‘Sunday in New York’ – A beta reader’s view

I’m not a fan of romance novels but …

There was something about this one that resonated with me.

This is a novel about a world generally ruled by perception, and how people perceive what they see, what they are told, and what they want to believe.

I’ve been guilty of it myself as I’m sure we all have at one time or another.

For the main characters Harry and Alison there are other issues driving their relationship.

For Alison, it is a loss of self-worth through losing her job and from losing her mother and, in a sense, her sister.

For Harry, it is the fact he has a beautiful and desirable wife, and his belief she is the object of other men’s desires, and one in particular, his immediate superior.

Between observation, the less than honest motives of his friends, a lot of jumping to conclusions based on very little fact, and you have the basis of one very interesting story.

When it all comes to a head, Alison finds herself in a desperate situation, she realises only the truth will save their marriage.

But is it all the truth?

What would we do in similar circumstances?

Rarely does a book have me so enthralled that I could not put it down until I knew the result. They might be considered two people who should have known better, but as is often the case, they had to get past what they both thought was the truth.

And the moral of this story, if it could be said there is one, nothing is ever what it seems.

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Sometimes it’s better to say that an expressed opinion is your own

It’s always a good thing to get that across especially if you work for an organization that could misinterpret what that opinion is, or generally have an opposing opinion.  Of course, by saying your opinions are your own, you’re covering yourself from becoming unemployed, but is this a futile act?

Perhaps its better to not say anything because everything you say and do eventually find its way to those you want most not to hear about it, perhaps one of the big negatives of the internet and social media.

And…

It seems odd to me that you can’t have an opinion of your own, even if it is contrary to that of the organization you work for, and especially if their opinion has changed over time.  An opposing opinion, not delivered in a derogatory manner, would have the expectation of sparking healthy debate, but it doesn’t always end up like that.

I’m sure there are others out there that will disagree, and use the overused word, loyalty’.   Perhaps their mantra will be ‘keep your opinions to yourself’.

This, too, often crops up in personal relationships, and adds weight to the statement, ‘you can pick your friends but not your relatives’.

I’m told I have an opinion on everything, a statement delivered in a manner that suggests sarcasm.  Whether it’s true or not, isn’t the essence of free speech, working within the parameters of not inciting hate, bigotry, racism, or sexism, a fundamental right of anyone in a democracy?

Seems not.

There’s always someone out there, higher up the food chain, with an opinion of their own, obviously the right one, and who will not hesitate to silence yours.  But, isn’t it strange that in order to silence you, they have to use leverage, like your job, to get theirs across.

Well, my opinions are in my writing, and whether or not you agree with them or not, I’m sure you will let me know.  In a robust but respectful manner.

Unlike some, my door is always open.

The cinema of my dreams – I always wanted to see the planets – Episode 46

Back on the alien vessel

Here’s the thing.

I personally believed that we wouldn’t be sitting on this alien vessel unless we had some value, or there was something about the group of so-called criminals that the alien captain didn’t have the authority to take decisive action.

“Hold that thought,” I said to him.  Then, “Number one?”

“Sir?”

“Are you still with the alien group?”

“Yes sir, awaiting orders?”

“Is the spokesman for the prisoners nearby?”

“A moment, sir.”  Silence for a minute, then, “He’s here, sir.”

“You wish to speak to me?” 

An odd thought, they all sounded the same.

“Yes.  I find it odd that the alien captain of this vessel hasn’t just destroyed our vessels and moved on, after all, if they have determined you are all criminals, what would be the difference between being left in a prison, or being executed? 

“I’m not sure what you are getting at.  For all intents and purposes, we are dead, to them and our homeworlds.”

It wasn’t the way he said it, but the way it was spoken.  And what was left unsaid.  It was a moment when you didn’t get the answer you wanted because you didn’t ask the right question.

“Now is not the time to be keeping secrets, because when our host comes back, the situation is going to end badly for you, and just as badly for us.  We’re all still here because you have something they want.  What is it?”

There was silence, but it was not generated by a refusal to speak, but more than the answer might have worse consequences than no answer.

Then, very quietly, he said, “Jai Ti.”

There are only three reasons that drive people to do the unthinkable.  Money, power, and a woman.

“She is not a so-called criminal, is she?”

“No.  She was indiscreet and found herself banished to the same detention center like us.  We are high-level detainees, rather than prisoners, who live in far better conditions than the more common criminal classes.”

“Let me guess, she was a so-called friend of one of the high council or someone of consequence in the political power structure.”

“In a manner of speaking, yes.”

“And they’re worried if she gets free, she might denounce the injustice?”

“She feels she did nothing wrong.  She claims she did not tell anyone, as per her agreement with the individual in question.  The situation is exacerbated by the fact they people have a very strict moral code, and relationships, shall we say, that is extra, and severely frowned upon, and for a leader who is expected to set an example.”

“And this leader…”

“The rules don’t necessarily apply depending on who you are.  Unfortunately, it is a problem across the many homeworlds here.  An enlightened society doesn’t necessarily mean what we and others are led to believe.”

“We have the same problems.  Thank you for your honesty, it may help, it might not.”  I had all I needed.  “Number One.”

“Sir.”

