Writing a book in 365 days – 361/362

Days 361 and 362 – Writing exercise

A member of a group in a remote location during a team bonding camp goes missing

My job was not an easy one.  Working in HR for a family-run business, a particularly successful one, brought with it specific challenges.

Over the years, working for the grandfather, then the father and his brother, had its moments, but they were all successful and influential.  They earned respect and rewarded loyalty.

But, moving into a different world, a vastly different economic climate and commercial challenges brought on more aggressive competition, as well as a new generation, it wasn’t quite the same as it had been in the past.

I was an anachronism from a different generation.  My contemporaries had moved on, and between the Managing Director and me, we were the last two to hand over the reins to a younger generation.

The boss to his son, Chester Wordsworth Moseby III, and me the the Assistant HR Manager, Walter James, who was not my son.

I just had to survive until the end of the annual team bonding exercise, which was designed to strengthen the working relationships of the top management group, and had been for the last ten years.

It was staged on an Island paradise, a place that could also be hell on earth depending on the package purchased, and ours was for various teams to be dropped in different parts of the island, and the ‘teams’ work together to get back to base.

A simple exercise for each team if they work together.  Three days maximum.  And in the ten previous events, not a single problem, though it did identify those who were not necessarily ‘team players’.

That, I suspected, was not going to be the case this year, a fear I kept to myself because the one reservation I had and communicated to the boss had been heard and dismissed.

It made me wonder, briefly, if I was being overly cautious, and I decided that it soon wouldn’t be my problem.

Even so, I was one of those people who worried about consequences, and one who knew that little things mattered.

Little things, such as reports that didn’t find their way to my desk, little things that subordinates filed away, doing what they were told rather than what was expected of them.

And finding out about some of them quite by accident, a week before the event.  Disquieting, but pointing to a planned action by a certain individual which, if allowed to continue, would have consequences for the company.

I had done my duty of care, and it was noted, if ignored.  I pondered the situation for three days before I decided to take action.

It would be my last act for the company.

It led to two actions.

The first was a phone call.  I was sitting in the park opposite the company headquarters building, where I had been every day for nearly the last 45 years, and where I first met the woman I eventually married.

A surly voice on the other end answered.

“David.  What are you doing for the next two weeks?”

“Dad?  Why?”

“I have a little job for you and three of those interesting friends of yours.”

“What have you done?”

“Nothing.  Well, perhaps something, but I think you’ll like it.”

He sighed.  He had told me that all he wanted to do was relax.  This was almost as good.

“OK, what kind of mess have you made now?”

The second was an invitation to a picnic lunch.

I had been watching a young woman, Millie, climb slowly through the ranks, battling a corporate mentality that favoured men over women, and it had been getting better until the father announced his retirement, and the son assumed some of the responsibility.

Unlike his father, he was no judge of character and certainly didn’t promote on merit.

But that wasn’t the only problem with the new wave of management.  The son was in trouble, and had been for a long time, and being the only son, he had traded on indulgent parents.

He had a bad history with women, outside of the company, with his relationships, each foundering, I suspect, when the women in question discovered his character, or lack of it, and then dealings within the company.

That disdain had landed on Millie, the latest in a line of women he had tried to date and failed.  She had, like others before her, complained, but those complaints never reached me, and the one I’d found was by accident.

And then it didn’t take long to find the test, the pattern, and the enablers.  Like I said, it was going to be my final act.

The girl who had first arrived seven years ago was shy, but intelligent, unworldly, yet had a manner about her whose qualifications were impeccable and a work ethic the father looked for in his employees.

The father also thought her the ideal wife for his errant son.  That, I’d told him, would never happen.  The son tried and failed led and then did something stupid.

It’s how he got on my radar.

She sat at the other end of the bench and looked far from the young woman she had become.

“I got your letter of resignation,” I said.  “I can’t say I’m surprised.  Now that I know the truth.  I’m just a little disappointed you didn’t trust me.”

I could understand.  She didn’t know what my situation was, or where my loyalty lay.

“I’m sorry, but I didn’t know who I could trust.”

“Trust has to be earned.  And to do that, I have a job for you.  It might go pear-shaped because we’re dealing with an unstable entity.”

“Chester?”

“At least we agree on that, then.”

“If you knew…”

“Suspected, because I didn’t have the previous complaints.  You’re not the only one who now has trust issues.  I’m sorry you had to endure what happened, but it isn’t going to stop unless we do something about it.”

“How?  The entitled son of a bitch had been allowed to get away with it for too long.  His friends are everywhere.”

I looked around.  “They’re not here, now.  And where he’s going, not so many.  Top management, only this year, people of my choosing.  A place where he cannot leave until I say he can.  A place where anything can happen, and probably will.”

“Give me a gun.”

“You kill him, you will have to go to jail.  Sorry.  I can’t condone murder.  But a lesson, a very tough lesson, might work.  The thing is, I need your help, but if you prefer not to, that’s fine.  I’ll make sure you get a glowing reference and suitable compensation.  But if you stay, and help me…”

“There isn’t really any upside…”

“Just think about it.  Please.”

It was stifling on the island, particularly out on the field.  There was shelter, if you knew where to look, and food.

There was a day of basic training, which, if you were smart, you listened and learned, just in case you got disoriented, lost, or injured.

Those who didn’t get what they deserved.  Humiliation when they had to be rescued.  People thought that because it was an island, it would be easy to get back to the main camp.

It was not.  The island was bigger than it looked, especially when arriving in the corporate jet.  From 20,000 feet, it looked small.

When the teams were delivered to their drop-off point, the helicopters stayed at tree height, and moving so fast was disorienting, so players did not get a sense of direction or any landmarks to find their way back.

They didn’t get one compass and a heading.  They got food for three days, rations and water each.

Four teams of six, each with a chain of command that was supposed to work together.

The other team, well, it went exactly as I expected.

Chester’s team was different.  Chester, his cousin, a yes man, the CFO, who hated him, the Administration manager, who was indecisive, Millie, who finally agreed to go, and Eileen, a senior PA, an outdoors adventuress.

On paper, it was the strongest team.

Three days later, the other three teams were home and luxuriating in the spa before attending a banquet.

Chester and his cousin, Walter, were in two separate cages, the sort American soldiers captured in Vietnam by the Viet Cong were held, the CFO and Administration manager were being escorted to another camp where they would be ‘interrogated’, and Millie and the adventuress were exploring the island with a guide.

The adventure of a lifetime package.  It went for a week.  Long enough to terrorise Chester over crimes he did not commit, but didn’t know that.  They were getting the prisoner-of-war package.

So was I, for all intents and purposes.

Chester thought for all of ten seconds that I had come to save him.

“Richards, thank God.  Pay them whatever it takes and let’s get out of this shithole.”

I thought the theatrics were brilliant.  My clothes were torn, blood stains on my shirt and a headband that belied a whack from the butt of a rifle.  Certainly, my handling in front of him was rough.

“What did you do to piss these people off?”  I growled, the manner of a man not happy about his situation.

The man behind my shilling me in the back with his rifle barrel, just hard enough to hurt, said, with anger and feeling, “You’re wasting your time with this piece of shit.  Chucked two women in the river.  Drowned them.”

My cage was next to his.  I was shoved in the door closed.

“You killed them?  Why?”

“What do you mean, I killed them.  They fell in the river, and I tried to save them.”

I’d reviewed the video footage.  There had been an argument at the drop-off zone, which was near the River.  The Adventuress had suggested they follow the river, Chester said they were dumb bitches who knew nothing, Millie said they were supposed to be a team, and then Chester shoved both women into the river, telling them they could follow the river … from within it.

Unexpected, but every eventuality had been covered.  David and his team rescued them from the river.  A day later, they picked up the others, split then, and brought Chester and Wally to the cages, then contacted me.

“We’ve got video.  They fished two bodies out of the river a day later, and they’re in the process of calling the authorities.  You’re going to be charged with murder.  If we get off this island.”

