“The Devil You Don’t”, she was the girl you would not take home to your mother!

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John Pennington’s life is in the doldrums. Looking for new opportunities, and prevaricating about getting married, the only joy on the horizon was an upcoming visit to his grandmother in Sorrento, Italy.

Suddenly he is left at the check-in counter with a message on his phone telling him the marriage is off, and the relationship is over.

If only he hadn’t promised a friend he would do a favour for him in Rome.

At the first stop, Geneva, he has a chance encounter with Zoe, an intriguing woman who captures his imagination from the moment she boards the Savoire, and his life ventures into uncharted territory in more ways than one.

That ‘favour’ for his friend suddenly becomes a life-changing event, and when Zoe, the woman who he knows is too good to be true, reappears, danger and death follow.

Shot at, lied to, seduced, and drawn into a world where nothing is what it seems, John is dragged into an adrenaline-charged undertaking, where he may have been wiser to stay with the ‘devil you know’ rather than opt for the ‘devil you don’t’.

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Research for the writing of a thriller – 2

Background material used in creating a location, an explosive situation, and characters to bring it alive – the story – A Score to Settle

The world-weary agent – back for one more time

The Wreckage of Recovery: He’s Back in the Cold, Guarding His Past

In the world of espionage, the only way out is usually in a box. So when a veteran operative manages to survive a mission so catastrophic it nearly took his life, the recovery phase is supposed to be quiet. Long days of physical therapy, sterile white walls, and the slow, agonizing work of stitching a broken mind back together.

But sometimes, the world doesn’t care if you’re healed. Sometimes, the world demands you step back into the fire—especially when the flames are being deliberately fanned by the one person you were trying to forget.

We have a fascinating, terrifying scenario playing out on the global stage, and it centers on a man who desperately needed to stay out of the game, and a woman who refuses to follow advice.


From Scar Tissue to Suit: The Return of the World-Weary

Our protagonist—let’s call him ‘K’—was, until recently, a ghost. His last operation ended in failure, betrayal, and enough collateral damage to earn him a permanent benching. The physical scars have faded, but the echoes of that op—the one that ended in wreckage, not resolution—still ring in his ears. He is a man who knows the cold, bitter taste of failure, and he has spent his recovery time convincing himself he is done with the risk.

But the powers that be, desperate for a protector whose instincts are razor sharp, regardless of his mental state, have dragged him screaming back. His new assignment? Chief Protection Agent for one of the most famous, and most controversial, keynote speakers in the world.

And this is where the wires cross, the circuits fry, and the danger moves from external threat to emotional time bomb.

The Tinder Box and the Stubborn Star

The VIP—the keynote speaker—is currently a primary target. Her message is polarizing, her reach is global, and the threats against her security detail are mounting daily. Intelligence reports have advised strongly against her appearance at the upcoming summit. The venue is being called a tinder box; a complex security nightmare ripe for exploitation.

Yet, she ignores the warnings. She is charismatic, driven, and possesses an almost reckless belief in her own invulnerability. She will step onto that stage, no matter how many alarms are sounding.

And K is the man standing between her and whatever unseen forces are gathering in the shadows.

The History That Threatens the Present

The problem isn’t just the professional risk, the complex logistics, or the very real possibility of a sniper. The problem is the history K shares with the speaker.

Their connection is not just a footnote on a long-forgotten mission brief. It’s the kind of history that makes his hands shake when he reaches for his weapon; the kind of history that compromises judgment and muddies the tactical waters.

Was it a failed romance tangled up in a field investigation? A partnership that blew up under pressure? Whatever the specifics, the remnants of their intense, complicated past linger. For K, guarding her isn’t just a job; it’s a terrifying confrontation with a vulnerability he thought he had successfully buried beneath layers of medical gauze and psychological denial.

Can he protect a woman he once loved, or perhaps still feels deeply connected to, knowing that his last major emotional involvement ended in devastation?

He has been brought in because he is the best. But when the target is also the source of your deepest emotional baggage, being the best is rarely enough. The line between professional duty and catastrophic personal collapse is thinner than ever.

Disaster in the Offing?

K is walking into a situation where the external threat is immense, but the internal threat—his own broken concentration, his lingering guilt, the complicated chemistry between him and the VIP—is arguably far greater.

He knows better than anyone that when personal history is allowed to bleed onto the professional landscape, disaster is almost always the result. He is physically recovered, yes, but mentally? He is still standing precariously amidst the wreckage of his last mission.

The big question hanging over this high-stakes security detail isn’t if the enemy will strike, but rather: Will K be the protector who saves her life, or will his own complicated history with the woman he is guarding be the catalyst for yet another, final, devastating failure?

The clock is ticking. And in this tinder box, the past is about to light the fuse.

Another excerpt from “Strangers We’ve Become” – A sequel to ‘What Sets Us Apart’

It was the first time in almost a week that I made the short walk to the cafe alone.  It was early, and the chill of the morning was still in the air.  In summer, it was the best time of the day.  When Susan came with me, it was usually much later, when the day was much warmer and less tolerable.

On the morning of the third day of her visit, Susan said she was missing the hustle and bustle of London, and by the end of the fourth she said, in not so many words, she was over being away from ‘civilisation’.  This was a side of her I had not seen before, and it surprised me.

She hadn’t complained, but it was making her irritable.  The Susan that morning was vastly different to the Susan on the first day.  So much, I thought, for her wanting to ‘reconnect’, the word she had used as the reason for coming to Greve unannounced.

It was also the first morning I had time to reflect on her visit and what my feelings were towards her.  It was the reason I’d come to Greve: to soak up the peace and quiet and think about what I was going to do with the rest of my life.

I sat in my usual corner.  Maria, one of two waitresses, came out, stopped, and there was no mistaking the relief in her manner.  There was an air of tension between Susan and Maria I didn’t understand, and it seemed to emanate from Susan rather than the other way around.  I could understand her attitude if it was towards Alisha, but not Maria.  All she did was serve coffee and cake.

When Maria recovered from the momentary surprise, she said, smiling, “You are by yourself?”  She gave a quick glance in the direction of my villa, just to be sure.

“I am this morning.  I’m afraid the heat, for one who is not used to it, can be quite debilitating.  I’m also afraid it has had a bad effect on her manners, for which I apologise.  I cannot explain why she has been so rude to you.”

“You do not have to apologise for her, David, but it is of no consequence to me.  I have had a lot worse.  I think she is simply jealous.”

It had crossed my mind, but there was no reason for her to be.  “Why?”

“She is a woman, I am a woman, she thinks because you and I are friends, there is something between us.”

It made sense, even if it was not true.  “Perhaps if I explained…”

Maria shook her head.  “If there is a hole in the boat, you should not keep bailing but try to plug the hole.  My grandfather had many expressions, David.  If I may give you one piece of advice, as much as it is none of my business, you need to make your feelings known, and if they are not as they once were, and I think they are not, you need to tell her.  Before she goes home.”

Interesting advice.  Not only a purveyor of excellent coffee, but Maria was also a psychiatrist who had astutely worked out my dilemma.  What was that expression, ‘not just a pretty face’?

“Is she leaving soon?” I asked, thinking Maria knew more about Susan’s movements than I did.

“You would disappoint me if you had not suspected as much.  Susan was having coffee and talking to someone in her office on a cell phone.  It was an intense conversation.  I should not eavesdrop, but she said being here was like being stuck in hell.  It is a pity she does not share your love for our little piece of paradise, is it not?”

“It is indeed.  And you’re right.  She said she didn’t have a phone, but I know she has one.  She just doesn’t value the idea of getting away from the office.  Perhaps her role doesn’t afford her that luxury.”

And perhaps Alisha was right about Maria, that I should be more careful.  She had liked Maria the moment she saw her.  We had sat at this very table, the first day I arrived.  I would have travelled alone, but Prendergast, my old boss, liked to know where ex-employees of the Department were, and what they were doing.

She sighed.  “I am glad I am just a waitress.  Your usual coffee and cake?”

“Yes, please.”

Several months had passed since we had rescued Susan from her despotic father; she had recovered faster than we had thought, and settled into her role as the new Lady Featherington, though she preferred not to use that title, but go by the name of Lady Susan Cheney.

