365 Days of Writing, 2026 – 276/277

Day 276/277 – Writing exercise

A story based on three photographic elements

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Then he checked behind him in case he was being followed. He was not. He ducked under an awning as another gust of wind shook it, avoiding a gush of water that fell like a waterfall, then moved on.

Was it Clara Higgins, an informant and a club singer?  He had interviewed her for a case, and they hit it off.  She worked at the ‘Blue Note’.  Her voice was pure velvet and smoke, a sultry husky drawl that had bought and sold a dozen cops and PI’s before him.

She was leaning against his car six weeks ago, smelling of gin and expensive perfume, whispering about a crime that desperate men were about to commit.

It could be her.  She lived in the shadows, but she usually called him Jackie.  The caller didn’t.

Was it Lydia Vance, now Rawlings, his sister, a woman variously in and out of trouble, with a no-good husband he had offered to sort out?

She had a voice that had grown raspy over time from a heavy bourbon habit she said was the only thing keeping her sane.

Their last conversation was a tense, midnight phone call eight months ago, her voice thick and gravelly as she begged for money to clear a gambling debt.

No, she didn’t have the stomach for whatever dangerous game this was.

He shook his head, and the water dripped from his hat brim.  Another glance up and down the road before turning the next corner.  Three suspects, but they were heading in a different direction.

He turned the corner, the lane narrowing, this time not stopping to look up at the rain.  It was falling harder, and he could hear the sound of the drops hitting the ground.

It was the sort of rain that made a familiar sound.

It bounced off the walls of the lane, as did other sounds, though he could not say where they came from. An arguing voice came from above, distorted by the rain and the surrounding walls.

The theatre alleyway was looming ahead, a dark chasm where anyone or anything could be waiting.  Jack slowed his pace as his heart rate increased, and he could feel the sweat from walking fast in anticipation.

Was it Sarah Kelly, the missing journalist?  She was the nosy type who pushed buttons and limits, but good at her job.  He had been quietly helping her.  Her voice was naturally husky, especially when tired and working a lead.

She was sitting on his office desk just three weeks before, her voice dropping to an intense, quiet rasp as she showed him some evidence and city hall shenanigans.  Two days later she vanished.

The cadence matched perfectly. Was she alive?  Was she trying to get a message to him, or was it a trap?

Could be, but…

Was it May Lin, the ex-detective he had just taken on?  She had a cold, raspy cough for the last week from a flu that she refused to take time off to get better.

Just yesterday, at their early morning meet-up at the diner, her voice was a rough, gravelly whisper, warning him that she heard on the grapevine that Internal Affairs was investigating his old cases when he was a cop.

If it was her, why the disguise?

He stopped just short of the turn into the alley. A sixth sense sent a shiver down his spine. The rain eased. His mind settled on two candidates: a desperate Sarah Kelly trying to surface from the dead, and a compromised May Lin playing a double game.

He turned into the narrow, dark alleyway, the neon lights from the main road reflecting in the pools of water that covered the cobblestones at the entrance.

He cursed, just remembering the cracks in the sole of the left shoe as the water seeped in, cold and uncompromising.

He pulled his hat down low, covering his face in case CCTV cameras had recently been installed. Then he looked up and saw a blinking red light mounted near the entrance.

He scurried past, close to the wall.

He travelled the full length of the alleyway, checking doorways and hiding spots for assailants, his hand on the gun in his pocket, just in case.

It was eerily silent, except for the occasional sound of running water. He saw the telephone booth, now disused and grimy, and walked past it, barely able to make out where any evidence might be, before continuing.

On one side, a single lamp cast a dim glow over the telephone itself, but it was not strong enough to reach the ground.

If he was being observed, it would not do to let them know the telephone booth was his destination.  Not yet.

He slowly returned as the rain eased, as if on cue. Above him, several high windows were lit, casting a pale yellowish light into the night. They did not illuminate the alley.

He was here.  Now.  As there was no evidence, he would wait.  Perhaps the husky-voiced woman would come, thrust an envelope into his hands and then disappear.  Dressed in black, she could easily fade into the gloom.

The only sounds now were his breathing and raindrops hitting metal.  Leaning against the telephone booth, he was right under a steady drip onto his hat, so regular, so mesmerising, he closed his eyes for a moment and tried to massage away the tiredness.

The steady drip onto his hat nearly caused him to miss the beam of light from above. It shone directly on a plain, stained and creased envelope sitting atop the pile of rubbish that had accumulated against the booth.

Just as he leaned down to pick it up, the light snapped off, plunging the area into darkness. The sudden change left him temporarily blind.

“Go to the diner and wait.”

The same husky voice.  He swivelled around, but all he could see was darkness, punctuated by a rim of light from the bulb above, and a sloshing sound.

The woman escaping?

It took two minutes for his sight to return.  He had the envelope, but no clue as to the identity of the woman.

He took his torch out of the other coat pocket and opened the envelope.  It contained a photograph.

It was a photograph of him and Jackson Pike, taken a year ago when Vance was a cop investigating a break-in at City Hall. Pike was alleged to have staged the break-in to obtain evidence of a rigged election. The photograph showed Pike handing Vance an envelope.

Evidence of what? Was Vance part of a cover-up?  There had been evidence, but it was not Vance who was the guilty party.  It had been his partner, Elroy Baggins.  Two weeks before, Elroy had been killed in a shootout.

Baggins had died and had taken the truth with him, leaving Vance to explain the unexplainable: that the dead officer was corrupt.  That maybe he was guilty by association or tarred with the same brush.  It was why he quit.  He had been very close to finding the proof, and then the boss called him into the office and gave him a choice: resign or be destroyed.

In the end, he had no choice.

Now, Vance figured, if they couldn’t get Baggins, they would come after him.

May Lin had tried to warn him, but his money was now on Sarah.  She had somehow got hold of the internal affairs evidence and had got the message to Jack via May.

Another look around the alley showed nothing.  She had gone.

There was nothing for it, except to go to the diner and wait.

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©  Charles Heath  2026

“The Things we do for Love”, the story behind the story

This story has been ongoing since I was seventeen, and just to let you know, I’m 72 this year.

Yes, it’s taken a long time to get it done.

Why, you might ask.

Well, I never gave it much interest because I started writing it after a small incident when I was 17, and working as a book packer for a book distributor in Melbourne

At the end of my first year, at Christmas, the employer had a Christmas party, and that year, it was at a venue in St Kilda.

I wasn’t going to go because at that age, I was an ordinary boy who was very introverted and basically scared of his own shadow and terrified by girls.

Back then, I would cross the street to avoid them

Also, other members of the staff in the shipping department were rough and ready types who were not backwards in telling me what happened, and being naive, perhaps they knew I’d be either shocked or intrigued.

I was both adamant I wasn’t coming and then got roped in on a dare.

Damn!

So, back then, in the early 70s, people looked the other way when it came to drinking, and of course, Dutch courage always takes away the concerns, especially when normally you wouldn’t do half the stuff you wouldn’t in a million years

I made it to the end, not as drunk and stupid as I thought I might be, and St Kilda being a salacious place if you knew where to look, my new friends decided to give me a surprise.

It didn’t take long to realise these men were ‘men about town’ as they kept saying, and we went on an odyssey.  Yes, those backstreet brothels where one could, I was told, have anything they could imagine.

Let me tell you, large quantities of alcohol and imagination were a very bad mix.

