The 2am Rant: It’s dark, it’s late, it’s raining…

Yes, it’s dark and late at night on this side of the world, and I’m guessing where you are, it’s probably winter, the sun’s disappeared, the day is freezing cold, and you’re having a hard time keeping warm.

Here, in the so-called land down under, which surprisingly a lot of people from the other side of the world do not know about, it is wet and cool, where it should be sunny and hot as well as humid.

Now, hang on, that can’t be true; others don’t know about us, because we all know the world is round and there has to be something or somewhere opposite. I know that north we have China, and Europe, and further away, the United States.

Been to China, Europe and the United States, so I know you’re all there, somewhere.

And, as you can see, the rain and the cold have amped up the boredom factor and pushed me to do anything other than writing. I have three jobs I’m supposed to be doing,

Editing the second Walthenson PI, a Private Detective novel
Writing two episodes of a serial story about surveillance going wrong, and
Finishing off some new travel blog posts

None of them is appealing to me at the moment.

Instead, I find myself looking at what is shown on Winter TV in the US, one of which is reruns of Snowpiercer and is suitably cold. It’s also complicated, and sometimes a little hard to follow, which means it takes two viewings to understand what’s going on. It will be interesting to see where series three leads us … and I’m hoping Melanie will be back

Fascinating.

Then there are several of my favourites, FBI, The Rookie, a show called The Equaliser, a new version of an old TV show I used to watch many years ago. Another will be the next series of Bridgerton, which was odd but interesting since we like those Jane Austen-like programs. Now, hopefully, there will be another series of Miss Scarlett and the Duke, set in Victorian England.

And as for the blacklist, since Liz left, it had gone downhill … let’s hope they find something to lift it, like Liz’s evil twin sister! Perhaps wisely, they wrapped it up, and it’s over.

There’s more, but I’d better get back to work.

Writing a book in 365 days – 326/327

Days 326 and 327

Writing exercise – Take a minor character and give them a backstory, and something that couldEight out of eight passengers and crew never thought they’d find themselves in what was, literally, a life and death situation.

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The air hung heavy with cigarette smoke, for nearly all smoked (and some for the first time). Tension thickened the atmosphere to a point where it could almost be cut with a knife.

In the deathly quiet, all had time to reflect on the fate that had befallen them, and the resume of events read like the script of the archetypal disaster movie.

The first hint of trouble came when they’d lost one engine. The pilot had been quite nonchalant about it because, he said, they had three others. Only Harry thought he could detect a note of apprehension in his tone.

Then, after a short time, they lost another engine.

An hour later, they crashed.

Of the eight, during those precious seconds before impact, none believed they would survive, but only the pilot and co-pilot perished. All admitted it had been a spectacular piece of flying on the pilot’s part, all, that is, except Rawlings.

“A fine mess this blasted pilot has got us into,” Rawlings said for the umpteenth time. No one had taken much notice before, and it was debatable whether anyone was taking notice now, for Rawlings had hardly endeared himself to the other passengers.

As the only person travelling first class he made sure he received the best service (and the only one to receive any service for that matter) from the moment he came on board. The fact that the airline had allocated only one stewardess for the flight was the airline’s (and his fellow passengers’) problem, not his.

“After telling us how clever you are, Rawlings, why don’t you do something about it?” An indistinguishable voice came from the rear of the plane. It was an indication of the undercurrent of hate simmering beneath the icy calm.

Rawlings, still in the forward section of the plane, glared at the group, trying to put a face to the voice. “To whom am I speaking?”

No one replied.

“No matter.” He shrugged it off. “Had the pilot managed to get the plane down in one piece, I could. Since he didn’t, you can be assured I’ll think of something, which is more than I can say for some.” It was, to him, a simple statement based on his assessment of the situation, but it served only to further alienate him from the others.

…

Harry had known better days, and, not for the first time, he wished this were one of them. He’d had a premonition the previous night when he’d woken, bathed in sweat, an unconscious warning of an impending disaster.

Not that the threat of death was significant to him, for he knew it would come eventually, despite the doctor’s optimism, but not yet, not here, in the middle of nowhere, atop a mountain range in the freezing cold.

He glanced at his fellow passengers, a curious mixture of travellers he’d ever met.

Rawlings was the egotistical, bombastic, thorough son-of-a-bitch. He had gone out of his way to make the trip as miserable as possible for the others. Status, to him, was all-important, even after the crash.

Harkness, Rawlings’ assistant (and relegated to Economy class because he was a servant), was the sort who said little and suffered a lot. His defence of the pilot had caused Rawlings to ‘vent his spleen’ on him, after which, to Harkness, the silence must have been golden.

Daphne and her mother, Mrs Gaunt, two of the three women on board, were congenial, cheerful people who bore up well considering they were terrified out of their wits. Daphne, in fact, had taken over stewardess duties for the Economy passengers, a job much appreciated by them.

The remaining two passengers, geologists, were odd sorts who arrived late and drunk. After take off, they’d fallen asleep and, in fact, had slept through the crash. They were, Harry thought, in for one hell of a shock when they finally woke.

Above all, however, the stewardess had fared the worst, after the pilots, having, after the discovery of the death of the pilots, become hysterical. It was an interesting development because she had kept a tight, calm grip on the situation all through the calamity.

Harry huddled closer under his blanket, only to remember his sore arm. He didn’t think it was broken, but it certainly felt like it. And the hell of it was, he couldn’t remember how it happened. He shuddered as a gust of icy wind came through the rent in the fuselage near his seat. But it was not only the cold which left him with almost uncontrollable shakes – it was also the onset of shock.

In the back of his mind, he relived those cataclysmic minutes after successive engines failed. It was then he wished he hadn’t been so insistent on having a window seat.

As the plane lurched sickeningly, the pilot calmly said they’d have to land immediately. Of course, he added equally as calm, it would be difficult in mountainous country. However, they were fortunate it had been snowing recently. All except Rawlings took the news with equanimity. It was odd, someone said later, that with all his knowledge and self-praise, Rawlings didn’t take over the plane and fly them to safety.

The plane was barely in the air when the order came to brace themselves, and all were prepared when the plane hit the ground moments later.

The plane came to rest abruptly in a snow-covered valley; the silence, after the cacophony of tearing metal and involuntary screams, was almost maddening. The first realisation each had was that they were still alive – the second, the icy wind coming in through the large cracks in the fuselage.

Harry was the first to move himself into action and to make an appraisal of the situation. The other passengers were more or less unharmed, except for the stewardess, who was slightly dazed. Then, Harkness joining him, he went forward to the flight deck. When they managed to wrench the door open they were greeted by a scene of total destruction. Both pilots were dead, unrecognisable in the mass of twisted wreckage. Harry quickly reclosed the door before he was physically ill.

At least it explained why the plane had stopped so abruptly: they’d crashed into a rock in the last stages of the slide. It was miraculous that the plane hadn’t caught fire.

Harry had no intention of taking charge; it just happened. He told the others what the situation was briefly and down to earth, and then suggested they search for food and other items such as blankets. Everyone noted Rawlings’ lack of enthusiasm to help, and if it had not been for Daphne, he would not have received blankets or food. Most ignored him, wondering at the fact that he could still be so aloof in such tragic circumstances.

Because of the cold, they quickly organised themselves so they could wait for their rescue. It wouldn’t, they reasoned, relatively cheerfully, be long.

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Whilst the others may have considered Rawlings little more than a pain in the neck, it would have surprised them to learn that he despaired for them. He couldn’t understand their attitude towards him, for all he wanted to do was make them feel better, and, if he could, help.

But there was little chance of that occurring, and, in fact, as much chance as him receiving the treatment he considered he deserved. It was clear in his own mind that there were two types of people in the world: the leaders and the led. By virtue of his station in life, he was one of the leaders. Why, he asked himself rhetorically, didn’t they realise that? He glared at them, all studiously ignoring his presence. There was, he thought bitterly, little prospect of getting any assistance from those people.

Conditions were unbearable during the first night. Darkness had fallen quickly, and with no hot food to ward off even a fraction of the coldness that had settled on them, their relatively good spirits quickly dissipated.