“No need to stay, I have no intention of getting between the passengers or the alien captain, so get back to the ship as quickly as you can and be ready on the bridge.  General?”

“Sir?”

“You are ordered to defend the ship by whatever means at your disposal, without regard to that personnel not aboard.  Do you understand?”

I expected a but because I was basically telling him that if he had to fire upon the Russian ship or the Alien ship, both senior officers and some crew would be in danger.

As far as I was concerned, the ship and 2000 others were more important.

“Under protest, but I understand.  Sir.”

“Number one?”

I also expected to get the standard lecture, which was well within his purview, but instead, “Understood, sir but let’s hope it doesn’t come to that.”

“Second?”

“Sir?”

“You have the bridge until either Number One or I return, otherwise you know what the standing orders are.”

“Understood.”

It was the precise moment the alien captain returned.

“I’ve spoken to the high council.  We are also monitoring a high level of activity on your ship.”

“If it’s a war you want, it’s a war you’ll get.  I think it’s time for the truth, something you have been playing, as we say, fast and loose with.  I told you exactly why we’re here, you haven’t.  I don’t approve of my compatriots’ actions, but he has, as anyone from our world would grant preliminary asylum to anyone who asks for it, pending a thorough investigation.  That investigation starts and ends with two words, Jai Ti.”

For a man with an expressionless face, it wasn’t hard to tell I’d hit the nerve.

“Alas, as you may or may not appreciate, we are in a difficult situation.”

“Dare I say it, but for an enlightened civilization, you seem to have all the same problems we do.  We could have resolved this much earlier had you just stated the facts.”

“Then you are prepared to return the prisoners.”

“Prisoners, yes, but with a suggestion.  The princess, no.  Unfortunately, you’re going to have to censure the leader that broke the rules.”

“And if that’s not possible?”

“Then I will take her home, and whatever happens after that is on his head, and to a lesser extent, yours.”

“Even if it means your ship is destroyed, and all those crew members die needlessly.”

“More have died for less, but noble cause.  Do as you wish, but I strongly advise you not to test our resolve.”

The alien captain turned to the Russian captain.  “If you hand over the prisoners, all of the prisoners, you will free to leave.”

“Sorry.  It’s a tempting offer, but it doesn’t solve the problem for future explorers.  Eliminating us will just bring more, in the not-too-distant future, only they will be hostile.  You might be able to live with the short-term consequences, but given what we are learning about your relations with other worlds, who are they going to blame for the problems you caused in the name of short-term expediency?”

A few seconds later four new aliens appeared, each in a particular style of dress.

Members of the high council?

© Charles Heath 2021-2022

A photograph from the inspirational bin – 46

What story does it inspire?

This is a photograph of the Leopoldskron Palace used for exterior shots in the movie “The Sound of Music”.

It was a very bleak day when we decided to go on the Sound of Music bus tour, and, yes, there was singing.

But…

It is a sombre setting and lends a great deal of inspiration to a story.

For instance…

There was a large uninhabited house on the edge of a lake where multiple fatalities occurred in the mid-1800s. The family was cursed from the moment the house was built because a gypsy family who had lived on the land before the building commenced were murdered because they would not leave.

The original owner died when falling from a ladder fetching a book from the top shelf in his library, the wife died when she accidentally slipped and fell on a knife in the kitchen, and the eldest son died when he fell from the roof. No one could explain how he got there.

The daughter left immediately after all of these events which happened in the first week of residence, and moved far away.

Move forward about 170 years and one of the ancestors discovered they are entitled to take ownership of the building that had not been lived in for a long, long time.

But…

It does not look any different from the day the last inhabitants died, and is in perfect condition.

How could this be after 170 years?

And what exactly is going on when the descendants come to live in the house?

Is it paranormal activity or is it just gold old fashioned scare tactics to send them away?

Writing a book in 365 days – 153

Day 153

Writing exercise – a dream perhaps

Tiredness and bad days were never a good mix, and I’d had the worst day.  I had been planning to read the latest draft of a novel I’d been handed for assessment, and maybe the job of editing it.

At worst, I’d probably end up having to fact-check the parts that needed it because so many first-time writers seemed to think writing in the past didn’t mean that they had to know about it.

And why did I end up with the manuscript?

I liked trains and was a bit of a fan of trains of the past.  I also had a thing about the British aristocracy, and this had it in spades.

However, since nothing ever worked out the way I wanted, I ended up getting home late and having promised I’d get a first impression together for the meeting the following morning, it meant reading it in bed.

If it were boring, I’d be asleep in a few minutes.

As it turned out, it wasn’t.  Oh, the writing style was non-existent and the English awful, but the story was … interesting.

Two ends of the aristocracy, the boy, the son of a gentleman, the girl, the daughter of a Lord in a castle, in the 1920s had somehow found themselves in an unlikely romance, to the point where the boy was off the meet her parents.  She was first class, he was all about being sensible with money, so it probably wasn’t going to work.

Then, just as I got to the part about getting into the car at the station to drive to her house, I fell asleep.

Matilda and I were going to her parents’ residence in Scotland, and I’d promised to take the train with her.

It took another moment for the feeling that everyone was dressed rather oddly, and then remembered why I was taking this weekend away.