So, the odyssey in ‘The things we do’ was based on that, and then the encounter with Diana. Well, let’s just say I learned a great deal about girls that night.

Firstly, not all girls are nasty and spiteful, which seemed to be the case whenever I met one. There was a way to approach, greet, talk to, and behave.

It was also true that I could have had anything I wanted, but I decided what was in my imagination could stay there.  She was amused that all I wanted was to talk, but it was my money, and I could spend it how I liked.

And like any 17-year-old naive fool, I fell in love with her and had all these foolish notions.  Months later, I went back, but she had moved on, to where no one was saying or knew.

Needless to say, I was heartbroken and had to get over that first loss, which, like any 17-year-old, was like the end of the world.

But it was the best hour I’d ever spent in my life and would remain so until I met the woman I have been married to for the last 48 years.

As Henry, he was in part based on a rebel, the son of rich parents who despised them and their wealth, and he used to regale anyone who would listen about how they had messed up his life

If only I’d come from such a background!

And yes, I was only a run away from climbing up the stairs to get on board a ship, acting as a purser.

I worked for a shipping company and they gave their junior staff members an opportunity to spend a year at sea working as a purser on a cargo ship that sailed between Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart in Australia.

One of the other junior staff members’ turn came, and I would visit him on board when he would tell me stories about life on board, the officers, the crew, and other events. These stories, which sounded incredible to someone so impressionable, were a delight to hear.

Alas, by that time, I had tired of office work and moved on to be a tradesman at the place where my father worked.

It proved to be the right move, as that is where I met my wife.  Diana had been right; love would find me when I least expected it.

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365 Days of writing, 2026 – Beyond the second novel

The art of the series finale

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The Art of the Series Finale (Without Actually Ending): How to Resolve Every Story on Its Own Terms

If you’re writing a book series, you’re playing a delicate psychological game with your readers. On one hand, you want to hook them so deeply that they immediately pre-order the next instalment. On the other hand, you have to deliver a satisfying reading experience for the book they just spent hours devouring.

Many aspiring series authors fall into a common trap: they treat an individual book as merely a glorified chapter in a massive, unending epic. They leave major storylines dangling, refuse to give the protagonist a definitive win, and roll the credits on a frustrating cliff-hanger.

The result? Disgruntled readers who feel cheated out of a complete narrative arc.

So, how do you keep the overarching plot of your series chugging along while still giving readers the satisfaction they crave? The secret lies in a golden rule of serialised storytelling: Make sure each story is resolved on its own terms.

Let’s dive into why this matters, the common pitfalls to avoid, and how you can master the balancing act of episodic resolution within a grand series arc.


The Myth of the Endless Middle

Some writers balk at the idea of providing a resolution at the end of each story in their series. “Surely,” they think, “the whole point is to keep the plot going, right?”

Well, yes… and no.

It is true that series fiction relies on momentum. You want readers to turn the final page of Book 1 and immediately race to buy Book 2. However, stretching a single plotline across multiple books without providing intermediate victories is a recipe for reader fatigue.

If you don’t provide some kind of resolution at the end of each novel, your reader will be left feeling frustrated that the story didn’t go anywhere. Without a self-contained narrative victory, the ending will probably come off as abrupt, meandering, and—worst of all—incomplete.

Readers are willing to invest their time in a multi-book journey, but they want milestones along the way. They want to feel like the protagonist’s struggles in this specific book mattered.


The Balancing Act: Resolution vs. Continuation

Of course, you don’t want to resolve everything, either. If you tie up every single loose end, answer every lingering mystery, and defeat the ultimate evil once and for all, you’ve just written a standalone novel—not a series.

You still need to keep elements of your overarching plot going for the next installment. So, what is an author to do?

The key is to resolve a key element of that individual story, without resolving the plot of the whole series.

Think of it like a single season of a great television drama. By the end of the season finale, the immediate threat of that season is dealt with, and the characters catch their breath. But the larger, series-spanning mystery deepens, or a new threat emerges just as the credits roll.

In novel terms, this might look like:

  • The Villain: The antagonist’s specific, localised evil plan for this book is foiled, but the villain manages to escape and live to fight another day.
  • The Protagonist: Your hero achieves a crucial, hard-fought goal—like rescuing a specific mentor or finding a magical artifact—but realises this artifact only points the way to a much larger war.
  • The Romance: The two main characters finally admit their feelings and get together, but now they must face an external kingdom-wide crisis side-by-side.

By wrapping up the micro-plot while keeping the macro-plot alive, you give the reader the best of both worlds: the dopamine hit of a satisfying conclusion, and the irresistible itch of anticipation for what comes next.


The Setup: Why Timing is Everything

You can’t just slap a random resolution onto the end of your book and call it a day. For a resolution to feel earned, it has to be integrated into the DNA of the story from the very beginning.

To pull this off successfully, follow these rules:

  1. Establish the stakes early: Set up the specific element that you’re going to resolve towards the beginning of your story.
  2. Keep it central: Ensure this objective remains a central issue throughout the narrative.
  3. Avoid last-minute reveals: It won’t feel like a true resolution if the thing you’re resolving only comes into focus in the final three chapters, or if it never really seemed all that important to begin with.

When a reader looks back at the journey, they should see a clear trajectory: Problem introduced, obstacles faced, struggle ensued, problem solved (with new complications on the horizon).


Final Thoughts: Satisfy Today, Hook Tomorrow

Writing a series is an exercise in pacing and promises. Your primary promise to the reader is that if they invest their time in your book, they will get a complete, emotionally resonant experience.

By making sure each story is resolved on its own terms, you honor that promise. You leave your readers feeling triumphant, deeply connected to your characters, and emotionally satisfied—which makes them more than eager to follow you into the very next adventure.

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If I only had one day to stop over in – Montevideo – what would I do?

One‑Day Stopover in Montevideo?

The One Place That Will Make It Unforgettable – Ciudad Vieja (the Old Town)

You’ve just stepped off an international flight, the scent of the Río de la Plata wafts through the airport, and you have exactly 24 hours to soak up Uruguay’s capital. It’s tempting to scatter your time across beaches, museums, and cafés, but if you want to leave Montevideo with a story you’ll actually retell, focus on one place that compresses the city’s soul into a handful of streets: Ciudad Vieja, the historic Old Town.


Why Ciudad Vieja Wins the One‑Place Challenge

What you getHow it fits a 24‑hour lay‑over
Architecture that narrates 200 years of history – from the neoclassical Palacio Salvo to colonial stone houses.A compact, walkable district (≈ 15 min of strolling) that lets you see it all without a frantic schedule.
Cultural highlights in one block – Plaza Independencia, Solís Theatre, the Museo Torres García, and the iconic Gateway of the Constitution.Each landmark is a quick photo‑op or a 10‑minute peek, yet together they paint a vivid portrait of Uruguay’s past and present.
Food that defines Montevideo – the bustling Mercado del Puerto, legendary parrilla (steak) spots, and artisanal coffee cafés.You can grab a world‑class lunch, a quick snack, or a late‑night bite without leaving the area.
Vibrant street life – tango dancers, street artists, and the ever‑present hum of locals in the plazas.Perfect for those “I’m just wandering” moments that turn strangers into friends.
Easy access – a 10‑minute taxi or 20‑minute walk from Carrasco International Airport.No time wasted on long transfers; you’re in the heart of the city almost instantly.

