Day 202 – Writing Exercise
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Myra was a law unto herself.
She was the sort of girl that everyone had an opinion of, and not one of them was right.
The thing is, she never corrected them.
And something else: she didn’t care what anyone else thought of her. She simply didn’t speak to her detractors; she ignored the taunts and derogatory remarks from people who should have known better.
Even her female contemporaries had little nice to say about her, and I don’t think any of them willingly associated with her.
Not that she cared.
It became a pastime to sit nearby and watch people who should have more sense give her a hard time. Some said that it was part of the rites of passage in high school.
Others said it was character building.
I thought differently, but to my dishonour, I did nothing about it.
That is, not for a long time.
And then, when I did, I was not sure why.
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Reggie was a class A deadhead.
Good at football, so-called God’s gift to the girls, and had parents who were, by their own admission, movers and shakers.
By that I guess it meant they were large donors to the school football team, which ensured Reggie had a place to focus his talents
I’d seen him play football, and it was not talent I saw.
Eleanor was equally as dense as Reggie, which in turn made them ideally suited. She was the head cheerleader, and the resident graduating class queen bee.
Girls would literally kill to get her approval.
I didn’t see the sense in it. Cheerleaders were regarded by the football team, and others, as something quite different to what the girls thought of themselves.
Needless to say, Myra could never make the cheer squad. Which seemed wrong to me because she looked just as attractive as all the rest, if you took away the exterior cladding, put her in a school uniform and also got rid of the excessive make-up and the different coloured hair each week
This week it was hot pink.
Nor did she wear the school uniform and had racked up an inestimable number of demerit points that got her into almost permanent detention.
That’s where I first met her.
I’d seen her around, and watched from afar the effects of her attitude towards her fellow students. Her friends, if they could be called that, were the misfits, and by the middle of graduation year that’s where I finished up.
In detention with the other misfits.
I doubt she noticed me. No one did, which in a way suited me because I was studying hard so I could go to college. I know my parents would be glad to see me go, because I didn’t quite fit their idea of a proper child.
Whatever that meant.
They could hardly put up my older brother as a shining example I should follow. I was not interested in sport.
So, there we were. In detention.
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Mr Forsythe, probably about a hundred years old and on the cusp of retirement, was the teacher in charge of detention.
No one else wanted to do it, and the few extra dollars he got in overtime went towards his retirement, wandering the ruins of ancient Rome.
His subject was history, and Ancient Rome, a subject he could go on about, and did. Most students treated his class as a joke, but he just ignored them and kept on going, and probably would through a prison riot.
I thought he was a good teacher and his class was one of the few I liked. There were six students in detention. Myra and I sat on opposite sides of the room down the back. The other four sat up the front and were badly behaved.
Not dramatically so, or they would never get out of going to detention. Neither Myra nor I joined them. Detention was just another hiding place.
Until it wasn’t.
For a month, the others left us alone. No point stirring up someone who wouldn’t rise to the occasion.
Eleanor was different, because of her parents’ influence, the fact she was Prom Queen this year, and on the student council. She ended up on the detention list for giving another cheer wannabe the treatment, otherwise known as the initiation rite.
I’d heard she had been cited, but I never thought that the head would enforce it. It remained to be seen whether she would stay.
She made a dramatic entrance.
She didn’t bother to knock on the door, marched straight up to Mr Forsythe’s desk and slammed the sheet of paper on his desk so loudly we all jumped.
Up till then we were in our own world, shutting out the rest of the room.
Forsythe didn’t look up. Didn’t look interested either.
“Hey, old man. This is rubbish. I don’t do detention.”
He took a few seconds, then looked up at her. “My name is Mr Forsythe, young lady, not ‘hey, you ‘.”
He took the piece of paper and read it, then looked at her again. “I presume you can read?”
“Of course, you old fool.”
He chose to ignore the insults, but I knew somewhere in this conversation he was going to put her in her place. “Read it.”
“It’s rubbish. I won’t do detention.”
“So, now it’s going from don’t do to won’t do, which is something else entirely. What you will do is sit down and be quiet. Detainees do not make noise.”
With that, he went back to his book.
“This is stupid. I’m leaving.”