“Murder?  That’s ridiculous.”

“That as may be, but I got the call, brought a million bucks ransom, and here I am.  They took the money and now want five million.  This isn’t going to end well.”

“Not if you pay them.”

“You don’t get it.  We pay, the person paying becomes a prisoner, and they demand more.  There is one other small problem: we don’t pay, they started executing prisoners.”

He snorted.  “World’s dumbest kidnappers.  You kill the hostages, how do you get paid?”

Not as dumb as he looks, then.

It took 10 days to break him.

When he was brought back to the main camp, a shadow of his former self, his father was there to meet him.

He had been reviewing the interrogation tapes, where bragging had been replaced by bluff, blustery and then the truth.

It wasn’t pretty, and his father couldn’t believe that his son could be that reprehensible.  Until he realised the truth.

Needless to say, I didn’t get the reception I expected, but I guess it was, in the end, for the greater good.

He was astonished to find that Millie was still alive, not only alive but so much better for her experience.  She was still close to leaving because she believed a leopard would never change its spots.

In the back of my mind, she was probably right.

As for the rest, only Wally left.  The experience had destroyed him.  And I doubt he and Chester would ever speak again.

Chester’s enablers at the company were fired, and Chester did not move into the top job, not for five years.  Nobody ever found out what happened on the island, where he had been held or by whom.  Only Millie and I knew that, and she never told anyone.

It wasn’t a surprise that some years later, she married David, and I got to see her and my grandchildren every year on the island until I was too old to travel.

Chester eventually died in a car accident, rather conveniently making an investigation into commercial malfeasance on his part go away, but sadly wrapping up the company’s 145-year history.

It was always going to happen; they could not weather the foreign import storm, and hadn’t diversified fast enough to keep the company afloat.

As for that fateful team-building event, what happened died with me, the report Chester’s father had asked me to write never saw the light of day, and now, well, it was just folklore, a day that was commemorated as the day Chester grew up.

©  Charles Heath  2025

Top 5 sights on the road less travelled – La Paz

Discovering La Paz: Five Hidden Gems Off the Beaten Path

Introduction
Nestled amidst the towering peaks of the Andes, La Paz is a city of vibrant cultures and breathtaking landscapes. While many travellers flock to its iconic Witches Market and the Death Road, the Bolivian capital holds countless secrets for the curious. For those seeking an authentic, less-travelled journey, here are five extraordinary experiences that redefine what La Paz has to offer.


1. Cholitas Licking: A Celebration of Andean Identity
Step into the striking world of the cholitas, traditional Aymara women, and immerse yourself in their fearless blend of style, resilience, and heritage. This unique cultural encounter, often described as “Cholitas Licking,” features fashion shows, workshops, and artisan markets where cholitas showcase their vibrant polleras (dresses) and colonial-era masks. More than a spectacle, this experience challenges stereotypes and honours indigenous identity. Visit their community centres in El Alto for a deeper understanding of their role as cultural ambassadors.

Tip: Respect cultural significance—ask for permission before photographing participants.


2. Kallawaya School of Traditional Healing: Ancient Wisdom in Modern Medicine
Journey to the outskirts of La Paz to explore the Kallawaya School of Traditional Healing, a living archive of pre-Columbian medicinal knowledge. The Kallawaya people, renowned for their healing practices, offer workshops on herbal remedies, music therapy, and shamanic rituals. Wander their medicinal garden, where over 200 plant species are catalogued, and learn how to craft teas or tinctures for common ailments. This is a rare chance to connect with Bolivia’s spiritual and ecological heritage.

Tip: Book workshops in advance—offerings (regalos) to the mountain (apacheta) are customary.


3. Wuli Qhapaq Cable Car to Chimehua: Sky-High Serenity
Traverse the urban sprawl of La Paz aboard the Wuli Qhapaq (Red) cable car network. While most travellers stick to the main routes, venture to the Chimehua line, a golden cable car that extends into the Illimani Valley. This lesser-known route offers panoramic views of the Illimani volcano and descends into the lush, remote countryside. Alight at a local farm for a chicha (corn beer) tasting or a guided hike through cloud forests teeming with orchids.

Tip: Bring a reusable bottle for coca tea from the local market—perfect for altitude adjustment.


4. Sopocachi Caves: Earth’s Hidden Art Gallery
Just 20 minutes from downtown La Paz, the Sopocachi Cave System reveals a subterranean wonderland of stalactites, stalagmites, and ancient rock art. These caves, once inhabited by pre-Columbian communities, are adorned with mysterious symbols and animal carvings. The self-guided tour is affordable (£16-£20) and led by local guides who share tales of the caves’ role in ancestral rituals.

Tip: Visit early in the day to avoid crowds and bring a headlamp for optimal visibility.


5. Trek to the Valley of the Moon: A Martian Landscape
While Salar de Uyuni is Bolivia’s most famous attraction, venture toward the Valley of the Moon (Valle de la Luna) for a quieter, equally dramatic experience. Located near Salar de Cotapata, this surreal red and orange badlands, sculpted by wind and erosion, feels like another planet. Guided day tours from La Paz (lasting 8-10 hours) include a detour to this hidden gem, where photography and hiking are unspoiled by crowds.

Tip: Visit during dry seasons (April–September) for the best colour contrasts without mud.


Conclusion: La Paz, Redefined
La Paz is more than its skyline—it’s a gateway to the extraordinary. By stepping beyond the cobbled streets of the city, travellers can uncover traditions, landscapes, and communities that epitomise Bolivia’s soul. Whether you’re sipping chicha at a cloud forest farm or tracing your fingers along ancient rock art, these hidden adventures promise memories that linger long after your boots return to solid ground. So, pack your sense of curiosity and let La Paz surprise you.

Final Tip: Learn a few Aymara phrases—Suma qhapaq kama (Beautiful is the life well lived) is a poetic way to end your journey. 🌄

What I learned about writing – A masterclass in playwriting

Why The Doll’s House by Henrik Ibsen is a Masterclass in Playwriting—and the Magic of Stage Directions

Henrik Ibsen’s The Doll’s House (1879) is more than a revolutionary feminist text; it’s a blueprint for how to craft a play that transcends time. Often hailed as the “Father of Modern Drama,” Ibsen’s work is a masterclass in storytelling, character development, and structural innovation. But one of the most underrated tools Ibsen wields? Stage directions. In this blog, we’ll explore why the play is a gold standard in playwriting and delve into how stage directions bring its world—and themes—to life.


A Masterclass in Playwriting: What Makes The Doll’s House Revolutionary?

  1. Complex Characterisation That Challenges Expectations
    At its heart, The Doll’s House revolves around Nora Helmer, a woman trapped in a gilded cage of societal expectations. Ibsen crafts her not as a static figure but as a deeply human, evolving character. Her journey from a “dutiful daughter,” wife, and mother to a self-aware individual demanding autonomy is nuanced and gripping. Even secondary characters like the pragmatic Mrs. Linde and the morally ambiguous Krogstad are layered with motivations that defy stereotypes. Ibsen’s ability to blend vulnerability, wit, and defiance in his characters makes them timeless—and a master’s lesson in creating relatable, multidimensional figures.
  2. Themes That Speakeasy to the Soul of Society
    The play’s themes—conformity vs. individuality, the gendered roles of marriage, and the illusion of happiness—resonate as boldly today as they did in the 19th century. Ibsen doesn’t lecture; instead, he embeds his critique within the lived experiences of his characters. For instance, Nora’s secret loan to save Torvald’s life, hidden for years, exposes the fragility of their “perfect” marriage. This thematic depth invites audiences to reflect on their own world, proving how a play can be both a mirror and a hammer for change.
  3. Structure That Builds to a Defiant Climax
    The play’s three-act structure is a masterstroke. Act I introduces the seemingly idyllic Helmer household, with its Christmas cheer and playful dynamic between Nora and Torvald. But Ibsen subtly plants seeds of tension—Nora’s nervous energy, Krogstad’s looming threat. Act II escalates the stakes as secrets unravel, and Act III delivers the gut-punch climax: Nora’s door-slamming exit. The pacing is deliberate, with each act tightening the narrative like a coiled spring, teaching playwrights the power of gradual, inevitable build-ups.