In short, Ciudad Vieja is Montevideo’s living museum, culinary hub, and social lounge all rolled into one – exactly what a short‑stop traveller needs.


A 6‑Hour “Perfect Day” Itinerary in Ciudad Vieja

Tip: Buy a “Montevideo Card” (USD 5) at the airport. It gives you free entry to several museums and a 30‑minute hop‑on hop‑off bus if you feel like hopping back to the airport later.

TimeActivityWhy it matters
08:30 – ArrivalTaxi/ride‑share from the airport to Plaza Independencia (the gateway to the Old Town).The iconic square introduces you to Montevideo’s blend of modernity and tradition.
09:00 – Palacio SalvoSnap a photo of the city’s most recognizable skyline and, if you’re quick, climb the modest observation deck (≈ 5 min).Built in 1928, it’s Montevideo’s answer to the Eiffel Tower – a symbol of ambition.
09:30 – Solís TheatreWalk inside or simply admire the neoclassical façade; catch a brief guided tour if time allows.One of Latin America’s most prestigious theatres; its interior is a golden‑age gem.
10:00 – Museo Torres GarcíaA 20‑minute dive into the work of Uruguay’s avant‑garde master, Joaquín Torres García.The museum is a hidden treasure that showcases the artistic heartbeat of the nation.
10:45 – Coffee Break @ Café BrasilOrder a “café con leche” and a medialuna (croissant‑like pastry).Montevideans take their coffee seriously; this is a perfect pause to people‑watch.
**11:30 – Walk the Calle Sarandí & Calle ABrowse boutique shops, vintage stores, and street‑art murals.The streets themselves are an open‑air gallery, reflecting the city’s contemporary vibe.
12:30 – Mercado del PuertoLunch: Parrillada (mixed grilled meats) + a glass of Tannat or fresh “mate” from a nearby stall.This historic market is the culinary crown jewel of Ciudad Vieja – think of it as Montevideo’s answer to Buenos Aires’ “steakhouse”.
14:00 – Plaza Matriz & CathedralQuick photo stop at the square and the stunning Cathedral of the Immaculate Conception.The square is where festivals happen; the cathedral dates back to 1740.
14:30 – Souvenir HuntPick up a jar of “dulce de leche”, a handmade leather wallet, or a small “candombe” drum.Take a piece of Montevideo home; everything here is made locally.
15:00 – Return to AirportTaxi/ride‑share back to Carrasco (traffic is usually light during midday).You’ll be back with plenty of time for your next flight, and a head full of stories.

Total Time: ~ 6 hours of immersive experiences, plus travel time. You still have a few hours left for a quick beach walk on the Rambla if you feel adventurous, but you’ll leave Montevideo already feeling like you’ve lived a whole week.


Insider Details That Turn a Quick Visit into a Memory

  1. The “Puerta de la Ciudadela” (Gate of the Citadel) – The original entrance to the old fortified settlement. It’s a perfect photo backdrop, especially at golden hour when the light hits the stone arches just right.
  2. Candombe Rhythms on Sundays – If your layover lands on a Sunday, head to Plaza de la Constitución near the gate. Local “candombe” drummers (Afro‑Uruguayan percussion) perform spontaneous shows that echo the city’s African heritage.
  3. Hidden Courtyard at the Palacio Taranco – Even if you don’t have time for the full museum, pop in for a quick look at the courtyard garden; it’s a serene oasis amid the bustling streets.
  4. The “Feria de Tristán Narvaja” – This flea market runs every Saturday. If your stopover includes a Saturday morning, wander the stalls for vintage books, antiques, and quirky souvenirs. It’s less than a 10‑minute walk from Plaza Independencia.
  5. “Mate” Etiquette – When offered a mate (a traditional infused tea) by a local, accept it! It’s a sign of hospitality. You’ll get a quick lesson in the ritual – sip, pass, repeat.

Practical Tips for the One‑Day Explorer

ConcernSolution
Getting there from the airportPre‑book a reputable ride‑share (Uber, Cabify) or use the official Taxi del Aeropuerto service – they have flat rates for the city center (USD 15‑20).
CurrencyUruguay uses the Uruguayan peso (UYU), but most places in Ciudad Vieja also accept USD and credit cards. Have a few pesos for market stalls.
LanguageSpanish is official; however, most restaurant staff and shop owners speak basic English. A simple “Hola, ¿puedo…?” goes a long way.
SafetyCiudad Vieja is safe during daylight. Keep an eye on belongings in crowded spots like the Mercado del Puerto.
LuggageMost hotels/hostels near the airport offer luggage storage for a few dollars. Free yourself to stroll unburdened.
Time zoneMontevideo is UTC‑3 (no daylight‑saving). Adjust your watch accordingly to avoid missing your connecting flight.

The Bottom Line: One Place, Endless Stories

When you have just a day in a city, the temptation is to chase everything. But the most memorable travel moments happen when you immerse yourself in a single, richly layered neighbourhood. In Montevideo, that neighbourhood is Ciudad Vieja – a compact tapestry of history, art, gastronomy, and music that lets you feel the pulse of Uruguay without racing against the clock.

So the next time your itinerary lists a “one‑day stopover in Montevideo,” skip the checklist and head straight to the Old Town. Walk its cobblestones, taste its smoky grills, listen to its drums, and you’ll leave with a story that fits in a paragraph—but feels like a novel.

Bon voyage, and enjoy the heartbeat of Montevideo! 🌎✈️🗺️

If I only had one day to stop over in – Santiago – what would I do?

One Day in Santiago? Make It Unforgettable With One Iconic Stop

Your 24‑hour layover, a single must‑see spot, and a story you’ll retell forever.


Why One Place Can Change a Whole Day

A layover is a sprint, not a marathon. You’re juggling luggage, flight‑times, and the inevitable jet‑lag, so the temptation is to “see everything.” The truth is, quality beats quantity. Pick a destination that captures the soul of the city, offers a splash of culture, a pinch of adventure, and an unbeatable view for that Instagram‑ready shot — and you’ve got a day you’ll remember long after you’re back on the tarmac.

In Santiago, that place is Cerro San Cristóbal, the crown jewel of the city’s sprawling Parque Metropolitano. It’s a natural high point, a cultural hub, and a shortcut to the essence of Chile’s capital, all wrapped into one unforgettable experience.


Cerro San Cristóbal: The One‑Stop‑Shop for a Memorable Stopover

What it offersWhy it matters for a 1‑day layover
Panoramic 360° city viewInstantly see Santiago’s skyline, Andes backdrop, and the Pacific Ocean on a clear day.
Easy access via funicular or cable carNo need for a long trek; you’re up in minutes.
Cultural landmarks (Statue of the Virgin, historic shrine, Japanese garden)A taste of Chilean faith, history, and international flair.
Botanical garden & zooA quick stroll among native flora or a peek at local wildlife if you have extra minutes.
Food & drink (Café San Cristóbal, food trucks)Refuel with a Chilean coffee, a “completo” hot dog, or a fresh fruit jug.
Free or low‑cost entryKeeps your budget intact for the rest of the trip.