I didn’t get to be a Lord, or have any title, not that I was expecting one.  What I had expected was that Susan, once she found her footing as head of what seemed to be a commercial empire, would not have time for details like husbands, particularly when our agreement made before the wedding gave either of us the right to end it.

There was a moment when I visited her recovering in the hospital, where I was going to give her the out, but I didn’t, and she had not invoked it.  We were still married, just not living together.

This visit was one where she wanted to ‘reconnect’ as she called it, and invite me to come home with her.  She saw no reason why we could not resume our relationship, conveniently forgetting she indirectly had me arrested for her murder, charges both her mother and Lucy vigorously pursued, and had the clone not returned to save me, I might still be in jail.

It was not something I would forgive or forget any time soon.

There were other reasons why I was reluctant to stay with her, like forgetting small details, an irregularity in her character I found odd.  She looked the same, she sounded the same, she basically acted the same, but my mind was telling me something was not right.  It was not the Susan I first met, even allowing for the ordeal she had been subjected to.

But, despite those misgivings, there was no question in my mind that I still loved her, and her clandestine arrival had brought back all those feelings.  But as the days passed, I began to get the impression my feelings were one-sided and she was just going through the motions.

Which brought me to the last argument, earlier, where I said if I went with her, it would be business meetings, social obligations, and quite simply her ‘celebrity’ status that would keep us apart.  I reminded her that I had said from the outset I didn’t like the idea of being in the spotlight, and when I reiterated it, she simply brushed it off as just part of the job, adding rather strangely that I always looked good in a suit.  The flippancy of that comment was the last straw, and I left before I said something I would regret.

I knew I was not a priority.  Maybe somewhere inside me, I had wanted to be a priority, and I was disappointed when I was not.

And finally, there was Alisha.  Susan, at the height of the argument, had intimated she believed I had an affair with her, but that elephant was always in the room whenever Alisha was around.  It was no surprise when I learned Susan had asked Prendergast to reassign her to other duties. 

At least I knew what my feelings for Alisha were, and there were times when I had to remember she was persona non grata.  Perhaps that was why Susan had her banished, but, again, a small detail; jealousy was not one of Susan’s traits when I first knew her.

Perhaps it was time to set Susan free.

When I swung around to look in the direction of the lane where my villa was, I saw Susan.  She was formally dressed, not in her ‘tourist’ clothes, which she had bought from one of the local clothing stores.  We had fun that day, shopping for clothes, a chore I’d always hated.  It had been followed by a leisurely lunch, lots of wine and soul searching.

It was the reason why I sat in this corner; old habits die hard.  I could see trouble coming from all directions, not that Susan was trouble or at least I hoped not, but it allowed me the time to watch her walking towards the cafe in what appeared to be short, angry steps; perhaps the culmination of the heat wave and our last argument.

She glared at me as she sat, dropping her bag beside her on the ground, where I could see the cell phone sitting on top.  She followed my glance down, and then she looked unrepentant back at me.

Maria came back at the exact moment she was going to speak.  I noticed Maria hesitate for a second when she saw Susan, then put her smile in place to deliver my coffee.

Neither spoke nor looked at each other.  I said, “Susan will have what I’m having, thanks.”

Maria nodded and left.

“Now,” I said, leaning back in my seat, “I’m sure there’s a perfectly good explanation as to why you didn’t tell me about the phone, but that first time you disappeared, I’d guessed you needed to keep in touch with your business interests.  I thought it somewhat unwisethat you should come out when the board of one of your companies was trying to remove you, because of what was it, an unexplained absence?  All you had to do was tell me there were problems and you needed to remain at home to resolve them.”

My comment elicited a sideways look, with a touch of surprise.

“It was unfortunate timing on their behalf, and I didn’t want you to think everything else was more important than us.  There were issues before I came, and I thought the people at home would be able to manage without me for at least a week, but I was wrong.”

“Why come at all.  A phone call would have sufficed.”

“I had to see you, talk to you.  At least we have had a chance to do that.  I’m sorry about yesterday.  I once told you I would not become my mother, but I’m afraid I sounded just like her.  I misjudged just how much this role would affect me, and truly, I’m sorry.”

An apology was the last thing I expected.

“You have a lot of work to do catching up after being away, and of course, in replacing your mother and gaining the requisite respect as the new Lady Featherington.  I think it would be for the best if I were not another distraction.  We have plenty of time to reacquaint ourselves when you get past all these teething issues.”

“You’re not coming with me?”  She sounded disappointed.

“I think it would be for the best if I didn’t.”

“Why?”

“It should come as no surprise to you that I’ve been keeping an eye on your progress.  You are so much better doing your job without me.  I told your mother once that when the time came I would not like the responsibilities of being your husband.  Now that I have seen what it could possibly entail, I like it even less.  You might also want to reconsider our arrangement, after all, we only had a marriage of convenience, and now that those obligations have been fulfilled, we both have the option of terminating it.  I won’t make things difficult for you if that’s what you want.”

It was yet another anomaly, I thought; she should look distressed, and I would raise the matter of that arrangement.  Perhaps she had forgotten the finer points.  I, on the other hand, had always known we would not last forever.  The perplexed expression, to me, was a sign she might have forgotten.

Then, her expression changed.  “Is that what you want?”

“I wasn’t madly in love with you when we made that arrangement, so it was easy to agree to your terms, but inexplicably, since then, my feelings for you changed, and I would be sad if we parted ways.  But the truth is, I can’t see how this is going to work.”

“In saying that, do you think I don’t care for you?”

That was exactly what I was thinking, but I wasn’t going to voice that opinion out loud.  “You spent a lot of time finding new ways to make my life miserable, Susan.  You and that wretched friend of yours, Lucy.  While your attitude improved after we were married, that was because you were going to use me when you went to see your father, and then almost let me go to prison for your murder.”

“I had nothing to do with that, other than to leave, and I didn’t agree with Lucy that you should be made responsible for my disappearance.  I cannot be held responsible for the actions of my mother.  She hated you; Lucy didn’t understand you, and Millie told me I was stupid for not loving you in return, and she was right.  Why do you think I gave you such a hard time?  You made it impossible not to fall in love with you, and it nearly changed my mind about everything I’d been planning so meticulously.  But perhaps there was a more subliminal reason why I did because after I left, I wanted to believe, if anything went wrong, you would come and find me.”

“How could you possibly know that I’d even consider doing something like that, given what you knew about me?”

“Prendergast made a passing comment when my mother asked him about you; he told us you were very good at finding people and even better at fixing problems.”

“And yet here we are, one argument away from ending it.”

I could see Maria hovering, waiting for the right moment to deliver her coffee, then go back and find Gianna, the café owner, instead.  Gianna was more abrupt and, for that reason, was rarely seen serving the customers.  Today, she was particularly cantankerous, banging the cake dish on the table and frowning at Susan before returning to her kitchen.  Gianna didn’t like Susan either.

Behind me, I heard a car stop, and when she looked up, I knew it was for her.  She had arrived with nothing, and she was leaving with nothing.

She stood.  “Last chance.”

“Forever?”

She hesitated and then shook away the look of annoyance on her face.  “Of course not.  I wanted you to come back with me so we could continue working on our relationship.  I agree there are problems, but it’s nothing we can’t resolve if we try.”

I had been trying.  “It’s too soon for both of us, Susan.  I need to be able to trust you, and given the circumstances, and all that water under the bridge, I’m not sure if I can yet.”

She frowned at me.  “As you wish.”  She took an envelope out of her bag and put it on the table.  “When you are ready, it’s an open ticket home.  Please make it sooner rather than later.  Despite what you think of me, I have missed you, and I have no intention of ending it between us.”

That said, she glared at me for a minute, shook her head, then walked to the car.  I watched her get in and the car drive slowly away.

No kiss, no touch, no looking back. 

© Charles Heath 2018-2025

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In a word: Tap

There is nothing worse than, when lying in bed unable to get to sleep, you hear every noise in the house and out, but none worse than a dripping tap.

It’s often not because someone forgot to turn the tap off, but because a washer is on its last legs.