The Alchemy of Stage Directions: How They Bring the Story to Life

While the dialogue in The Doll’s House crackles with subtext, it’s the stage directions that truly immerse the audience in the play’s world. Here’s how they work their magic:

  1. Setting as Symbolism
    Ibsen’s opening stage direction—“The interior must look lived in”—is a commandment for realism. The Helmer home, described as “exquisite but somewhat childish or girl-like,” mirrors Nora’s role as both a “doll” and a child to her husband. Every detail, from the silk drapes to the Christmas tree, becomes a symbol of her entrapment in a gilded cage. The decaying tree, later neglected in Act III, parallels the family’s unravelling harmony.
  2. Psychology Through Action
    Stage directions reveal characters’ inner lives without needing words. Nora’s nervous habit of fidgeting with her necklace or macaroons betrays her anxiety. Torvald’s rigid posture and patronising gestures underscore his condescension. These physical cues—rooted in Ibsen’s commitment to realism—show rather than tell, a technique every playwright should emulate.
  3. The Final Scene: A Symphony of Symbolism
    The play’s most iconic stage direction is the slamming of the door at the end. This single, visceral action—Nora’s defiant exit—sums up her rejection of societal roles. Without it, the play’s power would diminish; it’s the auditory and visual punctuation that makes her liberation irreversible. Ibsen uses the stage direction not to describe an action, but to perform it, etching Nora’s transformation into the audience’s memory.

Why Stage Directions Matter—and Why You Should Care

In many plays, stage directions are merely instructions. But in The Doll’s House, they are storytellers in their own right. They create atmosphere, foreshadow events, and amplify emotional beats. Consider how the Christmas tree’s gradual decay or the stark lighting in Act III heightens tension. Ibsen’s directions are not just decorative; they are the scaffolding upon which the narrative and themes rest.

For modern playwrights, The Doll’s House is a reminder that stage directions can be as creative as dialogue. They’re a tool to sculpt mood, reveal character, and guide the audience’s gaze—sometimes, even to let silence and space speak louder than words.


Conclusion: A Legacy in Three Acts

The Doll’s House remains a masterclass because it marries bold ideas with meticulous craftsmanship. Ibsen’s character development, structural precision, and thematic daring are matched only by his innovative use of stage directions, which transform a written text into a visceral, living experience. For anyone studying or writing plays, the lesson is clear: a great story isn’t just told—it’s performed, from the first word to the final slam of a door.

So the next time you sit in a theatre, remember: behind every powerful moment is a playwright who knew exactly how to use the stage to make the invisible visible. And no one did that better than Henrik Ibsen.

Top 5 sights on the road less travelled – Santiago

Discover Santiago’s Hidden Treasures: 5 Off-the-Beaten-Path Adventures

Santiago, Chile’s vibrant capital, is often associated with its iconic landmarks like Cerro San Cristóbal and the Central Cathedral. But for travellers eager to uncover the city’s soul, there’s a world of hidden gems waiting to be explored. Let’s venture beyond the guidebooks and dive into Santiago’s lesser-known treasures that promise unforgettable experiences. Grab your sense of curiosity and join us on this journey!


1. Barrio Lastarria: A Cultural Escape

Tucked just north of downtown, Barrio Lastarria is a bohemian enclave where cobblestone streets, ivy-clad buildings, and creative energy reign. This neighbourhood is a haven for artists, intellectuals, and foodies. Stroll through its tree-lined avenues to discover cozy cafés, indie bookstores, and art galleries like Galería Gabriela Mistral. Don’t miss the Cine Lastarria, a beloved 19th-century cinema that hosts independent films and cultural events. For lunch, try El Rincón de Mafalda, a charming parrilla where locals gather for juicy empanadas and artisanal wines. Weekends are best spent exploring its bustling outdoor markets and hidden patios that buzz with live music.


Visit the heart of Santiago, see the Metropolitan Cathedral, the Presidential Palace (La Moneda), and soak in the atmosphere with street performers at the main square, Plaza de Armas. Historic Downtown Santiago, centred around the lively Plaza de Armas, is Chile’s historical heart, featuring iconic buildings like the Metropolitan Cathedral, Central Post Office, and National History Museum, all surrounding the leafy square with its monuments, street performers, and vibrant local atmosphere, offering a perfect starting point for exploring the city’s rich heritage and culture. Visitors can enjoy free entry to the square and surrounding museums, observe local life, and easily access it via the Metro.


3. Mapocho Valley: A Modern Cultural Oasis

Once an industrial hub, the Mapocho Valley has been transformed into Santiago’s hippest cultural destination. Home to the Gabriela Mistral Park, this riverside haven offers jogging trails, art installations, and the striking Biomuseo, a modern art space with rotating exhibitions. Nearby, the Pabellón 5 hosts innovative food and craft fairs, while the Museo del Banco Central showcases Chilean art and history. Arrive in the evening to witness the glow of the Mapocho Wharf, a perfect spot to sip a chicha morada (purple corn drink) and watch the city skyline shimmer.


4. Mercado de las Pulgas: Time-Travel at the Flea Market

Every Saturday and Sunday, the Mercado de las Pulgas (Flea Market) resurrects Santiago’s colonial past in the Mansión Villarrica. Spread over 30 blocks, this open-air bazaar is a treasure hunt for antiques, handicrafts, and vintage clothing. Haggling is part of the fun—pick up a handwoven poncho or a pre-Columbian artifact at stalls owned by passionate vendors. The surrounding Parque Forestal is perfect for a post-shopping stroll, where street performers and food trucks add to the lively atmosphere.


5. Fundo Balmaceda: A Botanical Sanctuary

Tucked away in the leafy suburb of Ñuñoa, Fundo Balmaceda is a hidden garden paradise. This historic estate features lush botanical gardens, tranquil ponds, and a small museum of pre-Columbian art. It’s a peaceful retreat from the city’s hustle, where you can picnic, bird-watch, or simply lose yourself in the beauty of over 1,500 species of plants. The best part? Admission is free, and the site’s blend of nature and history makes it a local favourite. Tip: Visit during the day (it’s closed at night) and bring a camera for those Insta-worthy moments.


Local Tips for the Best Experience

  • Getting Around: Use Santiago’s efficient metro system or bike-share program (Bicentenario) to reach these spots.
  • Timing: Plan your visits around local events—check out the Santiago a Mil theatre festival or Ciclo del Terror horror film season for added flair.
  • Safety: Stay in well-populated areas, especially in neighbourhoods like Barrio Lastarria and La Vega Central.

Conclusion: Santiago Beyond the Surface
Santiago’s magic isn’t just in its skyline or its museums—it’s in the whispered stories of its hidden corners. From the depths of the catacombs to the blooms of Fundo Balmaceda, these experiences offer a deeper connection to Chile’s heritage and creativity. So, step off the main road; the most rewarding adventures lie where few tourists tread. ¡Buen viaje!


Final Note: Ready to explore? Share your favourite hidden spots in Santiago in the comments—let’s keep the road less travelled ever-evolving! 🌿

Writing a book in 365 days – 361/362

Days 361 and 362 – Writing exercise

A member of a group in a remote location during a team bonding camp goes missing

My job was not an easy one.  Working in HR for a family-run business, a particularly successful one, brought with it specific challenges.

Over the years, working for the grandfather, then the father and his brother, had its moments, but they were all successful and influential.  They earned respect and rewarded loyalty.

But, moving into a different world, a vastly different economic climate and commercial challenges brought on more aggressive competition, as well as a new generation, it wasn’t quite the same as it had been in the past.

I was an anachronism from a different generation.  My contemporaries had moved on, and between the Managing Director and me, we were the last two to hand over the reins to a younger generation.