How to Turn the Visit Into a Perfect 24‑Hour Itinerary

1️⃣ Before You Land – Set Yourself Up for Success

ActionDetails
Store your luggageUse lockers at Estación Central (metro Line 1) or the SCL Airport “Baggage Concierge” (≈ USD 4 per bag, 8‑hour limit).
Grab a Metro cardPurchase a Bip! card at the airport (cash or card) – it works on Metro, buses, and the funicular.
Check the weatherSantiago’s climate is Mediterranean: sunny most of the year, cool evenings in winter. Pack a light jacket for the summit.
Download the “Metro de Santiago” appReal‑time train arrivals, route maps, and fare calculator.

2️⃣ Morning – Touch Down, Freshen Up, Head to the City

  • 07:00 – 08:00 – Clear customs, store bags, and catch the Airport Express Bus (Bus 184) to Estación Pajaritos (Metro Line 1).
  • 08:30 – Hop on the Metro (green line) toward “Los Dominicos.” Get off at “Baquedano” (the interchange for Line 5) and transfer to Line 5 (green) toward “Plaza de Maipú.”
  • 09:00 – Arrive at “Plaza de Maipo” station – a short 5‑minute walk to the base of Cerro San Cristóbal.

3️⃣ Mid‑Morning – Ascend to the Summit

  • 09:10 – Purchase a funicular ticket (≈ CLP 650, ~USD 0.80). The ride is a nostalgic wooden carriage that climbs steeply in ~3 minutes.
  • 09:15 – Step out at the Cerro San Cristóbal station and follow the paved path to the Statue of the Virgin Mary (the highest point).
  • 09:30 – 10:30 – Take in the view. Snap panoramas of the Andes, the Mapocho River, and the bustling downtown. If you’re lucky, you’ll see snow‑capped peaks—perfect for those “I’m in the Andes” photos.

4️⃣ Late Morning – A Taste of Chilean Culture

  • 10:30 – 11:30 – Wander down to the Santiago Metropolitan Park:
    • Japanese Garden – A serene oasis with koi ponds and traditional tea houses.
    • Santuario de la Inmaculada Concepción – A small chapel with historic murals.
    • Botanical Terrace – Spot native flora like caupolí and copihue (Chile’s national flower).

5️⃣ Lunch Break – Eat Like a Local

  • 11:30 – 12:30 – Head to Café San Cristóbal (right near the funicular exit). Order a “café con leche” and a completo (hot dog topped with avocado, mayo, tomato, and sauerkraut). Pair it with a freshly squeezed “mote con huesillos” (a sweet peach‑nectar drink) for a truly Chilean experience.

6️⃣ Early Afternoon – Quick City Sweep (Optional)

If you have a few extra hours before your next flight, you can:

  • **Take the Cerro San Cristóbal cable car (Teleférico) down to Pío Nero station and hop on Metro Line 5 to “Baquedano.”
  • Stroll through Plaza de Armas, the historic heart of Santiago, to see the Catedral Metropolitana and Museo Histórico Nacional (both free).
  • Grab a quick pastel de choclo (corn pie) from a street vendor.

7️⃣ Return to the Airport

  • 13:30 – 14:30 – Retrieve your luggage at the locker, catch the Metro back to Estación Pajaritos, then the Airport Express Bus to SCL.
  • 15:00 – Arrive at the terminal, giving you plenty of time for security and a relaxed boarding.

Insider Pro Tips – Make the Most of Your Cerro San Cristóbal Visit

TipWhy It Helps
Visit on a weekdayFewer locals and tourists mean shorter lines for the funicular and more space for photos.
Bring a compact rain jacketEven on sunny days, a sudden drizzle can roll in from the Andes.
Carry a small power bankYou’ll be snapping photos and using maps non‑stop.
Buy a “Bip!” card before you landSaves you from hunting for a ticket booth after a long flight.
Ask the funicular operator for the “best photo spot” – usually the bench right in front of the Virgin statue.Locals know the golden hour lighting.
Don’t skip the Japanese Garden – it’s a hidden gem that many tourists miss.Adds a tranquil break to your high‑altitude adventure.

The Bottom Line: One Stop, Unlimited Memories

When you have only 24 hours in a vibrant capital like Santiago, you don’t need to cram every museum and market into your schedule. Cerro San Cristóbal delivers a panoramic snapshot of the city, a dose of Chilean culture, and a dash of adventure—all accessible within an hour of the airport.

Takeaway: If you can only see one place during a brief stopover in Santiago, climb Cerro San Cristóbal. From the moment the funicular pulls you up to when you sip a glass of fresh juice beneath the Andean peaks, you’ll carry a piece of Chile home with you.


Ready to make your layover legendary?

Pack a light jacket, grab a Bip! card, and set your sights on the hill that watches over Santiago. Your one‑day adventure starts at the top — and the memories will stay with you forever. Safe travels! 

✈️🌄

365 Days of writing, 2026 – Beyond the second novel

The art of the series finale

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The Art of the Series Finale (Without Actually Ending): How to Resolve Every Story on Its Own Terms

If you’re writing a book series, you’re playing a delicate psychological game with your readers. On one hand, you want to hook them so deeply that they immediately pre-order the next instalment. On the other hand, you have to deliver a satisfying reading experience for the book they just spent hours devouring.

Many aspiring series authors fall into a common trap: they treat an individual book as merely a glorified chapter in a massive, unending epic. They leave major storylines dangling, refuse to give the protagonist a definitive win, and roll the credits on a frustrating cliff-hanger.

The result? Disgruntled readers who feel cheated out of a complete narrative arc.

So, how do you keep the overarching plot of your series chugging along while still giving readers the satisfaction they crave? The secret lies in a golden rule of serialised storytelling: Make sure each story is resolved on its own terms.

Let’s dive into why this matters, the common pitfalls to avoid, and how you can master the balancing act of episodic resolution within a grand series arc.


The Myth of the Endless Middle

Some writers balk at the idea of providing a resolution at the end of each story in their series. “Surely,” they think, “the whole point is to keep the plot going, right?”

Well, yes… and no.

It is true that series fiction relies on momentum. You want readers to turn the final page of Book 1 and immediately race to buy Book 2. However, stretching a single plotline across multiple books without providing intermediate victories is a recipe for reader fatigue.

If you don’t provide some kind of resolution at the end of each novel, your reader will be left feeling frustrated that the story didn’t go anywhere. Without a self-contained narrative victory, the ending will probably come off as abrupt, meandering, and—worst of all—incomplete.

Readers are willing to invest their time in a multi-book journey, but they want milestones along the way. They want to feel like the protagonist’s struggles in this specific book mattered.


The Balancing Act: Resolution vs. Continuation

Of course, you don’t want to resolve everything, either. If you tie up every single loose end, answer every lingering mystery, and defeat the ultimate evil once and for all, you’ve just written a standalone novel—not a series.

You still need to keep elements of your overarching plot going for the next installment. So, what is an author to do?

The key is to resolve a key element of that individual story, without resolving the plot of the whole series.

Think of it like a single season of a great television drama. By the end of the season finale, the immediate threat of that season is dealt with, and the characters catch their breath. But the larger, series-spanning mystery deepens, or a new threat emerges just as the credits roll.

In novel terms, this might look like:

  • The Villain: The antagonist’s specific, localised evil plan for this book is foiled, but the villain manages to escape and live to fight another day.
  • The Protagonist: Your hero achieves a crucial, hard-fought goal—like rescuing a specific mentor or finding a magical artifact—but realises this artifact only points the way to a much larger war.
  • The Romance: The two main characters finally admit their feelings and get together, but now they must face an external kingdom-wide crisis side-by-side.