There are taps for the fallen brave, but aside from the fact that is the name of a piece of music, I think it’s also the title of a film.  But taps itself is a bugle call at dusk, and also played at military funerals.

Then there’s that income stream that you can tap into, other than your next-door neighbour’s power supply.

But what would be far more interesting than to tap into a phone line and listen in?  Even though eavesdroppers never hear anything good about themselves, you could learn something you didn’t want to know.

Then we can go back to the 1930s and a series of films that starred one of my favourite actors Fred Astaire, who was, of course, a tap dancer, along with Ginger Rogers.

In fact, my middle granddaughter is quite a good tap dancer.

And, lastly, was that a tap on the door, or a tap in the window?

“The Things We Do For Love”

Would you give up everything to be with the one you love?

Is love the metaphorical equivalent to ‘walking the plank’; a dive into uncharted waters?

For Henry, the only romance he was interested in was a life at sea, and when away from it, he strived to find sanctuary from his family and perhaps life itself.  It takes him to a small village by the sea, a place he never expected to find another just like him, Michelle, whom he soon discovers is as mysterious as she is beautiful.

Henry had long since given up the notion of finding romance, and Michelle couldn’t get involved for reasons she could never explain, but in the end, both acknowledge that something happened the moment they first met.  

Plans were made, plans were revised, and hopes were shattered.

A chance encounter causes Michelle’s past to catch up with her, and whatever hope she had of having a normal life with Henry, or anyone else, is gone.  To keep him alive she has to destroy her blossoming relationship, an act that breaks her heart and shatters his.

But can love conquer all?

It takes a few words of encouragement from an unlikely source to send Henry and his friend Radly on an odyssey into the darkest corners of the red-light district in a race against time to find and rescue the woman he finally realizes is the love of his life.

The cover, at the moment, looks like this:

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Is love the metaphorical equivalent to ‘walking the plank’; a dive into uncharted waters?

For Henry, the only romance he was interested in was a life at sea, and when away from it, he strived to find sanctuary from his family and perhaps life itself.  It takes him to a small village by the sea, s place he never expected to find another just like him, Michelle, whom he soon discovers is as mysterious as she is beautiful.

Henry had long since given up the notion of finding romance, and Michelle couldn’t get involved for reasons she could never explain, but in the end, both acknowledge that something happened the moment they first met.  

Plans were made, plans were revised, and hopes were shattered.

A chance encounter causes Michelle’s past to catch up with her, and whatever hope she had of having a normal life with Henry, or anyone else, is gone.  To keep him alive she has to destroy her blossoming relationship, an act that breaks her heart and shatters his.

But can love conquer all?

It takes a few words of encouragement from an unlikely source to send Henry and his friend Radly on an odyssey into the darkest corners of the red-light district in a race against time to find and rescue the woman he finally realizes is the love of his life.

The cover, at the moment, looks like this:

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Third son of a Duke – The research behind the story – 9

All stories require some form of research, quite often to place a character in a place at a particular time, especially if it is in a historical context. This series will take you through what it was like in 1914 through 1916.

Operational Analysis of Western Front Trench Activity: A Week in October 1915

I. Introduction: The Attritional Landscape of Late 1915

By October 1915, the character of the First World War on the Western Front had solidified into a grueling stalemate defined by static trench warfare, a condition established rapidly following the “Race to the Sea” in late 1914.1 The 800-kilometer line of fortified trenches, stretching from the North Sea to the Swiss frontier, dictated a war of attrition where the defender generally held a decisive advantage due to the revolution in firepower outpacing mobility.2

This specific period followed the costly and ultimately unsuccessful Franco-British offensives of September 1915, notably the Battle of Loos and the Third Battle of Artois.4 While these large-scale attacks inflicted severe casualties, they failed to achieve an operational breakthrough.6 Following these failures, October represented a strategic pause, compelling both sides—the Germans primarily on the defensive throughout the year—to prioritise maintenance, consolidation, and learning from the “tough learning experience” of offensive warfare.7

The tactical consequences of the earlier offensives were substantial. The initial British success at Neuve Chapelle in March 1915, achieved via a short, concentrated artillery bombardment, demonstrated a clear method for overcoming a single trench line.5 However, Allied command incorrectly concluded that mere volume of fire was the key, leading to the doctrine of massive, prolonged barrages. Conversely, German command immediately recognised the necessity of deep, redundant defensive systems, prompting a rapid divergence in trench quality.5 By October 1915, Allied trenches, particularly those taken over from the French, were frequently rudimentary, poorly drained, and in a “weak state of defence,” demanding immediate, dangerous labour details to upgrade the infrastructure.8

Furthermore, October marked the meteorological transition toward winter, introducing the environment itself as a critical mechanism of attrition. The onset of cold, persistent dampness led to widespread flooding, exacerbated by the destruction of pre-war drainage ditches by constant shelling.7 For the infantry soldier, this environmental degradation often superseded direct enemy action as the primary danger. The resulting non-battle attrition, especially conditions like Trench Foot, became a systemic military challenge, requiring constant attention and effort to mitigate the loss of manpower.11 The overall soldier experience during this week was highly variable, ranging from “invariably hellish” salients like Ypres to “quiet” sectors operating under an informal “live and let live” system, though even these peaceful fronts accrued daily casualties from snipers, gas, and disease.2

II. The Weekly Rhythm: Rotation, Fatigue, and Logistics

The experience of a soldier during a specific week in October 1915 was defined entirely by the rotation system, a necessary measure acknowledging that a “prolonged stay in the first trench was inhumane”.14 This structured cycle allowed for the management of physical and psychological fatigue, ensuring that combat forces were regularly replaced and refreshed, though true rest was often scarce.

A typical British or Commonwealth infantry rotation cycle involved moving through four positions along the line: the Front Line, the Support Line, the Reserve Line, and a period of Rest/Hinterland duty.2 A unit would typically spend 2 to 4 days in the Front Line before rotating backward.14 This period was the most dangerous, demanding constant vigilance and work, including ‘Stand-to’ rituals and continuous maintenance of the parapet.16 During the following periods in the Support and Reserve lines (totalling approximately four to eight days), soldiers served as defence in depth and were heavily engaged in crucial tasks: digging new systems, constructing fortifications, and serving as strenuous working parties to supply the front.2

The goal of the rotation was to achieve a minimum of seven days in a dedicated Rest/Recuperation period, essential for restoring fighting fitness. During this phase, soldiers benefited from crucial measures like undisturbed sleep, the opportunity for a bath, and regular hot meals.15 These periods also included essential training and drill.18 However, even when rotated out of the absolute front, the respite was not necessarily idle; men were constantly detailed for strenuous labor, such as communication trench digging or assisting logistics, meaning they were often “up every night”.19 This constant high level of physical activity, combined with sleep deprivation, resulted in a state of chronic exhaustion, which was a recognized predisposing factor for severe medical conditions such as Trench Foot.11

The flow of supplies was paramount and dictated the nightly rhythm of the rear areas. All vital logistics—rations, water, and ammunition—were moved up the line after dusk under the cover of darkness.2 This involved long, dangerous carrying parties traversing miles of winding communication trenches from rear-area field kitchens and depots.20 Despite sophisticated initial logistical plans relying on rail transport 21, the final miles relied on manual conveyance. The inadequate final-mile logistics meant that rations, though generous on paper, often arrived cold, tinned, or spoiled, failing to provide optimal nourishment.15 Furthermore, drinking water, transported in repurposed containers like petrol cans, had to be purified chemically, resulting in a taste that forced soldiers to consume most water in the form of cold tea.15 The difficulty in providing hot, nutritious food and clean water weakened troop immunity and morale just as the cold, wet conditions of October began to set in.22

Table 1 details the cyclical demands placed on infantry units during this attritional phase of the war.