I’d been working long hours with little respite, and it was wearing me down.  Matilda’s answer, come with her and enjoy the fresh air.

And meet her family, not for the first time, but back home in a less stressful situation.

Less stressful for whom?

Normally, I would not travel first class by choice, but since it was Matilda, I didn’t hesitate.  Marriage to her, if I could get the approval of everyone, would mean making changes.

Not for her, but me.

The first, travelling in the Night Scotsman. She had suggested leaving in the morning on the Flying Scotsman, but I couldn’t get away.

This was better, we could have a leisurely dinner and then retire to a double sleeper, separate beds, of course.

I shrugged, just as a few drops of rain started to fall, and I heard a clock chime half past nine.  I was on time, which was something else that would have to change.  I was perpetually late for everything.

I showed the railway staff my ticket several times as I was guided to the correct Carriage, and then boarded.  It was a longish walk because our carriage wasn’t far from the front of the train and not far from the restaurant car.

I found the cabin, not quite as lavish as I might have expected, but no Matilda.  If I knew her, she would be exploring.  Her case was in her bed, so I put mine on the other.  a surprise discovery, or two perhaps, she travelled light and had an insatiable curiosity, well beyond that of a normal girl of her station.

There was no sign of her personal maid, but she would not be far away; Matilda never went anywhere without her, being both her chaperone and protector.  It had been disconcerting at first, and it took a while to realise Matilda could do very much whatever she wanted to.

Within reason.

She would be in a nearby cabin.

I looked out the windows, on one side, the platform with people walking further along to their carriages.  On the other hand, another train heading somewhere else.

I had got a brief glimpse of the locomotive under the bright lights, a huge beast of a machine almost lost in shrouds of steam.  One other thing I noticed, the carriages were highly polished and gleaming in the harsh lights in the station proper.

“There you are?”  Matilda had returned and looked radiant, as always.  She had one of those dispositions that would brighten even the dullest room and the most boring of parties.

I smiled in return.  “I was doing my best not to succumb to the child  in me who wanted to see the locomotive close up.”

“It’s just a train, James.”

“It’s not just any train.”  We hugged, and I held on for a little longer than I should.

I was never quite sure if she loved me as much as I loved her, but I guessed that would sort itself out in time.

I had spoken to my mother about it, and she simply said if it was meant to be, all will be well.  She never did explain what to do if it was not meant to be, and I didn’t press it.

“You made it, that’s the important thing.  I’ve reserved a table for dinner, and I’ll table you through the dreaded relations list.  l’m afraid Mummy has invited a few more than I expected, but you know what prospective in-laws are like.”

I didn’t, because it was all new for me.  Matilda had been through the betrothal process, having been matched with a particular young man, who, had he survived the war, they would be married now.

She had taken a few years to recover from that and had not been looking for a new man until, as she described it, I popped up out of nowhere.

Nowhere was simply a matter of bumping into her when I was hurrying to get back to the office late yet again from lunch with a friend.

I was hardly pleasant about it because she was drifting aimlessly on the footpath, and I told her so very forcefully.  Of course, I failed to realise I’d dropped my work folder and then had her turn up at my office.

That’s when I learned she was a distant relative of my father’s business partner, one Lady Matilda, thank you very much and mind your manners, young man.

After that bollicking, I hated her more.

Which made our second meeting very awkward, after I reluctantly turned up at a party for a friend of a friend, and someone my father told me would be useful to make the acquaintance of.

When she saw me, she decided to be condescendingly sweet, which only made me more incensed at her trading on her station.

I simply shrugged and left.  I didn’t want to be there, and it was a good excuse to leave.

Which I would have made a silent getaway except she was waiting outside, leaning against the getaway car, the chauffeur looking menacing.

I had two choices: to be forever shunned in society, or have dinner with her.  Being shunned didn’t bother me.  Having dinner did.  It meant I had to try and get over my shyness around girls, something I’d assiduously avoided up until now.

Rather foolishly, I chose the dinner, an awkward drive to the Savoy and to dine in the restaurant.  She used her father’s permanent table, further proving her desire to trade on her name and station.

Champagne was served after we sat and were both handed menus.  It seemed odd to me that the restaurant was full.

After a few minutes, she said, “You don’t like me, do you?”

“I’m sure you have the ability to grow on people.”

“Just not you?”

“No.”

“I cannot help the family I was born into, or the fact that they have wealth, and since they do have it, why can’t I use it?”

That moment Chester, the wretched cat who I was sure loved tormenting me, plumped himself down at the top of my head on the pillow and woke me.

At a most interesting part…

I had to check where I was, because the dream had been so real, I felt as though I’d been there.  In 1928, that was when the Flying Scotsman started the Night Scotsman service.

Or perhaps it was the other train… There were two nightly trains from London to Edinburgh.

And Matilda, she had taken on the persona of someone in my subconscious, though I couldn’t tell, then, who.

I growled at Chester for waking me, and climbed out, fetched the manuscript, and was going to have to read it again.  I needed more information if I was going to try and go back.

©  Charles Heath  2025

The cinema of my dreams – I always wanted to go on a treasure hunt – Episode 49

Here’s the thing…

Every time I close my eyes, I see something different.

I’d like to think the cinema of my dreams is playing a double feature but it’s a bit like a comedy cartoon night on Fox.

