

And, this is where Artificial Intelligence comes along and tries to kill us all. Of course, humans are superfluous to requirements, and like the Daleks, they’re screaming, “Exterminate” repeatedly.

This is what we are most scared of, if we make them too lifelike, it will come back and bite us.

Well, it’s too late.

In this story, the robots are lifelike, so much so that ordinary people can not tell the difference.

This one is called Miranda, and she is very special.

Ans she happens to be Michael’s guidance counsellor for his last week. This is not a coincidence.

Why?

You’ll have to read the story to find out.

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Word written today 1,190, making a total of 6,311 words

NANOWRIMO – 2024 – Day 3

Behind the Green Door

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Memories are being disturbed.

It’s been ten years since the death, albeit in rather questionable circumstances, of Michael’s wife Elsie.

Even the circumstances of how they met, dated, and eventually married, if he thought about it long enough, was a mystery.

But…

In the new, well, now not-so-new world order, the matter of marriage is highly regulated. Because they are living in a confined space with a finite number of people, and the possibility that there would eventually be relations marrying, it was a requirement that brides or grooms came from different facilities.

This was a new world made up of a large number of these underground facilities that could house up to 50,000 people, no more, hence a rule called Rule 71. Basically, that meant when people reached the age of 65, they retired and died. It was deemed the age, which, when also births were regulated to match deaths, populations were maintained at manageable levels.

And, after nearly 200 years, people had begun to question Rule 71. Some even tried to avoid it.

It’s an interesting scenario that will undoubtedly play out in many ways as the story is written.

But, the relevance?

Michael’s wife, Elsie, comes from another facility. She came with her mother, who was marrying someone in his facility.

Her impact on everything that happens to Michael, and the eventual ending is immeasurable, even from the grave.

The fact is, no one, except one man, knew what that impact was, and that one man wasn’t her husband.

Intrigued?

So am I…

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Word written today 2,011, making a total of 5,121 words

NANOWRIMO – 2024 – Day 2

Behind the Green Door

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Michael has stepped through the ‘portal’ that takes him on the final journey.

He meets his guidance counsellor, a woman nearing middle age, and a surprising choice.

Or not.

He has secrets, and the ubiquitous group that calls itself Management wants to learn those secrets.

Is she simply a guidance counsellor, or is she one of Management’s secret service agents or, worse, an interrogator?

From what he had learned over the years of Management practices, it would be just like them to wrap something so deadly as an interrogator in such an attractive and charming package.

And there is something else about her that reminds him of a case in the not-too-distant past.

Where he will be staying in a bungalow, similar to one at a seaside resort, of course, without the seaside. His counsellor will be staying with him, and the rules do not allow him to go anywhere or see anyone without her.

And, she tells him, they will be discussing cases and creating a teaching course in detection based on a number of his cases.

Of course…

Why waste an interrogator at the start when the job might just as easily be done by charm and polite questioning.

That first night, he ponders which cases they will cover, believing they will be those where his reports were less than informative.

For a reason…

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Word written today 1,610, making a total of 3,110 words

Searching for locations: Oreti Village – No two sunrises are the same – 1

Oreti village, Pukawa Bay, North Island, New Zealand

On the southern tip of Lake Taupo

Our first morning there, a Saturday.  Winter.  Cold.  And a beautiful sunrise.

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This was taken from the balcony, overlooking the lake.

The sun is just creeping up over the horizon

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It gradually gets lighter, and then the sun breaks free of the low cloud

It lights up the balcony

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And the trees just beyond, a cascade of colorful ferns.

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It looks like its going to be a fine day, our first for this trip, and we will be heading to the mountains to see snow, for the first time for two of our granddaughters.

NANOWRIMO – 2024 – Day 2

Behind the Green Door

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Michael has stepped through the ‘portal’ that takes him on the final journey.

He meets his guidance counsellor, a woman nearing middle age, and a surprising choice.

Or not.

He has secrets, and the ubiquitous group that calls itself Management wants to learn those secrets.

Is she simply a guidance counsellor, or is she one of Management’s secret service agents or, worse, an interrogator?

From what he had learned over the years of Management practices, it would be just like them to wrap something so deadly as an interrogator in such an attractive and charming package.