Table 1: Typical Western Front Infantry Rotation Cycle (October 1915)

Location/PhaseDuration (Approx.)Primary Duties/Activity LevelKey Characteristic in October 1915
Front Line (Firing Trench)2 to 4 daysSentry Duty, Parapet Repair, Aggressive Patrolling, Stand-to (Dawn/Dusk) 14High exposure to Minenwerfer and snipers; constant dampness/mud 9
Support Line4 daysReserve for Front Line, Carrying Parties, Drainage/Dugout Labour, Equipment Supply 2Still subjected to sporadic artillery fire; heavy fatigue work at night 19
Reserve Line/Billet8 daysTraining, Deep fatigue work (e.g., communications digging), Cleaning, Rest/Sleep 2Opportunity for hot food and bath 15; billeting conditions often poor 19

III. The 24-Hour Cycle: Routine, Boredom, and the Fear of Dawn

Life in the front line was characterised by a strict, repetitive schedule where movement and labour were rigidly controlled by the risk of observation and fire. This routine was simultaneously mundane and terrifying.16

The day commenced approximately 30 minutes before sunrise with the critical ritual known as “Stand-to arms,” requiring every soldier to man the firing step with rifles and fixed bayonets.16 Doctrine held that dawn was the most likely time for an enemy attack. Paradoxically, because both sides fully manned their defences, outright dawn assaults were rare, as commanders recognised the suicidal nature of attacking an alerted garrison.18 However, this expectation of attack often culminated not in an infantry rush, but in a concentrated artillery barrage known as the “morning hate,” designed to strike bunched-up infantry outside the protective confines of their dugouts.18

Once the morning firing subsided, the daily routine transitioned into maintenance and inspection. This included weapons cleaning, kit inspections, and breakfast, which often consisted of tinned rations and the highly valued tot of rum.16 During daylight hours, nearly all work was conducted below the parapet to avoid snipers and observation.23 This included essential maintenance like filling sandbags, deepening trenches, and repairing duckboards.17 Interspersed with these fatigue duties, periods of downtime offered a vital psychological release, allowing soldiers to read, play cards, or write letters and journals, maintaining a crucial connection to normalcy amidst the “near-constant horror and death”.17

The imposition of a rigid daily routine was essential for imposing discipline and order amidst the inherent chaos of static warfare.16 Small, predictable comforts, such as the rum ration and post from home 16, functioned as vital psychological buffers. The capacity of a unit to maintain this routine and deliver necessary logistics, therefore, had a direct, measurable effect on morale and cohesion, which were essential components of effective resistance in attritional warfare.26

As visibility faded, the day’s routine culminated in the second ‘Stand-to’ at dusk.16 With the cover of darkness, activity intensified dramatically. The trenches became a hive of motion, facilitating troop rotations, the dangerous logistics of carrying rations and water, and the retrieval of mail.16 Engineering parties worked continuously to repair the parapets, maintain wire defences, and lay duckboards, preparing the line for the dangers of the ensuing night and the next day.17

IV. Night Operations: The Real Battle for No Man’s Land

Under the cover of darkness, No Man’s Land transformed from an exposed wasteland into a critical, intensely contested operational theatre.2 Night operations involved specialised patrols, raids, and constant construction, crucial for both defence and intelligence gathering.

Movement of troops, supplies, and reconnaissance was strictly limited to the night.2 Troops deployed specialised patrols with two main objectives. Reconnaissance patrols operated cautiously, seeking to detect enemy working parties, confirm the integrity of friendly wire, and occasionally cut enemy telephone cables, generally trying to avoid engagement.27 In contrast, fighting patrols had an aggressive mission: they actively engaged enemy patrols, disrupted enemy reconnaissance, and sought to eliminate forward positions like listening posts, thereby wrestling the nighttime initiative away from the opponent.27 Both sides also established listening posts in No Man’s Land, where sentries sought to detect the sounds of enemy movement or indications of an impending attack.2

By October 1915, trench raiding had become an established and accepted component of trench warfare.26 Raiding parties, typically small groups of up to twenty highly trained soldiers 26, would sneak across No Man’s Land with the goal of entering the enemy trenches to gather intelligence, capture prisoners (a primary objective), or seize weaponry.26 These missions were exceptionally perilous, often resulting in high casualty rates due to counter-patrols or organised defence fire.28 For the close-quarters fighting within the confined trenches, soldiers often abandoned cumbersome rifles in favour of improvised, brutal weaponry like clubs, knives, and knuckledusters.29

Beyond the tactical gains, raiding served a critical psychological purpose in the war of attrition. Frequent raiding was intended to “pressurise those in the opposing trenches and prevent them from ever truly being able to relax at night”.26 Since the entire logistics and maintenance structure depended on the cover of darkness 2, successful enemy patrols or raids could cripple a unit’s operational capacity. Therefore, the necessity of aggressive, high-risk patrols underscores that the continuous battle for the front was fundamentally fought at night, in stealth and close combat.

Concurrently, subterranean warfare continued below No Man’s Land. Specialist tunnelling companies, often composed of men with civilian mining experience, worked tirelessly to dig deep tunnels beneath enemy positions. These tunnels were packed with high explosives and detonated to breach or destroy the enemy trench line, creating craters that could be rapidly converted into advanced defensive positions.2 This high-risk activity was constant in specific geographical sectors, such as the slopes of Vimy Ridge.4

V. Mechanisms of Attrition: The Constant Threat Environment

The week in the trenches was characterised by a pervasive threat environment where death was typically delivered not by massed infantry assaults but by random, persistent weaponry. The majority of casualties on the Western Front were caused by artillery fire, shrapnel, and explosive blast effects.1

Artillery bombardment was generally sporadic and unpredictable, even in sectors not officially designated as “active”.13 Commanders understood that continuous massive bombardments were wasteful and often ineffective against dug-in troops.14 However, shelling was a daily feature, supporting every patrol and raid, and used specifically for daily harassment, such as the aforementioned “morning hate”.17 Soldiers mitigated this threat by constructing deep trenches, bunkers, and dugouts, constantly adjusting their defences in a continuous arms race against high explosives.2

A particularly terrifying localised weapon in 1915 was the German Minenwerfer (trench mortar).9 These heavy mortars delivered shells that looked like “an oil drum,” exploding with a terrific report.9 Their steep trajectory allowed them to circumvent the conventional protection afforded by trench parapets, specifically targeting fire bays and dugouts.30 One soldier noted that his sector was less troubled by conventional artillery, but that the enemy “make up for that with trench mortars and rifle grenades”.9 This highlights a tactical imbalance in 1915, often referred to as the “mortar gap,” where German specialisation in trench siege weaponry forced the British to continually upgrade their rudimentary trench designs under fire.7

Sniping and persistent machine gun fire enforced a state of permanent vigilance during daylight hours.16 The fixed defensive positions of trench warfare maximised the effectiveness of the machine gun, a “killing machine” with a high rate of fire that could be sustained for hours.29 Sniping accounted for persistent daily casualties even in quiet sectors, compelling soldiers to adhere to strict movement discipline below the parapet.2

Following the first effective deployment of chlorine gas at Ypres in April 1915 7 and the British use of gas at Loos in September 29, chemical warfare was an evolving and terrifying threat. By October 1915, rudimentary protective measures were in place, including linen masks soaked in water, improvised respirators, and the eventual distribution of cumbersome gas hoods/helmets.29 Gas alarms, typically horns and whistles, were crucial for giving troops the necessary seconds to don this protective equipment.29

The analysis of casualty data reveals a critical characteristic of this period: the cumulative toll of low-level attrition. Even in relatively quiet periods in early 1916, before the launch of the Somme Offensive, the British suffered over 107,000 casualties without engaging in any major battles.

Table 2: Sources of Daily Attrition and Risk (October 1915)

Threat CategoryWeapon/SourceImpact/Frequency in 1915Tactical Significance
Direct CombatArtillery Shells/ShrapnelMajority of total casualties; unpredictable area denial. Sporadic but highly destructive.Primary method of attrition; limits daytime movement and forces deep dugouts.
Localized SiegeTrench Mortars (Minenwerfer), Rifle GrenadesHighly disruptive localized attacks against specific fire bays and dugouts.Overcomes conventional frontal cover; psychological terror.
Precision FireSniping/Machine Gun FireDaily casualties even in ‘quiet’ sectors; enforced low profile during day.Enforced movement discipline; constant state of vulnerability.
Chemical WarfareChlorine/Tear GasRising, sporadic threat following 1915 deployments (Ypres, Loos).Requires constant vigilance and use of cumbersome, improvised protective gear.
Non-CombatTrench Foot, Trench Fever (Lice), RatsHigh rates of illness leading to extended incapacitation (months).Undermines unit strength and morale; caused by cold, dampness, and exhaustion.