But these dreams are nothing to laugh about.

Once again there’s a new installment of an old feature, and we’re back on the treasure hunt.

A dark look crossed Boggs’ face telling me the name Ormiston wasn’t associated with anything good. I was still wondering how I had never heard anything about the family.

“How did you stumble across Fredrich Ormiston?”

“I told you I was keeping an eye on Alex. He and some chap who was, coincidentally, one of the guards we saw at the mall yesterday, they were talking about Ormiston. I’ve never heard of him.”

“That’s because the Ormiston’s disappeared from around here before the second world war. What did Alex have to say about him?”

“From what I overheard, he owned a large tract of land near Patterson’s Reach, that it stretched back to something called the fault line, that he sold the coastal area to the Navy and that’s where they put the dockyard, and other than that, not much. That guard had been doing some investigating for Alex and said he went to the library to ask Gwen. She’s still there by the way. She didn’t tell him very much, and even if she did know anything, she hates Alex and his friends as much as we do so she wouldn’t tell him.”

“She’d know of him. But she would be only one of a few, and those that do would be in the old folks’ home or dead.”

“And yet the name lights up your face, Boggs. How do you know about him?”

“Not me personally. My family. He and my grandfather were friends back in the day. He sold our family a large block near the river to run some cattle. My father wasn’t the first to have information about the treasure, and in fact, according to my dad’s diary, that original map we have was my grandfather’s.”

“How come you didn’t tell me about this before?”

“Not relevant. The map has always been in my family’s possession. My grandfather had made several attempts to find the treasure, and, one day, in a moment of forgetfulness, he told Ormiston about it. Well, you know how the thought of finding treasure can turn heads, Ormiston persuaded my grandfather to provide him with a copy of the map, and in return, he would fund a proper search party to see if they could find it. After all, he said, fifty percent of a trove was better than zero percent of nothing. By that time my grandfather was getting old, and the idea of finding the treasure was slipping through his fingers, so he agreed. Worst days work he ever did.”

“But Ormiston never found the treasure, did he?”

“That’s not the point. He did as he promised in the first instance, and they found nothing. It was a lot of money in pursuit of what could be compared to the holy grail. When my grandfather died, Ormiston decided he was no longer bound to any agreement, and mounted several more treasure hunts, and when my father tried to get him to adhere to the original agreement, Ormiston just brushed him off.”

“He still didn’t find anything. In the end, he lost his fortune and had to sell the land, hence the Naval Base. Do you know who got the rest?”

“Ormiston died on the last treasure hunt, and left massive debts behind, and a widow. They had several kids but no one knows where they went, and it was a long time ago. They had to sell the property to repay the debts. It went to property developers and then the Cossatino’s bought it. They moved in after Ormiston moved out. It’s why Patterson’s Reach is basically a no-go zone.”

I’d often wondered how the Cossatino’s came to town, and why it was they camped in Patterson’s Reach, away from the Benderby’s.

“Alex’s mate was talking about looking for relatives, though I’m not sure why.”

“There are no relatives, not according to my mother, but there were rumors that Ormiston had made extensive notes on all of his hunts, so from that perspective, if the documents existed, it would be useful to align what he knew with what my father says in his journal.”

A good point, and it might be still a possibility if the documents held at the library were to contain any journals. It also made sense, in my mind, why the Cossatino’s decided to run a map scam; had they come across Ormiston’s journals, and maps, and got Boggs father to base his fakes around those? It was starting to throw a giant cold shadow over the whole of this project, and that Boggs was simply missing the point.

If Ormiston couldn’t find anything, and he had money to burn when he mounted the searches, perhaps it was just a myth. And who’s to say that Boggs’s grandfather didn’t make the whole thing up himself?

Just the same, until I was certain, I was going to keep the existence of the papers in the library to myself for the time being.

But, something else just occurred to me. “Do you have anything from your grandfather, in particular about the searches he made, with or without Ormiston?”

“Only that one with Ormiston. In the end, he concluded that it was his belief that Ormiston had deliberately set the wrong course, which was why they never found anything. He had used two different river heads as his basis, to which my grandfather tried to convince him otherwise. Of course, there were considerable differences of opinion, and after they returned, never spoke to each other again.”

Not surprising.

“Well, that adds some more background to the quest. Are you sure you have the right rivers as markers? I mean there are quite a few rivers and streams as well as a few lakes up and down the coastline?”

“My father was certain, and his father was before him. As am I. Let me know when you free next so we can continue the quest.”

I should not have doubted him, but the more he talked about Ormiston, the darker he was looking. It was probably for the best I left him alone for the afternoon if only to calm down.

He didn’t even say goodbye.

I went inside and got ready for work.

© Charles Heath 2020-2021

An excerpt from “Echoes from the Past”

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With my attention elsewhere, I walked into a man who was hurrying in the opposite direction.  He was a big man with a scar running down the left side of his face from eye socket to mouth, and who was also wearing a black shirt with a red tie.

That was all I remembered as my heart almost stopped.

He apologized as he stepped to one side, the same way I stepped, as I also muttered an apology.