The boss to his son, Chester Wordsworth Moseby III, and me the the Assistant HR Manager, Walter James, who was not my son.

I just had to survive until the end of the annual team bonding exercise, which was designed to strengthen the working relationships of the top management group, and had been for the last ten years.

It was staged on an Island paradise, a place that could also be hell on earth depending on the package purchased, and ours was for various teams to be dropped in different parts of the island, and the ‘teams’ work together to get back to base.

A simple exercise for each team if they work together.  Three days maximum.  And in the ten previous events, not a single problem, though it did identify those who were not necessarily ‘team players’.

That, I suspected, was not going to be the case this year, a fear I kept to myself because the one reservation I had and communicated to the boss had been heard and dismissed.

It made me wonder, briefly, if I was being overly cautious, and I decided that it soon wouldn’t be my problem.

Even so, I was one of those people who worried about consequences, and one who knew that little things mattered.

Little things, such as reports that didn’t find their way to my desk, little things that subordinates filed away, doing what they were told rather than what was expected of them.

And finding out about some of them quite by accident, a week before the event.  Disquieting, but pointing to a planned action by a certain individual which, if allowed to continue, would have consequences for the company.

I had done my duty of care, and it was noted, if ignored.  I pondered the situation for three days before I decided to take action.

It would be my last act for the company.

It led to two actions.

The first was a phone call.  I was sitting in the park opposite the company headquarters building, where I had been every day for nearly the last 45 years, and where I first met the woman I eventually married.

A surly voice on the other end answered.

“David.  What are you doing for the next two weeks?”

“Dad?  Why?”

“I have a little job for you and three of those interesting friends of yours.”

“What have you done?”

“Nothing.  Well, perhaps something, but I think you’ll like it.”

He sighed.  He had told me that all he wanted to do was relax.  This was almost as good.

“OK, what kind of mess have you made now?”

The second was an invitation to a picnic lunch.

I had been watching a young woman, Millie, climb slowly through the ranks, battling a corporate mentality that favoured men over women, and it had been getting better until the father announced his retirement, and the son assumed some of the responsibility.

Unlike his father, he was no judge of character and certainly didn’t promote on merit.

But that wasn’t the only problem with the new wave of management.  The son was in trouble, and had been for a long time, and being the only son, he had traded on indulgent parents.

He had a bad history with women, outside of the company, with his relationships, each foundering, I suspect, when the women in question discovered his character, or lack of it, and then dealings within the company.

That disdain had landed on Millie, the latest in a line of women he had tried to date and failed.  She had, like others before her, complained, but those complaints never reached me, and the one I’d found was by accident.

And then it didn’t take long to find the test, the pattern, and the enablers.  Like I said, it was going to be my final act.

The girl who had first arrived seven years ago was shy, but intelligent, unworldly, yet had a manner about her whose qualifications were impeccable and a work ethic the father looked for in his employees.

The father also thought her the ideal wife for his errant son.  That, I’d told him, would never happen.  The son tried and failed led and then did something stupid.

It’s how he got on my radar.

She sat at the other end of the bench and looked far from the young woman she had become.

“I got your letter of resignation,” I said.  “I can’t say I’m surprised.  Now that I know the truth.  I’m just a little disappointed you didn’t trust me.”

I could understand.  She didn’t know what my situation was, or where my loyalty lay.

“I’m sorry, but I didn’t know who I could trust.”

“Trust has to be earned.  And to do that, I have a job for you.  It might go pear-shaped because we’re dealing with an unstable entity.”

“Chester?”

“At least we agree on that, then.”

“If you knew…”

“Suspected, because I didn’t have the previous complaints.  You’re not the only one who now has trust issues.  I’m sorry you had to endure what happened, but it isn’t going to stop unless we do something about it.”

“How?  The entitled son of a bitch had been allowed to get away with it for too long.  His friends are everywhere.”

I looked around.  “They’re not here, now.  And where he’s going, not so many.  Top management, only this year, people of my choosing.  A place where he cannot leave until I say he can.  A place where anything can happen, and probably will.”

“Give me a gun.”

“You kill him, you will have to go to jail.  Sorry.  I can’t condone murder.  But a lesson, a very tough lesson, might work.  The thing is, I need your help, but if you prefer not to, that’s fine.  I’ll make sure you get a glowing reference and suitable compensation.  But if you stay, and help me…”

“There isn’t really any upside…”

“Just think about it.  Please.”

It was stifling on the island, particularly out on the field.  There was shelter, if you knew where to look, and food.

There was a day of basic training, which, if you were smart, you listened and learned, just in case you got disoriented, lost, or injured.

Those who didn’t get what they deserved.  Humiliation when they had to be rescued.  People thought that because it was an island, it would be easy to get back to the main camp.

It was not.  The island was bigger than it looked, especially when arriving in the corporate jet.  From 20,000 feet, it looked small.

When the teams were delivered to their drop-off point, the helicopters stayed at tree height, and moving so fast was disorienting, so players did not get a sense of direction or any landmarks to find their way back.

They didn’t get one compass and a heading.  They got food for three days, rations and water each.

Four teams of six, each with a chain of command that was supposed to work together.

The other team, well, it went exactly as I expected.

Chester’s team was different.  Chester, his cousin, a yes man, the CFO, who hated him, the Administration manager, who was indecisive, Millie, who finally agreed to go, and Eileen, a senior PA, an outdoors adventuress.

On paper, it was the strongest team.

Three days later, the other three teams were home and luxuriating in the spa before attending a banquet.

Chester and his cousin, Walter, were in two separate cages, the sort American soldiers captured in Vietnam by the Viet Cong were held, the CFO and Administration manager were being escorted to another camp where they would be ‘interrogated’, and Millie and the adventuress were exploring the island with a guide.

The adventure of a lifetime package.  It went for a week.  Long enough to terrorise Chester over crimes he did not commit, but didn’t know that.  They were getting the prisoner-of-war package.

So was I, for all intents and purposes.

Chester thought for all of ten seconds that I had come to save him.

“Richards, thank God.  Pay them whatever it takes and let’s get out of this shithole.”

I thought the theatrics were brilliant.  My clothes were torn, blood stains on my shirt and a headband that belied a whack from the butt of a rifle.  Certainly, my handling in front of him was rough.

“What did you do to piss these people off?”  I growled, the manner of a man not happy about his situation.

The man behind my shilling me in the back with his rifle barrel, just hard enough to hurt, said, with anger and feeling, “You’re wasting your time with this piece of shit.  Chucked two women in the river.  Drowned them.”

My cage was next to his.  I was shoved in the door closed.

“You killed them?  Why?”

“What do you mean, I killed them.  They fell in the river, and I tried to save them.”

I’d reviewed the video footage.  There had been an argument at the drop-off zone, which was near the River.  The Adventuress had suggested they follow the river, Chester said they were dumb bitches who knew nothing, Millie said they were supposed to be a team, and then Chester shoved both women into the river, telling them they could follow the river … from within it.

Unexpected, but every eventuality had been covered.  David and his team rescued them from the river.  A day later, they picked up the others, split then, and brought Chester and Wally to the cages, then contacted me.

“We’ve got video.  They fished two bodies out of the river a day later, and they’re in the process of calling the authorities.  You’re going to be charged with murder.  If we get off this island.”

“Murder?  That’s ridiculous.”

“That as may be, but I got the call, brought a million bucks ransom, and here I am.  They took the money and now want five million.  This isn’t going to end well.”

“Not if you pay them.”

“You don’t get it.  We pay, the person paying becomes a prisoner, and they demand more.  There is one other small problem: we don’t pay, they started executing prisoners.”

He snorted.  “World’s dumbest kidnappers.  You kill the hostages, how do you get paid?”

Not as dumb as he looks, then.

It took 10 days to break him.

When he was brought back to the main camp, a shadow of his former self, his father was there to meet him.