VI. The Environment and Physical Toll: October’s Misery

As October progressed, the shift in weather ensured that the physical environment became as dangerous as the enemy. The trenches, often hastily constructed, had poor drainage and were quickly destroyed by artillery fire.7 The persistent autumn rains led to widespread flooding, with soldiers describing conditions where they lived in “mud and water” that rose “steadily till knee deep”.7 One account detailed men having to retreat from flooded positions, sometimes having to wade through two feet of water.7

This cold, persistent dampness was the primary driver of Trench Foot, a debilitating condition caused by the stagnation of venous blood in the feet.11 This condition, worsened by chronic fatigue 11, could rapidly progress to gangrene, necessitating amputation.32 Prophylaxis required constant, systematic effort, including regular foot and boot inspection, frequent sock changes, use of specialised talc (“French powder”), and the greasing of boots.11 The widespread attempt to use duckboards to mitigate the standing water often failed, as the boards were either floated away by heavy rains or simply trodden into the thick Somme mud.11

The unsanitary environment was amplified by ubiquitous pests. Rats, bloated from feeding on the waste and corpses of stationary armies, grew “as big as cats” and were known to gnaw on wounded or sleeping soldiers, occasionally causing wounds severe enough for hospitalisation.12 Lice were a constant tormentor, responsible for transmitting Trench Fever, a persistent illness characterised by debilitating headaches, fevers, and muscle pain that could pull a soldier away from the front for months.2

The trenches were an overwhelming sensory experience dominated by the stench of war. The smell was generated by a pervasive mix of “stinking mud mingled with rotting corpses, lingering gas, open latrines, wet clothes and unwashed bodies”.17 Sanitation was a continuous struggle, requiring strict, though often poorly executed, measures such as purifying drinking water and digging small waste pits.15

The systemic failure of early trench design and logistics, particularly in dealing with dampness and sanitation, was recognised as the cause of widespread non-combat casualties. The army authorities realised that maintaining health was crucial for retaining fighting capacity.15 This period starkly highlighted the disparity in positional warfare; while Allied soldiers struggled with hastily dug trenches, accounts suggest that German trenches were often initially better constructed, reflecting their earlier commitment to long-term defence and fortified dugouts.19 The inherent hardship of fighting defensively from positions often materially inferior to those of their opponents compounded the physical toll on the Allied soldier in October 1915.

VII. The Psychological Warfare of Endurance

The relentless, localised violence, combined with the extreme physical degradation of the environment, placed soldiers under extraordinary psychological pressure. This continuous stress environment led to a grim, self-protective normalisation of horror; one private recounted that while seeing men killed immediately initially felt “rather funny,” they “got used to the shrapnel and Bullets” as time wore on.25

The profound psychological strain of this unique form of warfare led to the formal recognition of ‘shell shock’ in 1915.33 Although initially misdiagnosed as physical injury resulting from bomb blast, medical practitioners soon realised that the “mental strain was considerable” even for those not directly exposed to heavy shellfire.33 The symptoms were varied and severe: uncontrollable shaking and trembling, being “dazed” after bombardment, or, in acute cases, men losing “control of everything” and being seen “singing” as they were taken out of the line.34 By 1916, hundreds of thousands of men would suffer from this condition.33

The high incidence of shell shock provided empirical evidence that the most pervasive form of combat activity in October 1915 was the psychological warfare of continuous endurance. Soldiers lived with the constant expectation of a “sudden, random, violent end,” even in designated quiet sectors.13 This anxiety, compounded by chronic sleep deprivation and physical exhaustion, caused rapid psychological breakdown.35

To counter this debilitating strain, soldiers relied on internal and institutional coping mechanisms. Routine provided structure 16, while camaraderie—even occasional, localised truces for collecting the wounded—provided human connection.36 Personal reflection through letters and diaries was a crucial outlet.17 Some soldiers developed a powerful sense of moral justification for their ordeal, such as the soldier who felt that he pitied the civilians who would “never have seen or known the things that we have seen and known”.37 Ultimately, however, the volume of non-battle attrition, both physical (disease) and psychological (shell shock), presented a continuous challenge to the military apparatus’s ability to maintain a functional frontline force.

VIII. Conclusion: October 1915 as a Microcosm of Attritional Warfare

Activity in the trenches during a typical week in October 1915 was dominated by a high-intensity, localised battle for survival, characterised by rigid routine and the constant struggle against systemic attrition. This period marked the deepening recognition of the demands of static warfare following the failed summer and autumn offensives.

A soldier’s week was highly segmented, demanding 2-4 days in the front line defined by the fear of the Minenwerfer and snipers, mitigated only by the discipline of “Stand-to” and constant labour.9 Nights were operational peaks, driven by the need for logistical resupply and the lethal game of patrolling No Man’s Land for intelligence and psychological harassment.2 The bulk of the week was dedicated to recovering from the physical and psychological toll in the support and reserve lines, although true rest was often compromised by unavoidable, exhausting labour parties.19

The analysis demonstrates that the primary attrition sources were not necessarily large-scale battles, which were absent during this strategic pause, but rather the cumulative effect of constant exposure: random shelling, disease vectors (lice, rats), and the debilitating impact of the cold, wet environment.2 The environmental degradation is linked directly to physical collapse, with dampness and fatigue combining to produce widespread Trench Foot, a systemic casualty problem.11

In summary, the week in October 1915 was a crucible, simultaneously characterised by the boredom of routine and the omnipresent threat of a sudden, violent end. It was a transitional phase where tactical and logistical lessons—particularly the necessity of permanent, deep dugouts and counter-siege weaponry—were being painfully learned by all belligerents, hardening the grim reality that would define the warfare of the Western Front for the years to come.

“The End of the Road”, a short story

The man who had said that we would never make the distance was right.

It had been my idea to go ‘troppo’, forsake everything, hop on a motorbike and go around Australia.  I was, at that stage fed up with everything and, catching Harry in one of his low spots, he decided there and then he would join me.

For the first few days, we believed we were stark staring mad and talked about calling it quits, but perseverance made all the difference.  After two months we were glad we had the resolve to keep going, and in that time we had managed to see more of the Australian countryside than we’d seen all our lives.

That was until this particular morning when we arrived in Berrigum, what could have been called a one-horse town.  It consisted of one hotel, one general store (that sold everything from toothpicks to petrol) and an agricultural machinery depot.  It also had a station and some wheat silos, and this appeared to be the only reason for a town in this particular spot in the middle of nowhere.

And it was the railway station that interested Harry, who was, by this time, getting a little homesick and fed up with his motorbike.

After coughing and spluttering for the last week it had finally died, and the five-mile walk to Berrigum had not helped either his temper, or his disposition, and had only served to firm his resolve to return home.

It was hot but not unbearably so, unlike a hot summer’s day in the city, and even worse still in public transport.  For miles around as we tramped those five miles all we could see was acres and acres of wheat, but no sign of life.  It was the same when we reached the town.  It appeared all the people were either hiding or had left.  Harry suspected the latter given the state of the road, and the buildings, more or less the epitome of a ghost town.

Standing at the end of what could have been called the main street with only our own dust for company, one look took in the whole town.  In a car, one wouldn’t have given it a second look, if one had time to give it a first.  I didn’t remember seeing neither any speed restriction signs nor signpost advertising a town ahead.

And since no amount of argument could sway him from his resolve, the first objective was to get a train timetable, if such a thing existed, and make arrangements for Harry’s return.

The station was as deserted as the town itself, and a quick glance in the stationmaster’s office showed no sign of life.

Leaving the bikes on the platform outside the office, we headed for the hotel for both a drink and make enquiries about rail services.  Being a hot day and the morning’s tramp somewhat hot and dusty, we were looking forward to a cold glass (or two) of beer.

The hotel looked as though it was a hundred years old though there was no doubting a few relentless summers would reduce it to the same state.  It was as bad inside as out, though the temperature was several degrees lower, and we could sit down in what appeared to be the main bar.  We were the only occupants and still to find any sign of life.  Overhead, two fans were struggling to move the hot air around.