I kept my eyes down.  He was not the sort of man I wanted to recognize later in a lineup.  I stepped to the other side and so did he.  It was one of those situations.  Finally getting out of sync, he kept going in his direction, and I towards the bus, which was now pulling away from the curb.

Getting my breath back, I just stood riveted to the spot watching it join the traffic.  I looked back over my shoulder, but the man I’d run into had gone.  I shrugged and looked at my watch.  It would be a few minutes before the next bus arrived.

Wait, or walk?  I could also go by subway, but it was a long walk to the station.  What the hell, I needed the exercise.

At the first intersection, the ‘Walk’ sign had just flashed to ‘Don’t Walk’.  I thought I’d save a few minutes by not waiting for the next green light.  As I stepped onto the road, I heard the screeching of tires.

A yellow car stopped inches from me.

It was a high powered sports car, perhaps a Lamborghini.  I knew what they looked like because Marcus Bartleby owned one, as did every other junior executive in the city with a rich father.

Everyone stopped to look at me, then the car.  It was that sort of car.  I could see the driver through the windscreen shaking his fist, and I could see he was yelling too, but I couldn’t hear him.  I stepped back onto the sidewalk, and he drove on.  The moment had passed and everyone went back to their business.

My heart rate hadn’t come down from the last encounter.   Now it was approaching cardiac arrest, so I took a few minutes and several sets of lights to regain composure.

At the next intersection, I waited for the green light, and then a few seconds more, just to be sure.  I was no longer in a hurry.

At the next, I heard what sounded like a gunshot.  A few people looked around, worried expressions on their faces, but when it happened again, I saw it was an old car backfiring.  I also saw another yellow car, much the same as the one before, stopped on the side of the road.  I thought nothing of it, other than it was the second yellow car I’d seen.

At the next intersection, I realized I was subconsciously heading towards Harry’s new bar.   It was somewhere on 6th Avenue, so I continued walking in what I thought was the right direction.

I don’t know why I looked behind me at the next intersection, but I did.  There was another yellow car on the side of the road, not far from me.  It, too, looked the same as the original Lamborghini, and I was starting to think it was not a coincidence.

Moments after crossing the road, I heard the roar of a sports car engine and saw the yellow car accelerate past me.  As it passed by, I saw there were two people in it, and the blurry image of the passenger; a large man with a red tie.

Now my imagination was playing tricks.

It could not be the same man.  He was going in a different direction.

In the few minutes I’d been standing on the pavement, it had started to snow; early for this time of year, and marking the start of what could be a long cold winter.  I shuddered, and it was not necessarily because of the temperature.

I looked up and saw a neon light advertising a bar, coincidentally the one Harry had ‘found’ and, looking once in the direction of the departing yellow car, I decided to go in.  I would have a few drinks and then leave by the back door if it had one.

Just in case.

© Charles Heath 2015-2020

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Inspiration, maybe – Volume 1

50 photographs, 50 stories, of which there is one of the 50 below.

They all start with –

A picture paints … well, as many words as you like.  For instance:

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And the story:

It was once said that a desperate man has everything to lose.

The man I was chasing was desperate, but I, on the other hand, was more desperate to catch him.

He’d left a trail of dead people from one end of the island to the other.

The team had put in a lot of effort to locate him, and now his capture was imminent.  We were following the car he was in, from a discrete distance, and, at the appropriate time, we would catch up, pull him over, and make the arrest.

There was nowhere for him to go.

The road led to a dead-end, and the only way off the mountain was back down the road were now on.  Which was why I was somewhat surprised when we discovered where he was.

Where was he going?

“Damn,” I heard Alan mutter.  He was driving, being careful not to get too close, but not far enough away to lose sight of him.

“What?”

“I think he’s made us.”

“How?”

“Dumb bad luck, I’m guessing.  Or he expected we’d follow him up the mountain.  He’s just sped up.”

“How far away?”

“A half-mile.  We should see him higher up when we turn the next corner.”

It took an eternity to get there, and when we did, Alan was right, only he was further on than we thought.”

“Step on it.  Let’s catch him up before he gets to the top.”

Easy to say, not so easy to do.  The road was treacherous, and in places just gravel, and there were no guard rails to stop a three thousand footfall down the mountainside.

Good thing then I had the foresight to have three agents on the hill for just such a scenario.

Ten minutes later, we were in sight of the car, still moving quickly, but we were going slightly faster.  We’d catch up just short of the summit car park.

Or so we thought.

Coming quickly around another corner we almost slammed into the car we’d been chasing.

“What the hell…” Aland muttered.

I was out of the car, and over to see if he was in it, but I knew that it was only a slender possibility.  The car was empty, and no indication where he went.

Certainly not up the road.  It was relatively straightforward for the next mile, at which we would have reached the summit.  Up the mountainside from here, or down.

I looked up.  Nothing.

Alan yelled out, “He’s not going down, not that I can see, but if he did, there’s hardly a foothold and that’s a long fall.”

Then where did he go?

Then a man looking very much like our quarry came out from behind a rock embedded just a short distance up the hill.

“Sorry,” he said quite calmly.  “Had to go if you know what I mean.”

I’d lost him.

It was as simple as that.

I had been led a merry chase up the hill, and all the time he was getting away in a different direction.

I’d fallen for the oldest trick in the book, letting my desperation blind me to the disguise that anyone else would see through in an instant.