He had been reviewing the interrogation tapes, where bragging had been replaced by bluff, blustery and then the truth.

It wasn’t pretty, and his father couldn’t believe that his son could be that reprehensible.  Until he realised the truth.

Needless to say, I didn’t get the reception I expected, but I guess it was, in the end, for the greater good.

He was astonished to find that Millie was still alive, not only alive but so much better for her experience.  She was still close to leaving because she believed a leopard would never change its spots.

In the back of my mind, she was probably right.

As for the rest, only Wally left.  The experience had destroyed him.  And I doubt he and Chester would ever speak again.

Chester’s enablers at the company were fired, and Chester did not move into the top job, not for five years.  Nobody ever found out what happened on the island, where he had been held or by whom.  Only Millie and I knew that, and she never told anyone.

It wasn’t a surprise that some years later, she married David, and I got to see her and my grandchildren every year on the island until I was too old to travel.

Chester eventually died in a car accident, rather conveniently making an investigation into commercial malfeasance on his part go away, but sadly wrapping up the company’s 145-year history.

It was always going to happen; they could not weather the foreign import storm, and hadn’t diversified fast enough to keep the company afloat.

As for that fateful team-building event, what happened died with me, the report Chester’s father had asked me to write never saw the light of day, and now, well, it was just folklore, a day that was commemorated as the day Chester grew up.

©  Charles Heath  2025

A long short story that can’t be tamed – I never wanted to be an eyewitness – 1

One

I often wondered what it meant to go ‘stir crazy,’.

I think it had something to do with being in prison, locked away in solitary confinement, and, if it was, then I knew exactly what it was like.

I’d been locked away in this room for nearly two months, waiting to testify against a criminal who had, up until now, managed to ‘remove’ any obstacle in his path to remaining free to continue his illegal activities.

Not that I had any intention of ending up in the world’s tightest, secure facility.  It happened because Joe Latanzio, one of the most dangerous crime bosses, decided to kill someone in front of me.  Well, not exactly in front of me, but I did witness it, and I could very clearly identify him without ambiguity.  It had him arrested and sent to jail.

He knew there was a witness, but although he had a name, it was not mine, and it was untraceable.  That and the obscured photos in the papers also made it impossible for his cronies to find me.

All we had to worry about was whether one of the guards or the security detail would sell out to his family, who were offering a reward of up to a million dollars to spill the true identity of the witness.

Me.

And, so far no one had, or at least that was what they were telling me.  There was no way of knowing because my current residence was impenetrable.  If it had, we’d only find out the day I had to go into court and testify.

That day was tomorrow.

It was like I was the criminal, waiting on death row, having to have that final meal before execution.

And living with the expectation that I was going to die.

Unfortunately, there were no guarantees, and the head of my security detail, Amy Childern, competent and successful at her job as her resume testified, couldn’t rule out the possibility that there might be trouble.  All she would give me was her assurance she would do everything within her power to keep me alive.

But in having so much time to think about the ramifications of what testifying might be, I realized the court case wasn’t the full extent of the problem, but once the trial was over I knew it would be the beginning of a life of looking over my shoulder.

Yes, there was the option of disappearing into the witsec ether, but that was never going to be the answer.  There would always be the temptation on the table from the defendant’s family who would never give up looking for me, regardless of the outcome of the trial.

Put quite simply and based on what I had overheard from other members of my security detail, life as I’d known it, was over.

Not that my life amounted to very much before this happened.  I had no family, being orphaned very early in life, and bounced around the foster care system, so that there were no people I’d call parents.  And after a stint in the Army, I found myself at a loose end, unable to hold down a job, and just drifted, until I finished up in the wrong place at the wrong time

You know the sort. John Doe of no fixed address. That was me.  Except I had a name, or two, the current being Al Jones, and a photo that was deliberately diffused so that anyone looking at it would not recognize me in real life.

I also now had a social security number but that was only to make me appear a credible witness.  There was nothing to find other than a number and a name.

As Amy said, I’d come from nowhere and would be going back there once this notorious criminal was locked up. It was meant to be reassuring but it wasn’t.

But despite any misgivings I might have right now, I’d made a commitment and would honour it.

Nobody expected they would make an attempt on my life in the hotel.

As far as they were aware no one knew I was there, but to an astute observer who knew something of the motivation behind keeping witnesses safe, there would be no mistaking the number of out-of-place personnel in the hotel, starting at the lobby.

And for those working for Latanzio, they’d had close to two months to check out every hotel in the city and there would be people working for him who knew the witness protection procedures.  After all, there had been four before me, found and murdered before they got to court.

Those were odds that would tell anyone that this was a lost cause.

My detail for this morning consisted of four, headed up by Amy who said she would stay with me.  Outside Larry was number 2 and would be with me too.  Jeff and Wes made up the rest of the team and were stationed below in the garage waiting with a bulletproof car.

I made a joke previously as to whether it would withstand a handheld rocket, and Amy chose to ignore it.  Perhaps she had not seen what one could do or believe that criminals could get their hands on one.

After breakfast where again the condemned man had a hearty meal, it was a half-hour wait before we moved.  It was tense inside the room.  And outside where Larry was stationed.

At the appropriate time, he was to knock, Amy would answer, and it would be the all-clear.

I was down to counting seconds.

When the time came and Larry knocked on the door we both jumped.  A look passed between us.  The time had come.  We were not expecting trouble.

Amy opened the door, not completely, but just ajar.

It was what saved her life.

A second later Larry came through the door to the accompaniment of several silenced rounds.

Two events happened in quick succession.

As Larry came through the door and fell forwards propelled by the shots, he managed to free his gun and throw it in my direction.

A man followed him, firing more rounds randomly, none hitting a target, while Amy, taking a few extra milliseconds to realise what was happening, drew her gun and started firing at the figure who just passed the edge of the door.

He was not going to be the only one.

As more bullets were fired into the room, a second gunman from outside the room must have seen his partner go down and pressed forward.  He saw me the same time I had the gun thrown to me aimed at him and I squeezed off three rounds and put him down.  I mentally thanked the Army for teaching me to shoot.  If only I had a military issue M16.

Silence fell over the scene.

Amy was trying to raise the other two in the team but they were not responding.  Nor was the lookout in the foyer.  The was a slight hint of panic in her tone, especially when she realized there was no time to raise the alarm by phone.  It was now a matter of how many gunmen Latanzio had hired.

I picked up the two guns from the now-dead gunmen and threw one to her.  “How many men did he sent the last time,” I asked her.

She looked startled for a moment, then slipped back into battle mode.  “Six.”

“Then let’s hope he hasn’t rewritten the playbook.”

We didn’t have time to check and see if Larry was OK, but the glance I got showed no sign of life.  I don’t think, when he left for work this morning, he thought it might be his last day on this mortal earth.

I reached the door and closed it.  A second later several bullets slammed into it.  It was solid enough to withstand them.  Once shut, the door was locked and unless they had a key, they could not get in.

Amy nodded towards the connecting door to the room next door.  For the last week, she had been staying in it.  Now, it was one possible escape route.

The door handle rattled, and I heard a voice outside say, “it’s locked.”  They didn’t have a key.  For the moment.  Perhaps they should have frisked Larry first before killing him.

She walked backward slowly, gun raised and pointed at the door as I backed up in the same direction.  I went first, she followed, and then shut the door behind us.  Locked from her side, they would not get in, key or no key.

10 maybe 15 seconds later we heard the door next door open and then self-shut with a muffled bang.  Next, there was a voice, “Where the hell are they?”

There would be two or more on lower floors cutting off our escape out of the building.  There was two next door.  We were out the door of the room next door, and ready to catch them when they realized we had escaped, and they had to exit the room.

When they did, an agonizing minute later, they were dead before they took two steps into the corridor.

Whoever planned this execution, didn’t plan it very well.  Or maybe he didn’t know that I would be comfortable around guns.  If I hadn’t, we’d both be dead by now.