And there is something else about her that reminds him of a case in the not-too-distant past.

Where he will be staying in a bungalow, similar to one at a seaside resort, of course, without the seaside. His counsellor will be staying with him, and the rules do not allow him to go anywhere or see anyone without her.

And, she tells him, they will be discussing cases and creating a teaching course in detection based on a number of his cases.

Of course…

Why waste an interrogator at the start when the job might just as easily be done by charm and polite questioning.

That first night, he ponders which cases they will cover, believing they will be those where his reports were less than informative.

For a reason…

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Word written today 1,610, making a total of 3,110 words

NANOWRIMO – 2024 – Day 1

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Behind the Green Door

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This started as an idea for a short story, but as it began to take shape in my mind, there was an opportunity to make it into more than that.

That notion over in America with the elections coming up, people were talking about dictators and autocratic rule and filling government positions with cronies.

Why not create a city, sell them to billionaires, and have them save friends and cronies alike, and a labour force to look after them.  It might start out with the best of intentions, but how quickly does that change once those in charge see their power grow?

Human nature never changes no matter what the original intentions are.

And, after a long, long time, people begin to forget, especially when the leaders deliberately remove everything to remind the people what it was like before, only what it is like now.

Freedom, if it could be called that is limited.

So…

We have Michael.  It’s his time to retire.  After a few drinks with his friends, his slate is clear, his work is done, and it’s time to head to the Administration block.

Seven days of reviewing his life.

Of course, it’s not without trepidation because Michael has secrets, secrets that he doesn’t want to tell anyone.

Instead, he decides to see if there is a place called ‘Interrogation’ where ghostly men in black torture victims into spilling all their secrets.

He had considered just disappearing.

Yes, there’s a similar escape pipeline to find like in Logans Run, but this one supposedly goes outside where a renewed earth awaits.  The only problem is that no one has seen it because once out, no one comes back.

It was the notion of confirming something else about the place he called home that drew him into what might be the biggest lie of all.

Retirement with dignity.

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Words written today 1,500, for a total of 1,500

Searching for locations: Oreti Village – No two sunrises are the same – 1

Oreti village, Pukawa Bay, North Island, New Zealand

On the southern tip of Lake Taupo

Our first morning there, a Saturday.  Winter.  Cold.  And a beautiful sunrise.

20180812_073230

This was taken from the balcony, overlooking the lake.

The sun is just creeping up over the horizon

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It gradually gets lighter, and then the sun breaks free of the low cloud

It lights up the balcony

20180811_074651

And the trees just beyond, a cascade of colorful ferns.

20180811_074622

It looks like its going to be a fine day, our first for this trip, and we will be heading to the mountains to see snow, for the first time for two of our granddaughters.

NANOWRIMO – 2024 – Day 1

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Behind the Green Door

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This started as an idea for a short story, but as it began to take shape in my mind, there was an opportunity to make it into more than that.

That notion over in America with the elections coming up, people were talking about dictators and autocratic rule and filling government positions with cronies.

Why not create a city, sell them to billionaires, and have them save friends and cronies alike, and a labour force to look after them.  It might start out with the best of intentions, but how quickly does that change once those in charge see their power grow?

Human nature never changes no matter what the original intentions are.

And, after a long, long time, people begin to forget, especially when the leaders deliberately remove everything to remind the people what it was like before, only what it is like now.

Freedom, if it could be called that is limited.

So…

We have Michael.  It’s his time to retire.  After a few drinks with his friends, his slate is clear, his work is done, and it’s time to head to the Administration block.

Seven days of reviewing his life.

Of course, it’s not without trepidation because Michael has secrets, secrets that he doesn’t want to tell anyone.

Instead, he decides to see if there is a place called ‘Interrogation’ where ghostly men in black torture victims into spilling all their secrets.

He had considered just disappearing.

Yes, there’s a similar escape pipeline to find like in Logans Run, but this one supposedly goes outside where a renewed earth awaits.  The only problem is that no one has seen it because once out, no one comes back.

It was the notion of confirming something else about the place he called home that drew him into what might be the biggest lie of all.

Retirement with dignity.

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Words written today 1,500, for a total of 1,500