It was a lonely sight, looking down that road, knowing that I had to go all that way down again, only this time, without having to throw caution to the wind.

“Maybe next time,” Alan said.

“We’ll get him.  It’s just a matter of time.”

© Charles Heath 2019-2021

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Writing a book in 365 days – 153

Day 153

Writing exercise – a dream perhaps

Tiredness and bad days were never a good mix, and I’d had the worst day.  I had been planning to read the latest draft of a novel I’d been handed for assessment, and maybe the job of editing it.

At worst, I’d probably end up having to fact-check the parts that needed it because so many first-time writers seemed to think writing in the past didn’t mean that they had to know about it.

And why did I end up with the manuscript?

I liked trains and was a bit of a fan of trains of the past.  I also had a thing about the British aristocracy, and this had it in spades.

However, since nothing ever worked out the way I wanted, I ended up getting home late and having promised I’d get a first impression together for the meeting the following morning, it meant reading it in bed.

If it were boring, I’d be asleep in a few minutes.

As it turned out, it wasn’t.  Oh, the writing style was non-existent and the English awful, but the story was … interesting.

Two ends of the aristocracy, the boy, the son of a gentleman, the girl, the daughter of a Lord in a castle, in the 1920s had somehow found themselves in an unlikely romance, to the point where the boy was off the meet her parents.  She was first class, he was all about being sensible with money, so it probably wasn’t going to work.

Then, just as I got to the part about getting into the car at the station to drive to her house, I fell asleep.

Matilda and I were going to her parents’ residence in Scotland, and I’d promised to take the train with her.

It took another moment for the feeling that everyone was dressed rather oddly, and then remembered why I was taking this weekend away.

I’d been working long hours with little respite, and it was wearing me down.  Matilda’s answer, come with her and enjoy the fresh air.

And meet her family, not for the first time, but back home in a less stressful situation.

Less stressful for whom?

Normally, I would not travel first class by choice, but since it was Matilda, I didn’t hesitate.  Marriage to her, if I could get the approval of everyone, would mean making changes.

Not for her, but me.

The first, travelling in the Night Scotsman. She had suggested leaving in the morning on the Flying Scotsman, but I couldn’t get away.

This was better, we could have a leisurely dinner and then retire to a double sleeper, separate beds, of course.

I shrugged, just as a few drops of rain started to fall, and I heard a clock chime half past nine.  I was on time, which was something else that would have to change.  I was perpetually late for everything.

I showed the railway staff my ticket several times as I was guided to the correct Carriage, and then boarded.  It was a longish walk because our carriage wasn’t far from the front of the train and not far from the restaurant car.

I found the cabin, not quite as lavish as I might have expected, but no Matilda.  If I knew her, she would be exploring.  Her case was in her bed, so I put mine on the other.  a surprise discovery, or two perhaps, she travelled light and had an insatiable curiosity, well beyond that of a normal girl of her station.

There was no sign of her personal maid, but she would not be far away; Matilda never went anywhere without her, being both her chaperone and protector.  It had been disconcerting at first, and it took a while to realise Matilda could do very much whatever she wanted to.

Within reason.

She would be in a nearby cabin.

I looked out the windows, on one side, the platform with people walking further along to their carriages.  On the other hand, another train heading somewhere else.

I had got a brief glimpse of the locomotive under the bright lights, a huge beast of a machine almost lost in shrouds of steam.  One other thing I noticed, the carriages were highly polished and gleaming in the harsh lights in the station proper.

“There you are?”  Matilda had returned and looked radiant, as always.  She had one of those dispositions that would brighten even the dullest room and the most boring of parties.

I smiled in return.  “I was doing my best not to succumb to the child  in me who wanted to see the locomotive close up.”

“It’s just a train, James.”

“It’s not just any train.”  We hugged, and I held on for a little longer than I should.

I was never quite sure if she loved me as much as I loved her, but I guessed that would sort itself out in time.

I had spoken to my mother about it, and she simply said if it was meant to be, all will be well.  She never did explain what to do if it was not meant to be, and I didn’t press it.

“You made it, that’s the important thing.  I’ve reserved a table for dinner, and I’ll table you through the dreaded relations list.  l’m afraid Mummy has invited a few more than I expected, but you know what prospective in-laws are like.”

I didn’t, because it was all new for me.  Matilda had been through the betrothal process, having been matched with a particular young man, who, had he survived the war, they would be married now.

She had taken a few years to recover from that and had not been looking for a new man until, as she described it, I popped up out of nowhere.

Nowhere was simply a matter of bumping into her when I was hurrying to get back to the office late yet again from lunch with a friend.

I was hardly pleasant about it because she was drifting aimlessly on the footpath, and I told her so very forcefully.  Of course, I failed to realise I’d dropped my work folder and then had her turn up at my office.

That’s when I learned she was a distant relative of my father’s business partner, one Lady Matilda, thank you very much and mind your manners, young man.

After that bollicking, I hated her more.

Which made our second meeting very awkward, after I reluctantly turned up at a party for a friend of a friend, and someone my father told me would be useful to make the acquaintance of.

When she saw me, she decided to be condescendingly sweet, which only made me more incensed at her trading on her station.