He sighed, then looked at her. “Then you will fail history and therefore will not be able to graduate with the rest of your class. And no graduation, no prom. Now sit down and contemplate why you are here, and why you are not going to darken my door for much longer. Am I understood?”
He metaphorically kicked her where it hurt. Graduation and the prom. Being the Prom Queen, being the Queen Bee.
I thought Forsythe was brave taking on her family. He would not be the first teacher her family had tried to ruin.
“This is wrong.”
“No. What is wrong is that you thought you could do whatever you pleased without consequences. That might happen at home but not in here. Sit and be silent.”
She glared at him, but it had no effect.
She was not going to be able to leave, so she scanned the room and saw us, Myra and me. I could guess what was going to happen next
She came down the back of the room and sat at the desk in the middle of the back row. She smiled at me and scowled at Myra.
Eleanor was never able to get under Myra’s skin, not in the way Myra could do to her. It was easy. She had nothing Eleanor could use against her, unlike every other girl.
She smiled at me because I was once foolish enough to be tricked by her, but once bitten was enough. I made a point of avoiding her. Not so easy in detention. But I had nothing to lose. I didn’t care if I never got out of detention.
She made a great effort to make sure Mr Foresyth knew where she landed. He wouldn’t care; in fact, he was glad Myra and I sat down in the back. We had earned the titles of troublemakers not because we started it; it was because trouble came to us.
“So, Blinky, what are you in for?”
Blinky was the name her boyfriend gave me because one day he saw me squinting because my eyes were watering. It stuck because they thought it was insultingly funny.
It was better than some of the names they handed out
“Rest and recreation.” Which in a sense was true. Trying to avoid the football team’s idea of being boisterous was a tiring exercise.
“You must have done something bad to get put in here with the circus ringmaster.”
She was going to push Mr Foresyth as far as she could, perhaps thinking if she insulted him enough he would kick her out.
“No. But as a columnist for the high school magazine, this is where I get to work on the juicy stories.”
“No one reads it.”
“You don’t read it, Eleanor, which is to your detriment. But the Staff and the crazy students do. Where else can they read about what’s going on?. I’ve been waiting to do a story on you, and here you are, my prayers answered.”
I remembered the last student reporter the magazine editor sent to interview the head cheerleader, and what had happened.
His problem was he had a crush on her, and she played him like a finely tuned fiddle. Her expression changed when I said my prayers were answered. She had heard what she wanted to hear. No surprises there.
Myra, in the meantime, tried hard to not look like she was listening in. Eleanor would tire of me soon, and turn on her.
I asked, “Have they made Reggie the prom king yet. I’m betting you wouldn’t want anyone else as your king, and I reckon he’d be very dark if someone else got the gig.”
“Why should it matter to me? I have nothing to do with it.”
“You have everything to do with it. I heard you screaming at the head master that if Reggie didn’t get it, there’d be no more handouts. What did you mean by that?”
“Nothing. I was just making noise.” She tried to pretend none of it mattered to her, but it did. It was going to be her way or the highway.
I shrugged. “I heard you were trying to take over the grad dance. Please do. At the moment it’s going to be very boring. Oh. And what was that strongly opinionated discussion with Mr Masters? You might want to be slightly more tactful with everyone, or it will come back and bite you.”
Masters was the teacher in charge of the school paper, and one of the teachers organising the Prom. He didn’t like half of the class he taught because none of them had any respect for the press. It was, he said, an alarming trend that started at the top. Added to the fact that most of his students couldn’t string two words together.
“I thought articles were meant to be flattering. He said any article written about me would be faithfully portray me as the model for the new students as we move towards the next century.”
I was there. He was being expansive and trying to get her on-side. He needed coverage on the big issues leading up to the Prom and graduation. That meant getting Eleanor and Reggie to cooperate.
That was going to be my job, in the end.
Along with commentary for the yearbook.
“Try being your naturally charming self, Eleanor, and the story will write itself.”
There was not much point telling her the story was done, and it was not too flattering. That could change.
“Then let me know when you’re free.”
She turned away, and interaction was done. Hopefully I wouldn’t have to talk to her until detention was over.
Or I could just move.
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Myra kept a wary eye on her main detractor. It wasn’t as if she had to; it was just that small problem of Eleanor sneaking up on you when you least expected her. She did it to everyone, her secret weapon. I know the other girls in her squad were fed up and couldn’t wait for the football season to end, and for her to graduate.
