Writing proceeds apace and the next chapter seems to have gone on a bit longer than I wanted, but that was because I was having fun.
These two are going to be together, not exactly by choice, but the result of circumstances.
I have also been making notes at the same time, of situations that will arise from their being together, and what happens later on that causes the mistaken identity.
I have also created a timeline with actions that stretch further into the story, and wrote a few little sections at the same time because the story was almost writing itself, and moments like those, I find it best to get it down on paper, no matter how roughly it turns out.
I am also doing a quick edit of this section of writing because it will be most likely two or three chapters, not just one.
Today’s effort amounts to 2,214 words, for a total, so far, of 3,914.
Writing proceeds apace and the next chapter seems to have gone on a bit longer than I wanted, but that was because I was having fun.
These two are going to be together, not exactly by choice, but the result of circumstances.
I have also been making notes at the same time, of situations that will arise from their being together, and what happens later on that causes the mistaken identity.
I have also created a timeline with actions that stretch further into the story, and wrote a few little sections at the same time because the story was almost writing itself, and moments like those, I find it best to get it down on paper, no matter how roughly it turns out.
I am also doing a quick edit of this section of writing because it will be most likely two or three chapters, not just one.
Today’s effort amounts to 2,214 words, for a total, so far, of 3,914.
It’s a story I’ve been thinking about – the notion that you could be mistaken for someone else.
And not just anyone, someone who is on the run and wanted by the police.
Of course, finding that first sentence that is going to drag the reader down the rabbit hole of the story to come takes longer than it does to write the first chapter.
But, after a few hours deliberation, the project is now under way.
So, the MC is a travel agent, one that prefers to go on his own tours so that he can truthfully tell his clients what places, hotels, and travel services are really like.
I’ve noticed that when travel writers do reviews, the seem to get different rooms and experiences than us poor travellers, no more noticeable than when we stayed in San Gimignano. The hotel sounded wonderful, and the description from the room overlooking the town square fantastic. Pity then we were shoved in a small room out the back, overlooking pigeon coops, and a shower than continually broke down.
It’s probably this disappointment that provided some inspiration for the book.
But rather than being a travelogue, I’ve added some mystery, and suspense to make it more readable.
Today’s effort amounts to 1,700 words, for a total, so far, of 1,700.
It’s a story I’ve been thinking about – the notion that you could be mistaken for someone else.
And not just anyone, someone who is on the run and wanted by the police.
Of course, finding that first sentence that is going to drag the reader down the rabbit hole of the story to come takes longer than it does to write the first chapter.
But, after a few hours deliberation, the project is now under way.
So, the MC is a travel agent, one that prefers to go on his own tours so that he can truthfully tell his clients what places, hotels, and travel services are really like.
I’ve noticed that when travel writers do reviews, the seem to get different rooms and experiences than us poor travellers, no more noticeable than when we stayed in San Gimignano. The hotel sounded wonderful, and the description from the room overlooking the town square fantastic. Pity then we were shoved in a small room out the back, overlooking pigeon coops, and a shower than continually broke down.
It’s probably this disappointment that provided some inspiration for the book.
But rather than being a travelogue, I’ve added some mystery, and suspense to make it more readable.
Today’s effort amounts to 1,700 words, for a total, so far, of 1,700.
Is this what is known as getting down to the pointy end? I’m in the home stretch, and what makes it more of an event is that I now have a clear idea of the front cover.
This was made possible when I was sent some photographs of my eldest granddaughter in her formal dress. Here we call that event to mark the end of secondary school a formal. Elsewhere I have heard it is called a prom.
It makes a perfect illustration of Princess Marigold, although rather than transcribe the photo, I have converted into a sketch drawing which is remarkably accurate. She was not quite sure if she wanted to have her likeness splashed across the cover in full colour. However, I have to come up with the rest of the cover design, hopefully with a representation of a castle in the sky, or something similar.
As for the story, a new character found its way into the pages of the story, one I hadn’t envisaged in the beginning, but had made herself a necessity in the final battle between good and evil.
As for the title, it had been set in stone for as long as I’ve been writing it, but now, as the curtain is coming down, the story is ending in a way I hadn’t considered, and it is almost as if the characters have taken over and writing their own ending.