To Harry (and the others) the night seemed interminable, and he found it impossible to sleep for any length of time. He was shaking uncontrollably, despite the warm clothing and number of blankets, and, as dawn broke, he wasted no time getting up and about to get his circulation going again, urging the others to do likewise. It was something he remembered having seen in a film once: if the cold was allowed to take over, a person quickly succumbed and died.

His first venture outside was something of an experience. In the first instance, it was colder outside than in, if that was possible, and in the second, the landscape was as bleak, in his opinion, as their prospects of rescue.

After trekking some distance through the rather solid snow and up a rise, he found he had a good view of the plane, and the fact that there were, strangely, no trees from one end of the valley to the other. The same could not be said for the surrounding country. It seemed an impossibility that the pilot had been able to find such a place, and, desperately unlucky, he should hit the only rock Harry could see in the line of the plane’s path.

The plane was half covered in snow. It was apparent it had been snowing during the night, and by the look of the sky, more was on the way. Low clouds continually swept through the valley, obscuring everything from view, and that, he considered, would make discovery from the air nigh on impossible.

What it really meant was that they would have to come up with their own plan of action rather than wait for hypothermia to take its toll. It was something he had been thinking about most of the night, but he had been unable to progress to any sort of workable alternatives.

During a clear period, Harry saw Harkness coming towards him slowly. He was rapidly gaining respect for Harkness, as he was not only surprisingly cheerful (despite being blunted by the more dominant Rawlings) he was resourceful.

…

By the time he reached Harry, he was out of breath and needed a few minutes to recover. Harry noted he looked a good deal older than he had first estimated.

“What a hike, but it sure beats the hell out of waiting down there,” Harkness said when he’d recovered sufficiently, nodding towards the wreckage. “And, God knows how, I feel warm.”

“So do I. It was one of the reasons I came here.”

“Those two geologists, or whatever they are, are finally awake. Boy, you should have seen their faces. One swore he’d give up drink forever.”

“He may get his wish sooner than he thinks.”

“You don’t rate our chances of discovery high, eh?”

“Take a look.” Harry beckoned to the mist, which was swirling through the valley, obliterating everything in their view. Harry, in fact, could hardly see Harkness.

“Yes. I see what you mean. What do you think we should do?”

“God knows. But one thing is for sure, I don’t think we can afford to sit and wait for someone to come and find us. Not under the current circumstances, with more snow imminent. It’ll take only another fall to completely hide us from any viewpoint.”

Harkness looked at the sky, then at the surroundings, and nodded in agreement, adding, after a minute, “It seems odd this is the only part of the country that’s clear of trees. Do you think there’s any significance in that?”

“Exactly, would you believe, what I was thinking?”

“Do you think we might be near help?”

“Who knows. But, because of the urgency of the situation, I think we should find out. The question is, who is the ideal person is There was, however, no doubt in his mind.

…

“You’re mad, stark, staring mad,” Rawlings said when Harry told the others of the plan he and Harkness had formulated on their way back to the plane.

“I agree there is an element of risk….”

“Risk?” Rawlings exploded. “Risk? It’s bloody suicide. In my opinion, we should sit tight. We have enough to eat, and we’re relatively warm. It won’t be long before the search parties are out now we are overdue.”

“You haven’t been outside. Circumstances dictate that we must seek help. It’s been explained in detail. If you cannot understand the situation, then don’t interfere.” Harkness glared at his old chief, for the first time feeling more than a match for him. Rawlings would never again dominate him.

“Then you’re fools, as are all the rest of you if you condone this idiocy. I wash my hands of it.” And he ignored them, going back to his book. If that Davidson character wanted to kill himself, that was his business.

There were no other objections. The others understood the realities of the situation, both Harkness and Harry had explained at length. Harry would seek assistance. Harkness would do his best to keep the others alive.

Then, after a good meal (in the circumstances) and taking enough food for two days, Harry left. At the top of the rise, he stopped, briefly, looking at the scene. It was, he thought, exactly as it had been in the dream.

…

For two days, it had snowed continuously. The sub-zero temperatures had virtually sapped them all of whatever energy they had left, and, on the morning of the third day, they were all barely alive

At the end of the second day, Harkness had requested everybody to huddle together, including the standoffish Rawlings, who finally agreed, despite inner misgivings. It was probably this single action that saved them.

Harkness, though he said nothing, had given up hope that Harry would still be alive. No one could have survived the intensity of the blizzard.

Harkness had woken to inky darkness and a death-like silence, the storm having abated. His first thought was that he had died, but that passed as the cold slowly made itself felt. Soon after, finding his torch still worked, he roused everyone and cajoled or browbeat them into doing their exercises to ward off frostbite.

It was then that they heard the strange throbbing sound, and Harkness instinctively went outside and found they’d been snowed in. As the throbbing sound passed over them again, Harkness didn’t need to ask for assistance to make an opening in the snow. They frantically dug their way through; luckily, the snow wall was only of powder-like consistency. Hot long after daylight showed through, and then Harkness was out. But the plane, or what he assumed to be a plane, had gone.

Instead, he was alone, by the snow mountain that covered the plane, greeted by a perfectly blue sky and the sun’s rays. It was, he thought wryly, perfect skiing weather but awfully lonely if no one could see where you were.

In a minute, he was joined by Daphne, and the disappointment was written on her face. They waited, wordless, by the plane for an hour, glad to be out of the confined space of the fuselage, and were, at various times, joined by the others, escaping what Mrs Gaunt had said (now, after the rescue plane had gone) would probably be their grave. The disbelief and joy of having survived the crash had now worn off, and Harkness knew that if they had to try to survive another night, some might not make it.

He was alone, striking out for the rise when the throbbing sound returned, coming from behind him. And judging by the sound, it could not be a plane. It was too low and too slow. Thus, he was not surprised when a helicopter hovered over the rise and slowed as the occupants sighted him waving frantically, and yelling, quickly being joined by the others.

They all couldn’t believe they’d been rescued, all, that is, except Rawlings. In every instance, Rawlings had the exception, and it was not to his credit. He was the only one who had suffered severely from frostbite. He was, however, the one to say, when they finally reached what he called civilisation, that he’d been right: that all they had to do was sit tight and wait. They’d be rescued sooner or later.

That was when the leader of the rescue operation shattered his illusion – and shocked everyone else. “That’s not necessarily so Mr Rawlings. You would have been discovered, but late in spring, after the thaw. The plane was terribly off course, and, to be honest, after the second day, we’d given up any real hope of finding you. The surrounding countryside is very rugged. No, you owe a great deal to a fellow called Davidson.”

“Davidson, you say?” Harkness muttered. “He’s alive?”

“Unfortunately, no. He died soon after he told us about the plane and where it had crashed. If he hadn’t, you’d still be there.”

“My God.” Harkness slumped into a chair, only barely able to hear Rawlings say, quietly, “I told him it was suicide, but no one listened to me. Suicide, I said. And, as for that damn pilot…..” elevate them to becoming a major character

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What I learned about writing – When you’ve got words on paper

They’re not exactly Nobel prize-winning prose.

Well, not yet.

I guess the point is that I have at least crystallised my thoughts on paper so that I can do something with them. After all, anything is better than nothing, isn’t it?

Sometimes I wonder. I look back on a lot of the stuff I wrote forty or fifty years ago, and it looks bad. The thing is, then, I thought it was great, and that I was destined to do great things with the written word.

Pity, all this time later, I’ve turned into a self-critical monster, where it seems nothing I write is any good.

So, does that mean we need to be less critical of our work? After all, through the years, when I’ve shared novels and short stories with others, they have all universally said they’re quite good.

So…

It’s time to go back to the previous day’s work and rework it. Yes, the idea that I wanted to write about is where I wanted the story to go; it’s just the execution.

The problem is, since then, a few other ideas have been running around in the back of my head, and these could be added or used to further the current plotline.

The other problem is, it is one of the six stories that I’m writing by the seat of my pants, you know, the way some pilots like to fly a plane, without all that computer backup. Similarly, this is the way I sometimes like to write.

It’s as much a surprise to me as it is to the reader.

There are good arguments for having planned the story from start to finish, but with these, I like to write it and see where it takes me. They’re episodic, so sometimes I get to write three or four episodes at a time, and these would most likely, in a boo,k become a chapter.