By wrapping up the micro-plot while keeping the macro-plot alive, you give the reader the best of both worlds: the dopamine hit of a satisfying conclusion, and the irresistible itch of anticipation for what comes next.


The Setup: Why Timing is Everything

You can’t just slap a random resolution onto the end of your book and call it a day. For a resolution to feel earned, it has to be integrated into the DNA of the story from the very beginning.

To pull this off successfully, follow these rules:

  1. Establish the stakes early: Set up the specific element that you’re going to resolve towards the beginning of your story.
  2. Keep it central: Ensure this objective remains a central issue throughout the narrative.
  3. Avoid last-minute reveals: It won’t feel like a true resolution if the thing you’re resolving only comes into focus in the final three chapters, or if it never really seemed all that important to begin with.

When a reader looks back at the journey, they should see a clear trajectory: Problem introduced, obstacles faced, struggle ensued, problem solved (with new complications on the horizon).


Final Thoughts: Satisfy Today, Hook Tomorrow

Writing a series is an exercise in pacing and promises. Your primary promise to the reader is that if they invest their time in your book, they will get a complete, emotionally resonant experience.

By making sure each story is resolved on its own terms, you honor that promise. You leave your readers feeling triumphant, deeply connected to your characters, and emotionally satisfied—which makes them more than eager to follow you into the very next adventure.

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365 Days of writing, 2026 – 275

Day 275 – To win or not to win literary contests

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Get to the Point, Make ‘Em Laugh, and Ignore Fay Weldon (A Little Bit)

Let’s rip the bandage off right away: The most boring book wins literary contests.

That gem of a quote comes from the fiercely witty British novelist Fay Weldon. And honestly? She wasn’t wrong. Think about the last time you read a critically acclaimed, prize-winning heavyweight novel. Did it feel like a brisk jog through a comedy club, or did it feel like trudging through an intellectual swamp of heavy metaphors, agonizing grief, and sentences that stretch across three paragraphs?

Exactly.

We live in a culture obsessed with efficiency. Get to the point! Cut the fluff! Give me the TL;DR! But writing—especially the kind of writing you actually want to read and write—often rebels against this sterile efficiency.

So, what is the ultimate writing philosophy? Should we cut straight to the chase and inject a healthy dose of humor, or should we embrace the sprawling, solemn boredom that wins awards? Let’s dive in.


The Cult of “Get to the Point” (And Why Humor is Our Savior)

In the digital age, attention spans are shorter than a TikTok loop. If your opening paragraph doesn’t hook the reader, introduce a conflict, and promise emotional payoff, they’re gone. Click. Back to Instagram.

Because of this, modern copywriters, bloggers, and even fiction writers are told to get to the point. Brevity is king.

  • The Problem: Being purely concise is dangerously close to being boring. A user manual is concise. A tax form gets straight to the point. Nobody stays up until 3:00 AM crying over the IRS instructions.
  • The Solution: Humour.

Humour is the spoonful of sugar that helps the conciseness go down. It’s the human element. When you get to the point while making the reader snort coffee out of their nose, you’ve won. You’ve respected their time (by not rambling) while entertaining their soul (by being funny).

If Fay Weldon says boring books win prizes, humour is the rebellion against the prize committee. It says: I want people to actually enjoy this.


Why Fay Weldon Was Right About “Boring” Books

Let’s not throw Fay under the bus just yet. She knew the literary establishment’s inner workings better than most.

Literary prizes—think of the Booker, the Pulitzer, or heavy-hitting academic nods—often reward gravitas. A book about a happy couple who communicate well, pay their mortgage on time, and occasionally go to brunch does not win awards. Why? Because it lacks suffering and significance.

To win a literary contest, a book usually needs:

  1. Misery: Preferably historical, existential, or deeply psychological.
  2. Slow pacing: Often disguised as “rich atmospheric development.”
  3. Sentences that require a semicolon and a master’s degree to decode.

Weldon’s warning is a liberation for everyday writers. She is essentially telling us: Stop writing for the judges in ivory towers. Write for the human beings on the subway.

If your book is so thrilling, funny, and fast-paced that it disqualifies you from winning a dusty trophy in a wood-paneled room in London or New York… take it as a compliment.


Can You Have It All? (Point + Humor + Depth)

Is it a zero-sum game? Must we choose between being a humor-filled, punchy writer who people actually read, and a solemn literary genius who wins medals that nobody checks out at the library?

Not necessarily. The sweet spot of modern writing lies in the intersection of clarity, wit, and depth.

You can get to the point quickly, keep the reader laughing, and still deliver a profound emotional punch. Think of authors like David Sedaris, Nora Ephron, or Kurt Vonnegut. They didn’t write boring, prize-winning snoozefests. They wrote punchy, hilarious, deeply moving works that outlived the prize committees anyway.

How to Apply This to Your Writing:

  1. Respect the reader’s time: Get to the point. Don’t spend three pages describing a tree unless that tree is plotting a murder.
  2. Disarm with wit: Use humour as a vehicle for truth. If you have a heavy point to make, a joke is the best shock absorber.
  3. Ignore the gatekeepers: If you write something genuinely entertaining, fast-paced, and funny, the literary establishment might sniff at it. Let them. You’ll be too busy having an audience to notice.

The Verdict

So, what is the best thing to do?

Fay Weldon gave us great advice: don’t write the boring book just to impress the critics. But we also don’t need to live in a world of purely rushed, hyper-efficient bullet points, either.

The best thing to do is write the book you would want to read. Get to the point, make ’em laugh, and leave the boring, prize-winning misery to the people who enjoy sitting in silence.


What’s your take? Do you prefer a laugh-out-loud page-turner, or do you secretly love a 600-page historical epic about melancholy? Let us know in the comments below!

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If I only had one day to stop over in – Santiago – what would I do?

One Day in Santiago? Make It Unforgettable With One Iconic Stop

Your 24‑hour layover, a single must‑see spot, and a story you’ll retell forever.


Why One Place Can Change a Whole Day

A layover is a sprint, not a marathon. You’re juggling luggage, flight‑times, and the inevitable jet‑lag, so the temptation is to “see everything.” The truth is, quality beats quantity. Pick a destination that captures the soul of the city, offers a splash of culture, a pinch of adventure, and an unbeatable view for that Instagram‑ready shot — and you’ve got a day you’ll remember long after you’re back on the tarmac.

In Santiago, that place is Cerro San Cristóbal, the crown jewel of the city’s sprawling Parque Metropolitano. It’s a natural high point, a cultural hub, and a shortcut to the essence of Chile’s capital, all wrapped into one unforgettable experience.


Cerro San Cristóbal: The One‑Stop‑Shop for a Memorable Stopover

What it offersWhy it matters for a 1‑day layover
Panoramic 360° city viewInstantly see Santiago’s skyline, Andes backdrop, and the Pacific Ocean on a clear day.
Easy access via funicular or cable carNo need for a long trek; you’re up in minutes.
Cultural landmarks (Statue of the Virgin, historic shrine, Japanese garden)A taste of Chilean faith, history, and international flair.
Botanical garden & zooA quick stroll among native flora or a peek at local wildlife if you have extra minutes.
Food & drink (Café San Cristóbal, food trucks)Refuel with a Chilean coffee, a “completo” hot dog, or a fresh fruit jug.
Free or low‑cost entryKeeps your budget intact for the rest of the trip.