More than once Harry reckoned it was a ghost town and I was beginning to believe him when, after five minutes, no one arrived.

After ten, we stood, ready to leave, only to stop halfway out of our chairs when a voice behind us said, “Surely you’re not going back out there without refreshment?”

“I was beginning to think the town was deserted,” I said.

“It is during the day, but when the sun goes down…”

I didn’t ask.  We followed him to the bar where he had stationed himself behind the counter.  “The name is Jack.”  He stretched out his hand towards us.  “We don’t bother with last names here.”

“Bill,” I said, shaking it, and nodding to Harry, “Harry.”

Harry nodded and shook his hand too.

“The first one’s on the house.”  He poured three glasses and put ours in front of us.  “Cheers.”

In all cases, it went down without touching the sides (as they say) and he poured a second, at the same time asking, “What brings you to our little corner of the earth?”

“Just passing through,” I said, “Or at least for me.”

“And you?”  Jack looked at Harry.

“I can’t hack the pace.  I can truthfully say I have thoroughly enjoyed the trip so far, except for a few mishaps, but for me, it’s time to get back to the big smoke.  My ‘do your own thing’ has run out of momentum.  Do you know if there is a train that goes anywhere important?”

The publican looked at him almost pityingly.  “Important, eh?”  He rubbed his chin feigning thought.  “You make it sound like you are in purgatory.”

“Aren’t we?”

I suppose one could hardly blame Harry for his attitude.  After all, at the beginning, he had numerous accidents, caught a virus that stayed with him (and a couple of torrential downpours had done little to help it), and now his motorbike had finally died.  No wonder his humour was at an all-time low.

For a moment I thought the publican was going to tell Harry what he thought of him, but then he smiled and the tension passed.  “Perhaps to a city fellow like you it might be,” he said.  “The mail train which has a passenger carriage comes through once a week, and, my good man, you’re in luck.  Today’s the day.”

“Good.  How do I get a ticket?”

“You’d have to see the Station Master.”

“And where might he be at the moment?  We were at the station a while back and there was no sign of life.”

“Nor will there be until the train comes.  Meanwhile, there’s time enough for lunch.  I’m sure you will stay?”  He looked questioningly at us.

I looked at Harry, who nodded.

“Why not.”

Over lunch, we talked.

I remember not so long ago when I had to attend a large number of lunches where the talk was of business, or, if anything, mostly about subjects that I had no interest in.  It was always some posh restaurant, time seemed important, the atmosphere never really relaxed, and to get into a relaxed state it took a large amount of alcohol to deaden the despair and distaste of that one had to fete in order to secure their business.

How different it was here.

We talked about the country, and, after seeing as much of it, and worked on it as we had to fund our odyssey, we could talk about it authoritatively.  And, most of all, it was interesting.

The atmosphere too was entirely different than it had been in the city.  Out here the people were always friendly, people always willing to stop and talk, particularly farmers; share a drink or some food.

There was none of this carefree purposefulness in the city, and more than once I’d thought of the fact one could travel in the same train with the same people for year after year and still not know any of them.  It was the same at work.  Even after five years I still hadn’t known three-quarters of the office staff, and most of them probably didn’t want to know me.  Harry was virtually the only real friend I’d had at work.

But here, in ‘the middle of nowhere’ as Harry had called it, I felt as though I’d known the publican all of my life instead of the few short hours.

Some hours later and after much argument, where Jack and I tried to talk Harry into staying (Jack said he knew someone who could fix anything including Harry’s bike), Harry remained unconvinced and resolute.  Jack, to round off the occasion (we were the first real guests from outside he had had in a week) provided another on-the-house ale and then saw us to the station.  “After all”, he had said, “I’ve nothing else to do at the moment.”

By that time the station was showing a little more life than it had before.  A station assistant, moving several parcels with a hand trolley, slowly ambled towards the end of the platform.

And whether it could be called a platform was a debatable point.  It was a gravel and grass affair that looked more like part of cutting through a hill than a station.

At the station, Jack portentously announced he was also the stationmaster and would be only too happy to take care of Harry’s requirements.  It would be, he added, “the first passenger ticket sold for several months.”  Certainly, the ticket he handed Harry bore witness to that.  It had yellowed with age.

One would have thought with the imminent arrival of the train there would be more people, but no.  The only event had been the station assistant’s stroll to the end of the platform and back.  Now both he and Jack had disappeared into the office and we were left alone on the platform.  Very little in the whole town stirred, nor had it the whole time we’d been there.

“Well,” I said to break the silence.  “I’m sorry to see you going through with it.  I thought I might have been able to talk you out of it…”  I shrugged, leaving the sentence unfinished.

“I’m sorry to be going too, but a body can take only so much bad luck, and God knows that’s all I’ve had.”

“Yes.”  I couldn’t think of much else to say.  “But it’s been good to have your company these last few months.”

“And you.  When do you think you’ll get back?”

“When I get sick of it I suppose.”

“Look us up then when you get back.”

“I will.”

Thankfully the appearance of the train in the distance broke off the conversation.  I had begun to think of what it was going to be like out on the road with no one to talk to but myself.  The thought was a little depressing and I tried not to let it show.

We said little else until the train pulled in, three flat cars, seven enclosed wagons, a passenger carriage and the guard’s van.  The train stopped with only part of the passenger carriage and the guard’s van at the station.

The guard took aboard the parcels the station assistant had left for him earlier, and then put those that were for Berrigum on the trolley.

I shook Harry’s hand and said I’d see him around.  Then he, the motorbike, and the guard were aboard and the train was off, disappearing slowly into the afternoon haze.

The station assistant then repeated his amble to the end of the platform to collect the hand trolley.

“Staying or moving on.”  Jack had come up behind me and gave me a bit of a start.

“Staying I guess, until tomorrow or maybe later.”

“I had heard one of the farm hands is leaving tomorrow heading back to Sydney.  There could be a vacancy.”

“Sounds like a plan,” I said.

“I could put in a word for you.”

“Thanks.”

Jack just grinned and we headed for the hotel.

© Charles Heath 2016-2019

The 2am Rant: It’s dark, it’s late, it’s raining…

Yes, it’s dark and late at night on this side of the world, and I’m guessing where you are, it’s probably winter, the sun’s disappeared, the day is freezing cold, and you’re having a hard time keeping warm.

Here, in the so-called land down under, which surprisingly a lot of people from the other side of the world do not know about, it is wet and cool, where it should be sunny and hot as well as humid.

Now, hang on, that can’t be true; others don’t know about us, because we all know the world is round and there has to be something or somewhere opposite.  I know that north we have China, and Europe, and further away, the United States.

Been to China, Europe and the United States, so I know you’re all there, somewhere.

And, as you can see, the rain and the cold have amped up the boredom factor and pushed me to do anything other than writing.  I have three jobs I’m supposed to be doing,

  1. Editing the second Walthenson PI, a Private Detective novel
  2. Writing two episodes of a serial story about surveillance going wrong, and
  3. Finishing off some new travel blog posts

None of them is appealing to me at the moment.

Instead, I find myself looking at what is shown on Winter TV in the US, one of which is reruns of Snowpiercer and is suitably cold.  It’s also complicated, and sometimes a little hard to follow, which means it takes two viewings to understand what’s going on.  It will be interesting to see where series three leads us … and I’m hoping Melanie will be back

Fascinating.

Then there are several of my favourites, FBI, The Rookie, a show called The Equaliser, a new version of an old TV show I used to watch many years ago.  Another will be the next series of Bridgerton, which was odd but interesting since we like those Jane Austen-like programs.  Now, hopefully, there will be another series of Miss Scarlett and the Duke, set in Victorian England.

And as for the blacklist, since Liz left, it had gone downhill … let’s hope they find something to lift it, like Liz’s evil twin sister!  Perhaps wisely, they wrapped it up, and it’s over.

There’s more, but I’d better get back to work.

Writing a book in 365 days – 326/327

Days 326 and 327

Writing exercise – Take a minor character and give them a backstory, and something that couldEight out of eight passengers and crew never thought they’d find themselves in what was, literally, a life and death situation.