I kept a wary eye on Eleanor. For her it was too good an opportunity to land a few insults. Not that Myra would want me to interfere. She could handle Eleanor, but some days she could be particularly trying.
“There’s a spot about to become vacant in the squad. I think you would make an excellent member.”
Myra simply ignored her. It might work for a while, but it was not a long-term strategy. The idea that Myra would be remotely interested in being a cheerleader was almost funny.
Myra took her time to swing around and give her a long, hard stare. “That was a joke, wasn’t it?”
It was. Eleanor was up to something. And the fact she had approached her, not the other way around, told me there was a storm front on the horizon.
“No. I’m serious. The coach said I needed to relax my stamp on the team and allow for some new talent to facilitate and breathe life into a quintessential and least recognised support group. He recommended I take a hint from the Dallas Cowboys cheer squad.”
The coach had been joking, but something had ignited in her after watching one episode of a TV series, which one of the football team had mentioned, for reasons other than cheerleading pointers.
Then came the rumour she was thinking of trying out for the team, next time they were recruiting. It was not the first time she got one of these ideas.
Myra had no interest in honing her dance skills into a weird sexualised mating performance, which she maintained was just another part of the male culture of putting women in their place engendered by the school and society in general.
She was part of a very small group of girls who firmly believed that men and boys had no right to dictate what they could do, or limit their aspirations. Eleanor believed a girl’s aspirations were to work until married, then become a wife and mother. She led by example, working at the diner, and on track to marry Reggie.
Myra had said more than once she couldn’t think of anything worse. College and career beckoned. She had no interest in boys, weddings, or wanting to be ‘looked after’ by any man.
“I doubt whether my ballet classes when I was six would be classes as the necessary dancing skills required for the job, Eleanor. Thank you for the opportunity, but I respectfully decline.”
Being polite was one thing, but refusing an offer from Eleanor, Queen Bee, leader of the pack, daughter of self confessed movers and shakers was something else entirely.
Eleanor’s expression changed. The last time I’d seen something like it was when the weather changed, and not for the good.
“So, Eleanor,” I said, thinking now would be a good time to run distraction, “if the cheer team is recruiting, does that mean you are dissatisfied with the current team members? I mean, notwithstanding the minor errors in the routine at the last game, does that mean you’re admitting there are problems? Coach Wiley says…”
She swung around and glared at me. Everyone knew the mistake was hers, simply because she had been mysteriously injured the week before. There were rumours for that too; Reggie had a violent streak, but no one was talking about it.
“Coach Wylie has too many opinions about stuff that’s above his pay grade. Perhaps if he tried to elevate the football team’s performance and not comment on the intakes of our routine, we might reach the finals.”
There was no mistaking the venom in her tone or the words from her mother’s mouth. She was the cheerleader and prom queen of her day, and much rested on the shoulders of her daughter.
“That’s your mother’s disappointment, isn’t it?” I said.
“You have no idea.”
I didn’t. My parents had no expectation of me. That all got poured into Jeremy, one of the Reggie acolytes, and through him I heard the true feelings Reggie had for Eleanor, or any of the cheerleaders.
“What happened to you a few weeks back? You haven’t been yourself?”
The expression softened, which for Eleanor was a marked change from the tough facade she tried hard to maintain. It may have surprised her that anyone could sound concerned. I know her mother pushed her way beyond her limits and ability simply because her mother was living her aspirations through her daughter.
It was, I’d finally realised, an impossible dream. When would Eleanor?
Then the facade snapped back. “Nothing. And if anything had it would be none of your business.” She was turning back to Myra.
“Actually, it is. News is news, good or bad, and the public have a right to know.” I was quoting Walters.
She was going to regret sitting down in the back.
She turned back, and the look she gave me was unfathomable. Despair, hatred, misery- it was like she had just discovered everything she had thought her life was about just got turned on its head.
“I did nothing wrong.”
“Nothing wrong according to the values your mother puts on your actions, which I’m guessing were handed down. It may have served 20 years ago but not now. The same as you can create your own style. Just saying.”
Perhaps I’d overstepped the mark, but I got the impression she was in a no-win situation on all fronts. The school, the cheer squad, Reggie, her mother, and her contemporaries.