I simply shrugged and left.  I didn’t want to be there, and it was a good excuse to leave.

Which I would have made a silent getaway except she was waiting outside, leaning against the getaway car, the chauffeur looking menacing.

I had two choices: to be forever shunned in society, or have dinner with her.  Being shunned didn’t bother me.  Having dinner did.  It meant I had to try and get over my shyness around girls, something I’d assiduously avoided up until now.

Rather foolishly, I chose the dinner, an awkward drive to the Savoy and to dine in the restaurant.  She used her father’s permanent table, further proving her desire to trade on her name and station.

Champagne was served after we sat and were both handed menus.  It seemed odd to me that the restaurant was full.

After a few minutes, she said, “You don’t like me, do you?”

“I’m sure you have the ability to grow on people.”

“Just not you?”

“No.”

“I cannot help the family I was born into, or the fact that they have wealth, and since they do have it, why can’t I use it?”

That moment Chester, the wretched cat who I was sure loved tormenting me, plumped himself down at the top of my head on the pillow and woke me.

At a most interesting part…

I had to check where I was, because the dream had been so real, I felt as though I’d been there.  In 1928, that was when the Flying Scotsman started the Night Scotsman service.

Or perhaps it was the other train… There were two nightly trains from London to Edinburgh.

And Matilda, she had taken on the persona of someone in my subconscious, though I couldn’t tell, then, who.

I growled at Chester for waking me, and climbed out, fetched the manuscript, and was going to have to read it again.  I needed more information if I was going to try and go back.

©  Charles Heath  2025

An excerpt from “Strangers We’ve Become” – Coming Soon

I wandered back to my villa.

It was in darkness.  I was sure I had left several lights on, especially over the door so I could see to unlock it.

I looked up and saw the globe was broken.

Instant alert.

I went to the first hiding spot for the gun, and it wasn’t there.  I went to the backup and it wasn’t there either.  Someone had found my carefully hidden stash of weapons and removed them.

Who?

There were four hiding spots and all were empty.  Someone had removed the weapons.  That could only mean one possibility.

I had a visitor, not necessarily here for a social call.

But, of course, being the well-trained agent I’d once been and not one to be caught unawares, I crossed over to my neighbor and relieved him of a weapon that, if found, would require a lot of explaining.

Suitably armed, it was time to return the surprise.

There were three entrances to the villa, the front door, the back door, and a rather strange escape hatch.  One of the more interesting attractions of the villa I’d rented was its heritage.  It was built in the late 1700s, by a man who was, by all accounts, a thief.  It had a hidden underground room which had been in the past a vault but was now a wine cellar, and it had an escape hatch by which the man could come and go undetected, particularly if there was a mob outside the door baying for his blood.

It now gave me the means to enter the villa without my visitors being alerted, unless, of course, they were near the vicinity of the doorway inside the villa, but that possibility was unlikely.  It was not where anyone could anticipate or expect a doorway to be.

The secret entrance was at the rear of the villa behind a large copse, two camouflaged wooden doors built into the ground.  I move aside some of the branches that covered them and lifted one side.  After I’d discovered the doors and rusty hinges, I’d oiled and cleaned them, and cleared the passageway of cobwebs and fallen rocks.  It had a mildew smell, but nothing would get rid of that.  I’d left torches at either end so I could see.

I closed the door after me, and went quietly down the steps, enveloped in darkness till I switched on the torch.  I traversed the short passage which turned ninety degrees about halfway to the door at the other end.  I carried the key to this door on the keyring, found it and opened the door.  It too had been oiled and swung open soundlessly.

I stepped in the darkness and closed the door.

I was on the lower level under the kitchen, now the wine cellar, the ‘door’ doubling as a set of shelves which had very little on them, less to fall and alert anyone in the villa.

Silence, an eerie silence.

I took the steps up to the kitchen, stopping when my head was level with the floor, checking to see if anyone was waiting.  There wasn’t.  It seemed to me to be an unlikely spot for an ambush.

I’d already considered the possibility of someone coming after me, especially because it had been Bespalov I’d killed, and I was sure he had friends, all equally as mad as he was.  Equally, I’d also considered it nigh on impossible for anyone to find out it was me who killed him because the only people who knew that were Prendergast, Alisha, a few others in the Department, and Susan.

That raised the question of who told them where I was.

If I was the man I used to be, my first suspect would be Susan.  The departure this morning, and now this was too coincidental.  But I was not that man.

Or was I?

I reached the start of the passageway that led from the kitchen to the front door and peered into the semi-darkness.  My eyes had got used to the dark, and it was no longer an inky void.  Fragments of light leaked in around the door from outside and through the edge of the window curtains where they didn’t fit properly.  A bone of contention upstairs in the morning, when first light shone and invariably woke me up hours before I wanted to.

Still nothing.

I took a moment to consider how I would approach the visitor’s job.  I would get a plan of the villa in my head, all entrances, where a target could be led to or attacked where there would be no escape.

Coming in the front door.  If I was not expecting anything, I’d just open the door and walk-in.  One shot would be all that was required.

Contract complete.

I sidled quietly up the passage staying close to the wall, edging closer to the front door.  There was an alcove where the shooter could be waiting.  It was an ideal spot to wait.