Last night I wrote two episodes, but it seems that it might need pointers back in previous episodes, because we all like to leave a trail of crumbs for the reader, so when they get to the denouement, they remember, ah yes, back in chapter two, such and such happened, but why am I only remembering it now?

Ok, enough convincing myself I’m a good writer, it’s time to get back to work…

An excerpt from “If Only” – a work in progress

Investigation of crimes doesn’t always go according to plan, nor does the perpetrator get either found or punished.

That was particularly true in my case. The murderer was incredibly careful in not leaving any evidence behind, to the extent that the police could not rule out whether it was a male or a female.

At one stage the police thought I had murdered my own wife though how I could be on a train at the time of the murder was beyond me. I had witnesses and a cast-iron alibi.

The officer in charge was Detective First Grade Gabrielle Walters. She came to me on the day after the murder seeking answers to the usual questions like, when was the last time you saw your wife, did you argue, the neighbors reckon there were heated discussions the day before.

Routine was the word she used.

Her fellow detective was a surly piece of work whose intention was to get answers or, more likely, a confession by any or all means possible. I could sense the raging violence within him. Fortunately, common sense prevailed.

Over the course of the next few weeks, once I’d been cleared of committing the crime, Gabrielle made a point of keeping me informed of the progress.

After three months the updates were more sporadic, and when, for lack of progress, it became a cold case, communication ceased.

But it was not the last I saw of Gabrielle.

The shock of finding Vanessa was more devastating than the fact she was now gone, and those images lived on in the same nightmare that came to visit me every night when I closed my eyes.

For months I was barely functioning, to the extent I had all but lost my job, and quite a few friends, particularly those who were more attached to Vanessa rather than me.

They didn’t understand how it could affect me so much, and since it had not happened to them, my tart replies of ‘you wouldn’t understand’ were met with equally short retorts. Some questioned my sanity, even, for a time, so did I.

No one, it seemed, could understand what it was like, no one except Gabrielle.

She was by her own admission, damaged goods, having been the victim of a similar incident, a boyfriend who turned out to be an awfully bad boy. Her story varied only in she had been made to witness his execution. Her nightmare, in reliving that moment in time, was how she was still alive and, to this day, had no idea why she’d been spared.

It was a story she told me one night, some months after the investigation had been scaled down. I was still looking for the bottom of a bottle and an emotional mess. Perhaps it struck a resonance with her; she’d been there and managed to come out the other side.

What happened become our secret, a once-only night together that meant a great deal to me, and by mutual agreement, it was not spoken of again. It was as if she knew exactly what was required to set me on the path to recovery.

And it had.

Since then, we saw each about once a month in a cafe. I had been surprised to hear from her again shortly after that eventful night when she called to set it up, ostensibly for her to provide me with any updates on the case, but perhaps we had, after that unspoken night, formed a closer bond than either of us wanted to admit.

We generally talked for hours over wine, then dinner and coffee. It took a while for me to realize that all she had was her work, personal relationships were nigh on impossible in a job that left little or no spare time for anything else.

She’d always said that if I had any questions or problems about the case, or if there was anything that might come to me that might be relevant, even after all this time, all I had to do was call her.

I wondered if this text message was in that category. I was certain it would interest the police and I had no doubt they could trace the message’s origin, but there was that tiny degree of doubt, about whether or not I could trust her to tell me what the message meant.

I reached for the phone then put it back down again. I’d think about it and decide tomorrow.

An excerpt from “One Last Look”: Charlotte is no ordinary girl

This is currently available at Amazon here: http://amzn.to/2CqUBcz

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I’d read about out-of-body experiences, and like everyone else, thought it was nonsense. Some people claimed to see themselves in the operating theatre, medical staff frantically trying to revive them, and being surrounded by white light.

I was definitely looking down, but it wasn’t me I was looking at.

It was two children, a boy and a girl, with their parents, in a park.

The boy was Alan. He was about six or seven. The girl was Louise, and she was five years old. She had long red hair and looked the image of her mother.

I remember it now, it was Louise’s birthday and we went down to Bournemouth to visit our Grandmother, and it was the last time we were all together as a family.

We were flying homemade kites our father had made for us, and after we lay there looking up at the sky, making animals out of the clouds. I saw an elephant, Louise saw a giraffe.

We were so happy then.

Before the tragedy.

When I looked again ten years had passed and we were living in hell. Louise and I had become very adept at survival in a world we really didn’t understand, surrounded by people who wanted to crush our souls.

It was not a life a normal child had, our foster parents never quite the sort of people who were adequately equipped for two broken-hearted children. They tried their best, but their best was not good enough.

Every day it was a battle, to avoid the Bannister’s and Archie in particular, every day he made advances towards Louise and every day she fended him off.

Until one day she couldn’t.

Now I was sitting in the hospital, holding Louise’s hand. She was in a coma, and the doctors didn’t think she would wake from it. The damage done to her was too severe.

The doctors were wrong.

She woke, briefly, to name her five assailants. It was enough to have them arrested. It was not enough to have them convicted.

Justice would have to be served by other means.

I was outside the Bannister’s home.

I’d made my way there without really thinking, after watching Louise die. It was like being on autopilot, and I had no control over what I was doing. I had murder in mind. It was why I was holding an iron bar.

Skulking in the shadows. It was not very different from the way the Bannister’s operated.

I waited till Archie came out. I knew he eventually would. The police had taken him to the station for questioning, and then let him go. I didn’t understand why, nor did I care.

I followed him up the towpath, waiting till he stopped to light a cigarette, then came out of the shadows.

“Wotcha got there Alan?” he asked when he saw me. He knew what it was, and what it was for.

It was the first time I’d seen the fear in his eyes. He was alone.

“Justice.”

“For that slut of a sister of yours. I had nuffing to do with it.”

“She said otherwise, Archie.”

“She never said nuffing, you just made it up.” An attempt at bluster, but there was no confidence in his voice.

I held up the pipe. It had blood on it. Willy’s blood. “She may or may not have Archie, but Willy didn’t make it up. He sang like a bird. That’s his blood, probably brains on the pipe too, Archie, and yours will be there soon enough.”

“He dunnit, not me. Lyin’ bastard would say anything to save his own skin.” Definitely scared now, he was looking to run away.

“No, Archie. He didn’t. I’m coming for you. All of you Bannisters. And everyone who touched my sister.”

It was the recurring nightmare I had for years afterwards.

I closed my eyes and tried to shut out the thoughts, the images of Louise, the phone call, the visit to the hospital and being there when she succumbed to her injuries. Those were the very worst few hours of my life.

She had asked me to come to the railway station and walk home with her, and I was running late. If I had left when I was supposed to, it would never have happened and for years afterwards, I blamed myself for her death.

If only I’d not been late…

When the police finally caught the rapists, I’d known all along who they’d be; antagonists from school, the ring leader, Archie Bannister, a spurned boyfriend, a boy whose parents, ubiquitously known to all as ‘the Bannister’s, dealt in violence and crime and who owned the neighbourhood. The sins of the father had been very definitely passed onto the son.

At school, I used to be the whipping boy, Archie, a few grades ahead of me, made a point of belting me and a few of the other boys, to make sure the rest did as they were told. He liked Louise, but she had no time for a bully like him, even when he promised he would ‘protect’ me.

I knew the gang members, the boys who tow-kowed to save getting beaten up, and after the police couldn’t get enough information to prosecute them because everyone was too afraid to speak out, I went after Willy. There was always a weak link in a group, and he was it.

He worked in a factory, did long hours on a Wednesday and came home after dark alone. It was a half mile walk, through a park. The night I approached him, I smashed the lights and left it in darkness. He nearly changed his mind and went the long way home.

He didn’t.

It took an hour and a half to get the names. At first, when he saw me, he laughed. He said I would be next, and that was four words more than he knew he should have said.

When I found him alone the next morning I showed him the iron bar and told him he was on the list. I didn’t kill him then, he could wait his turn, and worry about what was going to happen to him.

When the police came to visit me shortly after that encounter, no doubt at the behest of the Bannister’s, the neighbourhood closed ranks and gave me an ironclad alibi. The Bannister’s then came to visit me and threatened me. I told them their days were numbered and showed them the door.