She didn’t say anything; perhaps there was no searing retort she could throw at me right then.
But Myra decided to add her two cents’ worth, “I’m guessing that cheer squad vacancy just evaporated.”
Eleanor turned to her, “Why can’t you just be an ordinary girl, wear a school uniform like the rest of us, and what’s with the hair? I mean seriously?”
It wasn’t said in a mean way, but it could have had less of an edge.
“You never heard of individualism? I hate the idea of conformity and living out someone’s expectations. I am my own person.”
“And your mother lets you?”
“She doesn’t like it, but within reason I have a reasonable amount of freedom.”
“You’re lucky then.”
I added my two cents’ worth too, “My parents don’t care. Maybe if I was on the football team, or in the track and field team, but I’m not. To them I don’t exist. To the other boys in teams, I’m just a punching bag. It’s why I’m here.”
“So you’re telling me I’m not the only one with problems “
“I get told often I am the problem,” Myra said.
“That’s what Reggie tells me. Once I learn my place, he says, things will be better.”
An admission perhaps she might not have told us in different circumstances, but it explained a great deal. Reggie was not a very nice person, and even as she was right now, she was still a better person than he ever would be.
“It doesn’t have to be like that, Eleanor. You could do a lot better than him.” Myra, I could see, was now concerned for her.
But she wasn’t going to let her guard down. Eleanor might be sounding reasonable, but she had been like this before, just before the explosion
“I don’t know. Until I walked into this room, everything was in a state that I could control, or at least I thought I could. Talking to you two can be depressing, all the negative stuff going on. To be honest, I wish I hadn’t talked to you two. Now my head is filled with even more nonsense. I can’t explain how I ended up in detention to anyone. And you two can’t talk about this to anyone. I need to think. God, even thinking about thinking it is giving me a headache.”
With that, she pulled out a book that looked to me like a romance novel, similar to ones my mother read, and noth Myra and I went back to our solitude. But things were different now, in a way I couldn’t explain.
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When detention was over, she left without saying goodbye. Myra speculated that she would leave before the end of the year and simply run away.
Myra normally just packed her bag and left. Today she lingered as I got my stuff together. She wanted to say something, and I could see her thinking about how she was going to handle things now.
We left together, not saying anything. There was a coffee shop I’d seen her in nearby, and we headed there.
Coffee and cake delivered, and about a dozen words later, she had decided what she was going to say. I’d never seen her deliberate before.
“You didn’t have to run interference.”
“I know. It was just a protective instinct I have for people I care about.”
“You don’t have to. I can handle Eleanor.”
“Most people can’t. And she’s like a shark smelling blood in the water, especially from those who didn’t know they’re bleeding.”
“True. She is a piece of work.”
“Actually, her mother is, and she tries hard to live up to her expectations.”
“Do you care about her too?”
It was asked in a manner I construed would be the same as asking if I was harbouring a secret bunch of feelings towards her. I wasn’t; she was not in my league, and I was fine with it.
“In a brotherly way maybe. My brother hangs out with Reggie, and I hear stuff. She needs to dump him sooner rather than later.”
“He’s hurting her?”
“I’m not sure, but he had a temper, and I hear he’s a mean drunk.”
Her expression and watery eyes told me that she knew something about domestic bullies. If that was the case, it explained away a few assumptions.
“She won’t listen, even if you told her.”
“Not while her mother has her claws in her.” I shrugged. “I just hope it’s an accident not waiting to happen.”
That topic ended, and perhaps her desire to converse any more. She drained the cup and finished the pie. I thought she would just get up and walk off.
She hesitated.
“You going to college next year?”
“I’d like to.”
“It’s the only way I’m going to get out of the house and from under the oppressors. I’m looking for someone to share an apartment.”
“You’d trust me?”
“You care about me. That’s good enough for me.”
“Well, it solves a problem. Why not?”
“Why not indeed.” She slipped out of the seat and threw her bag over her shoulder. The pink hair stood out under the harsh lights. “Until tomorrow. You might try sitting closer. I promise I won’t bite.”
Famous last words.
I watched her leave, stopping just outside the windows to give me a small wave, and I had to wonder where this might lead.
Or that I should not think too much about it and see what might happen in what was always going to be an uncertain future.
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© Charles Heath 2026
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