Crunch.

I stepped on some nutshells.

Not my nutshells.

I felt it before I heard it.  The bullet with my name on it.

And how the shooter missed, from point-blank range, and hit me in the arm, I had no idea.  I fired off two shots before a second shot from the shooter went wide and hit the door with a loud thwack.

I saw a red dot wavering as it honed in on me and I fell to the floor, stretching out, looking up where the origin of the light was coming and pulled the trigger three times, evenly spaced, and a second later I heard the sound of a body falling down the stairs and stopping at the bottom, not very far from me.

Two assassins.

I’d not expected that.

The assassin by the door was dead, a lucky shot on my part.  The second was still breathing.

I checked the body for any weapons and found a second gun and two knives.  Armed to the teeth!

I pulled off the balaclava; a man, early thirties, definitely Italian.  I was expecting a Russian.

I slapped his face, waking him up.  Blood was leaking from several slashes on his face when his head had hit the stairs on the way down.  The awkward angle of his arms and legs told me there were broken bones, probably a lot worse internally.  He was not long for this earth.

“Who employed you?”

He looked at me with dead eyes, a pursed mouth, perhaps a smile.  “Not today my friend.  You have made a very bad enemy.”  He coughed and blood poured out of his mouth.  “There will be more …”

Friends of Bespalov, no doubt.

I would have to leave.  Two unexplainable bodies, I’d have a hard time explaining my way out of this mess.  I dragged the two bodies into the lounge, clearing the passageway just in case someone had heard anything.

Just in case anyone was outside at the time, I sat in the dark, at the foot of the stairs, and tried to breathe normally.  I was trying not to connect dots that led back to Susan, but the coincidence was worrying me.

A half-hour passed and I hadn’t moved.  Deep in thought, I’d forgotten about being shot, unaware that blood was running down my arm and dripping onto the floor.

Until I heard a knock on my front door.

Two thoughts, it was either the police, alerted by the neighbors, or it was the second wave, though why would they be knocking on the door?

I stood, and immediately felt a stabbing pain in my arm.  I took out a handkerchief and turned it into a makeshift tourniquet, then wrapped a kitchen towel around the wound.

If it was the police, this was going to be a difficult situation.  Holding the gun behind my back, I opened the door a fraction and looked out.

No police, just Maria.  I hoped she was not part of the next ‘wave’.

“You left your phone behind on the table.  I thought you might be looking for it.”  She held it out in front of her.

When I didn’t open the door any further, she looked at me quizzically, and then asked, “Is anything wrong?”

I was going to thank her for returning the phone, but I heard her breathe in sharply, and add, breathlessly, “You’re bleeding.”

I looked at my arm and realized it was visible through the door, and not only that, the towel was soaked in blood.

“You need to go away now.”

Should I tell her the truth?  It was probably too late, and if she was any sort of law-abiding citizen she would go straight to the police.

She showed no signs of leaving, just an unnerving curiosity.  “What happened?”

I ran through several explanations, but none seemed plausible.  I went with the truth.  “My past caught up with me.”

“You need someone to fix that before you pass out from blood loss.  It doesn’t look good.”

“I can fix it.  You need to leave.  It is not safe to be here with me.”

The pain in my arm was not getting any better, and the blood was starting to run down my arm again as the tourniquet loosened.  She was right, I needed it fixed sooner rather than later.

I opened the door and let her in.  It was a mistake, a huge mistake, and I would have to deal with the consequences.  Once inside, she turned on the light and saw the pool of blood just inside the door and the trail leading to the lounge.  She followed the trail and turned into the lounge, turned on the light, and no doubt saw the two dead men.

I expected her to scream.  She didn’t.

She gave me a good hard look, perhaps trying to see if I was dangerous.  Killing people wasn’t something you looked the other way about.  She would have to go to the police.

“What happened here?”

“I came home from the cafe and two men were waiting for me.  I used to work for the Government, but no longer.  I suspect these men were here to repay a debt.  I was lucky.”

“Not so much, looking at your arm.”

She came closer and inspected it.

“Sit down.”

She found another towel and wrapped it around the wound, retightening the tourniquet to stem the bleeding.

“Do you have medical supplies?”

I nodded.  “Upstairs.”  I had a medical kit, and on the road, I usually made my own running repairs.  Another old habit I hadn’t quite shaken off yet.

She went upstairs, rummaged, and then came back.  I wondered briefly what she would think of the unmade bed though I was not sure why it might interest her.

She helped me remove my shirt, and then cleaned the wound.  Fortunately, she didn’t have to remove a bullet.  It was a clean wound but it would require stitches.

When she’d finished she said, “Your friend said one day this might happen.”

No prizes for guessing who that friend was, and it didn’t please me that she had involved Maria.

“Alisha?”

“She didn’t tell me her name, but I think she cares a lot about you.  She said trouble has a way of finding you, gave me a phone and said to call her if something like this happened.”

“That was wrong of her to do that.”

“Perhaps, perhaps not.  Will you call her?”

“Yes.  I can’t stay here now.  You should go now.  Hopefully, by the time I leave in the morning, no one will ever know what happened here, especially you.”

She smiled.  “As you say, I was never here.”

© Charles Heath 2018-2022

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