At the trial, he and his friends got off on a technicality. The police had failed to do their job properly, but it was not the police, but a single policeman, corrupted by the Bannisters.

Archie could help but rub it in my face. He was invincible.

Joe Collins took 12 bullets and six hours to bleed out. He apologized, he pleaded, he cried, he begged. I didn’t care.

Barry Mills, a strong lad with a mind to hurting people, Archie’s enforcer, almost got the better of me. I had to hit him more times than I wanted to, and in the end, I had to be satisfied that he died a short but agonizing death.

I revisited Willy in the hospital. He’d recovered enough to recognize me, and why I’d come. Suffocation was too good for him.

David Williams, second in command of the gang, was as tough and nasty as the Bannisters. His family were forging a partnership with the Bannister’s to make them even more powerful. Outwardly David was a pleasant sort of chap, affable, polite, and well mannered. A lot of people didn’t believe he could be like, or working with, the Bannisters.

He and I met in the pub. We got along like old friends. He said Willy had just named anyone he could think of, and that he was innocent of any charges. We shook hands and parted as friends.

Three hours later he was sitting in a chair in the middle of a disused factory, blindfolded and scared. I sat and watched him, listened to him, first threatening me, and then finally pleading with me. He’d guessed who it was that had kidnapped him.

When it was dark, I took the blindfold off and shone a very bright light in his eyes. I asked him if the violence he had visited upon my sister was worth it. He told me he was just a spectator.

I’d read the coroner’s report. They all had a turn. He was a liar.

He took nineteen bullets to die.

Then came Archie.

The same factory only this time there were four seats. Anna Bannister, brothel owner, Spike Bannister, head of the family, Emily Bannister, sister, and who had nothing to do with their criminal activities. She just had the misfortune of sharing their name.

Archie’s father told me how he was going to destroy me, and everyone I knew.

A well-placed bullet between the eyes shut him up.

Archie’s mother cursed me. I let her suffer for an hour before I put her out of her misery.

Archie remained stony-faced until I came to Emily. The death of his parents meant he would become head of the family. I guess their deaths meant as little to him as they did me.

He was a little more worried about his sister.

I told him it was confession time.

He told her it was little more than a forced confession and he had done nothing to deserve my retribution.

I shrugged and shot her, and we both watched her fall to the ground screaming in agony. I told him if he wanted her to live, he had to genuinely confess to his crimes. This time he did, it all poured out of him.

I went over to Emily. He watched in horror as I untied her bindings and pulled her up off the floor, suffering only from a small wound in her arm. Without saying a word she took the gun and walked over to stand behind him.

“Louise was my friend, Archie. My friend.”

Then she shot him. Six times.

To me, after saying what looked like a prayer, she said, “Killing them all will not bring her back, Alan, and I doubt she would approve of any of this. May God have mercy on your soul.”

Now I was in jail. I’d spent three hours detailing the deaths of the five boys, everything I’d done; a full confession. Without my sister, my life was nothing. I didn’t want to go back to the foster parents; I doubt they’d take back a murderer.

They were not allowed to.

For a month I lived in a small cell, in solitary, no visitors. I believed I was in the queue to be executed, and I had mentally prepared myself for the end.

Then I was told I had a visitor, and I was expecting a priest.

Instead, it was a man called McTavish. Short, wiry, and with an accent that I could barely understand.

“You’ve been a bad boy, Alan.”

When I saw it was not the priest I told the jailers not to let him in, I didn’t want to speak to anyone. They ignored me. I’d expected he was a psychiatrist, come to see whether I should be shipped off to the asylum.

I was beginning to think I was going mad.

I ignored him.

“I am the difference between you living or dying Alan, it’s as simple as that. You’d be a wise man to listen to what I have to offer.”

Death sounded good. I told him to go away.

He didn’t. Persistent bugger.

I was handcuffed to the table. The prison officers thought I was dangerous. Five, plus two, murders, I guess they had a right to think that. McTavish sat opposite me, ignoring my request to leave.

“Why’d you do it?”

“You know why.” Maybe if I spoke he’d go away.

“Your sister. By all accounts, the scum that did for her deserved what they got.”

“It was murder just the same. No difference between scum and proper people.”

“You like killing?”

“No-one does.”

“No, I dare say you’re right. But you’re different, Alan. As clean and merciless killing I’ve ever seen. We can use a man like you.”

“We?”

“A group of individuals who clean up the scum.”

I looked up to see his expression, one of benevolence, totally out of character for a man like him. It looked like I didn’t have a choice.

Trained, cleared, and ready to go.

I hadn’t realized there were so many people who were, for all intents and purposes, invisible. People that came and went, in malls, in hotels, trains, buses, airports, everywhere, people no one gave a second glance.

People like me.

In a mall, I became a shopper.

In a hotel, I was just another guest heading to his room.

On a bus or a train, I was just another commuter.

At the airport, I became a pilot. I didn’t need to know how to fly; everyone just accepted a pilot in a pilot suit was just what he looked like.

I had a passkey.

I had the correct documents to get me onto the plane.

That walk down the air bridge was the longest of my life. Waiting for the call from the gate, waiting for one of the air bridge staff to challenge me, stepping onto the plane.

Two pilots and a steward. A team. On the plane early before the rest of the crew. A group that was committing a crime, had committed a number of crimes and thought they’d got away with it.

Until the judge, the jury and their executioner arrived.

Me.

Quick, clean, merciless. Done.

I was now an operational field agent.

I was older now, and I could see in the mirror I was starting to go grey at the sides. It was far too early in my life for this, but I expect it had something to do with my employment.

I didn’t recognize the man who looked back at me.

It was certainly not Alan McKenzie, nor was there any part of that fifteen-year-old who had made the decision to exact revenge.

Given a choice; I would not have gone down this path.

Or so I kept telling myself each time a little more of my soul was sold to the devil.

I was Barry Gamble.

I was Lenny Buckman.

I was Jimmy Hosen.

I was anyone but the person I wanted to be.

That’s what I told Louise, standing in front of her grave, and trying to apologize for all the harm, all the people I’d killed for that one rash decision. If she was still alive she would be horrified, and ashamed.

Head bowed, tears streamed down my face.

God had gone on holiday and wasn’t there to hand out any forgiveness. Not that day. Not any day.

New York, New Years Eve.

I was at the end of a long tour, dragged out of a holiday and back into the fray, chasing down another scumbag. They were scumbags, and I’d become an automaton hunting them down and dispatching them to what McTavish called a better place.

This time I failed.

A few drinks to blot out the failure, a blonde woman who pushed my buttons, a room in a hotel, any hotel, it was like being on the merry-go-round, round and round and round…

Her name was Silvia or Sandra, or someone I’d met before, but couldn’t quite place her. It could be an enemy agent for all I knew or all I cared right then.

I was done.

I’d had enough.

I gave her the gun.

I begged her to kill me.

She didn’t.

Instead, I simply cried, letting the pent up emotion loose after being suppressed for so long, and she stayed with me, holding me close, and saying I was safe, that she knew exactly how I felt.

How could she? No one could know what I’d been through.

I remembered her name after she had gone.

Amanda.

I remembered she had an imperfection in her right eye.

Someone else had the same imperfection.

I couldn’t remember who that was.

Not then.

I had a dingy flat in Kensington, a place that I rarely stayed in if I could help it. After five-star hotel rooms, it made me feel shabby.

The end of another mission, I was on my way home, the underground, a bus, and then a walk.

It was late.

People were spilling out of the pub after the last drinks. Most in good spirits, others slightly more boisterous.

A loud-mouthed chap bumped into me, the sort who had one too many, and was ready to take on all comers.

He turned on me, “Watch where you’re going, you fool.”

Two of his friends dragged him away. He shrugged them off, squared up.

I punched him hard, in the stomach, and he fell backwards onto the ground. I looked at his two friends. “Take him home before someone makes mincemeat out of him.”

They grabbed his arms, lifted him off the ground and took him away.

Out of the corner of my eye, I could see a woman, early thirties, quite attractive, but very, very drunk. She staggered from the bar, bumped into me, and finished up sitting on the side of the road.