How to Turn the Visit Into a Perfect 24‑Hour Itinerary

1️⃣ Before You Land – Set Yourself Up for Success

ActionDetails
Store your luggageUse lockers at Estación Central (metro Line 1) or the SCL Airport “Baggage Concierge” (≈ USD 4 per bag, 8‑hour limit).
Grab a Metro cardPurchase a Bip! card at the airport (cash or card) – it works on Metro, buses, and the funicular.
Check the weatherSantiago’s climate is Mediterranean: sunny most of the year, cool evenings in winter. Pack a light jacket for the summit.
Download the “Metro de Santiago” appReal‑time train arrivals, route maps, and fare calculator.

2️⃣ Morning – Touch Down, Freshen Up, Head to the City

  • 07:00 – 08:00 – Clear customs, store bags, and catch the Airport Express Bus (Bus 184) to Estación Pajaritos (Metro Line 1).
  • 08:30 – Hop on the Metro (green line) toward “Los Dominicos.” Get off at “Baquedano” (the interchange for Line 5) and transfer to Line 5 (green) toward “Plaza de Maipú.”
  • 09:00 – Arrive at “Plaza de Maipo” station – a short 5‑minute walk to the base of Cerro San Cristóbal.

3️⃣ Mid‑Morning – Ascend to the Summit

  • 09:10 – Purchase a funicular ticket (≈ CLP 650, ~USD 0.80). The ride is a nostalgic wooden carriage that climbs steeply in ~3 minutes.
  • 09:15 – Step out at the Cerro San Cristóbal station and follow the paved path to the Statue of the Virgin Mary (the highest point).
  • 09:30 – 10:30 – Take in the view. Snap panoramas of the Andes, the Mapocho River, and the bustling downtown. If you’re lucky, you’ll see snow‑capped peaks—perfect for those “I’m in the Andes” photos.

4️⃣ Late Morning – A Taste of Chilean Culture

  • 10:30 – 11:30 – Wander down to the Santiago Metropolitan Park:
    • Japanese Garden – A serene oasis with koi ponds and traditional tea houses.
    • Santuario de la Inmaculada Concepción – A small chapel with historic murals.
    • Botanical Terrace – Spot native flora like caupolí and copihue (Chile’s national flower).

5️⃣ Lunch Break – Eat Like a Local

  • 11:30 – 12:30 – Head to Café San Cristóbal (right near the funicular exit). Order a “café con leche” and a completo (hot dog topped with avocado, mayo, tomato, and sauerkraut). Pair it with a freshly squeezed “mote con huesillos” (a sweet peach‑nectar drink) for a truly Chilean experience.

6️⃣ Early Afternoon – Quick City Sweep (Optional)

If you have a few extra hours before your next flight, you can:

  • **Take the Cerro San Cristóbal cable car (Teleférico) down to Pío Nero station and hop on Metro Line 5 to “Baquedano.”
  • Stroll through Plaza de Armas, the historic heart of Santiago, to see the Catedral Metropolitana and Museo Histórico Nacional (both free).
  • Grab a quick pastel de choclo (corn pie) from a street vendor.

7️⃣ Return to the Airport

  • 13:30 – 14:30 – Retrieve your luggage at the locker, catch the Metro back to Estación Pajaritos, then the Airport Express Bus to SCL.
  • 15:00 – Arrive at the terminal, giving you plenty of time for security and a relaxed boarding.

Insider Pro Tips – Make the Most of Your Cerro San Cristóbal Visit

TipWhy It Helps
Visit on a weekdayFewer locals and tourists mean shorter lines for the funicular and more space for photos.
Bring a compact rain jacketEven on sunny days, a sudden drizzle can roll in from the Andes.
Carry a small power bankYou’ll be snapping photos and using maps non‑stop.
Buy a “Bip!” card before you landSaves you from hunting for a ticket booth after a long flight.
Ask the funicular operator for the “best photo spot” – usually the bench right in front of the Virgin statue.Locals know the golden hour lighting.
Don’t skip the Japanese Garden – it’s a hidden gem that many tourists miss.Adds a tranquil break to your high‑altitude adventure.

The Bottom Line: One Stop, Unlimited Memories

When you have only 24 hours in a vibrant capital like Santiago, you don’t need to cram every museum and market into your schedule. Cerro San Cristóbal delivers a panoramic snapshot of the city, a dose of Chilean culture, and a dash of adventure—all accessible within an hour of the airport.

Takeaway: If you can only see one place during a brief stopover in Santiago, climb Cerro San Cristóbal. From the moment the funicular pulls you up to when you sip a glass of fresh juice beneath the Andean peaks, you’ll carry a piece of Chile home with you.


Ready to make your layover legendary?

Pack a light jacket, grab a Bip! card, and set your sights on the hill that watches over Santiago. Your one‑day adventure starts at the top — and the memories will stay with you forever. Safe travels! 

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Another excerpt from “Strangers We’ve Become” – A sequel to ‘What Sets Us Apart’

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It was the first time in almost a week that I made the short walk to the cafe alone.  It was early, and the chill of the morning was still in the air.  In summer, it was the best time of the day.  When Susan came with me, it was usually much later, when the day was much warmer and less tolerable.

On the morning of the third day of her visit, Susan said she was missing the hustle and bustle of London, and by the end of the fourth she said, in not so many words, she was over being away from ‘civilisation’.  This was a side of her I had not seen before, and it surprised me.

She hadn’t complained, but it was making her irritable.  The Susan that morning was vastly different to the Susan on the first day.  So much, I thought, for her wanting to ‘reconnect’, the word she had used as the reason for coming to Greve unannounced.

It was also the first morning I had time to reflect on her visit and what my feelings were towards her.  It was the reason I’d come to Greve: to soak up the peace and quiet and think about what I was going to do with the rest of my life.

I sat in my usual corner.  Maria, one of two waitresses, came out, stopped, and there was no mistaking the relief in her manner.  There was an air of tension between Susan and Maria I didn’t understand, and it seemed to emanate from Susan rather than the other way around.  I could understand her attitude if it was towards Alisha, but not Maria.  All she did was serve coffee and cake.

When Maria recovered from the momentary surprise, she said, smiling, “You are by yourself?”  She gave a quick glance in the direction of my villa, just to be sure.

“I am this morning.  I’m afraid the heat, for one who is not used to it, can be quite debilitating.  I’m also afraid it has had a bad effect on her manners, for which I apologise.  I cannot explain why she has been so rude to you.”

“You do not have to apologise for her, David, but it is of no consequence to me.  I have had a lot worse.  I think she is simply jealous.”

It had crossed my mind, but there was no reason for her to be.  “Why?”

“She is a woman, I am a woman, she thinks because you and I are friends, there is something between us.”

It made sense, even if it was not true.  “Perhaps if I explained…”

Maria shook her head.  “If there is a hole in the boat, you should not keep bailing but try to plug the hole.  My grandfather had many expressions, David.  If I may give you one piece of advice, as much as it is none of my business, you need to make your feelings known, and if they are not as they once were, and I think they are not, you need to tell her.  Before she goes home.”

Interesting advice.  Not only a purveyor of excellent coffee, but Maria was also a psychiatrist who had astutely worked out my dilemma.  What was that expression, ‘not just a pretty face’?

“Is she leaving soon?” I asked, thinking Maria knew more about Susan’s movements than I did.