The air hung heavy with cigarette smoke, for nearly all smoked (and some for the first time).  Tension thickened the atmosphere to a point where it could almost be cut with a knife.

In the deathly quiet, all had time to reflect on the fate that had befallen them, and the resume of events read like the script of the archetypal disaster movie.

The first hint of trouble came when they’d lost one engine.  The pilot had been quite nonchalant about it because, he said, they had three others.  Only Harry thought he could detect a note of apprehension in his tone.

Then, after a short time, they lost another engine.

An hour later, they crashed.

Of the eight, during those precious seconds before impact, none believed they would survive, but only the pilot and co-pilot perished.  All admitted it had been a spectacular piece of flying on the pilot’s part, all, that is, except Rawlings.

“A fine mess this blasted pilot has got us into,” Rawlings said for the umpteenth time.  No one had taken much notice before, and it was debatable whether anyone was taking notice now, for Rawlings had hardly endeared himself to the other passengers.

As the only person travelling first class he made sure he received the best service (and the only one to receive any service for that matter) from the moment he came on board.  The fact that the airline had allocated only one stewardess for the flight was the airline’s (and his fellow passengers’) problem, not his.

“After telling us how clever you are, Rawlings, why don’t you do something about it?”  An indistinguishable voice came from the rear of the plane.  It was an indication of the undercurrent of hate simmering beneath the icy calm.

Rawlings, still in the forward section of the plane, glared at the group, trying to put a face to the voice.  “To whom am I speaking?”

No one replied.

“No matter.”  He shrugged it off.  “Had the pilot managed to get the plane down in one piece, I could.  Since he didn’t, you can be assured I’ll think of something, which is more than I can say for some.”  It was, to him, a simple statement based on his assessment of the situation, but it served only to further alienate him from the others.

Harry had known better days, and, not for the first time, he wished this were one of them.  He’d had a premonition the previous night when he’d woken, bathed in sweat, an unconscious warning of an impending disaster.

Not that the threat of death was significant to him, for he knew it would come eventually, despite the doctor’s optimism, but not yet, not here, in the middle of nowhere, atop a mountain range in the freezing cold.

He glanced at his fellow passengers, a curious mixture of travellers he’d ever met.

Rawlings was the egotistical, bombastic, thorough son-of-a-bitch.  He had gone out of his way to make the trip as miserable as possible for the others.  Status, to him, was all-important, even after the crash.

Harkness, Rawlings’ assistant (and relegated to Economy class because he was a servant), was the sort who said little and suffered a lot.  His defence of the pilot had caused Rawlings to ‘vent his spleen’ on him, after which, to Harkness, the silence must have been golden.

Daphne and her mother, Mrs Gaunt, two of the three women on board, were congenial, cheerful people who bore up well considering they were terrified out of their wits.  Daphne, in fact, had taken over stewardess duties for the Economy passengers, a job much appreciated by them.

The remaining two passengers, geologists, were odd sorts who arrived late and drunk.  After take off, they’d fallen asleep and, in fact, had slept through the crash.  They were, Harry thought, in for one hell of a shock when they finally woke.

Above all, however, the stewardess had fared the worst, after the pilots, having, after the discovery of the death of the pilots, become hysterical.  It was an interesting development because she had kept a tight, calm grip on the situation all through the calamity.

Harry huddled closer under his blanket, only to remember his sore arm.  He didn’t think it was broken, but it certainly felt like it.  And the hell of it was, he couldn’t remember how it happened.  He shuddered as a gust of icy wind came through the rent in the fuselage near his seat.  But it was not only the cold which left him with almost uncontrollable shakes – it was also the onset of shock. 

In the back of his mind, he relived those cataclysmic minutes after successive engines failed.  It was then he wished he hadn’t been so insistent on having a window seat.

As the plane lurched sickeningly, the pilot calmly said they’d have to land immediately.  Of course, he added equally as calm, it would be difficult in mountainous country.  However, they were fortunate it had been snowing recently.  All except Rawlings took the news with equanimity.  It was odd, someone said later, that with all his knowledge and self-praise, Rawlings didn’t take over the plane and fly them to safety.

The plane was barely in the air when the order came to brace themselves, and all were prepared when the plane hit the ground moments later.

The plane came to rest abruptly in a snow-covered valley; the silence, after the cacophony of tearing metal and involuntary screams, was almost maddening.  The first realisation each had was that they were still alive – the second, the icy wind coming in through the large cracks in the fuselage.

Harry was the first to move himself into action and to make an appraisal of the situation.  The other passengers were more or less unharmed, except for the stewardess, who was slightly dazed.  Then, Harkness joining him, he went forward to the flight deck.  When they managed to wrench the door open they were greeted by a scene of total destruction.  Both pilots were dead, unrecognisable in the mass of twisted wreckage.  Harry quickly reclosed the door before he was physically ill.

At least it explained why the plane had stopped so abruptly:  they’d crashed into a rock in the last stages of the slide.  It was miraculous that the plane hadn’t caught fire.

Harry had no intention of taking charge; it just happened.  He told the others what the situation was briefly and down to earth, and then suggested they search for food and other items such as blankets.  Everyone noted Rawlings’ lack of enthusiasm to help, and if it had not been for Daphne, he would not have received blankets or food.  Most ignored him, wondering at the fact that he could still be so aloof in such tragic circumstances.

Because of the cold, they quickly organised themselves so they could wait for their rescue.  It wouldn’t, they reasoned, relatively cheerfully, be long.

Whilst the others may have considered Rawlings little more than a pain in the neck, it would have surprised them to learn that he despaired for them.  He couldn’t understand their attitude towards him, for all he wanted to do was make them feel better, and, if he could, help.

But there was little chance of that occurring, and, in fact, as much chance as him receiving the treatment he considered he deserved.  It was clear in his own mind that there were two types of people in the world: the leaders and the led.  By virtue of his station in life, he was one of the leaders.  Why, he asked himself rhetorically, didn’t they realise that?  He glared at them, all studiously ignoring his presence.  There was, he thought bitterly, little prospect of getting any assistance from those people.

Conditions were unbearable during the first night.  Darkness had fallen quickly, and with no hot food to ward off even a fraction of the coldness that had settled on them, their relatively good spirits quickly dissipated. 

To Harry (and the others) the night seemed interminable, and he found it impossible to sleep for any length of time.  He was shaking uncontrollably, despite the warm clothing and number of blankets, and, as dawn broke, he wasted no time getting up and about to get his circulation going again, urging the others to do likewise.  It was something he remembered having seen in a film once: if the cold was allowed to take over, a person quickly succumbed and died.

His first venture outside was something of an experience.  In the first instance, it was colder outside than in, if that was possible, and in the second, the landscape was as bleak, in his opinion, as their prospects of rescue.

After trekking some distance through the rather solid snow and up a rise, he found he had a good view of the plane, and the fact that there were, strangely, no trees from one end of the valley to the other.  The same could not be said for the surrounding country.  It seemed an impossibility that the pilot had been able to find such a place, and, desperately unlucky, he should hit the only rock Harry could see in the line of the plane’s path.

The plane was half covered in snow.  It was apparent it had been snowing during the night, and by the look of the sky, more was on the way.  Low clouds continually swept through the valley, obscuring everything from view, and that, he considered, would make discovery from the air nigh on impossible.

What it really meant was that they would have to come up with their own plan of action rather than wait for hypothermia to take its toll.  It was something he had been thinking about most of the night, but he had been unable to progress to any sort of workable alternatives.

During a clear period, Harry saw Harkness coming towards him slowly.  He was rapidly gaining respect for Harkness, as he was not only surprisingly cheerful (despite being blunted by the more dominant Rawlings) he was resourceful.

By the time he reached Harry, he was out of breath and needed a few minutes to recover.  Harry noted he looked a good deal older than he had first estimated.

“What a hike, but it sure beats the hell out of waiting down there,” Harkness said when he’d recovered sufficiently, nodding towards the wreckage.  “And, God knows how, I feel warm.”

“So do I.  It was one of the reasons I came here.”

“Those two geologists, or whatever they are, are finally awake.  Boy, you should have seen their faces.  One swore he’d give up drink forever.”