I looked around to see where her friends were. The exodus from the pub was over and the few nearby were leaving to go home.

She was alone, drunk, and by the look of her, unable to move.

I sat beside her. “Where are your friends?”

“Dunno.”

“You need help?”

She looked up, and sideways at me. She didn’t look the sort who would get in this state. Or maybe she was, I was a terrible judge of women.

“Who are you?” she asked.

“Nobody.” I was exactly how I felt.

“Well Mr Nobody, I’m drunk, and I don’t care. Just leave me here to rot.”

She put her head back between her knees, and it looked to me she was trying to stop the spinning sensation in her head.

Been there before, and it’s not a good feeling.

“Where are your friends?” I asked again.

“Got none.”

“Perhaps I should take you home.”

“I have no home.”

“You don’t look like a homeless person. If I’m not mistaken, those shoes are worth more than my weekly salary.” I’d seen them advertised, in the airline magazine, don’t ask me why the ad caught my attention.

She lifted her head and looked at me again. “You a smart fucking arse are you?”

“I have my moments.”

“Have them somewhere else.”

She rested her head against my shoulder. We were the only two left in the street, and suddenly in darkness when the proprietor turned off the outside lights.

“Take me home,” she said suddenly.

“Where is your place?”

“Don’t have one. Take me to your place.”

“You won’t like it.”

“I’m drunk. What’s not to like until tomorrow.”

I helped her to her feet. “You have a name?”

“Charlotte.”

The wedding was in a small church. We had been away for a weekend in the country, somewhere in the Cotswolds, and found this idyllic spot. Graves going back to the dawn of time, a beautiful garden tended by the vicar and his wife, an astonishing vista over hills and down dales.

On a spring afternoon with the sun, the flowers, and the peacefulness of the country.

I had two people at the wedding, the best man, Bradley, and my boss, Watkins.

Charlotte had her sisters Melissa and Isobel, and Isobel’s husband Giovanni, and their daughter Felicity.

And one more person who was as mysterious as she was attractive, a rather interesting combination as she was well over retirement age. She arrived late and left early.

Aunt Agatha.

She looked me up and down with what I’d call a withering look. “There’s more to you than meets the eye,” she said enigmatically.

“Likewise I’m sure,” I said. It earned me an elbow in the ribs from Charlotte. It was clear she feared this woman.

“Why did you come,” Charlotte asked.

“You know why.”

Agatha looked at me. “I like you. Take care of my granddaughter. You do not want me for an enemy.”

OK, now she officially scared me.

She thrust a cheque into my hand, smiled, and left.

“Who is she,” I asked after we watched her depart.

“Certainly not my fairy godmother.”

Charlotte never mentioned her again.

Zurich in summer, not exactly my favourite place.

Instead of going to visit her sister Isobel, we stayed at a hotel in Beethovenstrasse and Isobel and Felicity came to us. Her husband was not with her this time.

Felicity was three or four and looked very much like her mother. She also looked very much like Charlotte, and I’d remarked on it once before and it received a sharp rebuke.

We’d been twice before, and rather than talk to her sister, Charlotte spent her time with Felicity, and they were, together, like old friends. For so few visits they had a remarkable rapport.

I had not broached the subject of children with Charlotte, not after one such discussion where she had said she had no desire to be a mother. It had not been a subject before and wasn’t once since.

Perhaps like all Aunts, she liked the idea of playing with a child for a while and then give it back.

Felicity was curious as to who I was, but never ventured too close. I believed a child could sense the evil in adults and had seen through my facade of friendliness. We were never close.

But…

This time, when observing the two together, something quite out of left field popped into my head. It was not possible, not by any stretch of the imagination, but I thought she looked like my mother.

And Charlotte had seen me looking in their direction. “You seem distracted,” she said.

“I was just remembering my mother. Odd moment, haven’t done so for a very long time.”

“Why now?” I think she had a look of concern on her face.

“Her birthday, I guess,” I said, the first excuse I could think of.

Another look and I was wrong. She looked like Isobel or Charlotte, or if I wanted to believe it possible, Melissa too.

I was crying, tears streaming down my face.

I was in pain, searing pain from my lower back stretching down into my legs, and I was barely able to breathe.

It was like coming up for air.

It was like Snow White bringing Prince Charming back to life. I could feel what I thought was a gentle kiss and tears dropping on my cheeks, and when I opened my eyes, I saw Charlotte slowly lifting her head, a hand gently stroking the hair off my forehead.

And in a very soft voice, she said, “Hi.”

I could not speak, but I think I smiled. It was the girl with the imperfection in her right eye. Everything fell into place, and I knew, in that instant that we were irrevocably meant to be together.

“Welcome back.”

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Writing a book in 365 days – 326/327

Days 326 and 327

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The air hung heavy with cigarette smoke, for nearly all smoked (and some for the first time). Tension thickened the atmosphere to a point where it could almost be cut with a knife.

In the deathly quiet, all had time to reflect on the fate that had befallen them, and the resume of events read like the script of the archetypal disaster movie.

Then, after a short time, they lost another engine.

An hour later, they crashed.

Rawlings, still in the forward section of the plane, glared at the group, trying to put a face to the voice. “To whom am I speaking?”

No one replied.

…

He glanced at his fellow passengers, a curious mixture of travellers he’d ever met.

In the back of his mind, he relived those cataclysmic minutes after successive engines failed. It was then he wished he hadn’t been so insistent on having a window seat.

The plane was barely in the air when the order came to brace themselves, and all were prepared when the plane hit the ground moments later.

At least it explained why the plane had stopped so abruptly: they’d crashed into a rock in the last stages of the slide. It was miraculous that the plane hadn’t caught fire.

Because of the cold, they quickly organised themselves so they could wait for their rescue. It wouldn’t, they reasoned, relatively cheerfully, be long.

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By the time he reached Harry, he was out of breath and needed a few minutes to recover. Harry noted he looked a good deal older than he had first estimated.

“What a hike, but it sure beats the hell out of waiting down there,” Harkness said when he’d recovered sufficiently, nodding towards the wreckage. “And, God knows how, I feel warm.”

“So do I. It was one of the reasons I came here.”

“Those two geologists, or whatever they are, are finally awake. Boy, you should have seen their faces. One swore he’d give up drink forever.”

“He may get his wish sooner than he thinks.”

“You don’t rate our chances of discovery high, eh?”

“Take a look.” Harry beckoned to the mist, which was swirling through the valley, obliterating everything in their view. Harry, in fact, could hardly see Harkness.

“Yes. I see what you mean. What do you think we should do?”

“Exactly, would you believe, what I was thinking?”

“Do you think we might be near help?”

“Who knows. But, because of the urgency of the situation, I think we should find out. The question is, who is the ideal person is There was, however, no doubt in his mind.

…

“You’re mad, stark, staring mad,” Rawlings said when Harry told the others of the plan he and Harkness had formulated on their way back to the plane.

“I agree there is an element of risk….”

…

For two days, it had snowed continuously. The sub-zero temperatures had virtually sapped them all of whatever energy they had left, and, on the morning of the third day, they were all barely alive

Harkness, though he said nothing, had given up hope that Harry would still be alive. No one could have survived the intensity of the blizzard.

“Davidson, you say?” Harkness muttered. “He’s alive?”

“Unfortunately, no. He died soon after he told us about the plane and where it had crashed. If he hadn’t, you’d still be there.”

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“What Sets Us Apart”, a mystery with a twist

David is a man troubled by a past he is trying to forget.

Susan is rebelling against a life of privilege and an exasperated mother who holds a secret that will determine her daughter’s destiny.

They are two people brought together by chance. Or was it?

When Susan discovers her mother’s secret, she goes in search of the truth that has been hidden from her since the day she was born.

When David realizes her absence is more than the usual cooling off after another heated argument, he finds himself being slowly drawn back into his former world of deceit and lies.

Then, back with his former employers, David quickly discovers nothing is what it seems as he embarks on a dangerous mission to find Susan before he loses her forever.

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The story behind the story: A Case of Working With the Jones Brothers

To write a private detective serial has always been one of the items at the top of my to-do list, though trying to write novels and a serial, as well as a blog, and maintain a social media presence, well, you get the idea.