“You would disappoint me if you had not suspected as much.  Susan was having coffee and talking to someone in her office on a cell phone.  It was an intense conversation.  I should not eavesdrop, but she said being here was like being stuck in hell.  It is a pity she does not share your love for our little piece of paradise, is it not?”

“It is indeed.  And you’re right.  She said she didn’t have a phone, but I know she has one.  She just doesn’t value the idea of getting away from the office.  Perhaps her role doesn’t afford her that luxury.”

And perhaps Alisha was right about Maria, that I should be more careful.  She had liked Maria the moment she saw her.  We had sat at this very table, the first day I arrived.  I would have travelled alone, but Prendergast, my old boss, liked to know where ex-employees of the Department were, and what they were doing.

She sighed.  “I am glad I am just a waitress.  Your usual coffee and cake?”

“Yes, please.”

Several months had passed since we had rescued Susan from her despotic father; she had recovered faster than we had thought, and settled into her role as the new Lady Featherington, though she preferred not to use that title, but go by the name of Lady Susan Cheney.

I didn’t get to be a Lord, or have any title, not that I was expecting one.  What I had expected was that Susan, once she found her footing as head of what seemed to be a commercial empire, would not have time for details like husbands, particularly when our agreement made before the wedding gave either of us the right to end it.

There was a moment when I visited her recovering in the hospital, where I was going to give her the out, but I didn’t, and she had not invoked it.  We were still married, just not living together.

This visit was one where she wanted to ‘reconnect’ as she called it, and invite me to come home with her.  She saw no reason why we could not resume our relationship, conveniently forgetting she indirectly had me arrested for her murder, charges both her mother and Lucy vigorously pursued, and had the clone not returned to save me, I might still be in jail.

It was not something I would forgive or forget any time soon.

There were other reasons why I was reluctant to stay with her, like forgetting small details, an irregularity in her character I found odd.  She looked the same, she sounded the same, she basically acted the same, but my mind was telling me something was not right.  It was not the Susan I first met, even allowing for the ordeal she had been subjected to.

But, despite those misgivings, there was no question in my mind that I still loved her, and her clandestine arrival had brought back all those feelings.  But as the days passed, I began to get the impression my feelings were one-sided and she was just going through the motions.

Which brought me to the last argument, earlier, where I said if I went with her, it would be business meetings, social obligations, and quite simply her ‘celebrity’ status that would keep us apart.  I reminded her that I had said from the outset I didn’t like the idea of being in the spotlight, and when I reiterated it, she simply brushed it off as just part of the job, adding rather strangely that I always looked good in a suit.  The flippancy of that comment was the last straw, and I left before I said something I would regret.

I knew I was not a priority.  Maybe somewhere inside me, I had wanted to be a priority, and I was disappointed when I was not.

And finally, there was Alisha.  Susan, at the height of the argument, had intimated she believed I had an affair with her, but that elephant was always in the room whenever Alisha was around.  It was no surprise when I learned Susan had asked Prendergast to reassign her to other duties. 

At least I knew what my feelings for Alisha were, and there were times when I had to remember she was persona non grata.  Perhaps that was why Susan had her banished, but, again, a small detail; jealousy was not one of Susan’s traits when I first knew her.

Perhaps it was time to set Susan free.

When I swung around to look in the direction of the lane where my villa was, I saw Susan.  She was formally dressed, not in her ‘tourist’ clothes, which she had bought from one of the local clothing stores.  We had fun that day, shopping for clothes, a chore I’d always hated.  It had been followed by a leisurely lunch, lots of wine and soul searching.

It was the reason why I sat in this corner; old habits die hard.  I could see trouble coming from all directions, not that Susan was trouble or at least I hoped not, but it allowed me the time to watch her walking towards the cafe in what appeared to be short, angry steps; perhaps the culmination of the heat wave and our last argument.

She glared at me as she sat, dropping her bag beside her on the ground, where I could see the cell phone sitting on top.  She followed my glance down, and then she looked unrepentant back at me.

Maria came back at the exact moment she was going to speak.  I noticed Maria hesitate for a second when she saw Susan, then put her smile in place to deliver my coffee.

Neither spoke nor looked at each other.  I said, “Susan will have what I’m having, thanks.”

Maria nodded and left.

“Now,” I said, leaning back in my seat, “I’m sure there’s a perfectly good explanation as to why you didn’t tell me about the phone, but that first time you disappeared, I’d guessed you needed to keep in touch with your business interests.  I thought it somewhat unwisethat you should come out when the board of one of your companies was trying to remove you, because of what was it, an unexplained absence?  All you had to do was tell me there were problems and you needed to remain at home to resolve them.”

My comment elicited a sideways look, with a touch of surprise.

“It was unfortunate timing on their behalf, and I didn’t want you to think everything else was more important than us.  There were issues before I came, and I thought the people at home would be able to manage without me for at least a week, but I was wrong.”

“Why come at all.  A phone call would have sufficed.”

“I had to see you, talk to you.  At least we have had a chance to do that.  I’m sorry about yesterday.  I once told you I would not become my mother, but I’m afraid I sounded just like her.  I misjudged just how much this role would affect me, and truly, I’m sorry.”

An apology was the last thing I expected.

“You have a lot of work to do catching up after being away, and of course, in replacing your mother and gaining the requisite respect as the new Lady Featherington.  I think it would be for the best if I were not another distraction.  We have plenty of time to reacquaint ourselves when you get past all these teething issues.”

“You’re not coming with me?”  She sounded disappointed.

“I think it would be for the best if I didn’t.”

“Why?”

“It should come as no surprise to you that I’ve been keeping an eye on your progress.  You are so much better doing your job without me.  I told your mother once that when the time came I would not like the responsibilities of being your husband.  Now that I have seen what it could possibly entail, I like it even less.  You might also want to reconsider our arrangement, after all, we only had a marriage of convenience, and now that those obligations have been fulfilled, we both have the option of terminating it.  I won’t make things difficult for you if that’s what you want.”

It was yet another anomaly, I thought; she should look distressed, and I would raise the matter of that arrangement.  Perhaps she had forgotten the finer points.  I, on the other hand, had always known we would not last forever.  The perplexed expression, to me, was a sign she might have forgotten.

Then, her expression changed.  “Is that what you want?”

“I wasn’t madly in love with you when we made that arrangement, so it was easy to agree to your terms, but inexplicably, since then, my feelings for you changed, and I would be sad if we parted ways.  But the truth is, I can’t see how this is going to work.”

“In saying that, do you think I don’t care for you?”

That was exactly what I was thinking, but I wasn’t going to voice that opinion out loud.  “You spent a lot of time finding new ways to make my life miserable, Susan.  You and that wretched friend of yours, Lucy.  While your attitude improved after we were married, that was because you were going to use me when you went to see your father, and then almost let me go to prison for your murder.”

“I had nothing to do with that, other than to leave, and I didn’t agree with Lucy that you should be made responsible for my disappearance.  I cannot be held responsible for the actions of my mother.  She hated you; Lucy didn’t understand you, and Millie told me I was stupid for not loving you in return, and she was right.  Why do you think I gave you such a hard time?  You made it impossible not to fall in love with you, and it nearly changed my mind about everything I’d been planning so meticulously.  But perhaps there was a more subliminal reason why I did because after I left, I wanted to believe, if anything went wrong, you would come and find me.”

“How could you possibly know that I’d even consider doing something like that, given what you knew about me?”