I can feel another brainstorming session coming on.
For the word counters, another 4,404 words this session, for a total of 149,773.
I’ve managed to get some writing time for this story, mainly to keep continuity as it’s quite often lost when stretching it over a long period of time.
For a long time I always knew how the story would end, it was probably one of the few that I’ve written that had an ending in mind. Now, that’s all up in the air.
What had brought on the change of heart? It might be one of the hazards of being a pantser, which when I took to the notion I would finish it come this NaNoWriMo, and when I didn’t, realised something was fundamentally wrong.
Not with the story, but just how it would end, which for Marigold, will always be the same, but for the realm. The thing is, the deeper you dig into a story, the more people who are affected, and the different points of view, and variations on the story from kingdom to kingdom, the more the resolution is affected.
What’s good for one might not be the same for another, and once there are new variables, new people, now wishes are taken into account, the more impossible the job is. And especially for a young princess who just came of age, and had no experience of a world beyond her own orbit.
In a way it reflects the world on my eldest granddaughter, for whom it was written, and her life has changed as much momentously as had Marigold’s. Different people, different ages, different times, that transition from wide eyed child to difficult teenager wasn’t as hard as I remembered it, but then things were different when I was young.
And perhaps more telling, not a princess either.
For the word counters, another 4,258 words this session, for a total of 144,369.
Well, I’m not exactly having fun, but time is going past very quickly, and I suspect this is more to do with getting old, accelerating after turning 65.
This month I’ve been spending time finally trying to complete the YA fantasy story that I started over seven years ago. I had hoped to finish it last NANOWRIMO, but it was a bigger task than I estimated.
Then, I had expected it to be written in under 100,000 words, and last update, I’d crossed the 140,000 mark, and there’s still about 20 chapters to go.
It simply means there’s going to be a monumental editing excercise, in several months time. If I get it finished. I’m hoping that it will be finished by my eldest granddaughters 18th birthday as it is being written for her.
That means, concentrating on this, everything else has been put on the backburner, which is a disappointment because I have another two books not very far away from finally being published.
I have published a few more inspiration maybe stories, and several episodes of the episodic stories, but these had been written earlier, and no I will have to spend some time writing more for publishing next month.
If only there were more hours in a day, more days in a week, and more weeks in a month!
I’ve managed to get some writing time for this story, mainly to keep continuity as it’s quite often lost when stretching it over a long period of time.
For a long time I always knew how the story would end, it was probably one of the few that I’ve written that had an ending in mind.
Of course, as the story proceeds, some of the plotline will change, sometimes caused by the character almost writing their own story, or it is dictated by events that you may not have foreseen at the beginning.
It’s a bit like life itself. You can chart a course that you might think will be where you are headed, and then an unforeseen event will turn everything on it’s head.
Stories are like that. One minute you are hurtling towards the end, everything about to be tied up into a neat bow.
The other day I had a brainstorm, you know, the sort that comes out of left field, and leaves you either elated or shattered.
I’m not sure what I’m thinking right now, only that the end will be different, and better. Much, much better.
For the word counters, another 3,490 words this session, for a total of 141,111.
I’ve managed to get some writing time for this story, mainly to keep continuity as it’s quite often lost when stretching it over a long period of time.
One of the parts I’ve been working on lately had been difficult to write, to say the least, and there have been about seven attempts to get it right.
Nothing is ever as simple as it seems.
I’ve been reading up on the way stories told over time change. I think these types of stories are called Chinese Whispers. That got me to thinking about the whole legend itself, and the fact that it would be different in each of the kingdoms in the realm, simply because each would cast their own hero.
And since it was a story that was rarely committed to paper, the oral retelling would always have the tellers stamp upon it. If it were me reciting the story, the saviour would be a boy. Since the story was mostly related to children by their mothers, the saviour was, and always be a girl.
This morning when mulling over some completely different problems, the end, a different one to that I was contemplating, came into my head, and, in fitting with the nature of how the legend was passed on, it will be completely unexpected.
Also, for the ending, there will be an epic face off, one that has be brewing for hundreds of years.
For the word counters, another 4,200 words this session, for a total of 137,621.