But I made it happen, from a bunch of episodes I wrote a long, long time ago, used these to start it, and then continue on, then as now, never having much of an idea where it was going to end up, or how long it would take to tell the story.

That, I think is the joy of ad hoc writing, even you, as the author, have as much idea of where it’s going as the reader does.

It’s basically been in the mill since 1990, and although I finished it last year, it looks like the beginning to end will have taken exactly 30 years. Had you asked me 30 years ago if I’d ever get it finished, the answer would be maybe?

My private detective, Harry Walthenson

I’d like to say he’s from that great literary mold of Sam Spade, or Mickey Spillane, or Phillip Marlow, but he’s not.

But, I’ve watched Humphrey Bogart play Sam Spade with much interest, and modelled Harry and his office on it. Similarly, I’ve watched Robert Micham play Phillip Marlow with great panache, if not detachment, and added a bit of him to the mix.

Other characters come into play, and all of them, no matter what period they’re from, always seem larger than life. I’m not above stealing a little of Mary Astor, Peter Lorre or Sidney Greenstreet, to breathe life into beguiling women and dangerous men alike.

Then there’s the title, like

The Case of the Unintentional Mummy – this has so many meanings in so many contexts, though I imagine that back in Hollywood in the ’30s and ’40s, this would be excellent fodder for Abbott and Costello

The Case of the Three-Legged Dog – Yes, I suspect there may be a few real-life dogs with three legs, but this plot would involve something more sinister. And if made out of plaster, yes, they’re always something else inside.

But for mine, to begin with, it was “The Case of the …”, because I had no idea what the case was going to be about, well, I did, but not specifically.

Then I liked the idea of calling it “The Case of the Brother’s Revenge” because I began to have a notion there was a brother no one knew about, but that’s stuff for other stories, not mine, so then went the way of the others.

Now it’s called ‘A Case of Working With the Jones Brothers’, finished the first three drafts, and at the editor for the last.

I have high hopes of publishing it in early 2021. It even has a cover.

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Third son of a Duke – The research behind the story – 8

All stories require some form of research, quite often to place a character in a place at a particular time, especially if it is in a historical context. This series will take you through what it was like in 1914 through 1916.

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Soldiers cycled in the trenches of WW1

The Chronological Duty Cycle of a British Enlisted Soldier on the Western Front: April 1915 to Demobilisation

The service trajectory of a British enlisted soldier who volunteered in April 1915 was defined by the transition from enthusiastic volunteerism to the grinding attrition of static warfare, followed by the complex administrative challenge of post-Armistice demobilisation. This analysis follows the soldier’s duty cycle through initial training, deployment, the structured reality of front-line rotation, infrequent periods of leave, and the priority systems governing his return to civilian life four and a half years later.

I. Enlistment and Preparation: The Kitchener Volunteer (April 1915)

The individual enlisting in April 1915 was part of the colossal wave of manpower raised by Lord Kitchener, the Secretary of State for War. Although the initial enthusiasm of August 1914 had peaked, volunteers continued to surge forward throughout 1915, prior to the implementation of conscription in January 1916.¹ This soldier became part of the “New Army,” likely belonging to the K4 or K5 cohort, designed to replace the devastating losses suffered by the original British Expeditionary Force (BEF).³

I.A. The Recruitment and Administrative Context

The process of becoming a soldier began with immediate registration and a mandatory series of medical and fitness tests.⁵ While these examinations were intended to ensure recruits met the physical demands of war, the sheer “stampede of volunteers” wanting to fight meant that the official process was often rushed.⁵ Recruitment offices utilised public buildings, and staff struggled to process the thousands of eager men.⁵ The identity of this cohort, men who volunteered well before being compelled to serve, would later grant them a specific priority during demobilisation.⁶

I.B. Initial Training Phase: Acceleration and Deployment

The duration and quality of training were dictated entirely by the urgent demands of the front. Pre-war training for a regular infantry recruit lasted three months, and a Special Reservist received five months of preliminary full-time training.⁷ For the Kitchener volunteer of 1915, this schedule was significantly compressed. The goal articulated by Kitchener was to have these New Army divisions fully trained and ready for a decisive blow in mid-1916.³ However, the reality of attrition forced the British Army to accelerate deployment. The first major actions involving Kitchener’s Army units occurred prematurely at the Battle of Loos in September–October 1915.³

Given an April 1915 enlistment date, the soldier’s basic training would have been condensed, lasting approximately five to seven months, primarily conducted in large camps across the United Kingdom.⁵ These conditions were often rudimentary, and critical equipment supplies (such as uniforms and rifles) were initially limited due to the Army’s struggle to kit out the millions of new recruits.⁵ By late 1915, potentially December, this soldier would have been considered ready for combat and deployment to France.

This acceleration of the training schedule, driven by high casualty rates, necessitated a critical compromise in battlefield readiness. Kitchener’s original planning for exhaustive training was overridden by the strategic necessity of providing immediate reinforcements. Consequently, the April 1915 volunteer, upon arriving at the Western Front, possessed a level of preparation that was inherently inadequate for the highly technical and specialised nature of industrialised trench warfare, potentially increasing his vulnerability during his initial introduction to the fighting.

Estimated Pre-Deployment Timeline: April 1915 Volunteer

Phase	Start Date	Estimated Duration	End Date
Recruitment/Attestation	April 1915	1–3 Weeks	April/May 1915
Basic Training (Infantry)	May 1915	5–7 Months	Oct/Nov 1915
Deployment to France (BEF)	Dec 1915	1–3 Weeks	Early Jan 1916

II. Transit and Logistical Deployment to the BEF (Late 1915/Early 1916)

The movement of the newly trained soldier from the UK to the Western Front constituted a major logistical undertaking, demonstrating the pivotal role of transport and supply in modern warfare.⁹

II.A. The Logistical Journey

The deployment necessitated a sea passage across the English Channel, relying on ports and harbours that linked the British and French railway systems.¹⁰ While specialised personnel, such as drivers for the Army Service Corps (ASC), could be kitted out and dispatched to France in as little as three weeks ¹¹, the movement of an entire infantry battalion was integrated into broader logistical schedules.

Upon arrival in France, the soldier would pass through an Infantry Base Depot (IBD) near the coast. From there, troop trains moved men and material toward the active front line.⁹ The BEF had grown exponentially, expanding from six divisions in 1914 to nearly a million men by the close of 1915.⁴ The logistical infrastructure struggled severely to cope with this rapid scale-up.

II.B. Entering a Strained System

The volunteer arrived at the continent just as the British supply system was experiencing acute operational stress. During 1915, the initial, sometimes clumsy, methods of supplying the rapidly growing BEF—often characterized by a tradition of “muddle through”—began to fail, culminating in the “shell crisis”.¹² Though later streamlined by specialists like Sir Eric Geddes, who rationalized transport into five key components (docks, railways, canals, light railways, and roads) ¹², the soldier’s initial exposure to operational life was defined by the strain of this system.

The consequence of this infrastructural struggle was profound for the morale of the arriving volunteer. Men who had enlisted with high ideals encountered a system marred by systemic deficiency, where supplies—from ammunition and rations to basic material for trenches—were often poorly managed and delivered.¹² This environment of logistical friction and material shortages rapidly dispelled the initial idealistic fervour, shifting the soldier’s focus from achieving a rapid victory to surviving the brutal, poorly provisioned reality of continuous endurance.