“Prendergast made a passing comment when my mother asked him about you; he told us you were very good at finding people and even better at fixing problems.”

“And yet here we are, one argument away from ending it.”

I could see Maria hovering, waiting for the right moment to deliver her coffee, then go back and find Gianna, the café owner, instead.  Gianna was more abrupt and, for that reason, was rarely seen serving the customers.  Today, she was particularly cantankerous, banging the cake dish on the table and frowning at Susan before returning to her kitchen.  Gianna didn’t like Susan either.

Behind me, I heard a car stop, and when she looked up, I knew it was for her.  She had arrived with nothing, and she was leaving with nothing.

She stood.  “Last chance.”

“Forever?”

She hesitated and then shook away the look of annoyance on her face.  “Of course not.  I wanted you to come back with me so we could continue working on our relationship.  I agree there are problems, but it’s nothing we can’t resolve if we try.”

I had been trying.  “It’s too soon for both of us, Susan.  I need to be able to trust you, and given the circumstances, and all that water under the bridge, I’m not sure if I can yet.”

She frowned at me.  “As you wish.”  She took an envelope out of her bag and put it on the table.  “When you are ready, it’s an open ticket home.  Please make it sooner rather than later.  Despite what you think of me, I have missed you, and I have no intention of ending it between us.”

That said, she glared at me for a minute, shook her head, then walked to the car.  I watched her get in and the car drive slowly away.

No kiss, no touch, no looking back. 

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© Charles Heath 2018-2025

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If I only had one day to stop over in – Lima – what would I do?

One‑Day Stopover in Lima? Make It Unforgettable With a Visit to Plaza Mayor

If you’ve only got 24 hours in Peru’s bustling capital, there’s one spot that will let you taste its history, culture, and culinary magic all at once: the historic heart of the city—Plaza Mayor.


Why Plaza Mayor is the Perfect One‑Stop Destination

What you getHow it fits a tight schedule
A UNESCO‑listed heritage zone – Colonial palaces, a cathedral, and the Government Palace all within a few blocks.No need to hop between neighborhoods; everything is foot‑accessible.
Iconic photo‑ops – Colorful façades, the famous “Basilica of San Francisco” bell tower in the background, and the central “Fuente de la Victoria.”Capture the city’s essence in minutes, leaving more time for food and souvenirs.
Culinary micro‑cosmos – Street vendors selling anticuchos, ceviche to go, and artisanal chocolate.Sample authentic Peruvian bites without a long sit‑down lunch.
Free or low‑cost entry – Most buildings can be admired from the outside; the Cathedral interior is a modest ticket.Keeps your budget intact for that extra pisco sour.

In short, Plaza Mayor is Lima’s “must‑see‑in‑an‑hour” that also gives you a genuine feel for the city’s soul.


Arriving at Plaza Mayor: The Logistics

  1. From the Airport (Jorge Chávez International – LIM)
    • Taxi / Ride‑share: 20‑30 min (≈ S/ 30‑40). Use a reputable app (Beat, Cabify) or the official airport taxi desk.
    • Bus “Airport Express”: Free, stops at the Central Station (Estación Central). From there, hop on a Metropolitano bus (Line 1) to Plaza Mayor (stop Plaza San Martín).
  2. Best Time to Go
    • Morning (08:00‑10:30): Light, fewer crowds, and the city’s iconic “Lima sunrise” casts a golden glow on the stone façades.
    • Late afternoon (16:00‑18:00): The plaza comes alive with street performers, and you’ll catch the sunset over the Pacific in the background of the Government Palace’s balcony.
  3. What to Wear
    • Light layers (Lima’s climate is mild, 18‑24 °C).
    • Comfortable walking shoes—cobblestones can be uneven.

The 3‑Hour Itinerary That Packs a Punch

1️⃣ 08:30 – 09:15  | Stroll Around the Square

  • Start at the Cathedral of Lima – Enter for a quick 10‑minute peek at the baroque altar and the tomb of the famed painter José Gálvez.
  • Walk clockwise: admire the Palacio de la Municipalidad, the elegant Palacio de Gobierno (guard change ceremony at 10 am if you stay a bit longer), and the Casa de la Literatura Peruana (pop‑in for a coffee and a literary souvenir).

2️⃣ 09:15 – 10:00  | Culinary Pit‑Stop

  • Anticucho stand (skewered beef heart) – ≈ S/ 10 for a tasty bite.
  • Ceviche “to go” from Ceviche La Mar kiosk (fresh, portable, and perfect for a waterfront vibe).
  • Pisco sour at the historic Bar “La Casa del Pisco” – a quick 5‑minute sip to kick‑start your day.

3️⃣ 10:00 – 10:45  | Dive Deeper – Guided Mini‑Tour

  • Free walking tours run daily (check the kiosk near the plaza). Guides will whisk you through the hidden stories of “El Cabildo” and the “El Cristo del Pacífico” statue.
  • If you prefer a solo pace, grab an audio guide from the Tourist Information Centre (S/ 5) and wander at your own rhythm.

4️⃣ 10:45 – 11:30  | Cultural Finale

  • Visit the Museum of the Central Bank of Peru (just a block away). A quick 30‑minute look at pre‑Columbian artifacts and colonial silverwork ties together the narrative of Lima’s past.
  • Take a final photo at the Fuente de la Victoria—the fountain’s bronze lion is a beloved Instagram spot.

Total time: ~3 hours, leaving you ample room for a quick hop to Miraflores or the airport for your onward flight.


Bonus: Extending the Magic (If Time Allows)

OptionWhy It Works After Plaza Mayor
Walk to the “Parque de la Exposición” (5‑min) – Beautiful gardens, a historic glass pavilion, and occasional art fairs.Keeps you in the historic zone while adding a green pause.
Cross to the “Barranco” district (taxi, 10 min) – Bohemian murals, the Bridge of Sighs, and a sea view.Gives you a taste of Lima’s modern, artistic side.
Head to “Miraflores” (Metropolitano, 20 min) – The clifftop “Parque del Amor” and the spectacular Circuito Mágico del Agua light show.Ideal for a sunset finale and a last‑minute souvenir hunt.

Quick Checklist for the One‑Day Stopover

  • Passport & boarding pass – Keep them handy for airport re‑entry.
  • S/ 50 cash – Small vendors and taxi rides still prefer cash.
  • Light rain jacket – Lima’s “garúa” (mist) can appear unexpectedly.
  • Portable charger – Your phone will be busy with photos, maps, and the audio guide.
  • Travel‑size sanitiser – Public plazas are bustling; stay safe.

Wrap‑Up: Why Plaza Mayor Beats All Other Options

In a city where the modern skyline competes with centuries‑old stone, Plaza Mayor is the single point where history, architecture, and flavour intersect. It lets you:

  • Walk through time (from the Spanish conquest to modern Peruvian identity).
  • Taste the nation (quick bites of ceviche and pisco).
  • Snap stunning photos without a long trek across traffic‑choked avenues.

So, if your itinerary says “Lima, 24 h,” set your compass to Plaza Mayor. One stop, endless stories, and a day that will feel far richer than the minutes on the clock.


Ready to Make Your Layover Legendary?

Book your taxi, grab a map, and let Plaza Mayor be the heartbeat of your Lima adventure.

Got a different favourite stopover spot in Lima? Drop a comment below—let’s keep the conversation (and the travel inspiration) rolling! 🌎