Time to take a deep breath.  This was not over.

© Charles Heath 2024

Writing a book in 365 days – My Story

Publication Is Not the Finish Line

Publication Is Not the Finish Line – It’s the Start of a New Race


When the last word is typed, the manuscript is formatted, the cover is designed, and the “Published” banner finally glows on the screen, a wave of relief (and often a dash of triumph) washes over any writer. We’ve all imagined that moment: the crisp “Publish” button pressed, the celebratory confetti, the instant surge of validation.

But here’s the uncomfortable truth—the moment you click “Publish” is not the finish line; it’s the start line of an entirely different race.

Whether you’re a novelist, a researcher, a marketer, or a hobbyist blogger, the real work begins the instant your creation becomes publicly accessible. In this post, we’ll unpack why publication is only the opening act, explore the stages that follow, and give you a practical roadmap to turn that freshly minted piece into lasting impact.


1. The Myth of “Done”

The “Publication = Completion” Narrative

From school assignments to best‑selling novels, we’re conditioned to view the act of publishing as the final checkpoint. We’re taught:

  • Write → Edit → Submit → Publish → Celebrate.

That tidy linear progression feels satisfying because it mirrors the way we often approach tasks—one box ticked after another.

Why This Myth Is Dangerous

Treating publication as the endpoint can:

  • Stifle Momentum: You risk slipping into a “mission accomplished” lull, letting your work gather dust.
  • Undermine Reach: Without proactive promotion, even the most brilliant piece can remain invisible.
  • Ignore Feedback Loops: Readers, reviewers, and metrics provide crucial data that can refine future work—but only if you listen.

2. The Real Work Begins: What Happens After the Ink Dries

Below is a six‑step framework that turns a fresh release into a living, breathing asset—one that continues to attract, engage, and convert audiences long after the initial launch.

PhaseWhat It Looks LikeWhy It Matters
A. Visibility & DistributionSEO, social media blasts, email newsletters, platform algorithmsWithout eyes on your work, impact is impossible
B. Audience EngagementComments, Q&A sessions, webinars, community buildingHuman connection fuels loyalty and word‑of‑mouth
C. Feedback CollectionReviews, surveys, analytics dashboardsData informs iteration and future projects
D. Iteration & RepurposingUpdates, sequels, spin‑off content, translationsKeeps the content fresh and expands its lifespan
E. Authority BuildingGuest posts, speaking gigs, citationsPositions you as a thought leader in your niche
F. Legacy & MonetizationAffiliate programs, courses, merchandiseConverts influence into sustainable revenue

Let’s dive deeper into each phase.


3. Phase A – Visibility & Distribution

3.1. SEO Isn’t a One‑Time Checklist

For blog posts, research papers, or e‑books, search engine optimisation is the engine that drives organic traffic. Here’s a quick SEO sprint:

ActionHow to Execute
Keyword ResearchUse tools like Ahrefs, SEMrush, or the free Google Keyword Planner. Identify primary and long‑tail keywords with moderate difficulty and decent search volume.
On‑Page OptimizationInsert the primary keyword in the title, first 100 words, sub‑headings, meta description, and image alt tags. Keep keyword density natural (≈1‑1.5%).
Internal LinkingLink to at least two related pieces on your site. This boosts dwell time and spreads link equity.
Schema MarkupAdd structured data (Article, Book, or AcademicArticle schema) so Google can display rich snippets.
PerformanceCompress images, enable lazy loading, and use a CDN to keep page load < 2 seconds.

3.2. Social Amplification

  • Twitter Threads: Break key takeaways into a 5‑tweet thread with a compelling hook and a link to the full piece.
  • LinkedIn Articles: Repurpose the content as a LinkedIn long‑form post, targeting professionals in your niche.
  • Instagram Carousel: Convert stats or plot points into a visually appealing carousel; use the “Link in Bio” for the full content.
  • TikTok Teasers: Quick 15‑second videos summarising the main idea can drive massive traffic, especially for younger audiences.

Pro Tip: Schedule a 30‑day “promotion calendar” post‑publish. Rotate content formats (quotes, infographics, video snippets) across platforms to avoid fatigue.

3.3. Email Marketing

Your email list is the most reliable traffic source. Craft a multi‑touch sequence:

  1. Announcement Email – “My new [book/paper/post] is live!”
  2. Value‑Add Follow‑up – Highlight a key insight with a downloadable cheat‑sheet.
  3. Community Invite – Invite readers to a private Slack/Discord or a live Q&A.
  4. Feedback Request – Ask for reviews, testimonials, or suggestions for future topics.

4. Phase B – Audience Engagement

4.1. Build a Conversation, Not a Broadcast

  • Comment Moderation: Respond within 24 hours. Acknowledge nuance, ask follow‑up questions, and keep the dialogue alive.
  • Live Sessions: Host a 30‑minute live stream (YouTube, Instagram Live, or Zoom) to discuss the work, field questions, and reveal behind‑the‑scenes stories.
  • User‑Generated Content (UGC): Encourage readers to share how they applied your ideas. Repost the best examples—social proof fuels further adoption.

4.2. Community Platforms

  • Discord/Slack: Create a dedicated channel for deep discussions. Pin resources, set up regular “office hours,” and reward active members with exclusive content.
  • Reddit AMAs: Participate in relevant subreddits. An “Ask Me Anything” session can expose your work to a massive, engaged audience.

5. Phase C – Feedback Collection

5.1. Quantitative Metrics

MetricToolBenchmark (for a new piece)
Page ViewsGoogle Analytics500–1,000 in the first week
Avg. Time on PageGA/Hotjar2–3 minutes (indicates depth)
Bounce RateGA< 50%
Conversion Rate (newsletter sign‑up)ConvertKit/HubSpot1–2%
Citation Count (academic)Google Scholar1–2 within 6 months

5.2. Qualitative Insights

  • Surveys: Use Typeform or Google Forms to ask readers what resonated, what confused them, and what topics they’d love next.
  • Review Mining: Scrape Amazon or Goodreads reviews for recurring themes, then feed those into your content pipeline.
  • Social Listening: Set up alerts on Brand24 or Mention for your title/author name to capture unsolicited chatter.

Why It Matters: Data transforms intuition into actionable strategy. It tells you where to double‑down and what to abandon.


6. Phase D – Iteration & Repurposing

6.1. Version Updates

  • Living Documents: For guides or research, schedule a quarterly “update” to incorporate new findings, case studies, or reader suggestions.
  • Errata Notices: If errors slip through, publish a transparent correction—readers respect honesty.

6.2. Spin‑Off Assets

OriginalSpin‑OffFormat
Blog Post (10k words)Slide DeckPowerPoint/Canva for webinars
NovelShort Story SetKindle Vella or Substack serialization
Academic PaperPodcast EpisodeInterview with co‑author
eBookMini‑CourseTeachable or Kajabi module

Repurposing multiplies reach without reinventing the wheel. Each new format taps into a different audience segment.


7. Phase E – Authority Building

7.1. Thought‑Leadership Platforms

  • Guest Columns: Pitch excerpts to industry newsletters or high‑traffic sites like Medium, HuffPost, or Forbes.
  • Speaking Engagements: Use your published work as a credential to land podcast interviews, conference panels, or university guest lectures.
  • Citation Campaigns: For academic pieces, share a “citation‑ready” graphic that includes a properly formatted reference. Makes it easier for others to cite you.

7.2. Awards & Recognitions

Enter relevant contests (e.g., indie book awards, research grants, content marketing accolades). Winning—or even being a finalist—adds a badge of credibility that amplifies future launches.


8. Phase F – Legacy & Monetisation

8.1. Evergreen Revenue Streams

StreamHow to Implement
Affiliate LinksEmbed relevant tools or books within your content; disclose transparently.
Online CoursesBreak the book’s concepts into a structured curriculum; host on Udemy or your own LMS.
Membership CommunityOffer premium Q&A, behind‑the‑scenes footage, or monthly masterclasses.
MerchandiseDesign quote‑centric tees, mugs, or posters for fans.
Paid ConsultingPosition yourself as the go‑to expert for businesses wanting to apply your methodology.