III. The Standard Operational Cycle (1916–1918)

Once deployed to a divisional sector in early 1916, the soldier became integrated into the mandatory rotation system essential for maintaining unit cohesion and managing psychological stress under the continuous danger of trench warfare.¹⁴

III.A. The Necessity of the Rotation System

Trench warfare was a gruelling form of conflict marked by perpetual stalemate and mutual artillery bombardment, ensuring hundreds of casualties occurred daily even when no major attacks were underway.¹⁶ To prevent complete physical and psychological collapse, battalions were continuously cycled through various positions behind the front. The standard timetable for an infantry soldier in the British Army on the Western Front was approximately a 16-day cycle.¹⁶

III.B. The 16-Day Rotation Breakdown

This cycle ensured that units spent only short periods in the most hazardous zones before being withdrawn for rest and reorganisation:

Front Line: The most dangerous phase, typically lasting 4 days.¹⁸ Duties included sentry duty, aggressive patrolling (raids into no man’s land), repairing parapets, and preparing for defence. This exposed the soldier directly to snipers, machine gun fire, and immediate artillery barrages.
Support Line/Reserve Trenches: Lasting approximately 4 days.¹⁶ While slightly sheltered, this position was still well within the range of enemy artillery. This period was dominated by fatigue duties—the back-breaking labour of carrying vital supplies (ammunition, rations, wire, construction materials) forward to the front line, maintaining communication wires, and undertaking extensive trench repair work, often under cover of darkness.¹⁹
Rest Camps/Training Areas: The final phase, lasting approximately 8 days (often divided into 4 days in brigade reserve and 4 days at rest camps).¹⁶ Located several miles behind the line, often far enough back to be out of the range of most heavy artillery, this was the critical period for recovery, cleaning uniforms, delousing, receiving medical checks, and conducting essential physical training.²⁰

It is important to recognize that the image of the soldier spending endless weeks on the fire step is a misconception. The high rate of rotation meant that the average soldier spent the majority of his time—roughly 75% of his service—in support, reserve, or rest areas, rather than in the immediate front line trench.²¹

Standard Western Front Trench Rotation Cycle (BEF Infantry)

Location	Typical Duration	Risk Profile	Primary Duties
Front Line (Parapet)	4 Days	Maximum (Direct contact, Sniping, Raids)	Active defense, observation, wiring, fighting.
Support Line/Reserve Trenches	4 Days	High (Targeted Artillery, Logistics)	Fatigue duties, carrying parties, rapid response reserve.
Reserve/Training Area	8 Days	Medium-Low (Rear Area Shelling/Labor)	Training, large work details, cleaning, administrative tasks, rest.

III.C. The Operational Reality Versus Regulation

The standard 16-day cycle was an ideal structure implemented to manage manpower and sustain readiness. However, during periods of sustained offensive action—which dominated the soldier’s experience from 1916 onward, including the Battles of the Somme (1916) and Third Ypres (1917) ⁴—the rotation system often collapsed. When the army experienced severe manpower shortages or during the intensity of a major engagement, units were frequently forced to remain continuously “in the line” for periods exceeding thirty days.¹⁶ There are recorded instances, such as the 13th Yorkshire and Lancashire Regiment, enduring fifty-one consecutive days in the line.¹⁶

Furthermore, the act of moving away from the front line did not guarantee safety. While the four-day rotation in the forward trench was designed to prevent psychological breakdown, the continuous nature of warfare ensured that danger permeated all layers of the duty cycle. One study determined that one-third of all casualties on the Western Front were killed or wounded while in the relatively protected trenches, typically due to the relentless and indiscriminate shelling from enemy artillery.¹⁶ Thus, for the combatant, rotational movement merely exchanged the immediate, intense risk of small arms fire for the pervasive, random threat of heavy ordnance, demonstrating that the battle environment constituted an ever-present zone of attrition rather than a definable line of contact.

IV. Interruption of Service: Leave, Wounds, and Recovery

The long service term (1916–1918) for the April 1915 volunteer ensured that his continuous duty cycle would inevitably be broken, either by scheduled leave or by the high probability of wounding.

IV.A. Home Leave Policy and Disparity

Recognising the strain of continuous combat, the British Army, starting in 1915, gradually implemented leave periods to sustain troop morale.22 However, the policy was characterised by profound disparity and unpredictability. The granting of leave was explicitly stated as being “entirely at the discretion” of the Commander-in-Chief, meaning it was constantly subject to operational demands and military conditions at various parts of the line.²³

For the enlisted soldier, leave was a rare occurrence. Historical records indicate that while officers often received leave approximately every three months, the average enlisted soldier was permitted home leave only once every fifteen months.²⁴ Early leave periods were short—for example, four days plus travel time in 1915 ²⁵—but were later extended, typically to ten days, plus the time required for travel between the front and the UK.²⁵ The infrequent nature of this connection to civilian life meant that the soldier relied heavily on correspondence for communication, making the short, sparse home visits emotionally disruptive, as many soldiers reported feeling indifferent or alienated upon returning to civilian society.²²

IV.B. The Recovery Path: Wounds as Involuntary Respite

Given the brutal average attrition rate, which saw hundreds of casualties daily ²⁶, a combat veteran serving multiple years on the Western Front had a high statistical likelihood of being wounded. Wounds offered the most assured pathway to a sustained, involuntary removal from the front.

The immediate goal upon injury was rapid evacuation from the trenches to clearing stations, located 500 to 1,000 yards behind the line, and then onward to base hospitals in France or England.²⁷ Innovations during the war, such as the widespread adoption of the Thomas splint by 1915, significantly reduced the mortality rate from battlefield fractures ²⁸

For a non-fatal, but serious injury (e.g., bone fracture or severe soft tissue damage), the recuperation and rehabilitation process required months. A realistic assessment places the recovery and convalescence period, before a soldier could be medically reclassified and returned to his unit as a reinforcement, at at least three months.²⁹ Once deemed fit, the veteran would return via the Base Depots to the front, resuming the operational rotation cycle, often with a new unit if his original battalion had suffered heavy losses.

The extremely wide gap between officer and enlisted leave frequency (three months versus fifteen months) meant that for the rank-and-file soldier, a survivable wound functioned as the only predictable method of obtaining extended, systematic relief from continuous duty on the front lines. This operational reality underscored a systemic inadequacy in soldier welfare, whereby the most reliable form of rest was contingent upon experiencing physical trauma.

V. Demobilisation and Return to Civilian Life (1918–1919)

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The cessation of hostilities on November 11, 1918, did not equate to an immediate end of service. The government faced the immense task of demobilising over three million men.³⁰ An immediate, chaotic release was deemed unfeasible, threatening social disorder, massive unemployment, and jeopardising ongoing military commitments in occupied Germany, Russia, and the Empire.⁶

V.A. The Demobilisation Scheme and Priority Conflict

The British military implemented a complex, phased demobilisation scheme, initially comprising fourteen phases and organised into various groups.³¹ Crucially, the initial priority structure was based on civilian utility rather than length of military service or combat exposure.

Immediate Release Priority: This group consisted of “Demobilisers” (personnel in administrative corps like the RASC and RAMC required to run the process) and “Pivotal Men”.³³ Pivotal Men were those with essential industrial skills (Group 1: miners, agricultural workers, banking staff) whose immediate return was vital for national economic reconstruction.³¹ These men were entitled to immediate release irrespective of their war service duration.³³
The Veteran’s Status: The April 1915 volunteer, unless he happened to possess a rare industrial skill qualifying him as a Pivotal Man, fell into the general service categories. However, his status as an early volunteer entitled him to priority treatment over the later cohorts, particularly the conscripts raised in 1916 or the eighteen-year-olds drafted in 1918.⁶

V.B. The Timeline of Release

The prioritisation of economic expediency over military seniority led to widespread discontent among long-serving combat troops who saw late-enlisted pivotal men released first.³⁰ This structural imbalance ultimately required policy adjustments (later factoring in length of service and wounds), but the initial delay was unavoidable for many.

For the general infantry soldier who enlisted in April 1915, and who was not released early as a Pivotal Man or through a contract with a pre-war employer ³¹, his demobilisation draft would likely be processed in early to mid-1919, once the essential industrial groups were back in the labour market. The official procedure ensured that most men who had volunteered for war service were back in civilian life by the end of 1919.⁶

V.C. The Final Administrative Process

Before leaving his unit, the soldier would report to a transit camp (IBD) for medical and administrative closure.⁶ He received several crucial forms designed to facilitate his transition:

Army Form Z22: This document allowed the soldier to make a claim for any disability arising from his military service.⁶
Army Form Z44 (Plain Clothes Form): This authorised him to obtain civilian attire.⁶
Army Form Z18 (Certificate of Employment): A key document detailing his service and military occupation, intended to assist him in securing civilian employment.⁶

The soldier was then dispatched to a Dispersal Draft centre in the UK for final discharge, concluding his duty cycle that spanned four and a half years of service to the BEF.⁶

Conclusion

The full cycle of duty for the enlisted British soldier who volunteered in April 1915 was marked by intense chronological compressions and subsequent bureaucratic delays. His journey began with accelerated training, forced by operational necessity, which resulted in a compromised state of readiness upon deployment in late 1915/early 1916. His experience on the Western Front was characterised not by perpetual time on the fire step, but by a 16-day rotational rhythm dominated by essential, exhaustive labour and logistics, all conducted under the ubiquitous threat of artillery fire. The mechanisms of relief were deeply unequal, forcing the enlisted man to endure fifteen months between authorised leaves, where a serious, survivable wound inadvertently became the most reliable source of sustained rest. Finally, his post-war service was extended into 1919, as the prioritisation of national economic recovery over the rewarding of combat seniority delayed the return of the long-serving volunteer to civilian life. This trajectory reveals a complex system that, while functional in its capacity for mass mobilisation and logistical management, imposed disproportionate physical and emotional strain on the frontline enlisted veteran.