“He may get his wish sooner than he thinks.”

“You don’t rate our chances of discovery high, eh?”

“Take a look.”  Harry beckoned to the mist, which was swirling through the valley, obliterating everything in their view.  Harry, in fact, could hardly see Harkness.

“Yes.  I see what you mean.  What do you think we should do?”

“God knows.  But one thing is for sure, I don’t think we can afford to sit and wait for someone to come and find us.  Not under the current circumstances, with more snow imminent.   It’ll take only another fall to completely hide us from any viewpoint.”

Harkness looked at the sky, then at the surroundings, and nodded in agreement, adding, after a minute, “It seems odd this is the only part of the country that’s clear of trees.  Do you think there’s any significance in that?”

“Exactly, would you believe, what I was thinking?”

“Do you think we might be near help?”

“Who knows.  But, because of the urgency of the situation, I think we should find out.  The question is, who is the ideal person is  There was, however, no doubt in his mind.

“You’re mad, stark, staring mad,” Rawlings said when Harry told the others of the plan he and Harkness had formulated on their way back to the plane.

“I agree there is an element of risk….”

“Risk?” Rawlings exploded.  “Risk?  It’s bloody suicide.  In my opinion, we should sit tight.  We have enough to eat, and we’re relatively warm.  It won’t be long before the search parties are out now we are overdue.”

“You haven’t been outside.  Circumstances dictate that we must seek help.  It’s been explained in detail.  If you cannot understand the situation, then don’t interfere.”  Harkness glared at his old chief, for the first time feeling more than a match for him.  Rawlings would never again dominate him.

“Then you’re fools, as are all the rest of you if you condone this idiocy.  I wash my hands of it.”  And he ignored them, going back to his book.  If that Davidson character wanted to kill himself, that was his business.

There were no other objections.  The others understood the realities of the situation, both Harkness and Harry had explained at length.  Harry would seek assistance.  Harkness would do his best to keep the others alive.

Then, after a good meal (in the circumstances) and taking enough food for two days, Harry left.  At the top of the rise, he stopped, briefly, looking at the scene.  It was, he thought, exactly as it had been in the dream.

For two days, it had snowed continuously.  The sub-zero temperatures had virtually sapped them all of whatever energy they had left, and, on the morning of the third day, they were all barely alive

At the end of the second day, Harkness had requested everybody to huddle together, including the standoffish Rawlings, who finally agreed, despite inner misgivings.  It was probably this single action that saved them.

Harkness, though he said nothing, had given up hope that Harry would still be alive.  No one could have survived the intensity of the blizzard.

Harkness had woken to inky darkness and a death-like silence, the storm having abated.  His first thought was that he had died, but that passed as the cold slowly made itself felt.  Soon after, finding his torch still worked, he roused everyone and cajoled or browbeat them into doing their exercises to ward off frostbite.

It was then that they heard the strange throbbing sound, and Harkness instinctively went outside and found they’d been snowed in.  As the throbbing sound passed over them again, Harkness didn’t need to ask for assistance to make an opening in the snow.  They frantically dug their way through; luckily, the snow wall was only of powder-like consistency.  Hot long after daylight showed through, and then Harkness was out.  But the plane, or what he assumed to be a plane, had gone.

Instead, he was alone, by the snow mountain that covered the plane, greeted by a perfectly blue sky and the sun’s rays.  It was, he thought wryly, perfect skiing weather but awfully lonely if no one could see where you were.

In a minute, he was joined by Daphne, and the disappointment was written on her face.  They waited, wordless, by the plane for an hour, glad to be out of the confined space of the fuselage, and were, at various times, joined by the others, escaping what Mrs Gaunt had said (now, after the rescue plane had gone) would probably be their grave.  The disbelief and joy of having survived the crash had now worn off, and Harkness knew that if they had to try to survive another night, some might not make it.

He was alone, striking out for the rise when the throbbing sound returned, coming from behind him.  And judging by the sound, it could not be a plane.  It was too low and too slow.  Thus, he was not surprised when a helicopter hovered over the rise and slowed as the occupants sighted him waving frantically, and yelling, quickly being joined by the others.

They all couldn’t believe they’d been rescued, all, that is, except Rawlings.  In every instance, Rawlings had the exception, and it was not to his credit.  He was the only one who had suffered severely from frostbite.  He was, however, the one to say, when they finally reached what he called civilisation, that he’d been right:  that all they had to do was sit tight and wait.  They’d be rescued sooner or later.

That was when the leader of the rescue operation shattered his illusion – and shocked everyone else.  “That’s not necessarily so Mr Rawlings.  You would have been discovered, but late in spring, after the thaw.  The plane was terribly off course, and, to be honest, after the second day, we’d given up any real hope of finding you.  The surrounding countryside is very rugged.  No, you owe a great deal to a fellow called Davidson.”

“Davidson, you say?” Harkness muttered.  “He’s alive?”

“Unfortunately, no.  He died soon after he told us about the plane and where it had crashed.  If he hadn’t, you’d still be there.”

“My God.”  Harkness slumped into a chair, only barely able to hear Rawlings say, quietly, “I told him it was suicide, but no one listened to me.  Suicide, I said.  And, as for that damn pilot…..” elevate them to becoming a major character

©  Charles Heath  2025

Top 5 sights on the road less travelled – Sardinia

Sardinia is famous for its glamorous coastlines, but the island truly shines when you venture inland or to its quieter corners. For a journey on the road less travelled, here are five of the best places and activities:

1. Hike the Gola Su Gorropu Gorge

  • What it is: Often called the “Grand Canyon of Europe,” this is one of the deepest gorges on the continent, carved by the Flumineddu River in the Supramonte mountain range.
  • Why it’s less travelled: It requires a moderate-to-challenging hike (or a 4×4 transfer) to access, keeping the crowds away. This activity takes you deep into Sardinia’s rugged, wild heart, offering a dramatic contrast to the beaches.
  • Activity: Trek through the immense canyon walls, navigating the huge boulders within the gorge floor.

2. Meet the Albino Donkeys of Asinara National Park

  • What it is: A protected, uninhabited island off the northwest coast, formerly a maximum-security prison and penal colony.
  • Why it’s less travelled: Access is restricted to preserve the environment. Its primary inhabitants are the rare wild albino donkeys (known as Asinara donkeys), horses, and other wildlife.
  • Activity: Take a ferry from Stintino or Porto Torres and explore the island by bike (or e-bike), following the paths that connect coves, ancient watchtowers, and abandoned prison infrastructure.

3. Explore the Dunes of Piscinas

  • What it is: Located in the Arbus area on the west coast, this is the largest desert in Europe, with vast, rolling golden dunes that stretch for miles and meet the sea.
  • Why it’s less travelled: It’s a remote area, part of the old mining region, far from the main tourist hubs. The landscape is unique, offering a “wild-west” feel.
  • Activity: Wander through the immense dunes, admire the rust-red lagoons, and spot the abandoned mining carts illuminated by the Milky Way at night.

4. Step Back in Time at Nuraghe Su Nuraxi

  • What it is: The largest and most complete example of the nuraghi, the massive stone defence structures erected by the ancient Nuragic civilisation (1800–700 BCE). It is a UNESCO World Heritage site located inland in the village of Barumini.
  • Why it’s less travelled: It’s located deep in the countryside, away from the coastal routes. While famous, it draws a different crowd focused on deep history and archaeology.
  • Activity: Take a mandatory guided tour to explore the ruins of the fortified complex, which has re-emerged in its entirety, offering a window into one of the oldest civilisations in the Mediterranean.

5. Walk the Streets of the Open-Air Museum of San Sperate

  • What it is: A small, vibrant agricultural village about 15 minutes from Cagliari, transformed into an open-air art gallery.
  • Why it’s less travelled: It’s often overlooked by tourists heading straight for the beaches. Since the 1960s, local and international artists have covered the exterior walls of homes and shops with colourful murals depicting social, political, and historical themes.
  • Activity: Get “lost” walking the quaint streets, admiring over 200 murals and the basalt sculptures by local artist Pinuccio Sciola, who started the town’s artistic renaissance.