8.2. Long‑Term Archiving

  • Digital Preservation: Store final files in multiple formats (PDF, EPUB, HTML) on platforms like Internet Archive or a personal cloud backup.
  • Print Runs: For niche audiences, consider a limited‑edition print run (via Amazon KDP Print-on-Demand) that can become a collector’s item.

9. The Mindset Shift: From “Finish” to “Lifecycle”

So, how do you internalise this new philosophy?

  1. Adopt a Project‑Lifecycle Lens: Treat each piece as a product with a roadmap—launch, growth, maturity, and renewal phases.
  2. Allocate Post‑Launch Time: Block at least 20% of your weekly schedule for promotion, engagement, and analysis.
  3. Set Measurable Milestones: Instead of “publish today,” aim for “gain 500 newsletter sign‑ups in 30 days” or “secure 5 guest posts within 60 days.”
  4. Celebrate Incrementally: Recognise small wins—first comment, first media mention, first affiliate sale—to sustain momentum.

10. Take Action Now

Your next step is simple: Pick one piece you’ve already published and create a 30‑day post‑launch plan using the framework above.

  • Draft a quick SEO checklist.
  • Schedule three social posts per week.
  • Set up a short survey for readers.

Write down the plan, share it with a peer for accountability, and watch the ripple effect of proactive effort turn a static publication into a dynamic asset.


To summarise:

  • Publication is merely the opening act, not the finale.
  • Visibility, engagement, feedback, iteration, authority, and monetisation are the six essential post‑publish phases.
  • Treat every piece as a living product with a roadmap, not a one‑off event.

By embracing this mindset, you’ll transform a single release into a perpetual engine of influence, community, and income.

Top 5 sights on the road less travelled – Santiago

Discover Santiago’s Hidden Treasures: 5 Off-the-Beaten-Path Adventures

Santiago, Chile’s vibrant capital, is often associated with its iconic landmarks like Cerro San Cristóbal and the Central Cathedral. But for travellers eager to uncover the city’s soul, there’s a world of hidden gems waiting to be explored. Let’s venture beyond the guidebooks and dive into Santiago’s lesser-known treasures that promise unforgettable experiences. Grab your sense of curiosity and join us on this journey!


1. Barrio Lastarria: A Cultural Escape

Tucked just north of downtown, Barrio Lastarria is a bohemian enclave where cobblestone streets, ivy-clad buildings, and creative energy reign. This neighbourhood is a haven for artists, intellectuals, and foodies. Stroll through its tree-lined avenues to discover cozy cafés, indie bookstores, and art galleries like Galería Gabriela Mistral. Don’t miss the Cine Lastarria, a beloved 19th-century cinema that hosts independent films and cultural events. For lunch, try El Rincón de Mafalda, a charming parrilla where locals gather for juicy empanadas and artisanal wines. Weekends are best spent exploring its bustling outdoor markets and hidden patios that buzz with live music.


Visit the heart of Santiago, see the Metropolitan Cathedral, the Presidential Palace (La Moneda), and soak in the atmosphere with street performers at the main square, Plaza de Armas. Historic Downtown Santiago, centred around the lively Plaza de Armas, is Chile’s historical heart, featuring iconic buildings like the Metropolitan Cathedral, Central Post Office, and National History Museum, all surrounding the leafy square with its monuments, street performers, and vibrant local atmosphere, offering a perfect starting point for exploring the city’s rich heritage and culture. Visitors can enjoy free entry to the square and surrounding museums, observe local life, and easily access it via the Metro.


3. Mapocho Valley: A Modern Cultural Oasis

Once an industrial hub, the Mapocho Valley has been transformed into Santiago’s hippest cultural destination. Home to the Gabriela Mistral Park, this riverside haven offers jogging trails, art installations, and the striking Biomuseo, a modern art space with rotating exhibitions. Nearby, the Pabellón 5 hosts innovative food and craft fairs, while the Museo del Banco Central showcases Chilean art and history. Arrive in the evening to witness the glow of the Mapocho Wharf, a perfect spot to sip a chicha morada (purple corn drink) and watch the city skyline shimmer.


4. Mercado de las Pulgas: Time-Travel at the Flea Market

Every Saturday and Sunday, the Mercado de las Pulgas (Flea Market) resurrects Santiago’s colonial past in the Mansión Villarrica. Spread over 30 blocks, this open-air bazaar is a treasure hunt for antiques, handicrafts, and vintage clothing. Haggling is part of the fun—pick up a handwoven poncho or a pre-Columbian artifact at stalls owned by passionate vendors. The surrounding Parque Forestal is perfect for a post-shopping stroll, where street performers and food trucks add to the lively atmosphere.


5. Fundo Balmaceda: A Botanical Sanctuary

Tucked away in the leafy suburb of Ñuñoa, Fundo Balmaceda is a hidden garden paradise. This historic estate features lush botanical gardens, tranquil ponds, and a small museum of pre-Columbian art. It’s a peaceful retreat from the city’s hustle, where you can picnic, bird-watch, or simply lose yourself in the beauty of over 1,500 species of plants. The best part? Admission is free, and the site’s blend of nature and history makes it a local favourite. Tip: Visit during the day (it’s closed at night) and bring a camera for those Insta-worthy moments.


Local Tips for the Best Experience

  • Getting Around: Use Santiago’s efficient metro system or bike-share program (Bicentenario) to reach these spots.
  • Timing: Plan your visits around local events—check out the Santiago a Mil theatre festival or Ciclo del Terror horror film season for added flair.
  • Safety: Stay in well-populated areas, especially in neighbourhoods like Barrio Lastarria and La Vega Central.

Conclusion: Santiago Beyond the Surface
Santiago’s magic isn’t just in its skyline or its museums—it’s in the whispered stories of its hidden corners. From the depths of the catacombs to the blooms of Fundo Balmaceda, these experiences offer a deeper connection to Chile’s heritage and creativity. So, step off the main road; the most rewarding adventures lie where few tourists tread. ¡Buen viaje!


Final Note: Ready to explore? Share your favourite hidden spots in Santiago in the comments—let’s keep the road less travelled ever-evolving! 🌿

What I learned about writing – A hand written manuscript is not an advertisement your word processor has died

OK. We’re not doing much writing, and today, we have another suggestion, one that might cause an unnecessary rush at the stationery store for pencils.

I was in one today, a place called Office Works, getting some folders to put the printed copies of my latest books about to be published.

I’d previously bought pencils – a box of 24, a motorised pencil sharpener, cards – though I intend to use these for a non-fiction book, pens – red, blue, black, erasable – for doing crosswords. I’ve not had to buy notebooks for a while, small and large, but the last time I got some journalist notebooks.

But, I digress…

It is suggested, and I think it’s a great idea, that at times it is better to write down the story, mainly because I can write as fast as the ideas come, and I cannot type that fast. Not without a million errors and a lot of indecipherable words.

There are exponents for both means of getting words on paper, but I have to say the majority of my original books were written in small notepads, at work and elsewhere, because ideas and storylines come to me at the sometimes most awkward moments.

Consider carrying around a notebook and a pencil or pen.

Otherwise, my other means of getting ideas down is a note-taking app on my phone, the best at the moment being Somnote.

And tired of waiting for the moment when the book gets underway, stand by, news on that front is coming.

I have a degree of scepticism because I generally get words down on my phone, the only implement that is nearby at all times, no matter where I am.

Of course, many years ago, I always travelled with little pocket-sized notebooks and a pen, rather than a pencil, to write. I still have all of these, several hundred in fact, in several shoeboxes in the cupboard in my writing room.

Over the years, I have accumulated many A5-sized notebooks I bought where there were stationery sales, and now use these to both make notes and write. I tend not to use the smaller notebooks now, but I have a hundred or so sitting in a drawer just in case.