“Do you believe in g..g..ghosts…?”, a short story

Inside the old building, it was very quiet and almost cold.

Strange, perhaps, because outside the temperature was bordering on the record hottest day ever, nearly 45 degrees centigrade.

The people who’d built this building nearly a hundred years before must have known how to keep that heat at bay, using sandstone.

Back then, the sandstone would have looked very impressive, but now after many years of being closed off and left abandoned, the outside was stained by modern-day pollutants giving it a black streaky look, and inside layers of dust, easily stirred up as we walked slowly into the main foyer.

It was huge, the roof, ornate, with four huge chandelier lights hanging down, and wood paneling, giving way to a long counter with brass serving cages highlighting its former use; a bank.

In its day it would have conveyed the power and wealth so that its customers could trust the money to. Of course, that was before the global economy, online banking, and a raft of the new and different institutions all vying for that same money.

Then it was a simple choice of a few, now it was a few thousand.

“How many years had this been closed up?” I asked.

“Close to twenty, maybe twenty-five. It was supposed to be pulled down, but someone got it on the heritage list, and that put an end to it. “

Phil was the history nut. He’s spent a month looking into the building, finding construction plans, and correspondence dating back to before and during the construction.

Building methods, he said, that didn’t exist today and were far in advance of anything of its type for the period. It was the reason we were standing in the foyer now.

We were budding civil engineers, and the university had managed to organize a visit, at our own risk. The owner of the building had made sure we’d signed a health and safety waiver before granting access.

And the caretaker only took us as far as the front door. He gave us his cell number to call when we were finished. When we asked him why he didn’t want to come in with us, he didn’t say but it was clear to me he was afraid of something.

But neither of us believed in ghosts.

“You can see aspects of cathedrals in the design,” Phil said. ” You could quite easily turn this space into a church.”

“Or a very large wine cellar.” I brought a thermometer with me, and inside where we were standing it was the ideal temperature to store wine.

Behind the teller cages were four large iron doors to the vaults. They were huge, and once contained a large amount of cash, gold, and whatever else was deemed valuable.

They were all empty now, the shelves and floor had scattered pieces of bank stationery, and in a corner, several cardboard boxes, covered in even more dust.

Behind the vaults were offices, half-height with glass dividers, the desks and chairs still in place, and some with wooden filing cabinets drawers half-open.

Others had benches, and one, set in the corner, very large, and looked like the manager’s office. Unlike the other office which had linoleum tiles, this one had carpet. In a corner was a large mirror backed cabinet, with several half-empty bottles on it.

“Adds a whole new meaning to aged whiskey, don’t you think.” Phil looked at it but didn’t pick it up.

“I wonder why they left it,” I muttered. The place had the feel of having been left in a hurry, not taking everything with them.

I shivered, but it was not from the cold.

We went back to the foyer and the elevator lobby. They were fine examples of the sort of caged elevators that belonged in that time, and which there were very few working examples these days.

The elevators would have a driver, he would pull back an inner and outer door when the car arrived on a floor, and close both again when everyone was aboard.

Both cars were on the ground floor, with the shutter doors closed, and when I tried to open one, I found it had been welded shut. The other car was not sitting level with the floor and the reason for that, the cable that raised and lowered it was broken.

Restoring them would be a huge job and would not be in their original condition due to occupational health and safety issues.

The staircase wound around the elevator cage, going up to the mezzanine floor or down to the basement.

“Up or down?” He asked.

“Where do you want to go first?”

“Down. There’s supposed to be a large vault, probably where the safety deposit boxes are.”

And the restrooms I thought. Not that I was thinking of going.

As we descended the stairs it was like going down into a mine shaft, getting darker, and the rising odor of damp, and mustiness. I suspect it would have been the same back when it was first built being so close to the shoreline of the bay, not more than half a mile away.

The land this building and a number of others in a similar style, was built on was originally a swamp, and it was thought that the seawater still found its way this far inshore. But the foundations were incredibly strong and extensive which was why there’d been no shifting or cracking anywhere in the ten-story structure.

At the bottom, there was a huge arch, with built-in brass caging with two huge gates, both open. It was like the entrance to a mythical Aladdin’s cave.

There was also an indefinable aura coming from the depths of that room. That, and a movement of cold air. Curiously, the air down there was not musty but had a tinge of saltiness to it.

Was there a natural air freshener effect coming from somewhere within that vault.

“Are we going in?”

I checked my torch beam, still very bright. I pointed it into the blackness and after a minute checking, I said, “We’re here, so why not.”

We had to walk down a dozen steps then pass under through the open gates into the room. There was a second set of gates, the same as the first, about thirty feet from the first, and, in between, a number of cubicles where customers collected their boxes.

Beyond the second set of gates was a large circular reinforced safe door high enough for us to walk through.

This cavernous space stretched back quite a distance, and along the walls, rows, and rows of safety deposit boxes, some half hanging out of their housing, and a lot more stacked haphazardly on the floor.

I checked a few but they were all empty.

I shivered again. It felt like there was a presence in the room. I turned to ask Phil, but he wasn’t there. I hadn’t heard him walk away, and there were only two sets of footprints on the floor, his and mine, and both ended where I was standing.

It was as if he had disappeared into thin air.

I called out his name, and it echoed off the walls in the confined space. No answer from him.

I went further into the room, thinking he might have ventured towards the end while my back was turned, but he hadn’t. Nor had he left because there were only footprints coming in, not going out.

I turned to retrace my steps and stopped suddenly. An old man, in clothes that didn’t belong to this era, was standing where Phil had last been.

He was looking at me, but not inclined to talk.

“Hello. I didn’t see you come down.”

Seconds later the figure dissolved in front of me and there was no one but me standing in the room.

“Joe.”

Phil, from behind me. I turned and there he was large as life.

“Where were you?”

“I’ve been here all the time. Who were you just talking to?”

“There was an old man, standing just over there,” I said pointing to somewhere between Phil and the entrance.

“I didn’t see anyone. Are you sure you’re not having me on?”

“No. He’s right behind you.” The old man had reappeared.

Phil shook his head, believing I was trying to fool him.

That changed when the man touched his shoulder, and Phil shrieked.

And almost ran out of the room. It took a few minutes for him to catch his breath and steady the palpitating heart.

“Are you real?” I asked, not quite sure what to say.

“To me, I am. To anyone else, let’s just say you are the first not got faint, or run away.”

“Are you a ghost?” Phil wasn’t exactly sure what he was saying.

“Apparently I am and will be until you find out who killed me “

Ok, so what was it called, stuck in the afterlife or limbo until closure?

“When?”

“25 years ago, just before the bank closed. It’s the reason why it’s empty now.”

“And you’re saying we find the killer and you get to leave?”

“Exactly. Now shoo. Go and find him.”

We looked at each other in surprise, or more like shock, then back to the man. Only he was no longer there.

“What the…” Phil sail. “It’s time to go.”

“What about the man and finding his killer?”

“What man? We saw nothing. We’re done here.”

I shrugged. Phil turned to leave, but only managed to take three steps before the gates at the entrance closed with a loud clang.

When he crossed the room to stand in front, he tried pulling them open.

“Locked,” he said. Flat, and without panic, he added, “I guess it looks like we have a murder to solve.”

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