But do you like to write using a biro, with smudgy ink, a pen with a rollerball tip with less smudge, a felt-tip pen, which, depending on the paper type, can leach through, making it difficult to write on both sides, a fountain pen with ink, the old-fashioned way of writing letters, and some of the older writers back in the day?

I remember my early days in school, grade three in fact, when we switched from pencil to pen and ink. It was very messy, to begin with, but I remember vividly being the ink monitor, the one who filled the ink wells, and discovering my schoolmate’s prelidiction for stuffing bits of blotting paper into the well for whatever reason.

Even now, it would be a messy way to write.

But the choice is yours.

Top 5 sights on the road less travelled – Lima

Beyond the Typical Tourist Trail: 5 Unmissable, Off‑the‑Beaten‑Path Experiences in Lima

Lima—the City of Kings—is famous for its bustling historic centre, world‑renowned gastronomy, and the dramatic cliffs of Miraflores that gaze out over the Pacific. Yet, once you’ve sampled ceviche at a top‑rated restaurant and snapped a selfie at the Plaza de Armas, you’ll quickly realise there’s a whole hidden side to Peru’s capital that most guidebooks barely mention.

If you’re the kind of traveler who loves to wander where the crowds don’t, here are five carefully curated experiences that will let you see Lima through a local’s eyes, without missing out on comfort or safety.


1. Wander the Colorful Streets of Barranco’s “Paseo de los Artistas”

Why it’s special

Barranco is Lima’s bohemian heart, but most visitors stick to the main promenade and the famous Bridge of Sighs. A short walk inland leads you to a tucked‑away lane known as Paseo de los Artistas—a vibrant corridor of murals, independent galleries, and tiny ateliers where emerging Peruvian artists showcase everything from street‑art stencils to avant‑garde sculpture.

What to do

ActivityDetails
Mural huntingFollow the “Graffiti Trail” map (available at the Casa de la Literatura kiosk). Look for the giant “Cumbia de los Andes” piece by local legend Javier “Javi” Lira.
Mini‑workshopMany studios host free 30‑minute workshops—try your hand at pintura al óleo or corte de papel on Tuesdays at 4 p.m.
Coffee breakSlip into Café San Isidro (the tiny café with the green door) for a cup of café pasado made with beans roasted right in the neighbourhood.

Insider tip

If you’re there on a Saturday evening, the lane transforms into an impromptu open‑mic night. Bring a notebook and join the impromptu poetry circle.


2. Take a Morning Kayak on the Rimac River – “Río Verde”

Why it’s special

The Rimac River is usually known as a bustling waterway that runs past the historic centre. Few tourists realise that upstream, the river widens into a calm, emerald‑tinted stretch called Río Verde, flanked by a thin ribbon of mangrove forest. Small eco‑tour operators run guided kayak tours that reveal a different ecological face of Lima.

What to do

  • Early start – Depart from the Club de Regatas dock at 7 a.m. to avoid city traffic and catch the mist rolling off the water.
  • Spot wildlife – Look for the elusive cormorán (cormorant) nesting on the mangroves, and keep an eye out for tiny river otters (nutrias).
  • Picnic on the bank – Guides provide a traditional juane (rice‑stuffed banana leaf parcel) and a thermos of mate de coca for a post‑paddle snack.

Practicalities

  • Cost: US $35 per person (includes kayak, helmet, guide, and snack).
  • Skill level: Beginner‑friendly; paddles are stable, and guides are fluent in English and Spanish.

3. Explore the Pre‑Colonial Ruins of Pachacamac – A Hidden Archaeological Gem

Why it’s special

While many travellers flock to the grand ruins of Huaca Pucllana in Miraflores, the Pachacamac complex, located 30 km south of Lima, remains relatively quiet. This sacred site predates the Inca and was a major pilgrimage destination for the coastal cultures of pre‑Columbian Peru.

What to do

  • Guided tour – Book a small‑group tour (max 8 people) with Arqueología Viva to learn about the Ica and Nazca influences on the temple architecture.
  • Sunset ceremony – If you can stay until dusk, the site’s open terrace offers a spectacular view of the Pacific horizon, where local Aymara priests sometimes perform a traditional papa (offering) ritual.
  • Museum visit – The on‑site museum houses ceramic fragments and a reconstructed temple model that provides context to the ruins.

Travel note

Take the coastal highway (Panamericana Sur) and exit at the Pachacamac sign. Parking is free, and the entrance fee is modest (S/ 5).


4. Savour a Secret “Peruvian Street Food Tour” in the Cercado de Lima

Why it’s special

Most culinary tours focus on upscale restaurants in Miraflores or the famed Mercado de Surquillo. Yet the historic district’s narrow alleys hide a culinary underworld of anticuchospicarones, and cuy chactado served from modest, family‑run stalls.

What to do

DishWhere to find it
Anticuchos de corazón (grilled beef heart)Anticuchería El Buen Sazón on Calle San Martín (open only after 9 p.m.).
Picarones (sweet potato doughnuts)Dulcería La Senda in the Plaza de la Merced, served with chancaca syrup.
Cuy chactado (crispy guinea pig)Puesto del Cuy near the San Cristóbal market; the vendor will slice it open in front of you.
Chicha de jora (fermented corn drink)Small chichería behind the Casa de la Literatura, offering a tasting flight of 3 varieties.

How to join

The Lima Food Explorers collective runs a 4‑hour “Night Bites” tour every Thursday and Saturday, starting at 8 p.m. The price is US $25 per person, which includes a drink and a short cooking demo.

Safety tip

Stick to stalls that display a clean cooking area and have a visible Vigilancia Sanitaria (health inspection) sticker.


5. Unwind at Parque de la Reserva – The Secret Water Garden

Why it’s special

Everyone knows the Magic Water Circuit (Circuito Mágico del Agua), but few realise that behind the main show lies a quiet, Japanese‑inspired water garden that opens only during the early morning and late evening hours. Designed by renowned landscape architect Mario Lara, the garden features a series of koi ponds, stone lanterns, and a hidden bamboo grove.

What to do

  • Morning meditation – Arrive at 6:30 a.m. for a free, 15‑minute guided meditation session led by a local yoga instructor (check the park’s Facebook page for the schedule).
  • Photography walk – The soft morning light creates ethereal reflections; the garden’s shōji screens make a perfect backdrop for portrait shots.
  • Evening lantern release – On Fridays, the park hosts a community lantern‑lighting ceremony at 9 p.m., where you can write a wish on a biodegradable paper lantern and set it afloat on the central pond.

Practicalities

  • Entrance: Free (the Magic Circuit costs for the evening show).
  • Access: The garden is located behind the main fountain pavilion; look for signs pointing to “Jardín Secreto”.

How to Fit All Five Into a Long Weekend

DayMorningAfternoonEvening
FridayKayak at Río Verde (7 a.m.)Explore Pachacamac ruins (2 p.m.)Magic Water Circuit (8 p.m.)
SaturdaySecret Food Tour in Cercado (10 a.m.)Barranco’s Paseo de los Artistas (2 p.m.)Lantern ceremony at Parque de la Reserva (9 p.m.)
SundayRelaxed brunch in Barranco + optional mini‑workshopFree time for shopping or museum visitEarly flight or onward travel

If you have only one day, start with the kayak, then hop to Barrio Barranco for lunch, and finish with the secret garden at Parque de la Reserva.


Final Thoughts

Lima’s mainstream attractions are undeniably worth seeing, but the city’s true soul shines brightest in its quieter corners. From paddling on a serene river to tasting street‑food secrets that have survived centuries, these five off‑the‑beaten‑path experiences will give you a richer, more authentic connection to Peru’s coastal capital.

Pack comfortable shoes, a reusable water bottle, and an appetite for adventure—Lima’s hidden gems are waiting.

Ready to wander? Share your own lesser‑known Lima discoveries in the comments below, and let’s keep the conversation going!